Ashlok ff: Ye Dil Maange More updated Last Episode 50 - Page 38

Superb update..

Originally posted by: vaishux

Superb update..

I am quite surprised that kalindi is alive...

Really nice part😛

thank u vaishux
yes today u will know everything stay tuned to IF

Originally posted by: nadeeka1200

What is avdoot sin?

If kalindi lives where is she?

Thank you sai

Waiting for next update

hmm u will know
Hmm u will know everything
i wont linger u more today will be the revelation hope u like it

Originally posted by: coolhi1988

awesome update...
well written...
astha kidnapped...
shlok reaches that place..
i was right.. half right.. it was astha's chachu's planning...
suresh was just paid man..
ankush knows they r wrong.. but cant do anything openly..
astha meets avdoot..
ankush reveals kalindi is alive..
wow...
but wer is she?
all 3 criminals arrested..
but y is avdoot ashamed?
continue soon..
thnks 4 d pm..

thank u didi
hmm avdoot's mistake will be known today
my pleasure 😉

Originally posted by: chickyhoney

Wow awesome but wonder what is in the video n kalindi is alive seriously...😳😳

yes Kalindi is alive that will be the U turn in Aastha's life
thanks for commenting

Originally posted by: rd0309

Wow what a revelation!!

thank u
hope u liked it
there is more to come

Originally posted by: Catherine06

wow,superb update,finally aastha saw her father.

Nice every ff had a suspense to reveal in next update.

Due to internet problem i could not post my reply.

Very very nice ff,I like it,superb

thanks a lot Catherine06
ur comments r really so encouraging
no worries u can comment wenever it is gud
hmm finally drama ends today from tommorrow u can see new love story

Originally posted by: dazzles

Oh god what happening to astha...
Oneway I am happy she is now infront of shlok..
Avadoot is the real villian...
What is his sin...
Sad for astha... Shlok plz take care of her... She needs you...

nothing happened to Aastha she is perfectly fine u will like wat is going to come
i think today u will kill me
Avdoot villain hmm lets see
Aastha doesnt need anyone now she is free
thanks for commenting hope u follow this ff till end

Originally posted by: sudhamadhu

Ki Hai Sai gud morning yaar. Thanks for your update and pm.
Hey thanks for ur reply for our comments. U r also encouraging our also.That's y v r writing comments yaar 👏.Nice update yaar. 😛.Shlok sleeping because of tired and didn't see astha's mgs.
Arey astha y r u going alone. Y didn't she think about them.At least once. 😡. She also leaving her mobile in the house 😡
Really sometimes she becomes like a small kid.
She reached Mumbai but didn't know where to go.
She is full of pain.
Atlast she was going to her chachu's house arey waw .Arey asthu u r going to lion's den yaar. Haha. Anjali woke up but she didn't find astha . She wakeup niranjan also. Now she is worried and crying for the little girl. 😭.]Niranjan asked to policeman which the security. They also don't anything.
He called shlok but our shlokee was in sleeping mood. He told to him that astha was missing. He gets shock. Then he saw the mgs which astha send. Now he understand where she goes.
He asked his father to search her every were.
Arey he went to Mumbai and told his friends to be prepared arey waw 👏
Shlok is our real hero 😛

Shlok called astha's friend gauri. Its nice.
Thank god he inserted a device in Suresh shirts so he tracked the place.
Niranjan told the address also was correct. 👏
Now shlok had confidence that he can find his drama queen. 😉
Arey in the same house astha came and Suresh sedated her with chloroform 😡
He took her inside the same house which avdoot was hostages.
Shlok feels that astha is here.
Hey Sai u remembered us once again the show which Aditi got astha in hostsge.
Sai in ur every ff u will remember us the show back yaar.

In the show shlok said to varad that he knows that astha is some were near which they are standing that his mind telling henna. In ur ff also when he entered the house which avdoot and astha hostage he thought same like the show. Thanks yaar 👏
Hey Sai u introduced so many characters in the update. Rahul, Arjun, Akhil,Ankush and Salman. Waw its was super yaar. 👏
I think Ankush is a good character henna. He told astha that her boyfriend came. She said she didn't have but when he told that she lived in his house her mind gone to shlok. Arey Ankush u r wrong he is not her boyfriend, he is her Prince yaar. 😉
I didn't understand y Ankush told Suresh to kidnap astha.that is confusing me. Akhil u trusted Ankush y arey what's the relationship between Akhil and Ankush??.The police arrested Akhil. But Akhil showed some videos to everyone. What is it in the video??
Everything is confusing.And who is the Salman.in the video that will be an important I think. The police arrested them. Shlok astha and everyone get shocked. Astha can't believe it. She asked her father is it true. Because of shame he bend his head. 😡 😡
Ankusk u made us happy because u said kalindi is alive. Arey that is the good news henna. I think shlok will took them with him kalindi astha and Ankush.
Really now I think avdoot is the real villain 😡
Anyway thanks for ur treat Sai. Keep writing like this. U know v r waiting for ur update.
Continue soon dear friend...
Hey Sai because of u I think I am writing story where u know giving u the comments yaar.

