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Hey Everyone! I am back with another OS. I would like this to be clear that this isn't anywhere near the current track. Just a random OS. Well consider yourself warned, this is really long but quick. I could write a 3S 😛 but am too lazy. So made it much short. Hope you like it. Drop in your comments, appreciative or criticising. I'll happily accept all.
It's not proof-read so please ignore the mistakes if any.

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TwiNj OS - Rang De


"Twinke! How much time do you need to get ready?" Kunj said with a frown.

"Kunj can't you be a little patient? Give me another 5 minutes." Twinkle pouted.

"If you waste even a minute, everyone will witness Twinkle Dahan instead of Holika Dahan." Kunj was very annoyed and that was clearly visible.

At this Twinkle got up after giving a few finishing touches to her make up and slowly walked towards Kunj. She wrapped her arms around his neck and said "Mr. Irritating Kunj Sarna. How much ever do you try to threaten me, I know very well that you won't let anyone harm me, let alone doing that yourself."
Kunj slid his hands around her waist, pulled her towards him and softly said "You don't know me. I can do anything" and winked making Twinkle blush.
"Let's go, Siyappa Queen" Kunj said as he left her and freed himself from her grip not before placing a small peck on her cheeks.

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"Lo Twinkle aur Kunj bhi aa gaye." Bebe informed everyone as soon as she saw the couple coming out of the house. "Twinkle puttar, yeh teri pehli Holi hai na Kunj aur humare saath. Isliye iss baar Holika Dahan tu karegi." Bebe smiled at Twinkle.
"Ji Bebe" Twinkle said clearly excited.

Everyone gathered around the pyre. Twinkle and Kunj set it on fire as everyone let the fire absorb evil and prayed for the well-being of everyone.
After all the rituals, Kunj was searching for Twinkle when a grinning Twinkle came in front of him with a plate of colours in hand.

"Kunj," she dipped her hand in the colour and moved it towards Kunj's face "Happy Holi!" she smiled. To her disappointment, Kunj held her hand mid-way and said "I'll apply the colour first."
"No!" Twinkle argued. "I'll do that first."
"Twinkle, I said I'll apply the colour first" Kunj tried snatching the plate from her.
"Kunj, you love me na? Let me apply first." Twinkle pulled the plate once again.
"You are talking as if you don't" He raised his eyebrows in questions and tigthened his grip on the plate.

"Kunj puttar, Twinkle puttar, ki gal hai?" Leela asked as she saw her daughter and son-in-law fighting.

"Maa, Kunj is not letting me apply colour on him." Twinkle frowned.
"Maa, I want to apply the colur first." Kunj counter-replied.

"Twinkle puttar, let him apply the colour first. He is your husband." Leela smiled. Twinkle's jaw dropped as Kunj smirked.
"Arey Leelaji, Twinkle Kunj di woti hai. Rang to woh pehle lagayegi" Bebe came to Twinkle's aid. Kunj pouted while Twinkle grinned.

"Dekha Kunj? Bebe is also telling that you let me apply the colour first." Twinkle once again pulled the colour plate towards her.
"But Maa is telling that I should do that first." Kunj applied extra force this time. Twinkle grabbed the plate even more tightly and Kunj did the same.

They started pulling the plate until the plate flew in the air due to all the force and the colour landed on both Twinkle and Kunj. Both of them were shocked. All the family's attention turned towards them. Kunj blinked a few times before he started laughing. The others joined him except Twinkle. She frowned and went to her room. Bebe ushered Kunj behind her.

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"Twinkle yeh kya baat hui?" Kunj said as he entered the room. He saw Twinkle standing in the balcony, her hands folded against her chest. He walked towards her and back-hugged her. Twinkle fidgeted a little before finally relaxing.

"I wanted to apply the colur first. But see what you did." Twinkle was disappointed and Kunj knew it. He turned her in his arms so that their noses were inches apart. "Even I wanted to do the same. But see your Baabaji fulfilled both our wishes. He actually hinted that we are always going to face everything together, bad or good." Twinkle smiled at this and hugged him.
They were standing like this for some time when Twinkle suddenly said "You know what, tomorrow I'll apply the colour first."

"No Twinkle, I'll do that for sure." Kunj smirked at his wife.
"Oh please Mr. Kunj Sarna I am Miss Amritsar." Twinkle exclaimed.
"How does it even matter Twinkle? You are my wife and I am going to apply the colour first." Kunj challenged her.

"Ok fine. Let's see who gets to apply the colour first on whom." Twinkle smirked. At this Kunj rolled his eyes. He broke the hug and slightly pinched her nose "I am surely going to win this challenge."

Twinkle pushed him away and went inside the room. "Kunj you won't even know and I would have won the challenge." She laid on the bed pulled the duvet over herself. Kunj came and laid down beside her. Both drifted to sleep wondering how to win this challenge.

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As he woke up to the ringing of the alarm, Kunj's hands automatically shifted to where Twinkle usually slept but to his surprise the bed was empty. He lazily opened his eyes but found Twinkle nowhere. He then remembered about their challenge and smiled sheepishly. How did they manage to challenge each other on each and every thing?

