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Note-> My dear lovely folks it is my 31th Chapter of this ff. I hope you all will like and love it... So enjoying reading 😃

Chapter- 31

{ jalal looked toward where sumant was looking... some girls were sitting near to pond and feeding pigeons... he tried to recognize his lady love. Although he did not see her face but he remembered her duppatta's color... So he was trying to see it...}

Jalal( curiously )-> " where is your buaasaa...?

Sumant (indicating toward girls)-> there is she..."

{ jalal again looked toward his direction... but ya this time his eyes caught what he wanted to see... that dark blue color duppatta girl was standing there... seemed she was something giving to someone... but because of her back was facing to him so he could not see her face but sudden girl turned toward him and seeing her face his eyes opened in shock and his heart broken in many pieces because that girl was not his chanda... She was another unknown girl... seeing her his eyes opened widely...}

Jalal(unconsciously)-> " is your buaasa...?"

Sumant( shrugging his shoulder innocently)-> " haaa... She is my dearest badi buaasaa... Rajkumari jodha bai (princess jodha)"

{ hearing it he felt like his heart died again... his every ray of hope got vanished in few seconds. Sudden his eyes filled up with unshed tears... but how could he let to enjoy cruel fate of his tears so he closed his teary eyes tightly to avoid his emotions which were fully ready to coming out from his eyes in form of tears... he gulped his saliva and took deep breath to controlling his uneven heartbeat

Jalal(shockingly in deep pain)-> " no...no...no it cannot happen... how can I make this type of biggest mistake to recognize my love... My jaan... Again fate played cruel game with my heart..."

{ Sumant looked at jalal's face with hopefully eyes as he found what sumant wanted to show him... But he only found jalal with closed eyes... he put his little hand on jalal's big hand

Sumant(with confusing face)-> " bahut dard ho raha hain ( you feel pain)

{ His soft touch brought jalal out of his painful thought... jalal slowly opened his eyes and looked toward sumant... A painful smile appeared on his lips...}

Jalal( in deep pain)-> " yes I am feeling pain... deep pain..."

{ saying it he took his hand on his heart which was ready to burst out because of unbearable pain... now he could not take it anymore.}

Jalal( swiftly)-> " I want to go to my room for taking some rest..."

{sumant innocently nodded his head like a mature man and jalal made his way toward his room with sumant but suddenly he stopped and slowly turned and quickly gave sad and disappointed look toward girls who were involved in their task without knowing anything this broken hearted person... jalal left this that place with very heavy heart... before some time he found a new hope to get his life again but in few second he again came at same point where he lost everything... as jalal took leave from there sudden moti moved her body aside and a beautiful and desirable face appeared which was shining like new fresh flower...}

{Guest room of amer}



{ jalal silently entered in guest room. his already shattered heart once again broke in many pieces... Sumant's mom called him so he already took leave and now jalal was all alone in that guest room not only physically but also mentally... His dejected body silently moved toward bed... he sat on the bad... his heart was almost ready to burst out because of heavy pain. now this pain had very unbearably for him... he tightly closed his eyes and started to take heavy and deep breath to control his emotions...}

Jalal (in his mind)-> " how can I think that like this about any unknown woman how can I feel for another woman like the way I use to feel for you... now again I cheat you my love... Again I cheat you..."

{His mind was continuously scolding his heart for this biggest mistake... And silent painful tears started to flow out from his eyes... He took his hand for his heart with this wish... his heart will stop at that time for this sinful act... how could it beat for anyone other than his love... But sudden his heart replied him...}

" now I can not to cheat my love she is my breath... My life... so how can I beat for another woman... I know which woman entered in guest room with bowl of kheer was my CHANDA... how can I forget her hand's taste... I am not betrayed you... I am deeply in love with her and I can recognize her in many women so don't blame me..." screamed his heart loudly.

Jalal'smind( wickedly )-> " but when you saw that woman near to pond... She was not your chanda... Its mean you totally failed to recognize your love... SHAME ON YOU..."

Jalal's heart (shockingly)-> " NO...NO...NO... I did not do anything wrong I know she was belonged to me... I know she was my chanda... I was not wrong... I know she was chanda..."