omg chechi u comment is so so so exaggerating
thanks a lot chechi u wrote whole update so sweet of u thanks a lot
Hmm yes Kalindi is alive i too cant see Aastha crying all the time so i made her alive and also this whole track is to bring Ashlok closer thats y i wrote in that way now their love story starts r u ready
anyway thanks for commenting so big
really u r great support to me
keep it up

Episode 21

Now this is another shock for them. Both Shlok and Aastha were stupified. Aastha "Kya kaha aapne bhai aai... tum kya kah rahe ho." Ankush "haan didi aap mere saath aayiye." Aastha cant express herself was she hearing the truth. Shlok "dekho tum kaun hain tum kya kah rahe ho tum." Shlok "Aastha kaun hain ye y r u following him haan." Ankush "Oh hello body guard u also can come with me." All three went to a strange place where kalindi was hidden all these days.

Aastha steps bcame small she doesn't know wat she is doing. Ankush "aaj main sab kuch bata deta hoon aap chinta mat kijiye aai bilkul theek hain." And he took her to her room. Kalindi was taking rest. Aastha saw her with wide eyes. Shlok too cant believe it. Aastha just kept her hand on her mouth and slowly squealed "aayi." Ankush came there and woke up Kalindi. Kalindi opened her eyes and saw Aastha. Kalindi got tears and rushed to her and hugged her tightly. Aastha too hugged her tightly and cried a lot. Aastha "aayi aayi aayi." And she cried to the endless.

They were like that for 10min. After the huge emotional breakdown. Aastha "aayi ye sab kya ho raha hain aap jinda hain aur baba ko kaha le jaa raha hain." Shlok "ye sab kya hain aap jinda hain lekin tum y did u hide here haan sab sach batao." Ankush "haan didi aap mat royiye main batati hoon sab." Aastha still hugging Kalindi and was exploring her like an alien. Kalindi "Aastha main theek hoon main theek hoon." Aastha "aayi aap jaanta nahi main kya kar raha tha mujhe kuch samaj main nahi aa raha tha."

Ankush "didi don't cry ab aayi milgayi na aap mat royiye pls dekho i will tell u everything u know our families have misunderstandings right bhaiyya was filled with revenge he wants to take revenge at any cost I asked him to leave it and lead peaceful life but he didn't he always wanted to take revenge so first he wanted to defame Avdoot Baba infront of world so he made Salman (his friend) to meet Avdoot and make friendship with him and to make him believe 100% so Avdoot Baba believed in Salman he thought he is his best friend aap jaante hain Baba ke paas ek bank hain he runs Bank so one day Salman slowly poisoned Avdoot Baba with his words he said Avdoot that if he could get all the money in bank we can start a party political party first Avdoot Baba didn't accept his idea but slowly Salman made him do that he made him to rob all the bank money. Avdoot baba thought he could pretend that he didn't rob all those by showing he had 50 lakh in his account so ppl believe that he too lost money so baba thought ppl will believe him that he lost money so y would he rob the bank at that time he didn't know this was all Akhil bhayya's plan and also Akhil bhayya recorded the whole conversation of Avdoot baba and Salman so after robbing the bank Avdoot Baba was kidnapped by Salman and he brought Baba here after defaming him infront of everyone he want to kill u didi infron of baba and also wanted to kill aayi too."

Shlok "lekin iski aai jinda kaise hain." Ankush "Arey tum chup raho na yaar let me tell u Kalindi Aai already knew that Avdoot Baba is going to rob the bank she heard the conversation between Baba and Salman. So she wanted to get away from there, so while she was escaping she met with an accident. Salman came to know that Kalindi Aai known everything and he feared that she might disclose everything to police he asked me to follow her and kidnap her but I saw her met with accident at that time but I followed her to hospital u were perfectly alright at that time but I got an idea I thought to kill aayi in the eyes of whole world so I kept her here so that Akhil bhayya wont be after her so I had to do all these to keep her safe I just made a body which resembled like Kalindi aayi by some architects and asked doctor for few hours time and asked him to pretend that he is operating in this mean time I made a body which resembled same as Kalindi aayi and face cut was made by technicians and did u remember on that day there was also a glass case given to place her dead body as a gift from hospital since there were 100 deaths in hospital that is all fake jus to prevent u to touch body but u ppl thought that was real I m proud of myself." And he made a huge sigh in relief.

Aastha smiled in tears and said "Thank u bhai thanks a lot." Ankush "but I m concerned about u didi I thought he will find u and kill u it was the main aim to him he want to kill u infront of Avdoot Baba atlast u were in safe hands with ur boy friend." And he smiled. Shlok "boy friend boy friend kaun hain iski dimaag dekh ke koi iski gareeb bhi nahi aayega phir boy friend tho dhoor ki baat hain be vaja chali gayi Mumbai Shlok I m grateful to u I don't want to hurt u bcoz of me kitni pagal hain wo." Aastha smiled in tears.