He looked around the whole room for any sight of Twinkle. When she was nowhere to be found he bolted the bedroom door shut and went to freshen up.

As Kunj came out of the bathroom, his phone rang. It was Twinkle.
"Isn't she in the house?" Kunj thought as he picked up the phone.
"Hello Kunj puttar," Bebe's voice came through the other side.
"Bebe?" Kunj was slightly confused why Bebe had called from Twinkle's phone.
"Haan Kunj, main tujhe yahan ka address bhej rahi hun. Jaldi aa ja."
"Par Beb-" Kunj couldn't complete his sentence as Bebe cut the call.
"Pata nahi kya kar rahe hai!" Kunj slightly shook his head and headed for the living room.

To his surprise the whole house was empty. "No one's at home? Maybe everyone went. How could they leave me behind, though?" Kunj muttered to himself. He took the car keys, shut the door and drove to their farmhouse.

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"Arey, Kunj puttar, there you are! You are so late." Leela greeted him as he entered.
"Sorry maa." Kunj smiled and bent down to touch her feet. Usually Twinkle accompanied him while touching everyone's feet but today he has to do it alone. Everyone's faces were coloured. Kunj was thinking how to tell everyone about his challenge. He could not loose this one.

"Kunj puttar, go and finish all your challenges with Twinkle. Since we have arrived Twinkle hasn't let anyone touch her face." Bebe sighed.
"First time in her life, has Twinkle not played Holi for this long." Leela added. "Dono sirfire hai" she smiled while Kunj grinned.
"Maa, where is Twinkle?" Kunj asked as he picked up some colour in his hands from the plate of colours.
"She was there behind with Babli a few minutes ago." Leela replied with uncertainty.
"I'll find her." Kunj smirked.

As Kunj came to the backyard of the farmhouse he saw Cherry talking to a girl with her back faced to Kunj. 'It is Twinkle's dress' Kunj thought. 'Though it doesn't seem it's her. Something's amiss. Well only one way to find out, ATTACK!' Kunj walked slowly towards them unnoticed by both. Kunj swiftly applied all the colour on her face.

As she turned around, Kunj was shocked. "Chinky you?"
"Kunj, you and your good for nothing challenge!" Cherry excalimed.
"Kunj?" Chinky's mouth was wide open.
"I am so sorry Chinky. See please don't apply-"
That's when he heard her laughter. He turned around to find a grinning Twinkle standing a few feet away. "Twinkle!" Kunj scolded.
"Kunj I knew very well that you are a coward. That's why I gave Chinky the same dress as mine." Twinkle smirked clearly delighted with her plan.
"I am a coward?" Kunj asked slowly moving towards her.
She stuck out her tongue "Do whatever you want to Kunj Sarna. I am the winner of this challenge"
Kunj arched his eyebrows "Oh really?" and started chasing her. Twinkle's giggles filled the air as she ran with Kunj on her heels. Kunj was happy seeing her laugh.
After a good run around the farmhouse, Kunj caught Twinkle's wrist and pulled her towards him. The force made Twinkle loose her balance and both of them landed against the side wall. Kunj's hands made way around her waist, locking one of her hands and the other automatically resting on his chest.

Twinkle's heart stopped beating for a few seconds. They were very close. The proximity made her thoughts hazy. Kunj's state was no different. Composing herself, Twinkle said "K-Kunj, chhodo mujhe."
"Itni mushkil se haath aayi ho, kaise chhod du?" Kunj replied with a smirk. Twinkle turned crimson at this. "Kunj chhodo, koi dekh lega" Twinkle said looking around to see if someone was nearby. Kunj slightly caught her chin and turned her face towards his. He brought up his other hand which had some colour on it and grinned "Challenge to main hi jeetunga." "Kunj..." Twinkle pouted "Please mujhe pehle colour lagane do"
"Kya?" Kunj acted as if shocked. "Itna shock kyu ho rahe ho?" Twinkle was confused. "The Twinkle Tan- I mean The Twinkle Kunj Sarna ne 'Please' bola?"
She used her free hand to hit him on his chest "Jao mujhe tumse baat nahi karni" saying so she turned away her face. "Accha thik hai, par meri ek shart hai." Kunj bit back a smile. "Kaisi shart?" Twinkle was sure he had some mischief planned. He pouted his lips and winked "Mujhe kiss chahiye." Twinkle's face was worth watching. She had her mouth open in an 'O' and her cheeks heavily crimson.
Twinkle loosened Kunj's grip on her other hand slightly. She thought for a second before saying "Accha thik hai, aankhen band karo." Kunj's happiness knew no bounds. His eyes lit up. This was definitely his best Holi till date. He readily closed his eyes. Twinkle giggled a little seeing his expressions. Hearing her giggle he opened his eyes but she said "Agar aankhen kholi..." "Accha thik hai thik hai, jaldi karo." Kunj still had his eyes closed, his lips forming a small pout. The clock ticked but Twinkle never came close. She finally had her other hand freed. Kunj grew impatient. He was about to open his eyes to check on her when, to his utmost horror, Twinke applied colour on his face. His hands immediately left their place from her waist and made way to his own face. Twinkle ran away laughing and Kunj smiled at what had happened. He slightly blushed. Even though he didn't show it, these moments when they were too close, always left him baffled.
He grinned and went back to where the events were taking place. He knew that he had to take revenge from Twinkle.