Jalal's mind (evilly)-> " NO... NO...NO... you were wrong... She was not Chanda... You did biggest mistake of your life..."

{ jalal covered his both ears with his both hands and screamed loudly...}

" STOP PLEASE...STOP..."

{ he swiftly opened his teary eyes which had overflowed with tears... He swiftly wiped out his tears and moved toward window... One thing he knew that which woman came to guest room was his chanda... and he did know... How did her duppatta get exchanged with other woman... but now he knew that HIS LOVE... HIS LIFE... HIS WIFE... AND MOTHER OF HIS UNBORN CHILD WAS LIVING IN AMER AND NOW HE WAS FULL READY TO TAKE HER BACK AGAIN IN HIS LIFE..."

Jalal(in his mind)-> " but before working on my love life... I have to finish my uncompleted work for what I have come to here... (With sly smile) please wait some more time my love soon I will come to take you with me forever... And this time I will not allow you to leave me for one second... I love you my jaan... I love you so much..."

{Saying it a peaceful smile played on jalal's face...}

{ Night Time}



{Jodha was going toward guest room. She made diner for most loveable and wanted guest of amer... she was taking food for jalal with help pf moti , reva and others rahvanshi maids... When they were near to guest room they covered their faces with long veil... jodha signaled moti to with her right eyebrow to asking permission for their entry from their guest... moti nodded her head...}

Moti( politely)-> " may we come in...?"

{ but they did not get reply from guest... Moti again repeat same words but this time with little high point but again they got nothing... Moti looked toward jodha with very disappointment... Now jodha's right eyebrow raised because of confusion and shock because according to her knowledge their guest was resting in guest room... then why he was not replying for moti's request... jodha swiftly entered in guest room and moti, reva and others rajvanshi maid also followed her... jodha looked all around in room but she did not found anyone in room... she told maids to arranged food in guest room and leave... maid done their work in few minute and according to their princess they silently walked out from guest room... jalal was not still come to guest room... so jodha decided to waiting for him for some time... she removed her veil and moved toward window for seeing silent and beautiful sky... But sudden something was came to under her right foot... She bent down to take up it... it was a beautiful diamond... seemed before a sometime it was shining in someone's ring... For seeing it properly jodha brought it near to night lamp... But when she kept it in light of night lamp it shined very much...}

Moti ( surprisingly )-> " it is very beautiful jodha..."

{ reva also did her support... but sudden moti noticed something was written at that diamond...

Moti (swiftly)-> " jodha I felt like something was written on this diamond..."

{ hearing it jodha shockingly looked toward moti... Moti proved her right with her puppy eyes... So jodha again put it under light of night lamp... Ya she was right something was written on that diamond but they counld not read it because it was written in urdu...}

Jodha( shockingly)-> " ya you are right moti something was written on this diamond but we can't read it because it is written in...U...U..URDU..."

{ jodha was now hell confused because in amer no one knew read and write urdu then how could possible it that someone write something in urdu... sudden reva asked in confusing tone...}

Reva (confusingly)-> " is it belong to our guest...?"

Moti(nodding her head)-> " how can it possible we all very well know that URDU is mugaliya language and only mugal can write read and speak it so..."

{ her little statement enough to knocked jodha's sense...and sudden unknowingly it came out from her mouth...}

" is he a MUGAL..."

{ thinking it jodha's eyes popped out because of shock and fear ... she rushed toward her room moti and reva got shock to seeing her unexpected behavior they also rushed behind her... jodha swiftly entered in her room and moved toward big box... which was unusually filled up with her beautiful and heavy clothes... In few minute she took out a white warrior dress... which she used to wear it when she did practice... seeing this dress on jodha's hand moti and reva shocked like hell...}

Moti( shockingly)-> " jodha... what is this...? Will you wear it?... if yes... then why?..."

Jodha( swiftly)-> " moti I have not much time to playing questioning answering game with you so if you want then come with me otherwise leave it..."

{ moti and reva very well aware of jodha's character so for her safety they decided to follow her... moti told reva to taking care so no one could get know about jodha's absence... Moti and jodha silent walked toward jail of amer... Every hidden way of amer was printed on jodha's mind like map so moti and jodha moved toward jail by one of the hidden way...}

Moti ( confusingly )-> " jodha... where are we going...?"

