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EPI 531


WRITTEN BY MANSI



SCENE - 1
GH

Ramesh - bus kar liya phone... kar dia meri beti ko pareshan... kya tum bhi laxmi...

Laxmi - achha... ur jo tum hm sab ko pareshan karte ho uska kya... kitni chot aae h ur ab bhi koi fikr nhi h apni... haalat dekho kya ho gyi h...

Ramesh was about to retort when sukku jumped in.

Sukku - papa maa thik kh rhi h... aapko kaafi chot aae h... aap chalie mai aapko kamre tak le chalta hu...

Ramesh sighed and gave up as others too started giving him the same advice. Sukku then helped ramesh to get up and made him rest in his room while laxmi went to prepare haldi wala doodh for him.

Umesh came into his room and said.

Umesh - sukku le tera ticket... aaj shaam ka hi h... jaise tune bola tha...

Ramesh - sukku... tu khi jaa rha h kya...

Sukku - jaa rha tha papa ab nhi jaa rha...

Ramesh - kha jaa rha tha ye to bata...

Sukku - vo producer ka call aaya tha usne bola h kal audition k lie aane k lie... to aaj hi nikalna tha.. isilie ye ticket...

Ramesh - to jaa kyu nhi raha ab...

Sukku - aapko ese chhod k kaise jau papa... dekho kitti chot lagi h... kal mai aapko khud dubara doc k paas le jaunga ur jo bhi test west karwane honge na khud apne samne karwaunga...

Ramesh - sukku... mai thik hu... ur waise bhi us sab k lie umesh h, kabir h, saurav bhi h... tera jana jaruri h beta...

Sukku - nhi papa... maa bhi to h unka to aapko pta h na... kitti jaldi pareshan ho jaati h... mai nhi jaunga ese aap sabko chhodke... mauke ka kya h ek gya to dusra aa jaega...

Ramesh - sukku... laxmi ki fikr mat kar... nishu h na vo sambhal legi... ur ese mauke baar baar nhi aate samjha...

Sukku - par papa...

Ramesh - par war kuch nhi sunna mjhe... dekh beta jab tere paas opportunity khud chal k aae h to use mat gawa... mjhe pta h ye tere lie kitna imp h... ur jaise hi tu select ho jaega na dekhna mai kaise thik ho jaunga...

Sukku smiled at his father shaking his head.

Ramesh - mjhe pta h mera beta bhot bada ho gya h ur zimmedar bhi... achha laga dekh k ki tjhe hm sab ki ur apni responsibilities ki fikr h... par abhi tere lie tera career bhi imp h ur abhi tu uspe dhyaan de... ur mai kaunsa budha ho gya hu jo mjhe kuch hone wala h... abhi bhi tere dost mjhe tera bada bhai samjhte h...

Sukku gave him an amused smile.

Sukku - bus papa ab bhot ho gya ha... itne bhi chhote nhi lagte aap...

Ramesh - are yakeen nhi aata to mere students ki mothers se puch le... abhi bhi tere baap ka charm barkarar h...

Sukku - achha... esi baat h to abhi maa ko btata hu... maaa...

Ramesh - abe oe... already itni lagi hui h ab kya haddia bhi tudwaega... jaa ur jaane ki tyari kar... ur sun achhe se karna samjha...

Sukku - jee papa...

Sukku took blessings from him and went to complete his packing while ramesh tried to take rest.


SCENE - 2
VIRAJ PENTHOUSE


Vasu came back and sat down on the couch calling a servant for water. Soon he appeared with a glass of water and stood.

Vasu - ram singh, viraj ghar aa gye?

Servant - ji, sahab apne kamre m h... unhe bhot tej bukhaar tha to abhi aaram kar rhe h...

Vasu - viraj ko fever h??? Ur unhone hme btaya bhi nhi... pta nhi kaisi tabiyat hogi unki... hm abhi dekhte h...

Servant - sahab to dopahar m hi waapas aa gye the... ur fir kaira madam bhi thodi der baad aae... vo hi unka khayal rakh rhi h...

Vasu smiled hearing it but was still tensed about viraj.

Vasu - abhi viraj jaag rahe h ya aaram kar rhe h...

Servant - shayad aaram kar rhe h... kaira madam bhi unke saath hi h...

Vasu smiled and dismissed him while she went to see viraj how's he doing.

She reached outside his room and found it half open. Kaira was sitting beside viraj who was taking a nap while she was busy in some file work. She didn't seemed to notice vasu and yawned while working, her eyes drooping. Soon fatigue took over her and she placed her head on the bedside closing her eyes. Vasu looked at the duo as they wandered in their dreams and felt happy for them. She cautiously closed the door and went to her own room.

Vasu - (monologue) shayad inki ye nayi shuruat ab kisi manjil tak le jae inhe... shayad hmare bete ko bhi vo khushi mile jiske vo haqdaar h... ur shayad kaira ko bhi vo mil jae jiske lie vo itna tadpi h...


SCENE - 3
KNH


Nisha was pacing the room back and forth with fear written all over her face. Kabir came from the front door and she ran into his arms.

Kabir - nishu... nishu kya hua...

