Hum Kisi Se Kam Nahi~ A DevAkshi Two Shot (Completed Pg 5!!)

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Hey people! Am up with something new this time. Ideas started shaping up after Wednesday's episode... I haven't seen yesterday's epi yet, so here is my perspective in continuation to Wednesday!

And yes, I have tried harder this time😊


This small piece of my head is dedicated to Gargi Di😳


Di, I hope it's goodšŸ˜‰



Hum Kisi Se Kam Nahi



She was in tears. A girl who had never given the reign of her life to someone else, the free spirited doctor who was not only dedicated to her profession but also went out of the way to treat her patients. She held her termination letter, the fruit of all her sincerity. Reason? Unprofessionalism and rude behaviour. Or in simple terms, Mr. Dev Dikshit. It wasn't the pity, it was the helplessness and the inability to help herself that was causing frustration, a thing she had never known. He had shown his reach and power, now it was her turn to give it back.


The phone played the message of her Dada, Mr. Bose about his trip to Chandigarh in need of money. Tears freely scrolled down her cheeks. And in her dark office, there was no one to wipe them. She had to be her own support this time.

After she had cried her heart out, she realised that she never wanted this to be


"What does that Man want? A nutritionist right? Well then, I'll be the BEST nutritionist in town for his mother. This is a promise from Sonakshi Bose, Mr. Obodro", she thought aloud.


" May I come in?", came a voice.


She couldn't believe it! A mere seconds ago she was thinking about him... Talk of the Devil and he is here!


She wiped away her tears and turned to open the door.


Dev entered and sat down on the chair.


Dev: So Miss Sonakshi Bose, have your views changed about my Offer?


Sonakshi was firm to give it back to him, in the worst possible way.


Sonakshi: Tomorrow sharp at 8, at your Mansion. Mr. Khadoos don't be late in welcoming me!


Saying so, she looked at him with a stone faced look. She meant business!


Dev was shocked... She gave in? Like she really gave in? Without muttering in Bengali, without making faces or fuss? What luck!


But had he succeeded in his effort, or simply invited trouble to his peaceful life? Only time could tell!





Dikshit Mansion


Sharp at 8, the door bell rang. There wasn't a stir of activity before it.


Dev, in his nightsuit and untidy hair, went to open the door. The servants weren't on duty yet.


As he opened the door, Sonakshi got in without a word.

Sonakshi: Ramu Kaka, Mr. Dev Obodro ko bulaoo.


Dev: Excuse me?


Sonakshi turned around at him on hearing English and after a few seconds, she realised it was him!


Sonakshi: Ohh Mr. Dev!

She turned around to glance at the house.


Sonakshi: Where is my patient?

Dev: Huh?


Sonakshi: Your mom,my patient Mr. Dev!


Dev pointed out to her a room on the first floor.

Dev: That's Maa's room. Come


She went in and first opened all curtains. Fresh sunlight and air entered as Ishwari stirred in her bed. She was a bit unwell after she had fainted the previous day.


Sonakshi: Fresh sunlight kills the bacteria and negativity, half my job done!

Good morning Mrs. Dikshit! Please get up now... Sleeping till late is not good for your tummy.


Ishwari got up slowly. Her head felt a bit heavy.


Dev: Maa yeh Dr. Sonakshi hai. Abse yeh Aapke khaane peene ka poora dhyan rakhegi.


Maa: Beta, Maine kaha naa main theek Hoon. Ab yeh sab ki kya zaroorat thi?


Dev: Bass Maa, kal dekh liya Maine kitni theek hai Tu. An mujhe Mera kaam karne de.


Sonakshi got to work. She instructed the cook to prepare a glass of juice and made a protein rich salad for her.



At Ten'o clock, Dev left for Office.


Dev: Dr. Bose, meri maa ka khyaal rakhna.


Sonakshi nodded tauntingly and as soon as she left, a smile appeared on her face.


"Mujhe unprofessional kaha tha naa... I'll show you what's professional now!", she thought.




At 8 in the night, Dev came back and sat down on the sofa. He loosened his tie and ordered for a glass of water. His Maa didn't come today to see him? Was she alright? In fear and tension, he got up only to find her coming towards him. But she didn't look pleased.


Ishwari: Beta Dev! Bacha le mujhe isse! Jab se Aayi hai, pareshen kar diya hai. Main insaan Hoon yaa Bhed Bakri? Koi itni salad aur juice pilaata hai kya?


Sonakshi and Neha entered the Hall behind her, seemingly pleased. They had a soft smile on her face.


Neha: Dekho naa Bhaiyya! Maa sunti hi nahi... Dr. Sonakshi ki bhi nahi. Subah se inke peeche plate lekar ghoom rahein hain.


Dev saw the plate of hardly eaten salad in their hands.


What could he do? He himself had invited her to make his Maa eat things in a balanced manner!




Hope it was nice😃



Love

Mahishee

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Haha it was damn good
You are wicked
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Awesome one mahishee! ā­ļø Enjoyed it. šŸ˜† Waiting for the next part eagerly.. šŸ˜›
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Manishee, this is really beautiful <33 you write so well. Keep writing more šŸ˜‰
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Posted: 9 years ago
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A good OS!!
It was funny when sonakshi thought of dev as RAMU KAKA!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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And our mahishee is back!!!!!!!
I loved it you know :)
The last time I said it wasn't up to the mark but now I'm saying you totally met my expectations.
I really liked it and do want to see what happens next. Thanks for the pm
And arrey pagal tumhe kab samajh aayega ki we love you bugging us by different stories, so plzz keep bugging us :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Its uhmazing !! A little less funny but very realistic stylishly written and beautiful to read. šŸ‘
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hahaha
Such a refreshing ts
I just love sonakshi's character
Ramu kaka Mr Dev Obodro ko bulaoo
Was the best line
Can't wait for the second part.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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This was gorgeous. Do continue
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Mahi firstly i am so sorry for being late. The past week has been so hectic. Was swamped with work.
Okay enough about me, lets get to this beautifully written story of yours. It was hands down amazing!
I can't even think of writing so well, trust me i have tried. Your stories always leave me with a smile on my face. I get all giddy while reading them.
Loved how you portrayed sona's inner conflict and her frustration was beautifully penned down
In short i loved it
Better end the comment now before i get all incoherent with my words

P.S do continue soon and thank you so much for the pm
Edited by .Ragini. - 9 years ago

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