Manan ff - second chance (chapter 1 posted on page 2)

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namanian

@namanian

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Posted: 9 years ago

Ok guys am new to this forum so pardon fr mistakes
OK its NT abt manan bt still its about manan
CONFUSED?? DON'T WORRY UR CONFUSIONS WILL BE CLEARED AS THE STORY WILL PROCEDD. SO here is the prologue
PROLOGUE
Parth's p.o.v
i am the most successful actor still i m the most unsucessful man of this world i have everything but still i don't hve anything with me
i am responsible fr my own destruction i myself ruined my life today my nandini was happy with some1 else she was happy with manik. I wish i could get her bck
writer p.o.v
we can see a boy and a girl sleeping in each other's arms the girl woke up wrapping bedsheet around her body and went to her balcony attached to the bedroom then a boy came frm behind wrapping his arms around her bdy
nandini he said and se said manik
man- i knw u are upset i knw tht party thing is affecting u i knw tht he still affect u . I knw tht u still love ... And she slammed her lips with his and after a soul searing kiss said tht never ever say tht i love u only u my heart belongs 2 only u he was my past and u r my present get tht

so confused?? Ok so what was bet parth nd nandini will get 2 knw soon. Guys pls comment plsss its my request 2 u all

CHARACTER SKETCH
Manik Malhotra- handsome hunk and a very famous bussiness tycoon girls go gaga over him. Owner of '' malhotra industries''. Loves nandini a lot
Nandini malhotra- wife of manik malhotra and loves him a lot has a dark past which will b reveled soon
Parth Samthaan- a very famous and successful actor has a dark past will be reveled soon

Edited by namanian - 9 years ago

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sweetparii

@sweetparii

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Posted: 9 years ago

nice start keep it up updt soon dont make w8 so long fr nxt part

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Unnimaya_MaNan

@Unnimaya_MaNan

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Posted: 9 years ago

Loved it yaar

continue soon

eagerly waiting

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shaan...

@shaan...

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Posted: 9 years ago

Amazing prologue...

Sounds interesting...

Wanna know more...

Plz continue soon...

Waiting eagerly...

Take care...

Stay blessed...

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reet0143

@reet0143

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Posted: 9 years ago

WOW WHAT A CONCEPT YAAR...

MANIK AND PARTH EK HI STORY MEIN.

INTERESTING

UPDATE SOON

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namanian

@namanian

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Posted: 9 years ago

Chapter.1

After a lot of pecks and kisses Manik went to his music company A-label. He asked his secretary Vikas about the scheduled meetings

Scene change

Parth woke up and got ready. His PA told him Tht he had a meeting with a music company . He had his breakfast and then went for the meeting .

Scene change

Manik was talking to nandini

M- Yaah baby relax. I had my lunch naa. So I didn't want 2 distrub ur sleep my sleeping beauty. Ok

N- Manik TM itne careless kaise ho skte ho aur mujhe Ptaa hai u didn't had ur lunch so stop lieing OK

M- u knw me so well naa

N- yes woh toh mein janti hii hun nd now stop distracting and lets come back 2 rhe point

In the meantime Manik's PA came

PA- sir the actor is up for the meeting

M- OK baby I'll call u back

Scene change to malhotra mansion

Nan p.o.v

this monster naa sachii he makes me sooo flustered. I went down and told the servent to prepare his all favourite dishes

Aaj mein Manik kii favourite red Saree pehen kar office jaungi

She got ready took the lunch and went for office. She was looking eternal

Scene change

The actor came in Manik cabin and he was shocked to see his face. It was non other than parth.

Scene change

nandini came to office and went 2 Manik's cabin . Shock was an understatment for her to see parth . She kept quite and acted as Nthing happened

M- baby TM yahan??

N- Haan mani mein tumhare lie lunch lekar aayi thii

She said side hugging him and he gave a peck on her forehead

Parth p.o.v

I was standing in Manik's cabin I didn't knw I had a meeting with him we were shockingly looking at each other and at the same time nandini entered the cabin She was looking breathtaking in Tht red Saree and red lipstick I so wanted to kiss her bt I too knew Tht I lost the right Bcz of my one mistake one sin. I controlled myself and then I saw her side hugging Manik and he gave a peck on her forehead . I felt a burning sensation all over my body bt then I heard Manik's voice. He asked me 2 excuse them and moved out of his cabin

A/N

hey guys back with an update

So how's it. Update can be late Bcz I m a tenthier now so u knw the pressure.

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bhavika1983

@bhavika1983

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Posted: 9 years ago

Hye!!! The update is amazing... Is it the same which you post on fb group ?? U know I love it!! I am too a tentheir and I can understand!! Keep it up!!! 👍🏼

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namanian

@namanian

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: bhavika1983
Hye!!! The update is amazing... Is it the same which you post on fb group ?? U know I love it!! I am too a tentheir and I can understand!! Keep it up!!! 👍🏼

Hey I only post on india forum and It's NT the same story maybe ur confusing. Bt can u pls tell me which is the u read on FB nd in which grp its posted. It's totally my idea pls pardon me if its the same