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Posted: 9 years ago
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yeh story hai Armaan Ridhima ki..
unke pyar ki unke dosti ki..

hey guys mein new writer hu
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 1

Mumbai
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Somewhere in the city..
In a mansion,Everything is silent until a lady of nearly 40s climbing the stairs fastly..a man follows her buttoning his shirt..

Man:bacchiyon ko uta lo Padma..
Padma:wohi tho karne jaa rahi hu Shahank

Padma:offo..abhi bhi ye dono so rahe hai..bola tha ki kal jaldi utna...vo log aayenge..huh..kuch kehke bhi kya faida...dono papa pe gayye hena..pagal..
Smiling,the she opens the door
She smiles widely seeing her two angels sleeping peacefully..as if there was no tomorrow..

Padma : Ridhima Ridhima.. utho beta 8 baj gye h tumhe airport nhi jana h..
Ridhima : mumma plss.. thoda der aur sone dona.. app nikki ko uthao phele
..
Nikki : nhi mom me raat ko bhaut lete soyi thi
mujhe bhi sona h..
Padma : kyu tum dono itna late kyu soyi thi..
( padma reason jaante hue bhi dono se puchti hai)
Ridhima : ohfo mumma kyuki humse wait nhi ho raha tha subah hone ka isliye... Kyuki woh log... oh sit subah ho gayi...
Nikki: kya kitna time ho raha h.. Mom
Padma : are tum dono ko yaad aa gaya.. 8 baj rahe h.. aur me tum dono ko kab se uthane ki kossis kar rhi hu...
Ridhima : oh no aunty uncle toh 9 baje tak aa jayege..
Nikki : ha yr chal ridzi jaldi se ready ho ja.. tu bhaut late karti h.. Ready hone m. Aur aaj toh kitna time lagayegi pata nhi.. Kyuki aaj toh woh.. (before niiki complete her sentence ridhima started throwing pillow on nikki)
Ridhima : accha mein late karti hu.. Ruk tujhe baatati hu nikki ki bacchi..
Padma: lo start ho gaya inka.. Chalo.. Ab late nhi ho raha tum dono ko
Ridhima :mumma phele isne start kiya tha..
Nikki : no mumma phele ridz ne start kiya tha.
Padma : Riddhima tum nikki se badi ho.. tum usko samjhana chaiye.. aur tum khud uske sath masti karti ho..
Ridhima : mumma me niks se bas 3 minutes ki badi hu.. ap toh aise bol rahe ho jaise mein 5 year badi hu..
Nikki :toh kya hua badi toh hai na.. kyu mom
Ridhima : mujhe pata h mumma nikki ka side logi..
Nikki : aur tere side toh papa rehte hai na.. waise mumma papa kaha h..
Padma : tumhare papa bse ready hoke bethe h..
Nikki : kya woh ready bhi ho gaye..
Shashank entered in room
Shashank : yess baccha log.. I am ready.. Aaj toh mujhe jaldi ready honaa hi chahiye.. Kyuki
Aaj mera dost aane wala h..
Ridhima/ Nikki :Gud morning dad..
Shashank : gud morning.. beta
Padma : aap toh ready ho gaye but aapki betiyan abhi tak ready nhi hui h.. Itne late tak koi sota h.
Ridhima : mom aap firse chalu ho gayi..
Shashank:padma tum kyu meri bacchiyon ko subah subah daant rhi ho..
Padma : Accha mein daanti hu toh aapko bura lagta hai aur jab aap daantate toh...
Shashank : aree mere pass toh reason hote h..
Aur faltu mein chalo ho jaati ho.
Nikki : mumma papa ab bas kijiye hume late ho jayega..
Padma : aur late tumhare papa karane wale hai..
Mein jaa rhi hu nhi toh baad mein mujhe bhi
Ridhima : ok.. mom mein bhi bas 5 minute m aati hu ready hoke
Shashank : ha beta jaldi karo.. tumhari mom bas baaton me lag jaati..
Ridhima : papa apko firse mom ki daant khani h..
Shashank : na baba hume nhi khana

Airport

A handsome dashing man of late 40s comes out with a gorgeous lady of late 30s

Man : ohh... finally mein india aagaya...
Lady: hmm.. accha lag raha h na yaha aake Karan.. mein toh aapko kab se bol rhi thi India aane k liye par aap mano tab na..
Karan : aane ka maan toh mera bhi hota tha lekin yeh Business m itne busy ho gaya tha isliye nhi aa paya Nandhini.. but aab soch raha hu.. aab yaha permanent shift ho jaye...

