VIdha :Safed is the symbol of our love ,DET,Episode 1 Pg 4 - Page 4

kya baat hai jenny.. 👏 👏 Wow I loved it...loved Vidha first meeting..there are many things which we wanted to see in the show like viplav fighting with the whole world coz he had fallen for a widow and he had to do so much hardwork to convince dhani that he loves her becoz dhani ,being a widow and having a painful past, cant readily get entangled into a relationship..but our pathetic IKRS CVs rushed many thngs... 😕 i am sure u will write much better than them in ur upcoming parts 😃 thanks dear for gving us a nice story..will be waiting for the 3rd scene 😳 😊

viplav considering himself as a king ... what attitude but it's true 👏... he rules our hearts

interesting start jenny...looking forward to nxt updates..😊

Hey! Jenny!🤗 thanks fr the PM!

Loved d introduction man...I m hooked...please continue writing...👏👏👏 appreciate ur effort...luv to see ikrs from a different angle...gifted u r...keep it up...😊 god bless u...

hi jenny, this is a great start viplavhas a badboy reputation but there is a good streak in him too .. liked his interaction with the children and hisfriends.. thanks for the pm and plz do continue will read it surely.
love hammie