Ishra os~abhi mujhme kahin baaki thodi si hai zindagi,last pt on pg 11

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Hi guys,here I present an os on current track.as u all know I rarely write something related to the show,but updating this on request of my little buddy anisha960 aka Anisha.
So writing it,don't know if it will be up to mark or not.if u guys like it,then don't forget to like and comment and if not then blame the CVS not me,coz of them I lost connection with the show.
This os will only showcase ,ishraru,no shaggy,no Mani,no pihu,noone else then ishraru.

ABHI MUJHME KAHIN BAAKI THODI SI HAI ZINDAGI

Ishita was sitting in her clinic ,when alia came to her.

Alia- amma ,amma.what u r doing.

Ishita- nothing much,u tell me.why u r here at this hour.

Alia- woh actually ruhaan.

Ishita- enough of ur ruhaan banter.I am not going to listen it anymore.

Alia- ohho amma,listen naa.ruhaan is having toothache,so I brought him to u.please check him once.he is in so much pain.

Ishita- oh,OK.u bring him in.I will check him.

Alia- love u amma.

Ishita wear her mask and gloves.that's when ruhaan entered the room.ishita felt something soothing and turn to see a boy near 14 wearing a blue tee with brown Capri with brown leather jacket along with a cap.she goes to him like someone hypnotised her.

Ishita went very close to ruhaan and caressed his cheek lovingly.ruhaan immediately recognised her loving touch.

Ruhi- ishimaa,she thought.a tear fell off her eyes seeing her ishimaa after ages.actually not seeing but feeling her love filled touch.

Ishita- dard ho raha hai beta(is it paining.).

Ruhi nodded in yes,not able to say anything.she was seeing her ishimaa after ages.she wanted to crush herself in ishita's arms and wanna cry her heart out.but her trance was broken when alia said- amma,treat him naa.

Ruhi look at alia and a wave of jealousy ran down her nerves seeing her calling her ishimaa,amma.

Ishita - yes alia,I am doing that only.be seated ruhaan.

Ruhi composed herself and sit down on the chair.alia went out leaving them alone.sitting on the dental chair ,and having her ishimaa near her brought many good memories back.tears start flowing ,remembering those beautiful moments of her life when everything was just perfect.but now nothing is good forget perfect.

Ishita was feeling an instant pull towards ruhaan like she is feeling immense peace having him near her.a peace which wasn't within her from ages.

Ishita went to ruhaan and wiped his tears.she caressed his face lovingly like trying to figure out something.

Ishita- don't cry bachcha.I am here naa.will make everything right.she said caressing ruhaan's face,not able to take his tears, don't know why.

She started the treatment but couldn't concentrate coz her vision became blurry due to tears.she excused herself and went inside.took out ruhi's pic from her bag and cried- why I am feeling u r near me rooh.r u really near ur ishimaa.saying so she cried bitterly hugging her pic.

On the other side,ruhi was getting equally restless thinking about ishita.she knew well that if she met her again ,she won't be able to stop herself from crying bitterly and hugging her,so she went away.

Ishita came back to the room and found it empty.she went outside to see ruhaan,but he was nowhere.she sat on the chair dejectedly thinking about ruhaan.how good she felt in touching ruhaan.

In the car,ruhi was crying bitterly going to her house that's not her home.she don't any home anymore.

Ruhi entered the house to find her so called mom,nidhi ,staring at her.

Nidhi- where u were.

Ruhi- I went to visit a doctor because I was having pain,she couldn't complete when nidhi said- whatever, I am not interested. Just go and get ready for the live concert about to happen in the evening.saying so nidhi went out of the house.

Ruhi went to her room and cried,cried and cried.she slept crying bitterly without having anything.

It was evening and ruhi was still sleeping.

On the other hand alia come to ishita asking for ruhaan's heart,so that she can give it to her friend. Ishita took it out from her purse and was about to give,when she saw the R written on the heart and then the feeling she get meeting ruhaan.she wanna meet him again.don't know why but she was feeling restless to meet ruhaan.

Ishita- alia, I wanna go to the concert.

Alia- but amma,u were not interested in any concert naa.

Ishita- yes I knew.but I wanna attend it.saying so she went to her room to get ready.

Alia went to ruhaan's house and saw nidhi fussing over something.she went to her and asked-is everything OK ma'am.why u r so angry.

Nidhi glared at her and said- who r u.

Alia- I am ruhaan's new pa.can I help u ma'am .

Nidhi- yes,go and see whether ruhaan is ready or not.

Alia- OK ma'am.saying so she went upstairs.

Alia saw that ruhi is still sleeping.she knocked the door .ruhi wake up and tell her to get in.

Alia- ruhaan sir,get up.nidhi ma'am is waiting for u.

Ruhi- I don't wanna go.I am feeling immense pain.

Alia- pain,where.didn't amma treated u well.