Nandani: sach.. are waha india aate hi aapka mood change hone laga...yeh hai humare india ki baat sab ko sahi kar deta h..
Karan : accha toh tumhara matlab phele mein sahi nhi tha..
Nandani : aacha ji aap ab yaha pe jaghra start nhi kijiye
Waise hume shashank bhaishaab lene aa rahe hai na.. apki unse baat hui thi na..
Karan : ha shashank se baat ho gayi thi.. woh aa raha hai hume lene aur bhabhi ji aur bacche bhi aa rahe hai..
Nandani : chalo accha hai.. ab mujhe unse milne k liye jayada der wait nhi karna padega..
Karan : hmm.. kitne saal ho gaye hai shashank aur padma bhabhiji se mile hue aur bacche toh kitne bade ho gaye hoge...
Nandani : ha jaise humare bacche kitni jaldi bade ho gaye
Karan : hmm.. bade ho toh gaye.. lekin jlhai kaha aapke laadle.. yaha aa bhi rahe h ya nhi aapke sahabzade
Nandani : karan aap mere bete k baare kuch bhi nhi boliye samjhe ne aap
Karan : ha baba samjh gaya.. ek tumhara eta hai aur ek mere bhaisabh ka dono mein kitne alag h... ek ko kaam se fursat nhi hoti aur dusre ko kaam me maan nhi lagta..
Nandani : ha toh woh seekh jayega na kaam karna.. waise bhi uski umar hi kya h...
Karan : ha dekhte kab tumhara beta bada hota h.. already 27 ka ho chuka h..
Nandani : aap ko bas mere bete ki burai karne aata h bas..
Karan : ha tum toh...nandu dekho shashank...

To be continued

By Anshu and Nimz

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 2

AIRPORT

Shashank : padma mene kaha tha tumhe jaldi ready hone dekha hum log pure 2 minute late h..
Ridhima : papa itna hyper kyu ho rahe ho..
Hum bilkul correct time h pe aye h..
Nikki ya dad. Accha hua hum thodha late aye varna hume yaha wait karna padta..
Padma : dekha aapse jayda samjhdar toh mere bacche h.. aapko bas bahana chaiye mujhpe chilane ka..
Ridhima/Nikki : Karan uncle nandani aunty...
(Ridhima and Nikki rushed towards karan and nandani)
Ridhima: uncle guess mein koun hu..
Nikki: ha uncle aap batao hum dono me se koun Ridhima h aur koun Nikki
Nandani : oh.. toh tum dono bas uncle ko hug karogi mujhe toh bhul gaye tum dono..
Ridhima : Aunty hum aap ko kaise bhul sakte h..specially mein.. aap toh mere liye besan k ladoo banati thi..
Nandani : hmm... Accha toh mein batati hu
Toh tum ho Ridhima.. Aur yeh hai nikki
Karan: nandu tum ne kaise pechhan..
Ananya : karan aap ko nhi pata lekin mujhe pata hai ke Ridhima ko besan k ladoo kitne pasand h.. Aur nikki ko sweets bilkul acche nhi lagte h..
Nikki : Ridzi tere wajah se aunty ko pata chal gaya..
Nandani : nikki beta agar ridhima nhi bhi bolti toh bhi hume pata chal jata... K tum nikki ho aur ye ridhima.. Tum dono abhi bhi waise hi dhikhti ho jaise phele the
Karan :yeh baat toh bilkul sahi kahi nandu ne bas aab thodhi badi ho gayi h.

