A Poem : Twinkle's POV

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Posted: 9 years ago
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I know you guys were expecting a post on Kunj/Leela/Twinkle today from me but here I am with a POEM on YuvLe Honestly I don't know why & how I ended up writing this may be because of the character TWINKLE...Yes this poem is actually based on Twinkle's POV & her painful journey with Yuvi...I don't know if you guys will like it or not, still I am sharing... (Yes Feel free to call me YuvLe fan, I wouldn't mind because now I am used to with that)

"Woh (Kunj) Kehta Tha Pagalpan Hai,

Main (Twinkle) Kehti Thi Pyaar Hai,

Kuch Ish Kadar Diwani Thi Tere (Yuvraj) Ishq Mein...

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Zamane Se Chupke Tujhse Nata Joda Tha,

Apno Se Jaida Tujhpe Aaibaar Kia Tha,

Aaj Dil Kehta Hai Woh Bewakufi Thi Per Khuda Janta Hai Woh Beintehaan Mohabbat Tha...

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Mujhe Tho Serf Pyaar Karna Aata Tha, Nafrat Karna Tune Sikhaya,

Pyaar Mein Marne Meetne Ko Taiyaar Thi, Per Tune Tho Mere Pyaar Ko Hi Meeta Dia,

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Tere Lagaye Har Ilzaam, Tere Diye Har Jakham Seh Liya,

Kabhi Nehi Pucha Meri Galati Akher Hai Kya?

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Tu Mera Pehla Pyaar Tha Per Main Serf Ek Junoon Tera

Bas! Aab Aur Nehi...

Nehi Hnu Main Koi Khiloona Tera

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Aab Mujhe Mere Har Sawal Ka Jawab Chahiye,

Aab Mujhe Mere Aur Mere Apno Ke Har Ek Aansuoon Ka Heesab Chahiye,

Aab Mujhe Serf Aur Serf Teri Barbaadi Chahiye,

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Tune Mere Pyaar Dekha Hai, Aab Meri Nafrat Dekhne Ki Bari...

Wada Karti Hnu,

Jitni Siddat Se Tujhse Mohabbat Ki Thi Utni Berehmi Se Nafrat Karungi...

Ish Baar Khud Nehi Meetungi, Tujhe Meetaungi."


On a side note, HATS OFF to Sidhant Jasmin & Vaishnavi Ma'am šŸ‘ I LOVED the SLAP on Luthra by Twinkle no doubt but I think "Challenging" Luthra was NOT A Good move by Twinkle, I know where she was coming from, she was right in her place but the whole scene was Not right FOR HER...Provoking Luthra was just NOT Right girl Still it was a BRAVE ACT so Hats off šŸ‘

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Loved it.. Woowww..
Tht. Ws truely a good one..
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Twinkle's POV... Connected yarr..

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: 17.sonal

Loved it.. Woowww..

Tht. Ws truely a good one..
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Twinkle's POV... Connected yarr..

You seriously liked it kya? 😃 Thank you 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Arpimugfan

You seriously liked it kya? 😃 Thank you 😳


Hehe.. Yess.. i too Write Poems.. So not being Judgemental...
Poems r Ur own Feelingss.. And wat u wrote here is The way U got Connected to Twinkle's character...
And Thts So Aptly summarised in this Poem...
Her pain Is Felt Dear..


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Posted: 9 years ago
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This is awesome
Truely portrayed Twinkles plight and feelings so well.
I loved your use of words.
Very touching .
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice poem.
i think we cant deny she did once love him when she was immature but she is out of that phase now knowing his true colors.
the last line was superb she will make luthra pay

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: 17.sonal



Hehe.. Yess.. i too Write Poems.. So not being Judgemental...
Poems r Ur own Feelingss.. And wat u wrote here is The way U got Connected to Twinkle's character...
And Thts So Aptly summarised in this Poem...
Her pain Is Felt Dear..


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Duumps

This is awesome

Truely portrayed Twinkles plight and feelings so well.
I loved your use of words.
Very touching .

Thank you 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Iansomer1

nice poem.
i think we cant deny she did once love him when she was immature but she is out of that phase now knowing his true colors.
the last line was superb she will make luthra pay


Yes she did but now everything is OVER and she is lucky enough to have a MAN like KUNJ in her life 😃 Thanks 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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You connected the dots well and it relates to mahi too as almost same thing happened with her.

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