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Posted: 10 years ago
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Episode - 505
Written by-Shibani

-Scene 1-
*Viraj's House*


Nisha and Kabir entered the house with smiles plastered on their faces. Vasundhara, who was knitting something, smiled at them.
Kabir-Yeh aap kya kar rahe ho Mom?
Vasundhara-(teasingly) Aapke baby ke lie ek sweater bhoon rahe hai hum...
Kabir and Nisha blushed.
Vasundhara-(laughing) Mazak kar rahe the hum, dekho kaise tamatar ki tarah laal ho gaye ho aap dono... Hum Dolly ke bacche ke liye sweater bhoon rahe the... Nisha, color accha hai?
Nisha- Ji Maa, bahut pretty hai... Waise, hum toh aap sab ko ek good news dene aaye thee...
Vasundhara looked at her teasingly and before she said anything, Kabir said.
Kabir- Aisa kuch nahi hai Mom, woh toh bas, Dolly aur Saurav ki shaadi decide ho chuki hai, 3 hafton baad...
Vasundhara-(surprised) Wow! That's a very good news...
Nisha-(excited) I can't tell you Maa ki main kitni excited hoon...
Vasundhara- Excitement toh hogi hi naa... Aur accha kiya jo uski delivery ke baad hi date select ki, because woh inn dino bahut tired ho jaati hai...
Kabir- Aur sangeet-mehandi meri zimedaari...
Vasundhara- toh samjho Sangeet khatam...
Kabir-(making baby faces)Mom..
Nisha laughed.
Vasundhara- Abhi toh hume yeh sweater chodke shopping karni chahiye...Pata hai, hum soch rahe the ki Dolly ke bacche ko cradle gift kare, kya khayaal hai?
Nisha- Very nice idea Maa...Dolly Di aur Saurav ko aapka gift bahut pasand aayega...
Vasundhara- Humare bete ne toh hume bina bataye shaadi ki, ab hum Dolly ki shaadi mein koi kasar nahi chodenge...
Kabir-(sad) Maa, aap har baar issi baat pe kyun tokti ho? Mujhe humesha guilty feel hota hai...
Vasundhara-(laughing) Hum toh mazak kar rahe the Jojo...
She pinched his cheeks while Nisha laughed.

-Scene 2-
*Viraj's Room*


Viraj was writing his personal diary, when someone came and snatched it from him. He turned to look at Kaira, who was almost about to read it. He rushed to her and pulled it from her grip, fearing that she may read it.
Kaira-(making baby faces) Too Bad Viraj...Hume toh laga aap humse kuch nahi chupaate, au yeh dekho, hum aapki ek diary kya padh rahe the, aap hume woh haq bhi nahi diya...
Viraj looked at her sad face with guilt in his eyes. Kaira looked at him and burst out laughing. Viraj was confused.
Kaira-(trying to control her laughter) I was joking Viraj... Hum naraz nahi hai...
Viraj looked at her sternly and then started laughing. She sat on the bed and he sat on the chair.
Viraj- Aap bilkul waise-ki-waise hi hai Drama Queen!
Kaira- Aur aap humare Bholu Ram, jo humare har drama ko seriously le liye karte the...
Viraj- Aap itni acchi acting karti hai, ki sach mein lagta hai ki aapko bura laga...
Kaira- (faking pride) Taareef ke liye shukriya...
Viraj- Kabhi-kabhi logon ki jhooti taareef kar leni chahiye...
He winked as Kaira made a Haww face. Viraj laughed.
Kaira- Aap nahi sudhrenge naa?
Viraj- Good habits die hard...
Kaira-(annoyed) Very funny...waise aapko yaad hai, kaise hum dono Palace ke garden mein jhoole pe bethkar tables sikhate the...
Viraj- yaad hai naa, 2 into 6 is 20, remember?
Kaira-(irritated) Aap naa... Hum bacche the tab, galtiyan karte the, so what?
Viraj-(acting innocent) Main kaha kuch keh raha hoon? Bas tables yaad kar raha hoon, that's it...
Kaira- Hadd hai! Woh sab chodiye, yeh batayiye ki India mein kitne states hai?
Viraj-(confused) 28...nahi, 29...nahi 27...
Kaira-(laughing) Viraj, aapka kya hoga? Itne bade academy ke owner ho aap, aur aapko yeh bhi nahi pata, India mein 29 states hai...bade aaye the humara mazak udaane waale...
Viraj- Accha, aur woh kaunsi hoshiyaari ladki thi, jisne 10th standard mein Geography paper ke din History ka textbook by heart kiya tha? Boliye?
Kaira-(biting her tongue) Hum hi the... Lekin ho jaata hai aisa... insaan hai, galtiya karne ka janam sidh adhikaar hai humara...
Viraj- Aur loud volume pe songs laganne ka janam sidh adhikaar bhi aap hi ke paas tha, nahi?
Kaira- Bilkul sahi farmaaya apne janaab...
The two laughed as Kaira did a "Salaam"


