||Twinj OS:The Moment|| 15.03.16 - Page 3

Originally posted by: hailly

Amazing Os .
Their emotions were beautifully described loved it.

Originally posted by: Duumps

Awesome emotional ride.

Loved the OS.

Best of luck with exams.

Originally posted by: 17.sonal

A.very Beautiful Os...

Perfect i must say...

Twinkle and Kunj cannt Live without each other..

I loved the Emotional RollerCoaster... Simply too.good..

All the Best For ur exms dear...🤗

Natasha omg, this piece is so amazing! I have to say that this is one my most favorite works on the forum! You had me hooked the entire time, it really was an emotional rollercoaster. I'm actually falling short of words to express how much I loved this piece because I love angsty, intense pieces and this was so much more than just a fight. Kash something like this was happening in the show, the dialogues you wrote were SO beautiful. I wish Twinkle would say something like this, even just half! The line "if I'm not arguing anymore, there's nothing worth fighting for" actually like stunned me, that's how intense it was! Then Twinkle in that empty white space remembering everything, the constant "let go" was scaring me because I was like omg she can't die but then Kunj brought her back and his lines about Monu and the hospital and the confession, ahhh This was beautifully written, thank you for sharing it with us! :D

Originally posted by: teddyyy

Natasha omg, this piece is so amazing! I have to say that this is one my most favorite works on the forum! You had me hooked the entire time, it really was an emotional rollercoaster. I'm actually falling short of words to express how much I loved this piece because I love angsty, intense pieces and this was so much more than just a fight. Kash something like this was happening in the show, the dialogues you wrote were SO beautiful. I wish Twinkle would say something like this, even just half! The line "if I'm not arguing anymore, there's nothing worth fighting for" actually like stunned me, that's how intense it was! Then Twinkle in that empty white space remembering everything, the constant "let go" was scaring me because I was like omg she can't die but then Kunj brought her back and his lines about Monu and the hospital and the confession, ahhh This was beautifully written, thank you for sharing it with us! :D

Originally posted by: --Natasha--

Thank you Jerry🤗

I'll come back soon that is if I leave in the first place, difficult to stay away from the forum😆😉

same feeling lol. i cant even stay away for a day.

Originally posted by: Sherni_Jerry

same feeling lol. i cant even stay away for a day.