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hi i am sonali . i have edited this prologue because i was not so happy with it , this story is set in 1900 when india was fighting for its independence from british rule . when india , pakistan & bangladesh was united as one . its a story of royal families at that time , basically its a love story between arnav and khushi but with a lot of drama to it . it will be intense . drama , comedy action ,, all set in one.




A HALF BLOOD PRINCE who was born in a royal family still he is no prince . he is a ordinary man living in palace , whose eyes carry innocence instead of cruelty , whose heart carries love instead of hatred , whose hand hold book instead of a sword . astrologer predicted him to be the worthy KING OF AJMER- MEWAR . will he ever be the king ? WILL HIS DESTINY WIN OR IT WILL LOSE FROM THE HANDS FOR SELFISH , DECEIVING . WILL ARNAV SINGH RAIZADA WILL EVER BE ABLE TO HAVE THE CROWN ?


A rebellious princess khushi of lahore, a girl born among hues of cry, broken hearts , a misery . she who was never felt wanted , who lost all before getting all , she who wants nothing more then to prove herself to the others . she who wants the crown at any cost . will she ever be able to show her worth ? will she ever be the queen ?


what happen when these two get tied in holy matrimony , a simple deal for the people to get what they want but life changing decision for them . with different religion , with different backgrounds , with different ambitions will they ever be able to travel on the same path will lose each other forever?

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index



CH -1 half blood prince - SROLL DOWN

CH-2 A REBILOUS PRINCESS -PG 2


CH 3(a) & 3(b) TWIST OF FATE & character sketch - page 3


CH -4 RTIUALS AND WIERD SUGHARAAT PG -5

Ch - 5 truth unveils pg - 7









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https://vimeo.com/137472851 check out this song preety much a hint of Story


this story is set in british india .
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will update the first part soon pls comment and like as it will inspire me to write it more

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Posted: 9 years ago
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hoping not to disappoint you
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SONG FOR THE STORY
(Its the lyrics of a song from EMPIRE ,a popular amrican show , this song inspired me to write this story . This gives a teny bit idea of the story )


You can try and take my crown
But I will never let my kingdom down
When I put it on it's on for real
Damn I wear it so well
I know that they're comin' for my throne
But I'm the one who got there on my own
When I put it on it's on for real
Damn I wear it so well

[Verse 1]
I can still feel your eyes on me like a spotlight
You held me up, up, so high, so tell me was it all lies?
Everything that I've done has got me where I wanna be
So baby why'd you have to leave? Oh, oh

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[Pre-Chorus]
When you got the world in your hands
Seems like everyone wants you to fail
It's like I've got a target on my back
Take a shot at me, take a shot for me

[Chorus]
You can try and take my crown
But I will never let my kingdom down
When I put it on it's on for real
Damn I wear it so well
I know that they're comin' for my throne
But I'm the one who got there on my own
When I put it on it's on for real
Damn I wear it so well

[Verse 2]
I can see all their hands reaching out to touch me
Everyone wants a piece just so they judge me
I thought I had your heart, but you let me down
And left me standing all alone
But I'ma still put on a show

[Pre-Chorus]
When you got the world in your hands
Seems like everyone wants you to fail
It's like I've got a target on my back
Take a shot at me, take a shot for me

[Chorus]
You can try and take my crown
But I will never let my kingdom down
When I put it on it's on for real
Damn I wear it so well
I know that they're comin' for my throne
But I'm the one who got there on my own
When I put it on it's on for real
Damn I wear it so well
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Posted: 9 years ago
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the history


Ajmer-Merwara, also known as Ajmir Province[1] and as Ajmer-Merwara-Kekri, is a former province of British India in the historical Ajmer region. The territory was ceded to the British by Daulat Rao Sindhia by a treaty on June 25, 1818. It was under the Bengal Presidency until 1936 when it became part of the North-Western Provinces comissionat el 1842.[2] Finally on 1 April 1871 it became a separate province as Ajmer-Merwara-Kekri. It became a part of independent India on 15 August 1947 when the British left India.[3]

The province consisted of the districts of Ajmer and Merwar, which were physically separated from the rest of British India forming an enclave amidst the many princely states of Rajputana. Unlike these states, which were ruled by local nobles who acknowledged British suzerainty, Ajmer-Merwara was administered directly by the British.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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So this update was arnav's pov ? ?
Nice update
Thanks for the pm dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thank u for this beautiful piece...
I really love this lyrics..apt for this story...
Ur profund details laid the basic stone for this upcoming story...
Just want to go for next part...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Beautiful concept.
Waiting for your next update
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Its realy too good. Poor Khushi! can't live freely coz she is a princess. Hope she proves herself to everyone..
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MEET THE CHARACTERS

arnav sing raiizada( 28 yr ) - he is the eldest child of king jai singh raizada from his first wife janat khan . he is very polite , humble , strong , smart , loves his family a lot irrespective of his past . he believes in presence of almighty . very close his grandmother . he dont want to be the future king , he despise it because what is the use of power when it destroys your own people. he was first not so happy with the marriage alliance . but after meeting her he feel in love with her.



khushi kumari gupta singh /singh raizada

she is a very practical girl. being a daughter in long list of daughters of king raghubir singh gupta , of lahore.
she has always felt aloneshe like other sister were considered burdens . people used tell her that she is lucky that she is born in a rich family who have atleast kept her alive if born in some poor family she might have been thrown in boiling milk to maker cries and existence vanish in white liquid . [/COLOR] she is very ambition , strong willed girl ,,who is ready to do anything to let her dream to hold the crown on her .




<font size="4">MEET THE RAIZADAS </font>

1. JAI SINGH RAIZADA (58yr) - father of arnav . He is very intelligent , ambitious believes in controlling everyone . He has five kids . one son arnav from previous marriage with JANAT KHAN . Two sons Akash & SHYAM and two daughters ALIYA & RUBY from his second marriage with RADHA RATHORE .

2.RADHA RATHORE (46yr) - she loves her kids a lot can do anything for them for their safety . Qt first she was not happy with treatment given to arnav but lqter she understood rarther made sure arnav never get in way for elder son SHYAM ' way to crown ..

3. SHYAM RAIZADA ( 25 yr) - he was born rather prepared all his life to be the king . He loves his family . He respects his brother arnav a lot .

4. AKASH RAIZADA - (17) he is a fun loving guy . Enjoys partying having fun . He is free as bird .

5.ALIYA & RUBY RAIZADA - ( 14 yr) both are twins . Aliya is more of serious kind she always side with her mother following her orders . Ruby is crazy fun loves doing what she wants .


<font size="4">MEET THE GUPTAS GILL :</font>

1.SHASHI GILL (54 yrs ) - very humble , nice , trusting , loving full on punabi . Loved his first wife garima gupta .imensely but had to marry second time to father a heir .

2 .
RAJPREET GUPTA GILL - ( 40 yr ). Selfish , coniving women . She is mother of two sons Gagnpreet & manpreet .

3 gagnpreet ( 15) - a fun loving guy .

4. Manpreet ( 18 yr) . serious , .

5 .khushi's sisters - payal (18 yr) closest to khushi ..
Riya (20 yr ) , sona ( 22 yr ) , gurmit ( 24 yr ) , bani ( 26 yr )- married suman ( 28 YR ) - married
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So they are wedded ...how ...yaar u left us in suspense...but sure to wait...
Thank u for pm...and hugs...

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