{ jodha signaled her to keep quite with putting her index finger on her lips... And indicated toward end of way...}

{ jalal had reached to main jail where Raja bharamal had kept shariffuddin as prisoner... jalal killed every rajvanshi soldier who could make hurdle in his way... shariffuddind woke up after hearing sound of door open... Seeing jalal front of him his eyed opened widely with shock and surprise... He could not understand what he was seeing... was real or not... Seeing his stupid behavior now jalal got more frustrated...}

Jalal( in firm voice)-> " hey seems you fallen love with rajvanshi cage..."

{his firm voice pushed sariffuddin out from his confusing land... First he bow down in his respect... jalal gave him a rajvanshi servant's outfit that's they came out from amer easily... Sariffuddin had many questions for jalal but before he asked anything to jalal... firm and bossy voice stopped his questions in middle of way...}

Jalal( firmly )-> " let's go..."

{ sariffudding nodded his head like obedient child and followed his shahensha's order silently but before they take their leave from there... sudden someone put sword on the neck of jalal... those changed situation made jalal and shariffuddin hell shocked... a unknown person was standing there, holding sword on shahensha-a-hind's neck... sariffuddin was not in condition to do fight with anyone so jalal signaled him to take leave from there and sariffuddin also wanted it... He did not want to see again himself as a helpless prisoner of rajvanshi so without wasting any minute he run away from there... when unknown warrior tried to stop him but jalal hold his sword tightly and in few second sarriffuddin disappeared from there like shadow... now jalal had successfully done his task, for what he came to amer... a winning smile was playing on his lips... in jail, light was not enough so both warrior could not seeing each other face properly... jalal slowly left that young warriror's sword... seeing his freed sword young warrior tried to run behind of sariffuddin to catch him but jalal made halt his way... he swiftly stood at the front of him... Now anger of young warrior reached on its top... He was still trying to hold his anger but this act of jalal pushed his anger on its edge... So without giving any chance he attacked on jalal with his whole power... But jalal was not a kid... He was also a trained warrior... He had faced this type of situations for many times in his life... With his strong attack jalal swiftly moved his body aside to avoiding his attack... But young warrior was not in mood to leave him simply so he did again a powerful attack on jalal ... jalal made a quick flip and took up sword of a dead rajvanshi soldier... But now this time young rajvanshi warrior had success to give a deep wound to jalal on his right shoulder... Seeing audacity and bravery of this young warrior, sleeping lion in jalal awoke... again young rajvanshi warrior attack on him but this time jalal hold his attack on his sword... His eyes became red with anger... Evil wanted to revenge for his wound... and why not, he was a blood thirsty warrior... Who was never taste defeat in war field.}

Jalal( dim but in danger voice)-> " NOW ITS ENOUGH"

{With saying it he attack on that young warrior... that young warrior was not expecting this type of attack from jalal so he got his balance and felled down on the ground... without wasting any more time jalal again did a powerful attack on that rajvanshi warrior... But this time he already understood his power of attack so this time he easily hold his sword on his sword... they again started their fighting... one wanted to run away from there but before it he wanted to give the taste of defeat to his enemy... Other wanted to punish his enemy for his audacity because of it he dared to step in amer and released their most wanted enemy... they both were engrossed in their fight deeply... Sudden jalal's mind told him that he had no time to waste in this type of fight... so he have to finished this game soon otherwise, situation will worst if his reality will disclosed before right time... So this time he did very powerful attack to finish this game , that young rajvanshi warrior was not expecting this type of powerful attack from jalal so his thin body lost its balance and as result his head hit to wall hardly so because of it he lost his consciousness and felled down on the ground when he felled down on the ground his turban loosed and also felled down from his head... and black long silky hair covered his face... Seeing in man soldier's a woman... jalal's mouth opened because of high voltage shock... he could not believe it... he slowly- slowly moved toward her. He took mashaal to see her face properly. He sat to near her... his left knee was rested on ground... he forward his right hand to remove her hair from her face for seeing her face... and his left hand was holding mashaal... as he removed her hair and her beautiful face was appeared in light of mashaal... Jalal felt like whole world was stopped at that time... his heart forgot its beat for few seconds... his whole body frozen at that place... His eyes filled up with hot tears... Unknowingly a name whispered out from his mouth...}

