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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: vaishux

Wow...double update

Finally Aashlok are attracted towards..each other..
Thank you.😊


thank u 😊
hmm lets wait and watch how do they bcome one

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: syvalini

hai sai...

i am back, i read all ur updates all r wonderful n story was sooo interesting with so much of suspense sai n u made niranjan in all these updates looking so concerned about aastha, i hope it will continue untill end of the story, loved to see him like that.
here also shlok have past...
i guess aastha is related to niranjan's family
so many questions r there but waiting for ur updates to reveal all those...
good going sai...


hi akka
u r back
thanks for not forgetting this ff hope u follow it continuously from now
hope !! thats all u have jus wait and watch wat is gonna happen actually there is no suspense u should understand wat i m trying to write
anyway if u feel so then sabhash to me
questions tho hain lekin bohut easy answers hain u can guess it easily
thanks for commenting
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: chickyhoney

Hey sai sorry yr can't comment on last few updates really stuck with some personal issues but I read all updates n as usual all r awesome can't express in words...


k no pblm
hmm solve ur issues first they should be ur major priority
and thanks u didnt discontinue it
thanks for compliment
hope u continue commenting like this
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Posted: 9 years ago

Episode 11


As Shlok said he sent one maid to guest house. There Aastha saw another maid ye kya ho raha hain. Aastha "kaun hai aap." Rani "mam sahab main yaha kaam karne aayi hoon." Aastha was confused and said "Kisne bheja hain tumko." Rani "Suresh Sir." Aastha kept her face thoughtful and called Sita. Sita came there and said "Sita kisne bheja hain tumko." Sita "Niranjan Sahab." She thought they both might not know Sita was already here. Aastha "achcha aap ka naam kya hain." She said Rani. Aastha "achcha Rani u say to ur Sir I already have one maid here tum jayiye tumhari jaroorat nahi ab tum use call karke batao yaha Sita hain." Rani "lekin vahini mujhe kaam chahiye aap kuch bhi boliye mujhe yaha kaam karne dijiye pls mujhe paise ki jaroorat hain pls mam." Sita just kept on staring at them. Aastha didn't know wat to do, she thought to call them but y to disturb them so she said "nahi Rani aap jayiye mujhe vaise hi Sita hain pls don't think wrong haan tum jao kai aur kaam dhoondo Sita tum ja." Sita nodded and went in. Aastha got doubt on Rani so she didn't accept her. Rani was leaving slowly. Aastha kept on staring at her. After sometime Rani left and said to Suresh there was already one. Suresh got surprised and he went to guest house. Aastha was surprised to see him. Suresh "mam mujhe pata chala ki yaha koi aur hain." Aastha "haan Sita hain Niranjan Sir ne bheja." Suresh "Oh wo Sita k mam anyway Sir sent this sim to u." Aastha took the sim and asked "achcha apni Sir se bolo ki main unse baat karna hain its important." Suresh "teek hain mam lekin Sir bohut busy hain aap mujhse kahiye na main Sir se bolta hoon." Aastha "nahi nahi don't disturb him k I will talk with him later just tell him that I want to talk with him wen he is free k." Suresh nodded.

Suresh said to Shlok "Sir madam said she wants to talk with u I asked her but she said she wants to talk with u wen u r free." Shlok nodded and felt anger. Y he didn't know. Aastha just slept on bed for sometime. She doesn't know wat to do suddenly she woke up and inserted the sim in her phone. First she saw all the photos and cried and she called gauri. Gauri "hello kaun hain." Aastha cried and said "Gauri." Gauri was shocked "Aastha Aastha tum kaha ho yaar tum kaise ho mujhe to kuch samaj me nahi aa raha hain tum kaha hain ab mujhe batao main aati hoon." Aastha "Gauri mujhe bohut dar lag raha hain pls mujhe bachao." Gauri "Aastha mujhe batao tum hain kaha." Aastha thought a bit and shouted Sita Sita. Sita rushed to her. Aastha asked the address. She said it quickly. Aastha cut the call and waited for her. It took like ages and then she came quickly. Gauri in the hall shouted "Aastha Aastha." Aastha listened her voice and quickly got up and went to her and hugged her tightly and broke down. Gauri also cried a bit. Gauri "Aastha tum yaha kya kar raha hain aur kaha thi ab tak kitna dhoonda tumhare liye ghar gaye the police station gaye the kahi bhi nahi thi tum kaise hai tu batao kya hua tujhe tum theek hain na." Aastha nodded in tears. Gauri "achcha batao tum yaha kya kar raha hain koi tujhe kidnap kiya hain kya ab main aagayi hoon na tujhe kuch nahi honedoongi main." And she again hugged her. Aastha said everything to her.

