Ashlok ff: Ye Dil Maange More updated Last Episode 50 - Page 33

Originally posted by: vaishux

Superb update..

Just loved the Aashlok part ..soo sweet😳

The next update seems to be very interesting...😉

Thanks

Originally posted by: Saibhargav

thanks didi

Y r u saying Shlok is mad anyone can get doubt in that situation

Niru Baba doesnt know he is innocent he is jus thinking

k k 😆 😆 actually its not a clue that means it doesnt help him but k k u will see...

k k i will disclose it dont worry

arey yaar how can u excpect Shlok as a chocolate boy haan i write ff's considering our show i dont want to change their characters but have to believe me changed Niru Baba's character jus for ur sake once u said can anyone write Niru Baba as positive so i made him +ve

hmm k k

aww bhai hw spicy of u to make niru baba positive for me..
so wat if u dont like nay char's behaviour u can chng it in ur story..
who wil stop u?
nope niru baba is confident avdoot is not involved.. & i m confident on my niru baba's confidence...
waiting 4 todays update...

Originally posted by: coolhi1988

aww bhai hw spicy of u to make niru baba positive for me..
so wat if u dont like nay char's behaviour u can chng it in ur story..
who wil stop u?
nope niru baba is confident avdoot is not involved.. & i m confident on my niru baba's confidence...
waiting 4 todays update...

Shlok kept on searching the house if he might get any clue. Aastha was sleeping. Shlok went near her and saw her cute face sleeping like a child. He went near her and touched her nose with his finger. He got up but he has work, he has to go but he cant wake her up. Wat to do. He didn't think much, he just sat there looking here and there. Something caught his attention.

He went there and took the photo of his father and who is this. He didn't see him even in the photo album. Who might he be and also it is so old one. Hmm ye poochna hain Aastha se. He studied the photo keenly. He took the photo and took a snap of it and also had photo with him. He thought a lot who is he wat is the relation he had with Avdoot. After sometime Aastha was waking up with stretching two of her hands widely and yawning. Shlok was lost in her.

Photo in his hand flew away. He didn't recongnise it. He just kept on staring at her. Aastha noticed it "kya y r u staring at me like that." He came to earth after that. Shlok "hmm kuch nahi u slept almost 2hrs." Aastha "Kya!!! Y didn't u wake me up haan don't u have work aap kyun itn..." Shlok put his palm on her mouth and said "shshshsh y r u shouting haan do u want to wake up the ppl who r sleeping outside ur house." He was very close to her almost touching his body with her's. Aastha saw him into the eyes. Shlok too saw at her just like that. Shlok slowly removed the hand and slowly kept it on her waist. His touch shivered her. He moved his hand back to her waist and brought her closer.

Aastha "ye aap... kya..." Shlok just blew air at her face. Aastha druggily closed her eyes. Shlok "hmm kyun pareshan ho rahe ho dekho aise hi pasine aa rahe hain." And he removed hand from her waist by rubbing his hand all over the waist and removed her sweat from her head. Aastha's heartbeat raised so as Shlok's. Aastha "lekin aapko bhi yaha sweat hain." And she took sweat from his neck. She just realised wat she had just did and took a step back and said sorry. Shlok smiled and went near her "Sorry kyun haan." Aastha didn't know wat to tell. Aastha "wo .. main..." Shlok left her smiling and said "Achcha Aastha ye kaun hain iss tasveer main."

Aastha saw it and said "ye mere chachu hain kyun." Shlok "lekin ye photo album main nahi hain." Aastha "haan we have few misunderstandings with them and we were not talking with them so from then we didn't have any photo common." Shlok "Kya!! Tum pagal hogayi kya itni badi baat itni haram se bol rahe how at happened tell me wat is the fight between u 2 families."

Aastha "aap kyun itni tension ho raha hain he cant do anything to baba achcha teek hain I will tell u chachu ko pipelines business tha ek tender main chachu ko guarenteer chahiye tha tho chachu Baba ke paas aaye the uss vakt Baba was going to start this bank business it was in early stages but though baba helped him at his level but that was not sufficient so he lost tender and he blamed baba for that and he jus lost the way of business he always used to blame Baba for that I don't know about all that clearly but mom used to say it to me."

Shlok "Aastha tum sach main pagal hogayi y cant he haan he is ur enemy and u didn't think he can do it oh god wat to do with this girl." Aastha "no he cant do it." Shlok "Just tell me one reason y cant he haan." Aastha "bcoz he is dead." Shlok "Kya." Aastha "haan he is dead one day truck hit him to death he was totally drunk ma said and after that his wife too dead of some disease now don't ask me wat disease k she also said he wants that tender to cure his wife chachi."

