Alt ending FF:Our RR~Th#8~ TH#9 link up! - Page 20

Originally posted by: velvetscarf

Zara,

I am loving every word of your writing. You have blended the suspense and deep emotions beautifully.

Naksh really is a bit irritating because with his glib optimism and easy life he has no idea of the depth of suffering Paro and Rudra have gone through. To him a life story is a fun bit of fluff, while for PaRud it is tears of blood and agony. But its clever how you manage to make him likeable despite that, how you show that he has a heart just that he is unawakened. But you show hints of how he might actually grow into a man of substance. Myrah - well we mostly resented her but also a likeable person, good at heart, a fun friend.

I do like the way the mystery is unfolding gradually - please do not feel the need to rush it just because a few people's like buttons are not working. Although I would rather that you complete it rather than abandon it. It is strange how to many of us Parud are so real - I have never felt anything like this for any television characters.

But you have a busy life so I am sure we will understand.

If I could like 100-200 times I would do so

If I could I would thank you in person with hugs and mitthai &

In fact I would definitely want you working in my team

⭐️

Originally posted by: -Zara-

You're right. Naksh has no idea of how much pain and suffering both paro and rudra have gone through but there will come a point soon where an incident will make him put his foot down as a friend but also improve himself to be more serious about the situation. Its not far thats for sure.

Thanks sis for your king supporting words. Tonnes of hugs.

Xxx

I look forward to reading that! I can see how Naksh is a necessary barrier between PaRud at this time, its frustrating how he gets between them but what is a love story without some frisson of tension and a hint of jealousy? Despite our feelings he is a very valuable character who highlights the distance between Rudra & Myrah, the closeness between Parud, will be Myrah's real love and catalyst / Cupid for Parud as well? Excellent dynamics!

Such a lovely FF.. Glad that I got to read this..

if you don't mind I had shared you story on Twitter I just gave them the site I hope its OK for you

Originally posted by: gogokareem

if you don't mind I had shared you story on Twitter I just gave them the site I hope its OK for you

i didnt copy it just copy link and iam really sorry forgive me

Originally posted by: gogokareem

i didnt copy it just copy link and iam really sorry forgive me

It's fine no need to apologize. Please can you remove my link from twitter if possible. I would be very grateful. And in future if you need to share my link somewhere publicly please ask permission. When I say publicly, I mean twitter FB etc. I honestly have nothing against you as I'm sure you would have shared my link with the best intentions, however I'm very conscious of other people outside the indian forum who may target my stories and copy paste them across the net (like on another indian/writing site) without crediting. I hope you understand.

Thank you.

Of course I had removed it and am really sorry again

just read thread 8..