Ashlok ff: Ye Dil Maange More updated Last Episode 50 - Page 20

Hai Sai gud evening yaar. Sai its almost6.06 pm yaar. Were is ur update. V r waiting yaar. Please post soon. 😡 😡

Originally posted by: sudhamadhu

Hai Sai gud evening yaar. Nice update yaar. Thanks for ur update and pm. Arey u gave reply for our comments makes us to write more yaar. Really thanks for this 😛 😛
An awesome update yaar. 😛 👏
Arey for astha there are two maids. But astha u did the right thing. She was confused and asked whom sent and she sent away rani good thing u respected niranjan 👏 👏
When Suresh came she asks to inform to shlok that she wants to see him 😛 .
Astha u r right yaar 😛
But hearing this shlok got anger y haan 😡
Then astha's and gauri's hmeeting was nice. Really a good friends bonding 👏 👏👏

Y is shlok always yelling at astha before knowing the reasons. 😡 for that astha cried. Poor girl.
Gauri also scolding shlok and asking astha come with her . But shlok stopped arey waw sholk don't allow it she is only yours 😛
Again shlok and gauri got a fight 👏 but our astha said the correct she only live with our hero arey astha you are falling in love 😛 .
After the fight gauri u punched shlok 👏 arey waw he deserves one slap from someone else .
But our astha scolded gauri and went near shlok and checked him arey. Love started yaar 😛 😛
Their eye lock and astha's laugh showed the safety of astha in shloks arms. Hai gauri satisfied ⭐️
Anyway thanks for ur beautiful ff yaar. V r waiting for the next update yaar.keep rocking.
Continue soon...
Sai reading ur updates we can feel it in our mind eyes and heart yaar. Keep it up.

oh my chechi thanks a lot
u r writing whole update again really i m glad to read ur comment
i always wait for ur comment
thanks a lot
keep it up
hmm so u r thinking love started haaan
but poor ppl do they know it
we will see how they r gona bcome one

Originally posted by: dazzles

Wow cute ashlok..i loved gauri...
Loved it Sai

thank u anu
i know wat u like most

Originally posted by: coolhi1988

awesome update...
shlok send a maid for astha...
well she dint need 2 maids so she send a latter one back..
astha calling guari...
loved astha-gauri frndship...
shlok hurt astha once again😡😡
nice guari puched him on nose...
liked it very much.. love u gauri...
continue soon..
thnks 4 d pm..

thanks a lot didi
didnt u get doubt on Rani i wonder if not
Hmm can u guess y Shlok shouted on Aastha
hmm i know if u get chance u might kill Shlok 😆
keep it up

Originally posted by: vaishux

Really nice update...

Especially the last part...

Ashlok are so cute

thank u vaishux
haww i m glad u liked it thats wat i want i want to write comedy too but i always fail in it thanks u liked it

Originally posted by: syvalini

hai sai...

nice update...

very funny that gauri n shlok cute fight..

i laughed a lot...😊😊😊

good going...

thank u
oh my did u really lolled then sabhash to me
really now i think i can write comedy too
thank u for ur support

Originally posted by: Catherine06

😃😃

Yesterday I could not reply, lovely updates,very interesting,keep posting like this superb ff.

Ashlok - nice memory,cute scenes,lovely

k no pblm u liked story right thats more than enough
hmm yes Aastha cant do anything heyy can u guess who r the ppl around her house
thanks for commenting

