Ashlok ff: Ye Dil Maange More updated Last Episode 50 - Page 37

Originally posted by: coolhi1988

Awesome update ...

Finally shlok reaches astha..

Suresh confident that shlok won't cum here...

But shlok reached & gave black & blue to the goons..

Gud shlok fit d transmitter in suresh shirt...

Astha confident her baba is in mbai...

& now astha feels she is to much indebted to shlok & his family.. Also due to her shlok would HV got more hurt so she dint want to hurt them more & writing a msg she left..but qat was s need to live mobile there.. She could HV switched off & kept with her...

Continue soon..

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M not sorry for late commenting . coz it wasn't my mistake...

thanks didi
i know u wont do mistake so easily
anyway thanks for commenting

Originally posted by: chandalekha

Wow..action packed episode😊 shlok saved aastha and he is in love😳

but why aastha, you are running away from him, that too all alone in danger????😲

now don't you think about how badly shlok will be upset????🤔

hmm action packed seriously then wat r u going to say about todays one 😆
thanks for commenting
keep it up
ur comments r always so encouraging

Episode 20

Shlok was sleeping. He was really tired. He didn't see the message. Aastha got out of the house wen police were sleeping. She atlast saw the house and wiped the tears and went away. She also took the money which she brought from her house. Aastha went to bus stand and boarded the Mumbai bus. She was travelling with closing her face with dupatta." At early morning she reached Mumbai. She doesn't know where to go. She just knows her father is in Mumbai. She roamed on the roads clue lessly. Her hand was paining. Her heart is also in pain. Wat if she cant go back again cant I meet them again nahi I have to find Baba first. She doesn't know where to search. She cant suspect her chachu's son behind all these but yes she can take their help. So she started to their house.

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At the early morning Anjali woke up. She was sleeping in her room. She didn't find her haan kaha gayi ye ladki she went down and saw the whole house she was nowhere, she was not in washroom too. She saw her phone there itself. Phone tho yaha hi hain. Haan she went to terrace she didn't find her there too. Oh my god where the hell is she. She quickly went to Niranjan and woke him up and said Aastha was missing. Niranjan too was shocked. He went and searched everywhere he also asked police. They said they didn't see but he understood they were sleeping.

He immediately called Shlok. Shlok in his sleeping mood took the call. Niranjan "Shlok Aastha was missing do u know where she went." Shlok "Kya aap kaun hain." Niranjan "Shlok utho beta main Baba baat kar raha haoon." Shlok then came out of his sleeping mood and got up "Haan Baba boliye." Shlok "Haan Baba." Niranjan "Shlok Aastha is missing do u know where she might go haan." Shlok was shocked "Kya!! Mujhe kya pata where can she go did u check her everywhere." Niranjan "Haan Shlok she was no where she left her phone here itself." Shlok haan ye ladki samajthe kya hain apne aapko "Ji Baba I m coming wait." Shlok rushed to his guest house. Anjali was in tears. Now Shlok cut the call and saw a new msg from Aastha. He opened msg and read it. Oh my God Aastha kaha chali gayi tum.

Shlok rushed to guest house and showed the msg to them. Anjali cant stop crying. Shlok thought a lot. Shlok "Baba main abi Mumbai jata hoon I know she goes to Mumbai she was insisting me to go to Mumbai yesterday I know she wants to find her father in Mumbai haan Baba once I go there I will call u and also Baba go to police station and also give complaint and also show her phone to them and one more work Baba aap ye photo leke voter id office jaake address pata chalna we might know something k now I m leaving anyway I have tracking device I will follow that aap ye kaam karlijiye Baba I will be back with Aastha don't worry." And he rushed away.

He had tracking device with him. It showed he too was in Mumbai. He just rushed like a mad one. Shlok was thinking wen I promised u y didn't u wait haan. Arey he forgot one thing. He called his Baba and asked him to search for her in her house and also at the grave yard of her mother. Niranjan said he will. Immediately he rushed to her home. He didn't find her there. He searched each and every corner. He again went to her mother grave yard and also didn't find her. He called Shlok and said he didn't find her anywhere.

Shlok was now confirmed she definitely have been to Mumbai. Anjali was worried so much. She went to pray for her. She was always in tears. Shlok again thought something and called Gauri too. She was shocked to know this. She too said no. Gauri rushed to guest house. Shlok again called his father to search her in the mandir too. Niranjan was roaming roaming roaming and there too he didn't find her. Now it is confirmed she definitely is in Mumbai. He had tracking device showing him at the one place. He also called his friend who lives in Mumbai and arranged everything for him. He also had revolver with him. Within no time he reached Mumbai. Since it is early morning he drove with 130kmph. He didn't care about anything he just want to see Aastha.