Aastha "aap bhi to kuch kam nahi hain kitni baar kaha aapne agar mujhe man hain tho chale jao tho main chali gayi aapko kya padi hai main jaha bhi jao kuch bhi karu." Shlok "dekha kaise baat kar rahi hain here I was there to help u and u r blaming me wawah tell me one thing if I was not there with u yesterday wat would u do haan bhaag rahe the un logo se." Aastha "aur haan bhai ye Suresh tumhare liye kaam kiya lekin kyun."

Ankush "arey didi I sent him to bring u here so that I can say to bhai that u were missing so he will search u for more time and in this mean time I would bring out Baba I thought to save Baba but I have a video that each and every plan of Akhil bhayya was recorded. I will show it to u and I will bring Baba out." Shlok "lekin Suresh y did he warn Aastha that she meets her fate." Ankush "kya wat r u talking I jus asked him to bring her alone that's it."

Aastha "nahi bhai Baba jail main hi hona hain uski vaje se aai ko accident hua hain I wont forgive him aur un logo ka kya who were account holders in our bank paise vaapas kaise ayegi." Ankush "haan wo tho main bhool hi gaye sare paise safe hain I kept it safe I always acted b4 bhayya he was wrong I didn't think he can stoop so low he was always wrong but didi main Avdoot Baba ko apni Baba samja aur Kalindi aayi ko apni aayi samja bhayya ki tarah nahi hoon main."

Kalindi felt so much and hugged him and said "thank u thank u so much Ankush tum mere bete ho mere bete ho thank u beta thank u so much tum mere saath pune chalega kyun nahi beta aaj se u will be with us." Within this time Niranjan called him. Shlok lifted the call "Haan Baba Aastha milgayi aur Avdoot uncle bhi I m coming now sab theek hua." Niranjan released a sigh. Shlok "dekhiye aunti lets go to Pune and I will call police and I will hand over all the money to him infront of press aur chalo abhi we will go to money." and all of them went to the place where money is hidden.

Shlok called Inspector Arjun and he also called a media person who is friend of his Dada and shown all the money handed over to police infront of media. It bcame a big news at that instant. The biggest bank robbery case was solved. All of them headed towards Pune. Kalindi "beta kaun ho tum thanks a lot Aastha ki khayal rakhne ki." Shlok nodded. Aastha was still hugging her aayi from side and was smiling to herself. She was the happiest now.

Aastha "aai aap jaante hain I got another aai too she was really bohut achchi hain mera khayal bohut achchi se rakha aap se kuch kam nahi hain bohut achche hain ye log aayi." Shlok was very angry don't know y how can she just leave like that. Ankush "aur tum yaha kaise aayi how did u know our home haan." Shlok "Yesterday wen I was beating Suresh I inserted a transmitter in him I thought to say it to Aastha but I don't want to give any false hopes to her but I thought to bring her father today at any cost I know he will definitely come to u but Aastha ran away from us I don't know y." and he looked out.

Aastha saw him through the front mirror. He is angry she sensed it. Kalindi "thank u beta thanks a lot I owe u my entire life." Shlok "Ji aap mere aayi Baba se boliye they made me to take care of her I don't know u b4 but they said they r friend of Avdoot uncle I don't know if u knew them so wait till we reach there." Niranjan said to Anjali "Aastha is safe and also Avdoot." Anjali cooled down and again prayed to Bappa. Shlok stopped the car at dhaba and said "I think u ppl might be hungry wait I will bring something." And he went in and brought pav bhaaji to all of them but he didn't have one. Aastha ate totally and rested her head on her aayi. Kalindi caressed her face. She saw he didn't eat.

Aastha "Shlok aapko bhoog nahi lagi kya." Shlok hesitatingly "nahi." Aastha felt weird y is he behaving like this he thought. Shlok drove fast. Ankush "arey y r u driving so fast be slow man nothing is in hurry sab theek hogaya." Shlok "nahi mujhe kaam hain aaj bohut kaam hain office main isiliye." Ankush "oh theek hain." Shlok felt so much in this mean time he thought if we go to Pune Aastha would go away from him. This made him weak but y nahi mere jindagi main aaj se Aastha ki chapter close aaj se koi nahi hoga. Don't know y a lone tear started at the end of his eye. He quickly went to Pune and dropped them at their house. Kalindi asked him to come inside but he said he had lot of work and went away.

He didn't give a look at her. She felt so much while he was leaving y didn't he say bye wat was he thinking. Without her knowledge a tear escaped from one of her eyes this time it is not for her family but a different feeling like a part of her life was leaving infront of her eyes. Shlok eyes teared and vision blurred. He just wiped them and went away thinking he closed her chapter forever but does he know wat does fate decide he was going away from her but this time fate didn't permit him to feel sad.

Episode 22