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kashish_777

@kashish_777

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Posted: 9 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: Hamlet53
pratiti .. hammie had to come find your fantastic story.. what I liked most about your vidha story is that it refers to a history ,to the bond.. of friendship that exists between them.. the story flows and dhani marries but soon enough she suffers widowhood.. you bring out intensely his grief.. and his plea.. that now that she is free they should flee together which she readily declines..their combined suffering you simply yet intensely narrate.. the end.. leaves me saddened..she has the chance to start life a new.. but the world she lives in stops her.. there is hope though .. when they meet in another life she will say yes ? to him..
fantastic narration pratiti.. continue writing more .. thanks for the pm.. much love for great writer!
hammie

Wow yaar hammie, you're comments are always so long and heart warming...that's the thing i like most about you...

I love reading such appreciations...😳

I'm very very happy that you came and found out my story...and liked it soo much!!!😳

And when i have such inspiring friends by me, how can i not write more??😉

I'll be back soon with yet another story for you guys...

Till then

Love,

Pratiti

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custodian75

@custodian75

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Posted: 9 years ago

#22

Very emotional story.

Every time viplav asks dhani to run away with him I keep wishing that atleast this time she will listen to him. But no. And every time she said no she was left with deep unhappiness. Every time she was bound by the society.