Aastha went to their house. She want to take help of them. She entered a huge gate. From no where Suresh came and sedated her with chloroform again. This time she struggled with breathing and finally she felt unconscious. She was dragged to somewhere into the house. Shlok had revolver and went to the address shown by his tracking device. After sometime Shlok came to that house he felt it he doesn't know that feeling he felt Aastha was here. He slowly came out of the car and his phone rang then it is Niranjan. Niranjan "Shlok wo Aastha ki chachuka address pata chala." And he said the same address.

Shlok was surprised "Haan Baba I m there that means this is all done by them don't worry I will bring Aastha with me." And he cut the call. Anjali was still praying to Bappa with tears. Gauri also came there and asked for Aastha. She too shed tears. Here Aastha was held as hostage in the same house beside to the Avdoot's room. Shlok asked his friend Rahul "Rahul police kaha hain." Rahul "Don't worry they r on the way."

Shlok entered the building but it looked like a house. He didn't know where he could go. He thought something and he put gun in his back and went into it like a stranger and said "Hello koi hain." No response but he heard something in the cellar. He didn't know how to go there. Akhil came and hit Avdoot to wake up. Avdoot woke up with a thud. Shlok too had a transmitter and its receiver is at Rahul. Shlok hid at behind the door and atlast he saw Avdoot. It didn't surprise him. He just checked his gun was there or not. He barged into the room and put gun at the head of Akhil and shouted "Aastha kaha hain bolo." Akhil raised his hand. But Salman came and put gun against his head and asked him to drop the gun.

One of his friend Inspector Arjun came there and met his friend Rahul there. Rahul explained him everything. Aastha slowly trying to open her eyes and found Ankush. Aastha "Ankush tum ye sab kya hain pls leave me.." Ankush came near her and said her to be silent. Ankush "shsh Aastha didi shsh don't shout Akhil bhayya sunlega" Aastha "Ankush tum kya baat kar raha hain Ankush pls baba laapata hain main dhoondna hain pls release me." Ankush "shshsh didi I will help u don't cry shshsh be silent." And he peeped through the door to the next room and surprised "ye ladka yaha kya kar raha hain."

Ankush "Aastha didi tumhari boy friend aagaya." Aastha "Kya kaun hain mujhe koi boy friend nahi hain." Ankush "arey didi wo ladka jo tumhare saath hain itni din u were in his home na wo aagay." Aastha was shocked "Kya Shok yaha kaise." And she got up. Ankush "didi aap chinta mat kijiye Baba ko kuch nahi hoga dekho aapki Baba yahi hain if u want to see dekho slowly." Aastha was shocked "Kya Baba yahi hain lekin." And she peeped through the door. Finally she saw her Baba beaten. Aastha cried. Ankush put hand on her mouth and dragged her.

Ankush "didi I said na shshsh don't make sound pls." Aastha "lekin.." Ankush "shshsh I will tell u everything." And in this mean time Inspector Arjun came to the spot and placed gun on Salman. Rahul came and took the gun from Salman. Shlok freed himself and made Akhil to kneel down and made him place his hands on his head. Inspector Arjun made Salman to kneel down. Suresh came to Ankush and saw Aastha is awake. Suresh "Ankush Sir if u give my payment then I will leave." Aastha was again shocked. Suresh helped Ankush bhai in kidnapping me. Ankush thought this is the right time and he took Aastha and went to the room in which all were present. Shlok saw Aastha and went to her. Shlok "Aastha." But Aastha kept on watching her Baba.

Aastha rushed to Baba and kneeled down infront of him and cried a lot. Shlok "Aastha mat ro Baba milgaya na ab kyun ro rahi hoon." Akhil "Ankush I trusted u damn it y did u do all these did u forget how he destroyed our family wat the hell did u just do all my efforts r waste just bcoz of u I wont spare u for this Ankush." Ankush "bhaiyya we r wrong Avdoot Baba is not wrong u r wrong u shouldn't have made this Aastha didi didn't do any wrong y do u want to kill her haan wat is her mistake." Inspector arrest him. Akhil "ek minute inspector."