Episode 12

After sometime Aastha stopped laughing. Gauri too said "theek hain Aastha I will go now I m glad that u r safe here dekho Mr if I come to know anything like this u r trying to hurt her then u don't know wat I will do." Shlok was shocked oh god is she Jhansi laxmi bhai and said "k madam Aastha is my responsibility." Don't know wat made her to do that. She giggled. Both saw at her. Both asked at a time "Kya." Aastha "Kuch nahi." And Gauri bid bye to her. Shlok left a huge sigh and said "Aastha ye kaun hain yaar Jhansi laxmi bhai ki tarah ouch.." Aastha again giggled. He saw her and came near her "as I said keep smiling always u look cute." And he again touched her nose. Aastha saw him angrily. Shlok sensed it. Shlok "Kya hua aisa kyun dekh raha hain." Aastha just said him loudly "akdu kahin ka." Shlok caught her hands tightly and asked in anger "Kya kya kaha tumne." Aastha "akdu kahin ka." And she left his holds. Shlok got angry "Don't ever dare to say me like that." Aastha "akdu akdu akdu..kya karogi pehle khud galti karte hain aur manate hain y did u shout at me like that haan I was asking u to come to just show that letter then y did u scold me haan wat made u so angry tell me now u r going nowhere without answering me batao mujhe aap kyun daanta mujhe kya mujhse kuch galti hogayi kya aaj tak mujhse koi bhi aisa nahi baat kiya phir kyun tum aisa kiya" and she cried again. Shlok "Aastha pls I said na I m sorry pls don't cry achcha teek hain main akdu hi hain akdu hi hain k ooh god how sensitive r u." Aastha "mujhe wo sab chodo I want now answer me y did u scold me." Shlok was going back. Aastha "arey aap jaa raha hain achcha teek hain main aapki Aai se milna hain ya phir aapki Baba se." Shlok "kyun kuch sawal hain." Shlok too thought and said "hmm Aastha I want to ask u one thing did u ever see us b4 now I mean how come u know my father." Aastha "haan yehi baat hain Shlok mujhe aap log pata hi nahi tha aur aap log itni help kar rahe hain I want to know everything that's y I wanted to talk with ur mother." Shlok "no don't ask them directly first let me try to know then we will see k bye then I need to go." Aastha face dimmed but managed smile and bid bye. She came in and thought about letter kya hua hoga yaar I cant find anything.

Shlok too thought about that. He thought to say it to Baba he might know about that. So he went to his home and said about that letter. Niranjan started to think "Hmm teek hain Shlok main ek detective se baat kiya aaj hi I will look into that anyway hows is she." Shlok observed him keenly and thought to ask about them but remained silent if they could say then definitely would have said by now no he has to know he could help her. Shlok went away. Niranjan started to think. Niranjan also said everything to her. Niranjan "Anjali mein soch raha hain Avdoot..." Anjali "Haan main jaanti hoon Sahab but we cant confirm it pata nahi ye sab kab khatam hojayega aur Sahab Shlok iss tarah itni raat tak vaha rahna mujhe achcha nahi lagta agar log ko pata chal jaata tho." Niranjan "hmm Anjali tum fikar mat kijiye main Shlok ko busy rakhti hoon aur shall we go to her again she might feel lonely vaha Sita bhi hain but we have to console her we need to be support to her." Anjali nodded. Shlok listened everything still he doesn't understand once he thought whatever Baba said is true I m only thinking much he was just trying to help her. With that thought he left them. Shlok lied on bed and was thinking wat Gauri said "dekhiye aap she needs support this time not comfort being here she feels alone." Wat to do then he thought and then he again thought oh my god lady hitler kya maara and he touched his nose. Uff ye ladkiyaan I cant understand them kuch bhi karte hain haan and he squealed in pain by touching his nose. Shlok also recalled Aastha was behaving like a child she was crying like a child. Hmm ladki mere jaan lelegi and then he thought about that letter again. Uski maa aisa likha that means is there something to do with Avdoot hmm wo kaha hain ab hmm ye sab uski vaje se hua mera man kahta hain just bcoz of him a small little cute girl is suffering cant he take care of her.