" CHANDAAA"

{ A loud scream broke his thoughts and pushed him out in reality...}

Moti (fearfully)-> " NOOO"

{ and saying it she rushed toward jodha and sat down near her... she hold jodha's face and tried to find out that what did happen to her best friend... other side jalal snatched jodha from her and started to figure out her wound... she got only little wound on her forehead and because of it she lost her consciousness... jalal took relief full breath... he slowly caressed his lady love's face lovingly with tearful eyes... Seeing his action and condition moti got confuse and frustrated...}

Moti ( in frustration)-> " can you tell me what did happen to my friend..."

{Hearing her voice jalal looked her face with happy smile... his eyes was filled up with tears...}

Jalal -> "nothing happened to my jaan and nothing will happen to her as I am alive..."

{Saying it he stood up... now jodha was resting in his arms peacefully... moti also stood up... after taking deep breath jalal moved toward exit way... Seeing his action pushed moti in more and high shock...}

"Where are taking my friend...?"

{ hearing her concerned voice jalal's legs stopped in their way... He slowly turned toward moti...}

Jalal( camly)-> " where your friend belong..."

{ moti looked toward him confusingly... but his next sentence removed every confusion from her mind...}

Jalal( in same voice)-> " your friend CHANDA is my wife princess jodha..."

{ hearing it, moti's eyes popped out because of shock... she did not believe that what her ear heard... and sudden a name came out from her mouth unconsciously...}

"MUGAL SHAHENSHA JALALLUDDIN MUHAMMADDD"

{ jalal nodded his head happily and left that place leaved behind him a shocked and confused friend...}




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Edited by swriter - 9 years ago
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Wowww after a long time finally
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Jaanu šŸ¤—superb update dear
Jalal is cent percent sure that the women in veil was jodha and to make sure he is right he tried to spy on the girl in blue but to his bad luck sumant confirmed she was jodha princess of amer ,his buasaa.
All shattered he comes back to his room where there's a fight goes between his mind and heart,finally heart one and he assures himself that she is his chandaaa ,i liked his confidence here jaanu .
Oh god he went to release shariffudin and jodha found the guest was no other then a mughal .
She goes to prisoners place and catch him redhanded
Fight starts betwen jajo ,but jo couldnt stand for longer in front of him and got hurt.
Which in turn helped jalal to see her face wow šŸ‘ yayyy
But now im scared for jodhas reaction after she gains her consiousness .
Aage kya hoga ???
Continue soon jaanu
Thanks for pm dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wonderful chappy dear
Poor jalal thought she is his Chanda correctly but fate did something else
He went back to his mission n was successful in it also
One shot two birds
Releasing Sharif n getting his lady love
Finally he got her
He got to know that she is princess Jodha
What gonna be Jo's reaction
Update soon buddy
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Posted: 9 years ago
Woow jalal finally finds his life wife jaan woow fantastic chappy dr...
Now updatee fast de eagar to read nxt dr
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Posted: 9 years ago
woo awesome update
finally jalal find jodha
waiting for jodha reaction
and when jalal know jodha real identity
update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
A awesome update after a long time
Finally everything revealed to jalal
Bdw how come jalal knew about chanda being jodha
Now where he is taking her ???
Will he take her to Agra with him ???
Eagerly waiting
No more delays plz
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing chapter dear. ..
Finally you updated what. ...I was waiting for. .

In the beginning. ...Jalal was in so much pain. ..
His dream of getting his love back was shattered in no time. ...I really felt bad for him. ..
He was totally broken. ..

Loved the conversation between his mind and heart. ..
It was a beautiful sequence. ...
And after that Jalal was once again determined to get his life. ...His wife back. ...

Jodha was once again back in her fierce warrior princess mode. ...
The entire fight scene was awesome. ...Although Joja were fighting against each other. ...but it had it's own beauty. ...

Finally jalal found out his chanda. ...wow. ..

Thanks for pm dear. ...
Please continue soon.

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