Akhil stood up and went to bring a video. He shown it to every one and also Avdoot too saw it and was shocked. Aastha was out of the world, Shlok too was shocked. Within this time constables came there. Inspector ordered to arrest all the three "Akhil, Avdoot and Salman." Aastha was shocked "nahi nahi Baba aisa nahi karenge nahi" and she was going to stop them. Aastha "Baba aap kuch bolte kyun nahi." Avdoot bent his head down out of shame. They took away them. Aastha cried out and collapsed down "Ye sab kya ho raha hain pehle Aai gayi aura ab Baba." Shlok came and consoled her. Ankush "didi Kalindi aayi jinda hain."

Episode 21

Ki Hai Sai gud morning yaar. Thanks for your update and pm.
Hey thanks for ur reply for our comments. U r also encouraging our also.That's y v r writing comments yaar 👏.Nice update yaar. 😛.Shlok sleeping because of tired and didn't see astha's mgs.
Arey astha y r u going alone. Y didn't she think about them.At least once. 😡. She also leaving her mobile in the house 😡
Really sometimes she becomes like a small kid.
She reached Mumbai but didn't know where to go.
She is full of pain.
Atlast she was going to her chachu's house arey waw .Arey asthu u r going to lion's den yaar. Haha. Anjali woke up but she didn't find astha . She wakeup niranjan also. Now she is worried and crying for the little girl. 😭.]Niranjan asked to policeman which the security. They also don't anything.
He called shlok but our shlokee was in sleeping mood. He told to him that astha was missing. He gets shock. Then he saw the mgs which astha send. Now he understand where she goes.
He asked his father to search her every were.
Arey he went to Mumbai and told his friends to be prepared arey waw 👏
Shlok is our real hero 😛

Shlok called astha's friend gauri. Its nice.
Thank god he inserted a device in Suresh shirts so he tracked the place.
Niranjan told the address also was correct. 👏
Now shlok had confidence that he can find his drama queen. 😉
Arey in the same house astha came and Suresh sedated her with chloroform 😡
He took her inside the same house which avdoot was hostages.
Shlok feels that astha is here.
Hey Sai u remembered us once again the show which Aditi got astha in hostsge.
Sai in ur every ff u will remember us the show back yaar.

In the show shlok said to varad that he knows that astha is some were near which they are standing that his mind telling henna. In ur ff also when he entered the house which avdoot and astha hostage he thought same like the show. Thanks yaar 👏
Hey Sai u introduced so many characters in the update. Rahul, Arjun, Akhil,Ankush and Salman. Waw its was super yaar. 👏
I think Ankush is a good character henna. He told astha that her boyfriend came. She said she didn't have but when he told that she lived in his house her mind gone to shlok. Arey Ankush u r wrong he is not her boyfriend, he is her Prince yaar. 😉
I didn't understand y Ankush told Suresh to kidnap astha.that is confusing me. Akhil u trusted Ankush y arey what's the relationship between Akhil and Ankush??.The police arrested Akhil. But Akhil showed some videos to everyone. What is it in the video??
Everything is confusing.And who is the Salman.in the video that will be an important I think. The police arrested them. Shlok astha and everyone get shocked. Astha can't believe it. She asked her father is it true. Because of shame he bend his head. 😡 😡
Ankusk u made us happy because u said kalindi is alive. Arey that is the good news henna. I think shlok will took them with him kalindi astha and Ankush.
Really now I think avdoot is the real villain 😡
Anyway thanks for ur treat Sai. Keep writing like this. U know v r waiting for ur update.
Continue soon dear friend...
Hey Sai because of u I think I am writing story where u know giving u the comments yaar.

Oh god what happening to astha...
Oneway I am happy she is now infront of shlok..
Avadoot is the real villian...
What is his sin...
Sad for astha... Shlok plz take care of her... She needs you...

wow,superb update,finally aastha saw her father.

Wow awesome but wonder what is in the video n kalindi is alive seriously...😳😳

awesome update...
well written...
astha kidnapped...
shlok reaches that place..
i was right.. half right.. it was astha's chachu's planning...
suresh was just paid man..
ankush knows they r wrong.. but cant do anything openly..
astha meets avdoot..
ankush reveals kalindi is alive..
wow...
but wer is she?
all 3 criminals arrested..
but y is avdoot ashamed?
continue soon..
thnks 4 d pm..

What is avdoot sin?

Originally posted by: Saibhargav

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i know u wont do mistake so easily
anyway thanks for commenting

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