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Posted: 9 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: ashimamm91

wow sai! new story. its awsm! so stormy even frm d bggining. so many ?s, like what did avdhoot do? n where s he? kalindi? hw niranjan n avdhoot r cnnctd? whom astha s afraid of? n what happnd in shlok's life? i knw ll get all d answers in d course of d story. stll feeling very eager. thanks 4 d pm sai. n waiting 4 d nxt.


wow wow ashima u r back
i m glad to know it anyway thanks for commenting
u really r a true friend yaar
k ur questions will not go unanswered by me u also know it
hmm i like ur excitation
keep it up

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Posted: 9 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: ashimamm91

nice update sai. seems like niranjan really cares 4 astha n avdhoot. so suresh found astha 4 shlok. feels like suresh genuinely cares 4 astha. so avdhoot s kidnappd by sm1. bt y? n what happnd 2 kalindi? even astha didnt mention kalindi. nw d brave heart found a way out.nw bt where she think she is going? poor suresh. r they playing hide n seek. hope shlok ll find her soon b4 she fall in sm danger. thanks 4 d pm sai. waitng 4 d nxt.


thank u ashima
hmm Niranjan cares for Aastha u will get to know more and also total suspense and hmm thoda ups and downs be hota hain lekin achcha hota i liked it i dont know about u but i can say i will not disappoint u k
thanks for commenting
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Episode 3


Shlok again was driving fast here Aastha is also running to nowhere wat to do where to go. She went to the same policestation again. She again begged them to search her father this time they pitied her and said softly "Dekho madam we r trying our best we will definitely find him now pls trust us and leave from here as soon as he gets we will inform u just give me ur no." Aastha thought for a while and gave her no. Policeman patted her shoulder and said not to worry. She suddenly remembered them and said to him that she was kidnapped just b4 she escaped. Inspector asked her who kidnapped them but she didn't say their name but said she knew the place from where she was escaping. Inspector went with her. She also said they kidnapped her father. Inspecter bcame furious on her and said "Kya u know who kidnapped ur father and u didn't say it." Aastha "Sorry Sir I forgot it he said me to keep quiet otherwise he will torture my Baba I knew Sir he is the one who kidnapped Baba pls find him." They went to his guest house. Aastha shown him the room in which she was held as hostage and also shown the washroom how she escaped through that.

Inspector "Are u sure they kidnapped u." Aastha "Haan Sir y r u not believing me then y would I escape through this they locked me in this room and he also said from outside that if I wont listen him he will torture my father I m sure he is the one kidnapped father too." She was literally shouting at him. Inspector "But this room doesn't seem like that keeping like hostage." She too saw the room and also reminded his words they r not going to harm her then y did they kidnap her and held in such a luxurious room. Aastha "Wo sab mujhe nahi pata I said wat I have gone through." Inspector was going to search the home. Shlok arrived to the guest house. Aastha "Sir he is the one kidnapped my father Sir arrest him ask him." Aastha "Kaun hain aap pls leave my father wat did he do pls I m begging u pls leave him don't hurt him pls." and she cried out loudly infront of him. Shlok himself cant see her like this. Inspector "Dekho aap ka naam kya hain." Shlok "Shlok... Shlok Agnihotri." Inspector "Dekho u have to come with me she said u kidnapped her and also her father too we need to interrogate u pls co-operate with us." Shlok saw confused and said calmly "Dekho inspector saab I didn't kidnap her I was protecting her she doesn't know who we r nor I doesn't know who she is, my father asked her to keep safe and doesn't let her go anywhere bcoz she is not safe outside u know that too and we didn't kidnap her father I just lied to her so that she will eat properly just now doctor checked her she is not well he said she should eat nicely so I blackmailed her if she wont eat and if she wont listen my words then I will torture her father so she would listen my words I don't have any intention to hurt her believe me Inspector and this is my guest house u can come here any time she will be safe here trust me we will protect her." And he saw angrily towards her. Aastha was shocked would be an understatement.

Aastha kept her mouth wide open and just stared him while he is staring at her angrily. Inspector "Madam is he saying truth didn't he harras u did u get ill." Aastha came out of the world and asked him wat he had just asked. Inspector asked again did they ever harras u. She nodded a no. Shlok "So inspector we will take care of her pls find her father asap and don't disclose this to anyone as u know how confidential is this pls we need ur co-operation Sir." Inspector "Teek hain Mr Shlok Agnihotri if she has no problem then she can stay here but who is ur father y do u ppl need to keep her safe I need all the details wat is the relation between u and her." Shlok blew out air from his mouth and nodded with disbelief. Aastha was listening curiously. Aastha "Kaun hain aap I think I already saw u who r u bolo na who is ur father." Shlok "Will u go to ur room." Aastha "nahi I want to know who r u y do u want to protect me who the hell m I to u pls say it to me." Shlok "U don't know us nor u don't know Niranjan Agnihotri." Shlok "Inspector my father is Niranjan Agnihotri, he knows Avdoot ji he is doing all this just of humanity on this girl Aastha I don't even know her if she doesn't want to be with us she can leave wenever she wants to but believe me Sir I will take care of her I m responsible of her from now if u want u can come here and check her daily."

