LISTEN TO MY HEART~ (SWASAN OS)

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@MysticMoon

Trailblazer

Posted: 9 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: Sakkiyah
Awesome os
After the bomb blast sanskar started to avoid swara. He misunderstood her feelings towards laksh.
She was worried about his health.
And sanskar tried all the possible ways to avoid swara. But swara cares him.
But the truth was he was also heart broken. For him, swara loves laksh and he was a hurdle between them. For swara's happiness he was ready sacrifice his love.
In these days swara realized that she loves sanskar and for her he was her life.
The letter of swara was heart touching. From the letter her pain was clearly visible
And sanskar found swara in the temple and there mutual confession was also nice
You beautifully portrayed the emotions of swara and sanskar.
I really loved the os

I am happy to see that you enjoyed the OS so much

Thank you dear for liking it 😳

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Sree

@Sree8410

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#52

Pubi I loved it. Agar wo bewakoof CV bhi aisehi kuch karte to kitna mazza aata dekhne...

I love you 🤗

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Aheli

@iam_aheli_98

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#53

So beautiful and awesome OS. Totally loved it.😊

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Aayat23

@Aayat23

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#54

Hi,
Beautifully amazingly written.
Awesome OS.
Loved it.
Loved sanskar's outburst infront of laksh , the way he said " mujhe koi shauk nhi hai teri swara ko rulane ka ",
You are amazing with dialogues dear.
Then swara's letter to sanskar , wow , very well written , I loved each and every word of it.
And then sanskar's realisation after reading it ,
"badi ma aap pray karna ke wo mujhe wahi mile , kyuki agar wo mujhe nahi mili to mai bhi kabhi vapas nahi aaunga "
Swara's conversation with devi maa was amazing.
And finally swasan together.
Awesome
Keep writing.

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