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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey guys... Just some thoughts I penned... for those with faith... and my affat ki goli... Iffu Di!

"Choona Hai Aasmaan"

Raastey ka ilm nahin… par manzil hai ayeeney ki tarah…

Kwabon se haqeeqat ke safar taq… bas wohi hai humney samjha…

Aaney do toofaan… wohe rukavaton ka carvaan…

Tohdh ke har zanjeer… hum bhi karenge ye honsla bayaan…

Iraadey hain mazboot, aur honton pe bas ek furmaan…

Chaahe ho jaaye kuch bhi… choona hai aasmaan…

Translation:

The paths are unknown… but the destination clear…

In the journey between dreams and reality… only that [goal] has been the understanding…

Come the storms… the caravan of obstacles…

By breaking the chains… [I'll] reflect thy courage…

The will is strong, and only a single message on the lips…

Whatever happens… [I will] touch the sky…

Cheers,

dc

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Very nice DC, I totally love it! 😃 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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👏 👏 👏 very nice 😊 😊 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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well neetu di i understood the english version better and di the poem was so motivating...i love it...ajj ton na poetry de mamle vich tussi mere guru...the poem implied so much determination 👏 👏 ...don't kill me for that di but for a couple of seconds i was dearming about the determined look on mirchi's face after reading this poem u know as abhi is totally like that 😳

eagerly waiting for next one



Asever 😳

Amneet 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awesome poem dear...both versions were perfect...it was very cute....plzk write another poem soon 😃 😃 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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now i can say, my mirchy ki dewani has arrived in style, 👏 awesome huni, i used to love ur words in KAA.. so thankooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooooooooooooooooooo, lub u 🤗

hai sadke jawaan
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awesome DC...loved both da versions...mindblowin 😳 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Oh wow! Truly wonderful! Keep it up!! 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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neetu di...i m eagerly waiting for next one



Asever 😳

Amneet 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Neetu,

Tum toh badi achi poetry likhne lagi ho... Aaj kal kya ho raha hai??? mujhe toh bilkul hi bhool gayi

Anyways nice lines... ab lagta hai mujhe tumse kuch sikhna padega😉

Shina

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