Ardi OS on arjun's POV: My kalyani, My panchali (No continuation) - Page 2

Originally posted by: Radhikerani

This was really wonderful, and soo intense! Maybe Vad Vyasji would write exactly the same thing if he came back to elaborate on ArDi! Loved it to the core!

Originally posted by: PanchaliKaArjun

Res

Unres .

This OS is jus amazing . The way you pen down the words it was like just hearing Arjun speak .

Oh how I wish Ved G had kept some of these words on epic bharat .

If I had all the rights then I would have placed you in Star Bharat writing team and added this scene .

The OS was long and I m very very happy . Sam khush Hua. Loved the way you showed how much it mattered to Arjun otherwise Hamara aryapurta Arjun Toh Kabhi Kuch kehte nahi hai na . Pata nahi unn k Mann meh itni Jaga kaha se hai to keep all these words and emotions .

I loved the way you added the children also . Their children . Now their children 'Sukriti and Pragiti never have the space given . That's what I don like . I love Abhimanyu but I don like how he is given more priority even in the ArDi stories . Aree baba he loved his elder mother but ArDi also had children na but they never have the space . Thank you so much for showing the love in Arjun 's heart for his children .

This OS is jus brilliantly written , you know what you should write more and tera OS padh k I deleted my OS .

I love that Arjun is jealous of Bheem . Haha finally !

And then the part where he says , "..I thought, maybe I conquered sleep only to conquer her love"

OMG true thing . ☺️

Loved the OS . Each word was special , each line had a meaning . Each paragraph told a story . Story of Arjun . Words from his heart .

I can not say continue soon cause there is no continuation to this right ?

Lol but please write another OS or maybe a ff with ArDi family , gosh I m gone mad . Lol .

Love you

Sam

Originally posted by: RisingPhoenix

Beautiful os aanvidi!

Panchali thorough Arjun's eyes<3

I loved the way you summed up their entire journey in this os

Do write more :)

Originally posted by: aanvi98

Thank u so much manu for replying!!! 😳

dI!!!😲 Don't call me di!!! i'm only 16!!😆 Yeh adhikar pure forum mein sirf proteeti ke paas hai...😆

Well, i'll surely write more!!😃

if u want, u can try an FF on ArDi written by me!!!😳

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4480768">Saga of two burned hearts: An ArDi SS