Nisha - kabir vo papa... mjhe papa k paas jana h kabir... chal na abhi chal...

Kabir - ha nishu abhi hi chalenge... bus mechanic niche gaadi thik kar de bus 5 min ur...

Nisha - nhi kabir... mjhe abhi jana h... mai 5 min wait nhi kar sakti... pls kabir leke chal na...

Kabir - ha nisha abhi jaenge... tu itta kyu pareshan ho rhi h... kuch nhi hua h papa ko... thik h vo ekdum... bola na umesh ne ki jyada chot nhi aae h unhe...

Nisha - jyada chot nhi aae ka kya matlab... chot to aae h na... pta nhi kitni gehri chot lagi hogi... tu hat samne se... mai jaa rhi hu abhi.. tu baad m aate rehna...

She wiped her tears and tried to shove him away from her but kabir grabbed her shoulders and tried to calm her down.

Kabir - nisha... nisha... calm down... idhar dekh... mjhe dekh... dekh kuch nhi hua h papa ko vo ekdum thik h... ghar par h sabke sath... tu itna panic kyu kar rhi h... mai le jaa rha hu abhi bus thodi der...

He forced her into his embrace and soothe her back. She relaxed a bit but was still in hysteria.

Nisha - Kabir... sach m bhot darr lag rha h... papa... papa ko kuch ho gya to... vo apne happy wale gaane ki dhun h kabir... i cant bear to even think to see him in pain... i cant stand the thought of him being hurt in any manner... pls kabir...

Kabir tighten his hold on her and let her sob. He knew what she was going through. He's so brave wifey was still a little scared girl from inside who is afraid to lose someone very imp. Though he never had a father but ramesh had started filling that void in his life. He too love him like his own. He can feel how stressed nisha was.


Kabir - nisha... samjhta hu mai tu itti pareshan kyu h... par dekh tu itna stress legi to teri tabiyat kharab ho jayegi fir tu papa ka dhyaan kaise rakhegi bta...

He asked and she looked at him like a lost child.

Kabir - bol... thik kh rha hu na mai...

She nodded meekly as he kissed her forehead.

Kabir - tu tension mat le... hm sab h na... papa ekdum thik ho jaenge...

They were still talking when someone knocked on the door. Kabir turned and saw mechanic who told him that the car was ready.

Kabir (to nisha) - chalein...


SCENE - 4
GH


Kabir and nisha reached GH in record time and as soon as he screeched the break, nisha jumped out of the car and ran inside. Sukku who was just bidding his goodbye and was turning towards the door, collided with a running nisha. They both landed on floor with thud and groaned.

Sukku - kya h nisha... dekh k chal nhi sakti...


Nisha - tu bhi to dekh k chal sakta h na... bevkuf...

Sukku and nisha stood up rubbing their foreheads. Kabir who came from behind chuckled seeing them.

Kabir - nishu... aaram se...

He rubbed her forehead as sukku picked his bag again. Sukku grimaced as they caught in a small eyelock and coughed.

Sukku - ab rasta bhi chhodo ki yhi romance karoge... tum dno ki wajah se mai late ho jaunga...

Kabir and nisha looked here and there while sukku stifled a laugh. Kabir looked at sukku and said.

Kabir - sale sahab ab aapko der nhi ho rhi... chal mai tjhe chhod k aata hu...

Sukku agreed and hugged nisha as she wished him best of luck. Kabir and sukku left shortly after it while nisha went to meet ramesh.
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NAUC TSC


EPI 532


WRITTEN BY MANSI




SCENE - 1
KIRTI OFFICE


Kirti was working late in her office giving everything her full attention so that nothing should go wrong with the event. Now when samridh has agreed to the sponsorship, she needed to show him how dead serious she is for this event.

Kirti - (monologue) offo abhi bhi kitna kaam baaki h yaar... ue designs ki file abhi tak yhi padi hui h... plan b ki clothing ki last minute stitching abhi baki h... ur ye... ye material ki file abhi tak paas nhi hui... kya karu mai in sab ka... rashi ko bhi abhi hi leave leni thi...

She rubbed her temple out of tension and started working again. Suddenly her phone started ringing making her annoyed a lot more but seeing the no.a fear crept in her.

Kirti - hello...

Anonymous - hello beautiful... hm yaad h na...

Kirti - who are u and what do u want...

Anonymous - ohho beautiful... is this some way to talk to ur admirer huh... but u know u can be excused are bhai itni khubsurat ladki ho to thoda attitude to banta h... but beautiful i luv this attitude of urs...

Kirti - what the hell are u talking about...

Anonymous - beautiful no foul language with me... i know where are u and i know where and how u will be going ur home sweet home... do u want to know what kind of punishment u will be getting for ur behaviour...

Kirti cut the call in a haste and took deep breaths to calm herself bit her phone rang again and she picked up.

Kirti - (shouting) what do u want from me...

Anonymous - ahan beautiful... dont shout on me otherwise u will regret...

Kirti - wha... what do u mean...

Anonymous - beautiful dont be afraid... i like it when u twirl ur bangs... i would love to run my hands through them... i would love to feel u... m getting tired of watching u from afar...

