MaNan SS : Jee Lae Zara/ IMP ANNOUNCEMENT pg 5

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Jee Lae Zara...

Hola everyone... ready to bear another adventure of mine...!!!

Ill not keep u waiting for a long time

So here goes the prologue

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Two people ( a girl & a boy ) keep banging a door

Girl : nandu for heavens sake open the door

No response

Boy : nandu baby please open the door

No response

Girl : nandini this is the last time im telling u open the door god dammit...!!

No response

Girl turned towards boy and said " harshad I think u should enter the room from balcony because nandu nae toh room lock kar diya hai..." harshad rushed towards the garden of house to enter the room from the balcony which was open from the garden area. And within minutes he entered the room from the balcony and opened the door for the girl to come into the room. They both searched every corner of the room for nandini but didn't find her. Harshad turned to the girl and said

"soha.. u go and check in the washroom... may be I shouldn't enter there ... we don't know what she is doing in there..."

Soha nodded and left to check the washroom. The moment she opened the washroom door her blood dried in her veins and she screamed her lungs out. Listening soha screaming harshad rushed to see what had happened and he froze at his place. Nandini was lying on the floor in a pool of blood. It took them a moment to digest the horrifying sight in front of them and then harshad spoke

"c..ca...call the..the..am..ambulance.." and looked at soha who was standing with her mouth covered with her palms. He shook her and she looked at him with a total blank and baffled expression. He shouted to bring her out of the shock

"soha... go run call the ambulance...ill carry her down.."

Soha took a few seconds to digest all the words spoken words by harshad and ran out of the room in a blink of eye and dialled the ambulance's number with her shivering hands. Meanwhile harshad picked up nandini in his arms and carried her down. Soha informed him that the ambulance will take little time to come

"no.. we cant waste even a single minute... already she has lost a lot of blood... do one thing.. bring my car's keys... we will take her in my car." Soha ran to their room to bring the car keys and harshad carried nandini to their car and made her lie in the back seat and soha sat by taking nandini's head in her lap. Soha was continuously patting nandini's cheeks and was repeating the same line

"nandu.. please uth ja... nandu... please..."

In about 20 minutes they reached the hospital. Thanks to the time..it was 2 in the night... and again harshad picked nandini in his arms and soha started shouting for doctors... the staff who recognised harshad soha and nandini came running for their help and nandini was taken into the ICU and the treatment started.

Dr.Sinha came out of the ICU and informed soha and harshad

"harshad rush to the nearest blood bank.. nandini has lost lots of blood..."

Dr.Sinha informed harshad and he quickly got and again the treatment started...

At 5 AM

Doctor came out of the OT and said looking at the pale faces of harshad and soha

"harshad im sorry to say but..."

The doctor finished his words and soha fainted.

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So kaisa laga... this story will not be like all other stories which I write... so do let me know... what might have happened ??? any gussess...??

So keep guessing...

Keep smiling...

Take care...

Tonnes and loads of love...

Yours.. Neeraja..😊

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Love_Queen thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Different
Love to read more
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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interesting beginning ... Seems like a totally different concept...
All the best for this new journey...
😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amazingg prologue
Thnx for pm me
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Something diff..
Nandu attemoted suicide..
Waiting to knowp...
Thnx for pm...
Update soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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interesting & different concept
cont soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amazing prologue...
Totally different concept...
But y did nandini commit suicide???
Thnx 4 d pm...
Plz continue soon...
Waiting eagerly...
Take care...
Stay blessed...
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rocking prologue vrryyy vryyy vryyy diffrnt...
scary ...
wud like to knw more ...
do cntinue soonnn di..
ty fr pm...
tc
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Nyc
Very different
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice and intresting
Looking forward to it
Ty for pm!!

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