Ruhi became angry listening amma from her mouth for her ishimaa.

Ruhi- just get out.I am coming in sometime.

Alia got shocked listening his words.

Alia- OK sir,I am going.saying so she was about to go when she came back and said- I know u told me to go.but I just wanna say u r magical. U know my amma ,who never attended any concert.never ever heard ur songs,is coming to ur concert today .I must say ,u r magical.

Saying so she was going when ,ruhi told- what ,ur amma is coming .

Alia turned and said- yes,u know she got ur heart that day.I asked her to give me so that I can give it to someone.but she denied,she said that she will attend ur concert.she is so sweet.u meet her naa,how u find her.

A tear fell ruhi's eyes hearing about ishita.

Ruhi- she is very good.in fact she looks best to me.

Alia- yes she is the best,the best mother anyone can have.

Ruhi- yes the best mother anyone can have.u r lucky.

Alia- yes I am lucky.but u know who is the luckiest.

Ruhi- who.

Alia- ruhi.

Ruhi was shocked to hear this.

Ruhi- who ruhi.she asked trying to know why she told this.

Alia- ruhi,amma's real daughter.u know amma loves her so much.it has been seven long years since she died but amma didn't forget her for a second.ruhi is amma's heartbeat.since she died amma forget to live.she is just taking breath not living.amma's lifeline her daughter ruhi is not with her.u know ruhaan ,sometimes I feel envy of ruhi.I am around her from last seven years,call her amma.but she never forget ruhi for a nano second. Wish I was her ruhi.mar kar bhi zinda hai woh amma ke dil mein.

Ruhi- she is not ur real amma.she asked curiosily.

Alia- nope,she is not my amma.actually when her ruhi died, her husband Raman throw her out of his house saying she is a step mother.and many more.amma was shattered beyond words.she tried to commit suicide ,that's when my mama abhimanyu raghav saved her. But in saving her mama lost his legs.since then amma is with us ,taking care of us like returning mama's favour of saving her.she always smiles but I know deep inside she is crying always remembering her ruhi and the harsh words of her husband. I just wish someone can do some kind of magic and could bring back amma's ruhi.she is the only one who can bring amma's smile back.she couldnt get over the harsh words of her husband.she still thinks she is the reason for ruhi's death and she is a bad omen for everyone.she said with moist eyes.

Ruhi was crying hearing her words.she was shocked to know that her papa throw her ishimaa out after they think she was dead and she tried to commit suicide and still she is living with a guilt that she is the reason for her death.

Alia wiped her tears and said- sorry sir,I disturbed u with the sad story of my amma.but u know I pray to god to do some magic to bring back the smile on my amma's face.leave that and get ready ,nidhi ma'am must be waiting.

Ruhi- u go out.I am just coming.

Alia- OK,saying so she went.

Ruhi cried bitterly thinking what her ishimaa had to go through just because of this bloody nidhi.now all she want is to be in her ishimaa's arms.she got ready in a jiffy.and went for the concert.

Ruhaan get out of his car and went to the stage.the auditorium was filled with thousands of fans.ishita was one of them.soon the concert was started.ruhaan started singing the songs, everyone was hooting and applauding for ruhaan.ishita goes near the stage crossing the huge group of people.

She came in the front and saw ruhaan.she can see ruhaan's face very clearly and all she can see was ruhaan's mole.the thing she missed in the morning.

Ishita was looking and observing ruhaan.his features,his expressions ,his activity everything was matching with her ruhi.but how it can possible,he is a boy. She was thinking when she observed his cap,like something is hiding under it.may be her long hairs.

The concert was about to end.ruhaan was over with his songs but fans were still asking him to sing.that's when ruhaan saw ishita.a tear fell off her eyes seeing her ishimaa so near to her.

Ruhaan-and a last song for my dear maa.

Maa meri maa
Pyaari maa mumma

Haathon ki lakeerein badal jayengi
Gham ki yeh zanzeerein pighal jayengi
Ho khuda pe bhi asar
Tu duayon ka hai ghar
Maa meri maa
Pyaari maa mumma

Bigdi kismat bhi sanwar jayegi
Zindagi tarane khushi ke gayegi
Tere hote kiska darr
Tu duayon ka hai ghar
Maa meri maa
Pyaari maa mumma

Ruhi was singing looking at ishita.their eyes were moist.nidhi saw this and boiled in anger.she instructed ruhaan's bodyguard to bring ruhaan back sensing some danger.

His bodyguards came to take ruhaan.that break their eye lock.ishita was looking at her retreating figure.they were taking ruhaan away and ishita don't know how to stop this and confirm she is ruhi or not.the auditorium was in complete silence as the concert was over.

Ishita screamed breakinv the silence- ruhi.

Everyone start looking at ishita while ruhaan turned as a reflex action hearing her name.ishita got confirmed that she is her ruhi only.she ran to her breaking all the lines of security .ruhi too ran to her forgetting everything.