Kirti was stunned and out of her senses by now... the creeping sensation crawled under her skin. Not knowing what to do she threw her phone towards the door and stumbled back on the floor.

Samridh who was passing by her cabin heared the loud thud and a bang. He stopped by and saw kirti on the floor with fear striken expression while a voice was booming in the background whose source was her phone lying in his feet. He picked it up and held against his ear.

Anonymous - beautiful... talk to me... u make me go insane with that figure of urs... soon baby soon... i will...

Samridh - (seething with anger) ENOUGHHH... SHUT THE HELL UP U MANIAC... DONT EVER CALL OR FOLLOW HER... OTHERWISE U WILL REGRET THE DAY U LAID UR EYES ON HER...

He cut the call and looked at kirti who was too shaken to respond.

SCENE - 2

Samridh sits in front of her and hands her phone to her.

Samridh - kirti... are u ok?

Kirti looked at him and stared blank still trying to comprehend with situation.

Samridh - kirti... nothing happened ur kuch hoga bhi nhi... mai hu na...

He try to shake her up but she still seemed dazed.

Samridh - chalo ghar chlte h...

Kirti - nhi...jhe nhi jana... vo... vo mera peecha kar rha hoga to... mai nhi jaungi ghar...

Samridh - mai chal rha hu tmhare sath... waise bhi ese log kaayar hote h kirti... vo samne aake kuch nhi kar sakte...

Kirti - par agar jo usne kha vo...

Samridh - kuch nhi kar sakta vo... jinki tmhare samne aane ki himmat nhi jo phone karke apne aap ko bhot brave samj rhe h vo kya karenge... ur tum to kitni bahadur ladki ho kirti... jo khud akele itna bada event sambhal sakti h... mjhe poore ek din k lie jhel sakti h... vo kamjor thodi na hogi...

Kirti looked up at him and smiled a little. Samridh stood up and held his hand out to help her get up wich she after some hesitation, accept.

Samridh helped kirti in his car and drove off to her home. All the while, he tried to make small conversations with her to ease her fright. Kirti however gave him two syllabe answers but a small smile was tugged throughout.

Kirti came out of his car and turned.

Kirti - thanks for the ride...

Samridh - no problem...

Kirti - ummm... thanks for...

Samridh - for???

Kirti - for helping me and for whatever u did in past one hour...

Samridh didnt said anything, just smiled and drove off leaving her behind with his thoughts.

SCENE - 3
DELHI


sukku reached to the given address and met with the producer.

Sukku - hello sir... nice to meet u finally...

Producer - ah... suketu gangwal... i was waiting for u since long... are u ready for this...

Sukku nodded and was provided a room to and script to rehearse. After some time, he was called for audition and gave a splendid performance.

Producer - well done my boy... awesome performance till now... but u see there are a lot of people i have to consult... so can u wait for ur result...

Sukku - i understand sir... and i have no prblm...

Producer - thats great suketu... i will call u in some time... go enjoy delhi till then...

Sukku - yeah sure...

Sukku came out of the place and looked at his phone with a longing look. He then smiled and called the only contact he wanted to talk to.

Alisha - aaj siraj aakhir nikla kha se h... jo superstar suketu gangwal ne mjhe call kia... itni achhi kismat kaise ho gyi meri...

Sukku chuckled and rolled his eyes at her sarcastic comment.

Sukku - hello to u too ms famous choreographer...

Alisha - huh... yaad aa gai meri... tmhe yaad bhi h ki last time tmne mjhe kab call kia tha??

Sukku - uh... shayad 4 din pehle...???

Alisha - 4 days mr. Gangwal... 4 days... vo bhi i have called u... tmne to poore 1 hafte pehle call kia tha...

Sukku - oh... Sorry na alisha... u know mai bhool jata hu... ur vo fir papa ka accident ho gya to yaad hi rha...

Alisha - uncle ka accident... ur tum mjhe ab bta rhe ho???... sukku tum...

Sukku - are alisha... its nothing serious... papa ekdum thik h... waise bhi yhi btane k lie to maine call kia...

Alisha - sach???

Sukku - uh.. huh... ha... achha vo sab chhodo ye btao tum kha ho... academy m???

Alisha - ha... vo aaj practice h na... tmhe to pta hi h kitna imp h ye sab... ur ye kunal bhi na... itna pareshan karta h mjhe...

Sukku - (angry) kyu kya kia usne...

Alish - (gigling) are esa wesa kuch nhi... bus nautanki karta rehta h... itna achha dancer h fir bhi har cheej m utmost perfection chahie ise...

Sukku hummed and then they talked some more before hanging up on each other.
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NAUC-TSC

EPISODE 533

- By annie

SCENE 1: GANGWAL HOUSE

Nisha who extremely worried about the situation, had just stormed into the house along with kabir and went directly towards ramesh's room ignoring all the other people who came in her way. Kabir, who was trying to pacify her, ran behind her straight into the room. And as she entered into the room,

Arree nishu...tu aagayi...!?"asked an injured ramesh who was sitting on his bed sipping to his tea.

