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Noe123

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Posted: 9 years ago

#701

Originally posted by: potternerd
Hello Noe

Hello there!😃

Wow it's been such a long time !!

I guess I have been inactive for over a year now...started visiting IF 2-3 days ago and obviously I had to read your story

Wow..that's long time. Thank you for coming back to my story.

I just finished reading all 11 chapters and girl you've got me hooked on to it

Your writing is marvelous and throughout my reading journey I felt that I was reading a novel

The way you've described and developed the characters is brilliant

The depiction of the scenes with such detail that I could imagine them so vividly

I may have told you numerous times that I love how thick your stories are and so much substance they hold

The way you describe the place, the people etc wow

I hope to see you publish a book someday... I for one would definitely buy a copy :)

Another wow...girl...that is very generous. I try. And, people encourage. And, it keeps going. Last statement - some day. 😳

Much love
Kinjal :)

Much love to you, too. Keep visiting. 😃

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Noe123

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Posted: 9 years ago

#702

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potternerd

@potternerd

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Posted: 9 years ago

#703

Wow the mystery is deepening

Is ahsaan really dead ? Or is he in someway related to the narcotics/wildlife smuggling case

Liked how asad through his busy schedule didn't forget about zoya!

Whew can't wait for the next one

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KeyaHira2

@KeyaHira2

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Posted: 9 years ago

#704

Poor Zoya

😭

I loved the chapter

I hope they find out the truth about Ahsaan's death soon

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Heena

@aarzoo50

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Posted: 9 years ago

#705

Noe... Noe...
NO No NO!!!!
as if we had solved all the other ongoing cases n mysteries here that u put another feather in the cap of zoya being under scrutiny *sigh*
but whatever ... i loved the update...
BECHARI ZOYA... she surely deserves the LAQAB of BECHARI here... felt so sorry for her 😔 Ayaan agn went out of the way... bande ka dil hi kuch aesa hai...
and abt asad .. filhal issi mai khush hu k zoya ka case uske pas nahi... warna ethics k chalte AsYa nahi ban payega😛
ye darjeeling n kolkata ka connection kya hai other thn being connected by rail route???
when vl we get to kno all this???
police bohat dheeli hai yaha... make thm work hard noe...
waiting fr next part... and waiting more more more eagerly fr decoding of the cases

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jasmine ansari

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Posted: 9 years ago

#706

Awsm part
Luvd it
Cont soon
Thnx for d pm
T.c

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Ankahee

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Posted: 9 years ago

#707

Res😊

Fast paced and happenning chapter. Ayaan and Zoe's conversation, absolutely, heart wrenching. Ayaan trying to make the news somewhat softer to digest, if that is even possible, further tests, and all the circumstantial evidence, so brutally and mutely defying his attempts, Zoe trying her best to reconcile the expected with realities. Trying in her way to figure out how to deal with the finality of the situation, to accept and not get swayed by Ayaan's kindness. Ahsaan still taking care and reminding her of his presence, beyond his death, with the bank accounts. I found the finality of the goodbyes a bit ominious, I hope I am wrong.

Sinha, cold blooded is apt and more. Sinister, yes, but his tactics are such a contrast to Ayaan and Asad. Comissioner understands this, I think. This case is getting convulated, the trap has been set, the bait has been taken, or so it seems, but like Asad said, they are dealing with experienced folks, he has been through a failure once, he cannot afford another, just because Sinha feels he knows what he is doing and dealing with. I hope it all ends in a good way.

Asad and Ayaan catching up on Ahsaan's case was a nice touch, Asad is updated even in background, he is aware.

So finally, next round begins in the case and then that call...hope Zoe is fine, the ending is well done. Cannot wait for next chapter.

Looking forward to everything tying out...

Edited by Ankahee - 9 years ago

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A.Hajnal

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Posted: 9 years ago

#708

What the? 😲

Way to end on the point to make the rest of us breathless and restless...Good going, Mohtarma...*shaking head in disapproval*

My heart breaks for Ahsaan...Dude, that was not a way or time to go...🥺

No matter what, and how freaking logical everything Ayaan said sounds, I feel there is some much more to the whole episode than just that...And I can't wait to find out what...

God, he was so caring, he left her financially secure, if not anything else...I can't forget the scene in which he told Dilshaad that he had nothing to give her. I know money didn't come in the context he was talking, and it doesn't matter, but still he did what he could to make it up for whatever he thought he leaked.

And I know, it's ^ quality every thoughtful husband should have, but at the same time, it makes me wonder if he knew the things that happened could happen...Ah, there so much about him that is still left unanswered, even to Zoya, who has loved him and lived with him...I always end up talking about him, don't I?

And Zoya, the sweet lil girl was pushed to grow up and become rational and act mature for the survival of her child...😭 And God knows what she still has to endure...

And the last but not the least, Asad Ahmed Khan...There so lil of him in these chapters, till yet there so lil to know about him...Hope to see/know more of him in the upcoming chapters...😳

Noe, whatever it is that in the process, hope you will find the missing ends and update soon...😳

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sj_qh_kabhi

@sj_qh_kabhi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#709

Omg this is getting way too interesting and intriguing
Ahsaan is such a mystery
He may be dead ir may not be
Ayaan helped zoya to a such a great extent
Asad remembers zoya. Wow
Awesome writing
I'm so excited to read more
Update soon..:)

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Morsmorde

@Morsmorde

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Posted: 9 years ago

#710

I don't know why but my gut feeling says that ahsan is alive. I started reading this from start and 3 person were present. One was deeply injured and 2nd one was dead and a 3rd person who was speaking very fast. I have a feeling the injured one was ahsan. The talk of O+ve and O-ve blood group was a Lil suspense filled. The role of asad in finding out about ahsan's death seems suspicious to me. Now those 2 lines seems like the leader of trafficking group knows what police is upto. loving ayaan for what he is doing. Hmm so asad asked about zoya. Kabhi kabhi kai cheeze aankho ke samne hoti h per dikhayi nhi deti.
The Sun has set I wonder why u choose this title. marking the date on calendar for next 2 weeks lol.
love

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