Gauri "lekin Aastha tum itni aasani se ye log pe viswaas kaise karti hain chalo mere saath main tujhe lene aayi hoon trust me Aastha we will definitely find ur father." Aastha "Gauri mujhe kuch samaj me nahi aa raha hain main kya karu lekin ye log mujhe itni achchi tarah se dekh raha hain." Shlok barged into the house shouting "Aastha tum samajhte kya hain apne aapko haan kya kaha Suresh se that doesn't matter with whom u r speaking u can say anything u want to him." Aastha too didn't back down "mujhe bhi koi shauk nahi hain tumhara muh dekhne ka I just want to show u this I got it in between my dresses." And she gave the letter to him. He read it. Aastha "main sirf isiliye bola ki aapko thoda aasan hoga mere Baba ko dhoondne main isiliye aapko bulaya." Shlok held the letter tightly and yelled at her "Haan hame yahi kaam hain tumhari Baba ko dhoondna wat do u think of urself r we ur servants haan oh god once if u get ur Baba then the first thing I will do is to send u away." Aastha was shocked to the extent and as Gauri. Aastha took a step backward with lot of pain in her heart and with tears "aap aisa kyun kah rahe hain kal hi aapne kaha hain ki aap mera saath honge mere baba ko dhoondke denge aur ab ek hi din mein kya badal diya tumko mujhe yaha zabardasti se laana aapki marji, yaha rahna aapki marji kab kaha jaana aapki marji main kya sochna hain kya karna hain ye bhi aapki marji lekin main kya feel kar raha hoon wat I m going through u ppl never know har ek pal mar rahi hoon main yaha lekin aap kya samjhenge mere dard ko." And she cried a lot and went away. Gauri followed her. Shlok kept on staring at her.

Aastha went into her room and cried a lot. Gauri came to her "Aastha mat ro Aastha mat ro main samajsakti hoon tum kya mahsooskar rahi ho main hoon na tumhare saath chalo ab ham chelte hain yaha se." Aastha "pata nahi baba kis haal main jiyu ya ma..." and she closed her mouth with her hands and shocked. Aastha "ye baat aise kaise aayi mere moo se kuch nahi hoga baba ko kuch nahi hoga na baba ko gauri." Gauri "haan Aastha Baba ko kuch nahi hoga baba bilkul theek hain tum mat ro Aastha main tumhe aisa nahi dekh sakta hon aur wo kaun hain itni badtameez se baat kar raha hain tumse chalo tum ab aur yaha nahi rahenge main hoo na tere saath." Shlok entered her room and said "kahi nahi jaogi tum." Both saw to him. Gauri stood up and said "Heyy Mr who r u aur Aastha se iss tarah baat kar raha hain kya kiya usne kyun chilla rahe hain uspe tum jaante ho uski haalat Aastha bohut sensitive aur wat made u to shout at her like that haan dekho Mr whoever u r thanks for taking care of her until now but I m not going to leave her alone god knows how she was being here lonely that too wen she needed a support aur aap kaha na aapko bohut kaam hain pls aap apni kaam karlijiye hamko hamara kaam chodiye we can do whatever we want pata nahi kya kya sahna pada Aastha tum jaante ho jab ek ladki sab kuch khoya tab usko comforts se jyaada support chahiye, consolation chahiye lekin aap unhe yaha jail ki tarah band ki usko." Shlok "bas bohut kuch boldiya tumne agar Aastha ko yaha nahi rahna hain tho chali jao aap log yaha se main unhi ki safety ki baat kar raha hain lekin tum hain ki dekho we r treating her as our guest we r not making any mistake in that eventhough if Aastha wants to leave then I m k with it." And he went and sat near her and made her look at him. Shlok "Aastha I m sorry I shouldn't have shouted at u I m really sorry u know I m searching ur father and also taking care of u." Gauri "dekhiye aap she needs support this time not comfort being here she feels alone." Shlok "Haan jaanta hoo lekin I m talking about her safety do u even know..." Aastha "stop it both of u I m not going anywhere I will be here." Shlok and gauri became silent.