Nisha was really overwrought seeing her father, and ran towards him and hugged him tightly. Ramesh who knew what his daughter's condition was, rubbed his hand against her back and tried to convince her that he was fine.

Nishu tu bhi kya bachcho ki tarah harkatein kar rahi hain...dekh tere papa tere saamne hain...ekk dum fit and fine! "said ramesh trying to act healthy.

Haan...dikh raha hain mujhe kitne theek ho aap...!"said nisha like a kid.

Ramesh giggled at her sweet talks, and said,

Kabirr tu hi samjha nishu ko...ye meri baat to maanegi nahi abb...!"

Wo kyun samjhaayega mujhe...mujhe dikh raha ho aap kitne theek ho aur kitne nahii...aur aapka dhyaan kahaan rehta hain road par chalte waqt...?? "said nisha wiping her tears like a kid.

Galath kya keh rahi hain ye papa...aap apna dhyaan kyun nahi rakhte ho...aur ye accident hua kaise...??"asked kabir.

Haan...kisne kiya ye accident..??kaun tha wo...bataao mujhe...main abhi usko bataake aati hun...!"said an angry nisha.

Aarree...mujhe kuch hua to nahi naa...theek hu na main...issliye maine lakshmi ko manaa kiya tha ki tujhe na bataaye..! "said ramesh.

Theek hain aap nahi bataaoge na...to main tauji se puchungi..!"said nisha and stood up to go to her tauji, but kabir stopped her in the nick of time, and said,

Aree..meri fighter plane baith jaa shaanti se...! usko baadme maarenge hum..!" after which nisha sat down back in her place.

To tum dono ab aaye hi ho to baaki sab se bhi miloo...! "said ramesh.

Abb milna jhulna to hota hi rahega...abb nisha do-teen din tak yahin rehne waali hain...aur aapka khayaal bhi rakhna hain na...!"said kabir with a smirk.

Arre baapree...!"Exclaimed ramesh in shock. Matlab ye mujhe theek karke hi yahan se jaayegi!" continued he.

Haan...aur nahi to kya...!? Apna suitcase saath me laayi hain na!"said kabir teasing nisha.

Kabirr tu chup reh...warna bohot maar khaayega tu...sochlee phir...!"shouted nisha warning kabir.

Main kya bol saktaa hu...mujhe marna thodi na hain tere haathon...!"said kabir mocking nisha.

Abb tumdono apna jhagdaa band karoo..aur jaake sabse mil aao..!"said ramesh.

Haan papa..." they said in unison, and went to meet the other members of the family. While on their way down to the courtyard where everyone was,

Ab khush...?? Maine bola tha na papa theek hongee...! Abb to smile karde meri fighter plane!" he said side-hugging her, and she smiled looking at him. And they went to meet the other members .

SCENE 2: RATHORE MANSION

Viraj was deep lost in his thoughts as well as busy in scribbling something in his diary. A smile crept over his face as he wrote in his dearest diary,

Dear diary,

Aaj kaafi din hogayee hain hume kuch likhhee...aur aapko kuch bataaye. Aapko humne kaafi baar bataaya hain humaari dost Kaira ke baare me... Na jaane kyun jab bhi hum unke kareeb hote hain...har taraf ek sukoon sa chha jaata hain...bachpan se humne humaari har baat aapse share ki hain...aur aaj bhi hum aapse kuch kehne aaye hain ...kal jab humaari tabiyat kharaab thi...jis tarah se unhone humaara khayaal rakkha...hum samajh nahi paaye ki humaare itna kuch karne ke bawajood..wo aise kaise humaara khayaal rakh sakti hain...humne to kabhi unko dhang kabhi dost ki tarah mehsoos bhi nahi karaaya... Par jab bhi hum unke saath hote hain...wo kami jo hume apne andar mehsoos hoti hain...wo bhar si jaati hain...aur maano aise lagta hain jaise humaara dil humse kuch kehna chaahta ho..kuch mehsoos karaana chaahta ho...aur kal jis tarah unhone humaara khayaal rakkha, hum uske liye unko thankyou bhi nahi bol sake...hum buddhu jo thehre...wo hume bachpan me isi naam se pukaarti thi...'buddhu'...kya sab kuch uss tarah waapas nahi ho sakta...kyun humaare beechme itni dooriyaan aagayi hain...?!.

-viraj

And with this he closed down his diary, and kept his pen aside. He leaned back in his chair feeling weak, and again started thinking about the same, when vasu entered into his room,

Viraj abhi aap theek hain...??"asked she.

Maa...aap kab aayi...aur aapki dost kaisi hain...??"he asked looking at her with a smile.

Wo bhi theek hain...aur jab hum aaye tab tum so rahe thee..to humne aapko disturb nahi kiya..."said vasu ruffling his hair.

Disturb karne ki kya baat hain maa...aap hume uthaadeti..!?"he asked.

Achcha...wo sab chodo...hume pata chala ki aapki tabiyat kharaab thi...?? Ab aap theek hain..??"she asked.

Haan maa...wo ab hum bilkul theek hain...bas thodi si weakness hain wo bhi kal tak theek ho jaayegi..!"said viraj with a smile.