---

Twinkle was still laughing when she reached the family followed by Kunj. "Twinkle puttar, kya hua? Wadi khush lag rahi hai." "Bebe main challenge jeet gayi" Twinkle proudly replied. Bebe smiled at this and ruffled her hair. Kunj murmured "Cheating karke jeeti hai" and sniffed. "Kaisi cheating?" Leela asked. "Cheating? Maine cheating thodi na ki Kunj!" Twinkle glared at him. "Accha woh cheating nahi thi? Who joh tu waha mujhe ki-" Kunj stopped. He saw Twinkle regaining her composure and said "Kuch nahi." Leela was confused but at Bebe's one glance she understood that the two love birds had a romantic time together. Containing herself she said, "Twinkle, andar jaakar zara dekh na khaana taiyaar hua ya nahi." "Jee maa" Twinkle replied and rushed inside the farmhouse. "Bebe main abhi aaya." Kunj smiled and left. "Haan haan, hume pata hai kahan jaa raha hai." and the whole family laughed heartily.

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Twinkle had checked on the food being still prepared and was about to go to inform Leela when Kunj came out of nowhere and stood in front of her. He was clearly angry. "Kunj hato yahan se. Mujhe Maa ke paas jaana hai." "Kabhi itne pyaar se mujhse mil leti." Kunj smirked. "Kunj maine kaha na-" before Twinkle could complete her statement, Kunj pinned her to a nearby wall. "Twinkle, meri shart puri nahi hui hai ab tak."
Twinkle's heart skipped a beat. "Kunj yeh tum-" "Main kuch nahi sunne wala. Mujhe meri kiss chahiye." "Kunj baccho jaise zidd mat karo." "Main baccha hi toh hu." Twinkle frowned at this. Before she could say something, Kunj put his finger on her lips. Twinkle's breathing got heavy. Kunj leaned in closer, very slowly. Twinkle closed her eyes in anticipation of what was going to happen. It was Kunj's turn to finally take revenge. He rubbed his cheek against hers. His stubble tickled her makking her giggle. This was it. The same colour being applied to both of them was a intimately binding act. Kunj lowered his head, leaning closer to her. Their lips were about to meet when they heard someone cough. They turned their heads at the same time, causing them to clash. "Ouch!" Both of them yelled at the same time. They saw Bebe and Leela standing there looking everywhere except at the couple. Twinkle pushed Kunj away and ran outside before they could tease her. Both the ladies started laughing seeing Kunj so embarrassed.
"Accha Bebe main zara kaam dekh kar aati hun." Leela smiled and went away. As she left Bebe turned towards Kunj biting her lip to stop herself from laughing. Her flustered Kunj was a delightful sight. Bebe ruffled his hair and was about to leave when Kunj stopped her. "Bebe mujhe ek narazgi hai."
"Kya puttar?" Bebe asked, definitely concerned.
"Aap aur Maa humesha mere aur meri biwi ke romance ke beech main aa jate ho" Kunj whined shocking Bebe. "Accha ji?" Bebe caught him by his ear and said "Puttar, main kabhi teri khushiyon ke beech nahi aaungi. Par ab kya kare, jab tu aur teri woti, apna romance kamre main nahi kar sakte toh problem toh hogi na." Kunj side-hugged Bebe as they laughed.

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I hope it was good. I tried my best. I added Bebe and Leela ignoring the rest of the family because like everyone I love these two characters a lot. Do comment what you think.

Regards,
Krishi

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Res...
Unres..Just loved it. Rang de tu mohe colorfull...awesome one.

I love bebe n leela...

Keep writing
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Very nice and it is beautifully written plzz do write more 😊 👏
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wow...beautifully written..awesome os...loved it..😊
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I loved it
Absolutely loved it want this to happen on shows uth fun filled romantic holi
And I agree bebe leela r best.baki sab ko goli maar k Acha kia lol

This was so much fun to read.
Thr romance was perfect with fun thrown in.
It was so twinj like to challenge the other even on holi
I love u for writing this yaar.
Di write more
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Awesome OS 😳
Beautifully written
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That was fantabulous
loved it its superb
keep writing more
romance was soo capturing !!!
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Originally posted by: hailly

Awesome os. Loved it.



Thanks 😊
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Originally posted by: Dinky28

Very nice and it is beautifully written plzz do write more 😊 👏


Thank you! I'll try for sure...
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Originally posted by: zaara610

wow...beautifully written..awesome os...loved it..😊



Thanks for appreciating..😊

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