Aastha was thinking ye sab kya ho raha hain mere jindagi main everything was fine then y suddenly everything happening to me from where this family has come to save me. She tilted her head and saw teddy. She took her teddy and hugged it tightly and smiled, she didn't know y she did that but she slept peacefully. Shlok woke up he cant sleep so he took his keys and rushed to her home. He slowly parked car and went into her room and searched something and found the album of their family. He took that and went away. While returning he saw a couple outside the bar. He saw keenly to them and stopped the car and went into bar and found them. He also sat there and observing each and every moment. He too ordered wine and drank to the full nonstop. After sometime there was blur in his eyes. He paid the bill and drove away with half minded. Instead of going to home he went to guest house. Shlok always goes to guest house after drinking so in that effect he went to guest house. Aastha who was sleeping peacefully suddenly woke up at the car sound. She doesn't know wat is happening. She switched on the light and went to window and saw some car. Who the hell is now. Who came here at this time. It was 11:30 and within no time she heard door knockes. She feared to the full. She quickly went to door and put everything behind the door whatever came to her hand she put everything behind it so that they cant come in. The door was knocking again. Every knock was like a heartbeat for her. Shlok got frustrated and shouted out loudly "darwaja kholo." Aastha then recognized his voice ye Shlok ki awaj hain and she saw his car through the window and then she calmed down and took everything and opened the door. Shlok suddenly barged in and was going to fall. Aastha caught him and was shocked. Shlok in drunken state. Slowly she took him to the other room beside her's. She slowly made him sit on the bed. But he lied like a dead body. Aastha was thinking ye sab kya hain sab pikar aaye hain. She slowly took the shoes away from his toes fcourse socks too. She slowly came up to him and said "Shlok Mr Shlok." But no response. She was going to leave but he held her hand and said "Don't leave me." Aastha was stunned. She didn't leave the hand but sat beside him by taking the stool and sat on that. He was still murmuring Don't leave me. Aastha didn't know wat to say. She just kept her hand on his hand. Shlok kept other hand on her's. Aastha felt weird.

After sometime without leaving hand Aastha came down and slept on the floor with her head on the bed. She didn't know wat happened but she knows he was disturbed very badly. She doesn't want to disturb him so she slept like that. In morning Sita came to the room and saw them and smiled a bit. She might have made some sound Aastha woke up and sighed "shshsh." Sita smiled. Slowly she got up and released her hand from him and saw his face once. Aastha came out of the room and saw Sita. Sita "mam ye yaha kya kar raha hain kai tumhare saath kuch galat..." Aastha "haan Sita kuch bhi bolte ho I don't know y he came he was drunk totally I made him sleep here but he caught my hand and was saying Don't leave me matlab kya hain ye pehle kisi se pyaar huya hain kya aur haan iski shaadi toot gaya hain na uski bare main baat kar raha tha shayad." Sita "haan mam better u be away of that don't take that topic b4 him any time but I m happy he found u." Aastha "matlab." Sita "matlab ab aap aagayi na I know u will take care of him." And she winked. Aastha "haan Sita wat r u talking aisa kuch nahi hain he is just friend ab tum jao jaakr soup banao iskeliye." Sita smiled at her innocence and went away. Aastha again came to him and saw his condition and was going to wake him up. She put her hand on his hand and slowly tried to whisper in his ears. But she left him and thought let him sleep. But suddenly his phone rang. She took it quickly and answered. Varad "hello Shlok kaha ho tum phone kyun nahi ut raha hain ab kaha ho tum tum theek tho ho." Aastha slowly hello. Varad "hello kaun hain who r u wat r u doing with my brother's phone." Aastha now understood and said "Oh aap Shlok ki Dada hain na matlab Kavya ki Baba." Varad "haan aap kaun hain." Aastha "hello main Aastha bol rahi hoon Shlok yehi hain uski guest house main raat bohut piker aaye hain I made him sleep here he is still sleeping don't worry he is fine I thought to not disturb him that's y I lifted the call." Varad "oo Aastha thanks thanks a lot for taking care of him he didn't disturb u na." Aastha "nahi nahi after some time he will return I guess." Varad said thanks and cut the call. Aastha put the phone aside and Shlok was trying to wake up at the same time. Aastha doesn't know wat to do. He might feel stress by seeing her so she left him.

Episode 13

Hai Sai gud evening. Nice update yaar. Thanks for your pm
Sai y did u feel like that. Really the story is super don't make any changes yaar.
Gauri satisfied 😛 and gone. Ashloks conversation was super.
Arey shlok is again touches her nose arey waw 😉
They spoked about the letter. Shlok had a doubt about his
Parents 👏 .
Arey what is the relation between niranjan and avdoot.
Something is wrong I guess 😉
Shlok took her album and checked everything. Ya u r right shlok
I think avdoot had made mistakes.
Shlok drank and went to her.
Shlok had a past. 😡
Shlok is only our drama queen's.
Varad talking astha by shloks phone.
Arey sita u likedd our asthu. Thanks
Anyway nice update keep it up. V r waiting

Hi, thanks for the beautiful updates. So astha and shlok are falling in love