Aur hume ye bhi pata chala ki kisine aapka khayaal bhi rakkha...wo nahi bataayenge aap hume..??"asked vasu though she knew everything.

Viraj blushed at this and said, haan maa...wo...k..k,..."he couldn't complete his sentence as he stammered, and vasu interrupted in between,

Ye aap..k ..k..k kya kar rahe hain...??"asked vasu giggling.

Maa wo...k..."before he could complete, vasu once again interrupted in between,

Kabirr...??? Kabir ne aapka khayaal rakhkha...? Hmm...lagta hain jojo thode responsible hogaye hain ab..!"said vasu not letting viraj to say anything.

Maa...kabir nahii...kaira...hum kaira ki baat kar rahe hain...!"Said viraj at one go.

Ohh...achchaa...kairaa...hmmm!"said vasu acting normal but was trying hard to stop her laughter as she was successful in fooling her son.

Viraj looked at vasu with questioning eyes, while vasu acted as if she knew nothing,

Kya hua viraj...aap humse kuch bolna chahte hain...??"asked she.

n..nahi maa!"he said.

Theek hain phir hum chalte hain...!"said vasu and turned around , but he stopped her holding her hand,

Maa...hum unko thank you bolna chaahte hain!"he said like a five year old.

She turned around to face him, and gave him a big smile and asked,

To kya aap humse permission le rahe hain?" and she giggled.

Nahi maa...hum ye kehna chaahte the ki hume nahi pata kaise thank you bole...aap humaari help karengi?"he asked looking down.

She giggled at her 28 year old son, who behaved merely like a five year old, and said,

Viraj aapko thankyou bolne keliye kisi technique ki zaroorat nahi hain...aap bas unke paas jaiye...aur poore dil se thank you boliye..."

Wo samajh jaayegi na maa...??"he asked.

Kyun nahi samjhegii...? Aap ekk baar bolke to dekhiyee...!"said she and viraj stood from his place and hugged her,

Thank you maa...!"he said.

Viraj aapko thank you hume nahi kaira ko bolna hain...!" she said and both of them giggled.

SCENE 3: DELHI- Alisha's academy.

Alishaaa...! Where are you? Kya kar rahi ho...?" he asked with a smile looking at her through the glass door, who talking to him over the phone.

Umm...abhi to practice kar rahi hun...! Tum to aise puch rahe ho jaise mujhse milne aane waale ho..!?"she asked not knowing the fact that he was already there.

You guessed it right...! Par Milne aane nahi waala hun...aa chukka hun...!"he said giggling.

Haha...don't joke around with me okay..?!?"she said raising her eyebrows.

Arrree...sachchii...! I can prove that!"he said.

Achcha to phir bataao...mere haath me abhi kya hain..?!?"she asked smartly.

Ekk haath me tumhaara phone...aur doosre me tumhaari bottle...! Abbottle ka colour bhi bataaun...ya kaafi tha..??"he asked with a smile.

No...you can't be here! you can't guess it so easily! Bataao kaise kiya!?"she asked in extreme shock.

Peeche mud ke dekhoo...pata chal jaayega...!"he said, and as said she turned around and found him there, waving his hand at her with a bright smile. And he said,

Abb yakeen hua...??"he asked.

Hmmm...!"she said and turned red.

Whhooaa! That was quite a big shock..! tum yahan kya kar rahe ho..??kab aaye...??kaise...??"she said as she walked towards him and hugged him out of excitement, but soon as they realized, they broke the hug, and to mend that awkward silence between them suketu spoke out,

Bas yuhin...delhi aaya tha audition dene...to socha tumse bhi mil hi lu! Aur kabir ne kahan hain ki waise bhi tumhe bhi waapas jaana hain jaipur to tumhe main saathme hi leke aaun!"he said.

Hmm...achchaa...! To kab aaye tum..?? bhaiyu ne mujhe iss baare me kuch bataaya nahi"she asked.

Bas kal hi aaya tha..wo maine hi mana kiya tha!"he said but bit his tongue.

Tumnee kyun..??"she asked raising her eyebrows.

Arree wo sab chodo naa...tum chalogi mere saath coffee keliye...?? Mujhe actually delhi me zyaada jagah pataa nahi hain...and tum saath me hoti to meri help ho jaati...!"he said looking down due to embarrassment.

But just before Alisha could reply to him, someone entered the rehearsal hall and said,

Al! You finished your rehearsals?"Asked the person as he walked towards her.

Yeaahh...just now! You are done with your practice k?!"she asked.

As soon as he heard the word k' spoken by Alisha, the first thing came into his mind was kunal'. Sukku immediately turned around to see the person, but was astonished at what he saw, it was a guy who must be around 17 years old or something. The boy came towards Alisha , eyeing at sukku who was looking at him weirdly.

K..! meet him..he is my friend sukku!"she said introducing sukku to the boy.

And sukku...this is k! a wonderful and a passionate dancer!"she said again introducing the boy to sukku.

Sukku..?! what kind of a name is that?!" he said and giggled.

You are kunal..?!"asked sukku.

It's K! and not kunaaal..!"he said mocking him which irked sukku.

Ohkaay! Chill you both! Let's go to some good coffee shop! Kunal...I mean k knows many of them!"she said.