Shashank : mere betiyon se milne k baad mujhe bhul gaya...
Karan : oyee tujhe kaise bhul sakta hun yaar
(shashank and karan both huged eachother)
Padma : nandani kaisi ho. Waha jaake hume bhul gaye..
Nandani : apno ko koi bhulta hai kya.. Padma
Padma : to itno saalo mein na mail na calls kuch bhi nhi kiya.. Toh mein kya smajhu..
Karan : bhabhiji aap ko jitna daatna ho nandani ko daant lena.. Lekin abhi airport se chalte hai nhi toh kal k newpaper m aajayega ki mrs malik and mrs gupta fight kar rahi thi Airport me
Padma : bhaishabh ye toh humari pyar hai.. Hum jagra nhi rhe h.. Kyu nandani
Nadani : ha padma ye toh humari dosti h.. Aur karan ab nhi chalna apko..
Shashank : ha chalo.. Aap log itne lambe safar se aye ho.. Chalo bacchoo..

London

Malik's Office
Ron : hey dude tu itni jaldi m kaha jaa raha h..
Guy : India my country...
Ron : oh so tabhi tu itna jaldi mein h..
Guy : yes ron... Finally itne saalo baad mein india jaa raha hu..
Ron : hmm.. Ok
Guy : oyee tu itna senty kyu ho raha h yar.. Mein humesha k liye nhi jaa raaha hu..
Bas kuch important kaam h.. Woh karke jald wapas aa jauga so don't worry chill kar
Ron : ok.. Toh tu abhi nikal raha h..
Guy :nopes.. Aaj night ki flight h.. Bas kuch kaam h woh jaa raha hu..
Ron : toh fir mein aaj eve me party throw kar raha hu.. Tu usko attend karke jayega...
Guy : ok done.. abhi mein chalta hu.. Bye see ya

At club

Atul : Ron tune jiske liye party rakhi h.. Woh h kaha..
Ron : yaar usne 10 minutes m aa raha hu bola tha.. Pata nhi kaha h woh ab toh 30 minutes ho gaye h..
Anjali :hey guys look woh raha Armaan

(Anjali points to Armaan who enters in a black jrans and white shirt with black leqther jacket,looking handsome as ever..he sings as he walks in)

Doston na koi manzil hai
Na koi saathi hai
Phir bhi nikal pada hoon ghar se
Shaayad iski talaash hai
Wohi saathi hai wohi manzil hai
Hit it..
(Armaan starts to dance on the beats along with the others..)
O o jaane jaana
Dhoondhe tujhe deewana
Sapnon mein roz aaye
Aa zindagi mein aa na
O o jaane jaana

(He walks around The hall and nudges the ones standing with out dancing)

Dhoondhe tujhe deewana
Sapnon mein roz aaye
Aa zindagi mein aa na sanam
Mere khaab mere khayaloon ki rani
Kisi din banegi humari kahani
Mere khaab mere khayaloon ki rani
Kisi din banegi humari kahani
Aye meri bekhudi
Ye kasam maine li
Pyar mein ek din
Meri jaan tujhe hai paana
Sapnon mein roz aaye
Aa zindagi mein aa na
(Slowly all couples joins him and they start to dance to the beats,singing)

O o jaane jaana
Dhoondhe tujhe deewana
Sapnon mein roz aaye
Aa zindagi mein aa na sanam
Kisi khoobsurat paari jaisi hogi
Mujhe kya pata
Dilruba kaisi hogi
Kisi khoobsurat paari jaisi hogi
Mujhe kya pata
Dilruba kaisi hogi
Sochta hoon tujhe
Chahata hoon tujhe
Tujhe choom loon sajan

(He runs upstairs and dances along with the rest and slides down through the rail,singing)

Dil mera keh raha
Saare fasley mitaana
O o jaane jaana
Dhoondhe tujhe deewana
Sapnon mein roz aaye
Aa zindagi mein aa na
O o jaane jaana
Dhoondhe tujhe deewana
Sapnon mein roz aaye
Aa zindagi mein aa na sanam
Aa zindagi mein aa na sanam
(He dances to the end and concludes his dance)

All his friends comes and hugs him tightly..

...
By Anshu & Nimz

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