Shlok released a sigh. Shlok "Does he have any children." Aastha "haan dho hain kyun." Shlok angrily "Aastha Aastha Aastha wat to do with u u were studying in America wat do u know about all these revenges u don't know anything u r really useless kuch nahi hoga tumhari vaje how many times I asked u to tell everything but how could u hide this haan hmm ye ladki ko akal hi nahi hain."

Aastha "are aap mujhe daant rahe hain they were small wen I went to America how could I accuse them haan aap brainless hain main nahi how can they kidnap my father haan." Shlok "isiliye kahta hoon aap ladkiyaan main akal ki naam ki koi cheez hota hi nahi." Aastha was seeing at him angrily. Shlok "sirf ye aur koi hain kya abi batao." Aastha "Koi nahi." And she looked away.

Shlok "theek hain ab chalo." And he took her hand and was going to drag her. Aastha hesitatingly took hand away from him. Shlok realised he just shouted at her. Shlok "achcha theek hain I m sorry." Aastha "aap kyun sorry bol rahe hain ham pagal hain na ham ladkiyaan pagal hain I m sorry for being mad at u do whatever u want." and she was going out. Shlok "Aastha rukho kaha jaa rahe hain."

Aastha "aapko kya padi hain main jaha bhi jao." And she just went and sat in his car. Shlok nodded his head in frustration and thought god save me from her. He went to his car and started driving. Aastha kept on looking out the window. Shlok "How many times I have to say don't look out that too in day light and also wrap ur dupatta around ur head." Aastha just did as he said. While returning one of the constable said he has to go to his home once. Shlok agreed and said all of them to leave for some time.

On the way their car tyre was punctured and Shlok got down. He saw helpless. Immediately he called Suresh. Suresh came their within a minute on his bike. Shlok "Haan Suresh I will get it repaired can u drop Aastha at the guest house." Suresh "Sure Sir." Aastha looked angrily at him. Shlok saw her "arey go y r u looking at me like that." Suresh "mam pls." Aastha hesitatingly sat on his bike. She saw Shlok with tears. Shlok thought ye ladki kya soch rahe hain.

After going for long Suresh took the other way. Aastha sensed it. Aastha "Suresh Sir aap kaha le jaa rahe hain." Suresh "Mam I have small work here pls if u can wait for 5 min then I will drop u pls." Aastha said "theek hain." Within 5 min a van came and took her. Aastha was shouting "aah bachao kaun hain aap log." From the front seat Suresh looked her and said to sedate her. One of the man took his kerchief and put chloroform and kept it at her nose.

Aastha instinctly fell asleep just pretending like that. She doesn't know wat to do so she just pretended so they wont be alert but she had her phone and slowly without knowing to anyone she called Gauri slowly. Gauri took the call and answered "Hello hello Aastha Aastha." Suresh "hmm I didn't think she will be trapped so easily uff it was really tough in that guest house but I didn't think Shlok Sir himself asks me to drop her at guest house how crazy it is." Gauri was horrified.

She was shouting "Aastha Aastha." She immediately took the keys and rushed to guest house. Gauri entered house and shouted "Aastha Aastha.." Anjali came out and said "who r u and y r u shouting like that Aastha is not here she went to her home." Gauri "Kya how come u be so careless mam where is she, she in on line dekho aap she is not talking anything she just called me I think she is in danger." Anjali "kya lekin tum kaun ho kya baat kar rahe ho tum." Gauri "main Aastha ki friend hoon I also came here 2-3 times aap Shlok ko phone kijiye pls." As she said Anjali called Shlok.

He saw it from guest house and lifted and said "Hello."Anjali "Shlok Aastha kaha hain ab taka aye kyun nahi aap log mandir idar hi to hain kaha hain aap log haan." Shlok "aap itni pareshan hone ki jaroorat nahi hain Aastha Suresh ke saath aa raha hain." Anjali "lekin Shlok..." Gauri grabbed the phone and shouted "Shlok Sir Aastha musibath main hain pls aap Suresh ko call kijiye Aastha called me but she was not speaking anything and I heard someone talking about trapping her she is still online I don't know wat to do pls aap kuch kijiye."

Shlok "Ye tum kya baat kar rahe hain main ne Aastha ko Suresh ke saath bheja aur..." And he stopped his words and recalled everything how he asked about her always, and how he took leave on that day y is it for, how he shown interest in her, oh god wat the hell did he do. Gauri "Hello hello Sir." Shlok "tum phone rakh I will bring her." And he called Suresh. Suresh saw his number and saw Aastha and lifted "Hello Sir."

Listening his name Aastha suddenly woke up and shouted "Shlok Shlok hmmm ." and they closed her mouth again. Shlok listened it but he too pretended. Shlok "hmm Suresh ye shor kya hain anyway I asked u to complete yesterdays project do it soon I need it asap." Suresh "Ok Sir." And he cut the call and saw towards Aastha. Suresh "Hmm hogaya tumhari nautanki ab kya karogi tum ab koi nahi aane vale hain tumhare liye chup chap baitho." Aastha looked horrified. Shlok just dailed Varad and asked him to trace the number.