Sukku was literally dancing within on knowing that kunal was a 17 year old. He didn't know why he felt a relief within. But the boy's arrogance was the thing which had stuck in his mind!

Wait..! Actually I think I saw you somewhere!?"said kunal while trying to guess his face.

You must have seen him in that recently released movie by Star productions! He's a really good actor!"she said praising sukku which was liked by sukku.

Hmm...yeah I remember!"said kunal.

I'm not that good in it Alisha!" said sukku.

Yeaah...exactly! You aren't as good as Ajay is! You seriously need a lot, means a lot of improvement with it dude!"said kunal directly on sukku's face, which irritated him.

Yeahh! Thank you so much for praising me kid!*pun* "said sukku mocking him.

I am not a kid Mr.actor!"said kunal.

Okay...okay..!Time out now! Kunal go back to your rehearsal! I'll be back soon!"said Alisha stopping them both before the water goes overhead, and she took suketu along.

Sukku tumhe coffee peeni thin a chalo!"she said and dragged him along.

And as they walked out of the academy, Alisha said,

Sukku ...yaar uske baat ka bura mat manna! Wo aisa hi hain..thoda akdu hain! Par wo dil se kuch bura nahi bolta...he's a kid...main uski taraf se tumse sorry bolti hun!"said Alisha in one go.

Sukku made her stop her continuous blabber by holding her shoulders , and calmed her down,

Shh..! Alisha I know everything! Tumhe sorry bolne ki koyi zaroorat nahi hain!"he said looking deep into his eyes.

Hmmm!"she replied.

To chale abb..??"he asked, while she awkwardly looked at his hands, and as soon as he realized he took his hands back to him and mumbled a sorry, to which Alisha just replied with a smile. And they both went to a really famous coffee shop in Delhi, when while sipping to his coffee, he told her about everything.

SCENE 4: KIRTI'S OFFICE

It was getting hard for her to know what is going on within her. She was fighting hard with herself to stop thinking again and again about him. The way he had took the situation under control the previous day and the way he had consoled her was making her change her perception, her thinking about him. She knew that she no more disliked him, actually she never disliked him, and it was always her ego which would gate crash her feelings. She was thinking deeply about this leaning back on her chair, when he barged into her cabin, and shouted,

Miss.Gangwal...!?"

Tum itne ajeeb kyun ho yaar...tum mujhe kabhi samajh me kyun nahi aate...?!"she asked without realizing that It was all real.

Excuse me miss.chirpy!? What the hell are you talking about? Are you dreaming or what with your eyes open!?"He said completely shocked at her behavior. And as he said that, she understood what she has landed herself in! she smiled foolishly, leaving him astonished, and finally managed to say,

Tum kab aaye...??"

Are you mad or what..?!? tum sachchme sapna dekh rahi thi kya..??!"he asked.

Whatever! Tum kyun aaye yahan?"she changed her tone.

First of all, stop talking to me in that tone! And second, jab tum meri saare files ke pages ulte - pulte kardogi...to mujhe hi aana padega naa...because you just don't realize how messy you are!?!"he said with a mere sense of irritation in his tone.

Maine kya kiya...??"she asked standing up from her chair.

Tumne kya kiya..?! ohh...let it be! Main bolunga aur tum maan jaaogi jaise...right?? I am leaving!"said samriddh , threw the file on the floor and turned around to walk out of her cabin.

But before he could walk out of the cabin, she came in between and by mistake she slipped over the file thrown by him on the floor and landed in his strong arms,

Miss.chirpy?! what the hell are you trying to do!"he asked.

I don't know!"she said as she was so lost in his deep black eyes, which had taken her to some other world, but he was really getting annoyed by her this behavior. She was not replying to him, which had irked him and he eventually dumped her on the floor by loosening his grip around her,

Oouuchhh...!"She screamed as she came out of her dream world.

Miss.gangwal!? Why don't you get yourself a shrink!? You really need one! I think you had lost it!"he said and stormed out of her cabin deserting her there on the floor.

An irritating smug he is, and nothing else!" mumbled kirti massaging her hand which ached as she fell on the floor with a thud.

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EPISODE 534

- By Annie

SCENE 1: KIRTI'S OFFICE

Samriddh was busy working in his cabin, when he noticed Kirti passing by his cabin striding her feet effortlessly through the floor, which made him look at her all amazed, it was as if she was flying and not walking. Whatever mood she was in, she always had a wide smile plastered to her face which could even win the heartless' heart. He hit himself back on his head as soon as he realized what he was doing.

Why was I looking at her? He questioned himself, and just before he could find an answer for it, someone knocked on his cabin's door.

Can I come in samriddh, if you aren't busy?"Asked the person, and it was none other than kirti. And the way she asked his permission left him all flabbergasted.

Aaj ekk dum se isse kya hogaya...?? Why is she behaving so sweet!? " He mumbled slowly so that she is not able to hear it.

Huh..?!? You said something?"She asked as still she managed to hear a few words spoken by him.

No...I didn't! You have some work with me?!"he asked directly.

Noo..!"she said.

