Arhi FF: Betrayals (Chapter 2) 24 Nov

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Barunz4ever

@Barunz4ever

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Posted: 9 years ago

#121

interesting start...do pm me ur updates .

waiting eagerly ..pls continue soon..

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Nicky saluja

@Nickysweet

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Posted: 9 years ago

#122

Don't be doubtful about new readers..u wrote really very well
I love this story of yours
Feeling so heartfelt for khushi..she suffered so much and arnav one mu destroyed everything
I don't think she will be able to forgive him
Plz update soon

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meagean22

@meagean22

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Posted: 9 years ago

#123

hey thanks thanks thanks a ton for buddying and the pm... i am still new to india-forums.
i was searching for your story everywhere but now that i have bookmarked this, i will be a regular reader,
coming to the story-
SHE HAS ALMOST BEEN RAPED😲????????? before when it was the pictures i seriously thought she might be saving someone, you know, given that her character in the series would do anything for her loved ones...
i really love the way you showed what arnav feels... from a moment when he thinks of death to - NOPE- to forgiveness... i really love arnav no matter what and i know that he did a sin and he will regret it but try not to harm him too much please☺️

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HugeArshiFan

@HugeArshiFan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#124

Nice update! Arnav's feelings described nicely towards the end.

I honestly think Anjali and Nani has no business hiding the truth from Arnav (but we wouldn't have this story then would we? 😊)

Waiting to see how Arnav redeems himself

Thanks for the PM