Inspector "Dekho madam do u want to be here or u want to go to ur home or do u have any relatives." Aastha was crying without options. Shlok just kept on staring her. Inspector "If u don't want to be here then say it to me I think u don't have any other safe place now so it is up to u but if u have any problem then just call me k madam and don't worry we will try to find out wat happened to ur father." And he patted her head and went away. Shlok saw at her angrily and grabbed her hand tightly and yelled at her "How dare u how dare u to do like that don't u have common sense at all y cant u be calm here if u try to do anything like this again.." and he gripped her tightly. Aastha squealed in pain. He touched her where she got hit by glass. Shlok observed her and saw her hand. There was a cut. He again saw angrily towards her and went in and brought first aid and applied to her. He also put bandage to her. She cried in pain physically and mentally. Shlok dragged her to her room and shouted at her "U girls cant do anything smoothly just be calm and be here I m not going to save u next time do whatever u want to." And he locked her again. Wat the hell y do he need to lock is she his hostage. Shlok strode away angrily. Aastha stood there with lot of questions in her mind. Who the hell is he to talk with me like that how dare he is this some kind of help but where is dad if he is not with them where might he be. Shlok was driving mad haan this girl will be the death of him wat is the need to go police station and he recalled her pain and her cries damn ladies he thought.

Avdoot was shouting "Hello koi hain pls bachao hame koi hain." Suddenly a man entered into the dark room in which Avdoot was hid. Avdoot was shocked "Tum tum yaha kya kar raha hain chodo mujhe wat is all these don't u know wat u r doing.." He suddenly came to him and tied his mouth with his kerchief. Avdoot struggled to loosen it but in vain. He also gave a photo of Aastha to one of his boys to search her infront of Avdoot. Avdoot was shocked he tried to talk with her. Avdoot really struggled a lot but failed again. He was worried for Aastha now.

Shlok went to his home and said everything to his Baba how she escaped and how she got hurt and also all the police thing. Niranjan got infuriated at him "Shlok didn't I say to treat her nicely then y did she go to police again this is last time Shlok I m warning never ever try to be harsh with her she is a small girl and u r going mad at her wat is the need to do all these don't keep her as hostage treat her as guest did u understand is this the way we brought u up how can u behave such with a lady that too wen she is grief u have to console her not to taunt her be nice to her or else I have to take this job." Anjali "Sahab shall I go and talk to her once." Niranjan "nahi nahi let her be alone for some time she needs to come out of that grief." Shlok "Baba I m sorry I will take care of her but Baba we need to find her father she is crying every time we need to find him asap otherwise she will go mad. Baba and also I want to talk with u about todays meeting." Niranjan "Teek hain Shlok pehle khana khalo we will talk then." Varad too felt pity for that girl.

Aastha was feeling thirsty she wants to have water but there is nothing in her room. She banged the door but no response. Is this some kind of help it is more like kidnapping than helping kaun hain ye log pehle kabhi dekha hi nahi aur kyun madad karna chahte hain ye log haan. She again banged the door. Since no one answered she just sat on the bed and recalled her moments with her family kya haal hogaya hamara kyun ho raha hain ye sab and she cried endless and she slept in that cries disorientedly. After seemed like ages she heard someone knocking the door. Shlok is knocking door since half an hour she didn't open, he was worried and broke the door and saw her sleeping. He went near her and tapped her cheek and called "Aastha Aastha.." She didn't open her eyes. He immediately went to kitchen and brought water and sprinkled on her face. Slowly she opened her eyes and was saying "Water water.." Shlok understood and gave bottle to her. She drank whole water by catching her throat. She left a huge sigh after drinking water. Shlok "I m sorry."

Episode 4


Edited by Saibhargav - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#64
awesome update...
astha runs off to police...
shlok shocked & angered...
finally astha decides to say here.
Niru baba upset with shlok's anger..
continue soon..
thnks 4 d pm..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#65
Wow nice episode...lot of mysteries...
Good work Sai...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#66
Awesome update...
Despite Shlok hate girls..
He is still feeling sorry for Aastha
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Posted: 9 years ago
#67
wow,very interesting ff,nice going,like it very much.
This ff is not resembling ebp and it is new story so very interesting to know what is next.

Pl update every day.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#68
Hai Sai. Thanks for the pm. Nice update yaar. V loved it.
Astha escaped but she reached back to shlok. Shlok was angry at her and locked her alone there 😡 😡
Avdoot was kidnapped by someone. Really I hate that man 😡
Niranjan scold shlok. Shlok was now confused.
Astha was alone and she slept poor girl 😭 .
Atlast I didn't understand who said sorry. Astha or shlok.
Anyway nice update. Shlok please take care ur asthu.
Sai keep rocking. Continue soon...
Edited by sudhamadhu - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#69
This story is very different, I can't predict what happens next
Oh god I have to wait till tomorrow
Thank you sai
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Posted: 9 years ago
#70
Lovely update... Suspense is building

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