Then why the hell are you here?! May I know that miss.chirpy?!"he asked astounded by her answer.

Ahhh..."she let out as she didn't know why she came.

Are you here to play Cricket with me then...?"He asked.

Excuse me..!?"she said as she couldn't understand why he said that.

Ahh...I thought you would be interested in playing cricket with me, as the world cup fever is on...and you are here without any reason!"He said this merely as a sarcasm.

What do you want to say!?" she asked.

Miss. Chirpy would you mind telling me what made you come here?"he asked.

Ohh..yeah...I came here to show you these designs..."she said and walked up to his table to show them the designs, but by mistake she stumbled her hand with the glass kept on the table, splitting all the water on him, wetting his clothes.

Ohh...I am really, really sorry samriddh! I never meant to do that..! That was just by mistake! I'll clean it...sorry...!"She said as she realized what blunder she has committed and ran towards him to help him clean it, but by mistake, she again stumbled with the chair itself and fell on him, while he caught her in the nick of time.

Such an aafat you are!"he said, while she smiled cheekily as she didn't know what to reply.

Would you mind getting up from me miss.gangwal?! Or must I throw you out myself??"He asked in an irritated tone, and as he said that she realized in what position she was in and immediately got up from there and stood in front of him looking down due to embarrassment.

Please get lost! Enough harm you've done!"He said with an irritated face.

Sorry, really sorry!"She said and absconded away from there, blushing after the mess she has created. And as she exited out of his cabin, he shut the door behind her back ,

Akduu!"she said .

Aafat!"he said.

SCENE 2: DELHI @ Alisha's academy.

Sukku was sitting in alisha's rehearsal hall watching her practice and choreographing her students. He was in a complete trance of the way she was moving, and it was broken soon as he saw Alisha coming towards him, and then sat behind him looking at her students rehearsing for an upcoming event.

So..? mr.suketu gangwal! Kaise laga aapko aaj ka practice session!?"she asked still looking at her students.

You are asking me..??!"he asked looking at her.

Toh...tumhe yahan aur koyi suketu gangwal bhi dikh raha hain..??"she asked with a smile while he giggled.

Yeahh...good! Main to sirf ekk actor hun yaar...dance to tum mujhse kaafi better karti ho...infact main jab dance karta hun mujhe darr lagaa rehta hain ki kahin main stage-tod performance na kardu..!"he said giggling at his own dialogue.

Confidence hona achchi baat hain sukku!"she said with a smile.

I mean literal waala stage tod performance Alisha..aur uske baad sab mujhe pakad pakad ke maare!"he said and giggled.

She laughed holding her stomach after hearing what he said, even her students were flabbergasted to see her like this..And they stopped their rehearsals and looked at her with questioning eyes, which made her to stop laughing,

Sorry...sorry...continue your practice!"she said as she still was trying hard to stop herself from laughing.

Yaar...tum itnee funny baatein karte ho na beech beechme...! Sachchi mein bohot cute lagte ho...! And jab bhi tumhaare saath hoti hu na dil happy sa hojaata hain...!"she said and bit her tongue immediately realizing what she said.

He smiled at what she said, sachchi...?!"he asked.

Hmmm...!"she hummed as she had no answer to it.

Alisha can I ask you something...and agar bura lage to maarna mat please...aur students ke saamne to bilkul nahi!!"said sukku.

Haan bolo..."she said, and her heart started to race at an enormous speed without her knowing a reason.

w...wo tum mere saath...d...dinner karne chalogi...??!"he asked looking down.

Hmmm...!"she replied instantly.

So...tonight at 8! Be ready! I'll pick you up from your hostel..!"he said with a shy smile.

Hmmm...!"she said shyly.

I'll leave now..?!?"he asked not willing to leave.

Okay..! I'll be ready then!? You will come na?"she asked.

Yeah..definitely!"he said with a smile.

And then he finally managed to walk out of her academy though he was not at all willing to, and went to the hotel where he was staying, and laid down on his bed and was deep in his thoughts, and gradually he slipped into a deep slumber.


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P.S. sorry for a short and late episode! writers are busy these days! do understand! the long and timely episodes will be back soon! be tuned in to NAUC-TSC for the upcoming twists!

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Scene 1
Gangwal house

The cousins had decided to spend some time with each other as recently they all got busy with their respective lives and couldn't spend that much time together. They were assembled in the regular corner in the house that was the terrace.

Dolly was sitting there with Ahaan's crib besides here and even he was enjoying the cold breeze and making some cute goo-goo' sounds that made everyone go aww of him. Saurav took out his phone and started recording Ahaan as he wanted to cherish this moment every now and then. Dolly looked at him emotionally which was noticed by Nisha, she took Dolly in a side hug and kissed her cheek. Kirti too joined them followed by Jwala. The boys looked at each other clueless of what was happening but then chose to focus on their popcorns.

"I am missing Sukku" Dolly said and pouted

"Par shayaad vo hum logon ko miss nahi kar raha hoga, kafi busy hai vo" Nisha said and paused she looked at Kabir who was totally disinterested in the talks and was relishing the crunchy butter popcorns and continued "Aaj uski date jo hai, Alisha ke saath" she stressed on the words Date' and Alisha' and that made Kabir almost chock his popcorns.