They hugged each other tight and cried.ishita remove her cap and her long hairs got open.everyone was shocked to see that ruhaan is actually a girl.

Ishita cupped her face lovingly and kissed all over her face crying bitterly. Ruhi was also crying bitterly.

Ishita- mera rooh bachcha.rote nahi.see ur ishimaa is here.where have u been all these years .she asked hugging her tight.

Ruhi hugged her tight and just crying in her embrace.ishita was patting her and saying- nahi bachcha,chup ho jaa.mera bachcha.

They were standing like this when ishita saw nidhi coming to them.her blood boil seeing nidhi.

Nidhi try to snatch ruhi from her saying- leave her,she is not ur ruhi but my ruhaan.I made him so famous ,teen sensation. Leave her.

Ruhi hide behind ishita and said- ishimaa ,she is the one responsible for all our miseries. She turtured me much.

Ishita- don't u dare to touch my ruhi.I will kill u.

Nidhi- oh really,let's see who will stop me.

We will,they heard a voice.

They turn and saw Mani and alia was standing with cops.

Cop- miss nidhi chabra,u r under arrest for kidnapping a child and for torturing her for seven long years.

Nidhi- I didn't kidnapped her.I am her mother.ruhi tell them.I am ur mother.she said glaring at ruhi.

She hide more into ishita.

Ishita- don't u dare to scare my daughter.she said wounding her arms around ruhi.

Soon nidhi got arrested and ishita came home taking ruhi along.she was too happy to have her back in her life.she prepared ruhi's favourite, idly sambhar for her and feed her with own hands.

Then she sang a lullaby for her and pat her to sleep.ruhi was very happy having all the love of her mother for her.very soon ruhi slept hugging her tight, feeling safe in her arms.

Ishita kissed her forehead multiple time assuring herself that ruhi is really with her.

Ishita- Raman,today I got our ruhi back.yes she is fine .I know u must be living in sorrow without ruhi all these years.I don't about myself but I will give u this happiness. I will return u ur happiness, ur ruhi.very soon I am coming to u to give u ur ruhi back may be then u can forgive me.a tear fell off her eyes thinking about Raman.while a smile crept on her face seeing her ruhi sleeping near her peacefully. She bend and kissed her forehead again.


That's all for now.next will be ishraru meeting.enjoy and leave ur lovely comments and hit like button.negative comments r also welcomed.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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unres

it's fab
just what I wanted to see n u give that
dil ka rishta what ishru have
n this is portrayed too well
alia just she played d cupid
ishita recognised her ruhi in ruhaan
this is dil ka rishta
ruhi suffered so much
but then also she loved her ishima
n that song she dedicate was awesome
n they reunite
that naagin aarrhgg
ishita wants to give ruhi to roman
but she doesn't know that she will not leave her ishima
just loved it
continue soon
thnx for writing it on my request
Edited by anisha960 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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fab update u know what u r n awesome writer
n i really wish cv's also present the same soon 😃
Edited by lonelyyyy - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Updated the os,have a look.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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i really wish something like dis to happen in YHM...
its hurting to see like ishraru like dis...
i literally cried when RKB scold ishu in hospital dat day...
his words were soo cruel...
in upcoming YHM...ik he is going to misunderstood nd hurt ishu a lot...
let it b..
why i am.talking about dat...
bt its hurting..😔 😭

dis part was really very nice...
hope YHM's mindless CV aise kuch OS/TS pdhe...
waiting for d next update
Edited by Sk-Sharmin - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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It's awesome Raksha I really felt very bad for Ruhi she is going through so much pain and ishita and Ruhi's dil ka rishta is so evident here even before knowing whom ruhan is ishita felt a instant connect and she remembered Ruhi and can feel Ruhi around her Datz was really amazing and Alia played d bridge between Ruhi and ishita here I really hope something like this happens in the show and Nidhi will be punished for her deeds she killed a family and tortured Ruhi for 7 yrs and killed her childhood bechari Ruhi kitna kuch Saha hein vusne atlast she found solace in her ishima's arms and slept peacefully dnt knw after how long she was having dat peaceful sleep I so loved d update I am waiting for d next part to see ishraru meeting continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Beautiful hope n pray that same thing happens in d show dil ko tandak mili after reading this story kudos u r great writer u can very well bcome a creative head for daily soaps for progressive audience 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow...
Awesome os dr...
By their mere touch itself...
They are able to recognize the other...
Edited by fSharm - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Superb update di
ruhi ishita ka dil ka rishta
both recognised each other with mere touch
i wish nidhi ko do char thappad parte
eager 4 ishraru meeting
continue soon
thnxx 4 pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Very emotional update..
U make me cry dear..
I can't tell u how I m feeling.. Beyond imagination..
Speechless..
Cntinu soon

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