Varad "Haan Shlok I will get u the address tum chinta mat karo." Shlok called Aastha "it was busy so she is still online with Gauri." Varad called and said "nahi Shlok it cant happen we cant trace him he was too quick." Shlok now gave Aastha's number to trace it. Varad again asked someone to trace this number. She is online with Gauri so her number was traced easily. Varad said the address. Shlok immediately went in auto asked him to go there. Anjali again called Shlok.

Shlok asked her "Aastha aagayi." Anjali "nahi Shlok kaha hain Aastha." Shlok "Phone gauri ko de." Gauri took the phone. Shlok "Don't cut the call at all." Gauri said "k pls don't let anything happen to her." Shlok "I wont let anything happen to her." Shlok asked him to drive fast. Aastha "Suresh tum ye sab kyun kar rahe hain wat did I do to u pls leave me y r u doing all these sirf paise keliye." Suresh shouted "Heyy chup chup arey uska muh band kar." And they tied their mouth

Suresh "ab dekho main kya karta hoon." Suresh called Shlok and pretended "Sir Sir someone kidnapped Aastha mam I don't know I m following them on the Kolhapur highway pls come soon pls Sir I m fearing a lot." But Shlok got address as to Mumbai highway. He angrily "theek hain u follow them I m coming in that direction." Suresh cut the call and saw a winning look to Aastha. Shlok said to himself main aa raha hoon Aastha aa raha hoon.

Episode 19

Hai Sai gud evening yaar. Thanks for ur pm and update.
Nice update yaar. 👏 really I enjoyed it but sad for astha also 😭
Shlok and astha in her house 👏 she was sleeping and shlok was
Watching his cute little angel. Arey he went near her and touched her nose
Arey waw shlok wat yaar 👏
His eyes caught something clue. He got a photo.
He was confused who is this arey shlok v r also
Confused yaar.
Arey shlok y r u staring our queen. U lost in her henna nice yaar 😛
Arey astha y r u shouting at shlok 😉 but shlok for this what r u doing. 😉
Shlok y r u drawing astha to u so close 😉
Shlok touch at astha's waist made her shiver 👏
Arey Sai I don't know how to describe but daily u r making us waiting curiously. Hats off it yaar 👏
Arey they both are really falling for each other but they didn't know 👏
V r waiting for the moments when they will realise it yaar.
Arey they are sweating each other nice 👏 and shloks smile is too nice yaar.
Shlok asked about the photo and she told the relationship. But shlok shouted to her 😡
But her answer made him cool and again asked about his family hearing about them he again shouted 😡😡
Shlok asked and told it will be revenge but she didn't thought that. After that the small fight of their was superb.v enjoyed it. But shlok said sorry to her but she only showed angry face and went to his car.
Arey asthu were will u go yaar only to shlok's hand.
But after returning back the car punchered. And shlok sending astha with Suresh 😡
Arey y can't shlok drop her. 😡
Now I think that night Suresh came there.😡. Astha's eyes were full of tears leaving shlok y
Suresh taking another route.😡
Now astha got fear and called gauri. It was nice and gauri did the right thing 😡
Gauri went to Anjali and told about it.
Anjali calling shlok and telling about it.
Now shlok is in like a real policemen. He called varad and told to trace Suresh and asthas no.
He told gauri to no to cut the call . So they got the direction 👏
He asked Suresh about where us he. And he is telling lie. But he didn't know our shlok is the hero.
Shlok is confused about Suresh but went to save astha. 👏
Really Sai v want to see this in the screen. Because it was superb. Really u can be a good writer in the film industry. Really every one will fall in yr writing yaar.
Really u r a talented and an excellent writer. I loved the way ur writing. Hats off u Sai.
Because of ur ff really I can't stop commenting ur updates. Like that I loved ur updates.
Anyway I enjoyed it. Keep writing like this.
Best of luck Sai 👏 continue soon... V r waiting.

Hmmm it was indeed an interesting update.👍🏼.

Oh god it is indeed a suspense epi... Hmmm
Suresh is the right hand of the villian... I think ... But he us not the real culprit... He is only doing this for some one else... I am sure...
You take the story a u turn unexpected twist really...
Now eagerly waiting for the next one...

I think suresh loves astha

Omg Suresh turned out to be a traitor??!!

Originally posted by: Saibhargav

Thanks didi

Hmm but I don't want to write if Shlok is not Shlok or if Aastha is not Aastha anyway u have confidence in Niru Baba right keep it

Hmm have to 2 more long hours

okk..
np..