A Poem : Twinkle's POV - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago

U R SUCH A FLAWLESS WRITER DEAR !!

AMAZED/BOWLED OVER BY THE POEM ..

❤️ ⭐️ 👍🏼 👏 🤗

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teddyyy

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Posted: 9 years ago

Damn Arpi, this was really good! I'm horrible with poetry so I'm in awe, I loved this! Great job buddy <3

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Natasha

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Posted: 9 years ago

Hey Arpi!😃

This was such an outstanding portrayal of Twinkle's emotions.

Hats off to you!!

I loved how you sequenced the events,first she was broken,realisation dawned on her,then she rose like a Phoenix does.

Kudos to you.

Every line conveyed so much more that just the words.

The last two lines stood out for me.

And also this one,'Mai pyaar mein mar mitne ke liye taiyaar thi par tune toh pyaar hi mita diya...'

Excellent poem Buddy:)

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Simply.confused

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Posted: 9 years ago

Arpi that was brilliant! and well penned down! loved it!

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justchillalways

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Posted: 9 years ago

Nice poem. Very well written.Love it

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docritu99

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Posted: 9 years ago

Superb..
Short summary of tei story so far..
Loved it..

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A for Arpita

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: tikit
You connected the dots well and it relates to mahi too as almost same thing happened with her.

I think Twinkle's feelings was far more extreme than Mahi's 😉 Thanks 😳

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A for Arpita

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Posted: 9 years ago

Thank you so much guys 😃 😳

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