Gauri "Aastha as ur wish but pls tum aisa mat ro tumhe aisa dekhke mujhe neend nahi aayegi pls Aastha dekhiye Mr agar Aastha ko kuch bhi hojaye.." Shlok "kuch nahi hoga Aastha ko Aastha meri jimmedari hain theek hain aur tum kaun ho itni pyaar dikh raha hain Aastha pe Aastha don't trust her she might betray u." Gauri "kya kaha tumne Aastha chalo abhi aisi insaan se tum nahi khush rah paogi chalo Aastha." Shlok "Oh hello Aastha kai nahi jaogi samajme nahi aata hain kya tumhe." Aastha "Gauri main yahi hi rahoongi lekin tum daily aana hain na." gauri "k meri Aasthu.." Shlok laughed out "Aasthu hahaha." Gauri "Aastha just give me a signal I m going to kill him." Shlok again laughed and said "tum mujhe maarogi apne aapko dekha tum kabhi aur kahte ho Aastha ki raksha karega Aastha sach main tumhari friend kitni funny hain na." Gauri was out of words she was fuming with anger. Aastha "Oh hello don't make her more anger u cant bear her." Gauri suddenly came near him and beat him on the nose. Shlok caught his nose and squealed in pain. Aastha shouted "Gauri ye kya kiya tumne." And she went near him "Mr Shlok kaise hain aap kai jyada tho nahi laga na gauri ye kya kiya tumne." Aastha held his head and was examining his nose. Gauri was surprised now she understood y she said she wants to be there. Aastha left him and saw him. Shlok too saw her and nodded. Aastha laughed out loudly. Shlok felt irritated. Gauri was still fuming. Aastha laughed out loudly. Shlok just kept on staring at her how cute and beautiful wen she is laughing. Shlok too laughed. Gauri was even more surprised ye kya ho raha hain she thought. She thought for some time Aastha forgot everything and was like old Aastha. She too felt Aastha is safe here. Aastha went and brought mirror to him and asked him to check himself. Poor Shlok it was red mark on his nose like a joker.

Episode 12

Edited by Saibhargav - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hai Sai gud evening yaar. Nice update yaar. Thanks for ur update and pm. Arey u gave reply for our comments makes us to write more yaar. Really thanks for this 😛 😛
An awesome update yaar. 😛 👏
Arey for astha there are two maids. But astha u did the right thing. She was confused and asked whom sent and she sent away rani good thing u respected niranjan 👏 👏
When Suresh came she asks to inform to shlok that she wants to see him 😛 .
Astha u r right yaar 😛
But hearing this shlok got anger y haan 😡
Then astha's and gauri's hmeeting was nice. Really a good friends bonding 👏 👏👏

Y is shlok always yelling at astha before knowing the reasons. 😡 for that astha cried. Poor girl.
Gauri also scolding shlok and asking astha come with her . But shlok stopped arey waw sholk don't allow it she is only yours 😛
Again shlok and gauri got a fight 👏 but our astha said the correct she only live with our hero arey astha you are falling in love 😛 .
After the fight gauri u punched shlok 👏 arey waw he deserves one slap from someone else .
But our astha scolded gauri and went near shlok and checked him arey. Love started yaar 😛 😛
Their eye lock and astha's laugh showed the safety of astha in shloks arms. Hai gauri satisfied ⭐️
Anyway thanks for ur beautiful ff yaar. V r waiting for the next update yaar.keep rocking.
Continue soon...
Sai reading ur updates we can feel it in our mind eyes and heart yaar. Keep it up.
Edited by sudhamadhu - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow cute ashlok..i loved gauri...
Loved it Sai
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update...
shlok send a maid for astha...
well she dint need 2 maids so she send a latter one back..
astha calling guari...
loved astha-gauri frndship...
shlok hurt astha once again😡😡
nice guari puched him on nose...
liked it very much.. love u gauri...
continue soon..
thnks 4 d pm..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Really nice update...
Especially the last part...
Ashlok are so cute
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Posted: 9 years ago
hai sai...
nice update...
very funny that gauri n shlok cute fight..
i laughed a lot...😊😊😊
good going...
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Posted: 9 years ago
😃😃
Yesterday I could not reply, lovely updates,very interesting,keep posting like this superb ff.

Ashlok - nice memory,cute scenes,lovely

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