He looked at her wide-eyes completely shocked and angry too, his possessive brother side had taken a toll on him

"Tujhe kaise pata?" he asked sternly, he doubted that she may be lying

"Alisha ne bataya, uss dress selection main help chahiye thi" she replied casually

"Usne mujhe kyun nahi bataya?" Kabir complained

"Kabir, tu dress selection main uski help kaise karta?" Nisha asked trying to control her laughter

"Usne mujhe yeh kyun nahi bataya ki vo date pe ja rahi hai?" Kabir asked and crossed his hands across his chest

"Kabir, tu kya uski behan hai jo vo aisi baatien tujhse share karegi? Hum ladkiyaan aksar aisi baatien apni behno se ya baki friends se discuss karti hai, Bhaiyon se nahi ya baki family members se nahi" Nisha replied sternly and he looked in deep thoughts

"Hmm, maine bhi Mom ko apni first date ke bare main nahi bataya tha" he said absent-mindedly and then looked at Nisha who was fuming with anger

"Pehli date and all, haan?" she questioned raising her brow and he gulped his saliva

"Yeh kahan phasa liya maine khud ko?" he thought and mentally face palmed

"Vo" before he could say anything Nisha left from there followed by Dolly, Kirti and Jwala

Kabir face-palmed as all the girls went out and the boys came to him with teasing expressions on his face

"Kya baat hai Kabir? Tu toh chupa rustam nikla kabhi bataya bhi nahi ki tu dates pe jata tha?" Umesh said and patted his shoulder

"Nahi yaar, main dates pe nahi jata tha, sirf ek baar gaya tha, uske baad baki sari toh bas aise hi thi casual meetings type" he said and frowned

"Toh first date thi kaisi teri?" Saurav asked, Kabir smirked slightly and replied

"Unforgettable" he closed his eyes as if he wanted to cherish that memory and when he opened it he was hell shocked and felt that he has been thrown from the terrace because there was his lovely wife standing there with her anger tripled than before. Saurav went to Ahaan and acted to become busy with him and Umesh started counting the stars

"Saurav, Ahaan ko yahan de, Dolly di ne usse andar le jane ke liye kaha hai" Nisha said sternly but kept looking at Kabir who was trying to make innocent faces but she kept that stern look on her face and walked back taking Ahaan in her arms

Kabir sat on the floor with his head in his hands

"Mar gaya aaj toh main" he cried and looked at Umesh and Saurav who had sympathetic expressions on their faces.

"Koi baat nahi Kabir, ho jata hai" Umesh said placed his hand on his shoulder assuring him

"Abh kya karega tu Kabir?" Saurav asked

"Atamhatiya" Kabir replied and shook his head

"Kabir, itni si baat ke liye suicide?" Umesh asked and he sounded confused

"Haan, teri behan ko manana suicide karna hi hua na?" he replied and Umesh nodded stating that he understood what he meant and wished him luck as he breathed deeply and went towards Nisha's room

He found Nisha sitting there on the bed folding her few old clothes, trying to remove his frustration on those poor clothes. He plastered a smile on his face and walked towards her

"Kaam kar rahi hai?" he asked sweetly but earned a stare from her in return, she said nothing and continued her work

"Nisha" he called her sweetly but he didn't receive any answer

"Tu jana nahi chahegi ki meri first date thi kon?" he asked and observed her as she breathed deeply

"Mere paas aaj bhi uss ladki ki photo hai, dikahun tujhe?" he asked and she didn't reply, he smiled and took out his phone, he swiped through the gallery and placed his phone infront of her, she looked at the photo and then turned at him. It was an old lady who was there in the picture kissing Kabir on his cheek and he looked in his teen years

"Mere school ki principle, unka farewell tha and main unhe party ke baad ek dinner date ke liye lek gaya tha, unka koi nahi tha iss duniya main, aur mere saath meri Maa hoke bhi nahi thi, vo bohut upset thi ki kyunki abh vo school nahi aa sakti, school aake unka akela pan door ho jata tha, issliye unka mood light karne ke liye main unhe date pe leke gaya tha... unke chehare pe vo khushi, usse kabhi nahi bhool sakta main..."

Nisha looked down not having the courage to face him and Kabir understood it, he simply pulled her in a hug and they sat there not saying a word but letting their silence say it all.

Scene 2
Kirti's Office

Kriti came to the office and had a smile on her face she had somewhere got the idea that she might have started liking Samridh and that made her little excited for don't know what reason. She took her seat and started sketching a design.

Samridh came in the office and immediately Kirti looked up at him and smiled but he frowned at her still she had a smile on her face. Samridh shook his head and went to his cabin.

He peeped out to look at Kirti who was lost in her work with a smile on her face. He looked at her and thought why is she behaving like this?

"Ho kya gaya hai iss lakdi ko? Kal bhi mujhe ulta jawab nahi diya, aur aaj bhi aise behave kar rahi hai... kahin phir koi drama toh nahi kar rahi hai yeh? Ho bhi sakta hai... she is a Drama queen after all" he shook his head and continued his work

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