-Scene 3-
*Shopping Mall*

Dolly looked at her cousin angrily, who was walking towards her. Kirti came closer and held her ears. Dolly smiled.
Kirti- Aapko 5 minute rukvaaya, isilye aapko meri taraf se jhumke as a gift...
Dolly-(happily)Sacchi? Chalo, toh pehle jhumke hi khareedte hai...
The two entered the accessory hop, and were choosing accessories
Kirti- Yeh pink waala bracelet accha hai naa Dolly Di?
Dolly-(looking at it) Haan, bahut pretty hai...And this heart shaped diamond makes it looks more awesomes...
Kirti-(teasingly) haan Bhai, ab toh aapko har taraf bas hearts hi dikhenge...
Dolly slapped her lightly, but her cheeks had turned pink. Kirti laughed and held a pink earring close to her ear to see if it matched.
Kirti- Hmmm...looks ok-ok... jyaada plain lag raha hai...
She searched for another one, while Dolly moved towards the children's section of the shop and asked the shop keeper to show her pair of socks. Kirti joined her and the two started selected socks. In a few minutes Kirti looked at the shop's door and mumbled, "Kisiki khushi kyun nahi dekh sakti yeh hippo?"
She realized that Dolly was too happy to be sad, so when she looked at her, confusion clear on her face, she acted as if she had said nothing, and started looking at the socks and Dolly too ignored her statement.
Here Leela looked at them angrily and walked outside the shop.
Leela- Kaisi ladki hai? Sharam bhi nahi hai ismein... Maa banane waali hai, aur aise ghoom rahi hai...Pehle hi mere bete ki zindagi barbaad kar di iss ladki ne, aur ab...chain se shopping bhi nahi karne deti...(smirking) Agar usne mujhe aur bete ko khushi nahi di, toh usse bhi khush nahi hona chahiye, chal Leela, todha drama kar de...udaas ho jaayegi bechaari...
She smirked and was about to enter the shop but remembered all the insults and most precisely, remembered how Vimla had insulted her in the market

*Flashback*

Leela-Arrey Dolly beta? Tum market mein?
Dolly- Nahi Mummyiji, main abhi mall mein hoon, meri cousin ki shaadi ke liye dress select kar rahi hoon...aapko chahiye, toh ek kharid lungi...
Leela-(ignoring) Par inn dino khud ko aisi taqeef dena, acchi baat nahi hai beta...
Dolly- buri baatein jab saamne ho, toh acchi baatein kahan yaad aati hai...MUMMYJI?
Leela- Beta, pata hai Sumeet tumhare aur tum dono ke bacche ki kitni yaad karta hai?
Vimla- Ji pata hai naa, bahut yaad karta hai isiliye toh baccha itna hichkiya leta hai, ki Dolly ko aisa lagta hai, jaisa baccha andar naach raha ho... Chale Dolly, itni dhup mein tu khadi rahega, Toh TERE bacche ko taqleef hogi..

*Flashback ends*

Leela-(to herslef angrily) Nahi Leela, uss aurat ne, jisne aaj tak zubaan nahi chalaayi thi, uss aurat ne teri beizzati ki, isse behtar hai ki tu unse baat hi mat kar...Waise bhi, uss Kirti ki zubaan chaku se bhi tez hai, pata nahi bhare dukaan mein kya kuch suna de... Dekh lungi main in sabko... Bahut pareshaan kiya hai inn logo ne mujhe aur Sumeet ko...
She walked away from there. Kirti, who had came outside the shop, after making an excuse, heard this and smiled.
Kirti-(to herself) Sahi kaha LEELAJI, meri zubaan chaku se bhi tez hai, aur ek baar main shuru ho gayi, toh sabki baari khatam... Aur Vimla Taayiji ne toh uss din kamaal hi kar diya tha...Moti ab tak unse darti hai... Yeh toh kamaal hi ho gaya... Leela, you are so LS... Huh!
She laughed happily and joined Dolly, who was confused to see a triumphant smile on her face and her eyes gleaming with pride.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
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Episode - 506
Written by-Shibani


-Scene 1-
*Next day*

*Terrace of Gangwal House*

Kirti was filing her nails, Dolly was eating fruits, Jwala was reading, Sukku was talking on the phone with his friend while Saurav was telling Dolly something, when they heard someone clear his throat. They looked at Ramesh who smiled.
Kirti- Kya hua Chachu, aaj hum nikammo ki kaise yaad aayi?
Ramesh- hmari memory ko test mat kijiye Kirti sahiba, apni memory ki test lijiye...
Jwala- Kyun Chachu, aisa kya hua ki humari memory test leni padegi aapko?
Ramesh- Aaj date kya hai?
Sukku-(between the call) 7 March 2016
Umesh-(entering the terrace) Kaha tha naa Chachu, inn kmino ko kuch yaad nahi hoga...
Aman- Oh-ho, humesha inke peeche pade rehte ho, insaan hai, bhool gaye...
Ramesh- Ek saal pehle, Nisha ne iss parivaar mein ek paagal ko laaya tha, use shaadi karke, bandaro...
All looked at each other in surprise.
Dolly- Oh Gods! Yeh main kaise bhool gayi...
Jwala- Main bhi bhool gayi...
Kirti- How blah! Tumne toh waise bhi kitaabo se shaadi ki hai, tumhe kaise yaad hoga, par main kaise bhool gayi?
Saurav- Yeh baat tumhare brain se slip hokar gir gayi Miss. Blah!
Sukku chuckled but stopped when Kirti threw an angry glance at him.
Ramesh- Abhi apni bakwaas chodo, aur socho kare kya?
Bunty- Unki anniversary tab celebrate karenge jab yahaan unki shaadi hoyi thi waise bhi 3rd march to nikal gyi..
Aman- ... Main soch rahi thi kuch different karte hai...
Umesh- That's too good idea Aman...
All cousins and Ramesh cleared their throats. Umesh and Aman blushed. The others laughed.
Ramesh- Waise idea sacch mein accha hai...Toh Nibir celebration hatke hoga...
All cousins- Yes!
Ramesh- Ab tum bacche log kuch accha sa plan banana, main neeche students ko sikha kar aata hoon...
He exited the terrace and the cousins started talking.

-Scene 2-
*Living Room of Gangwal House*


Ramesh was humming a song and walking when he saw Vasundhara entering the house. He smiled. She smiled back.
Ramesh- Aaj ke din ka shubh avsar mil hi gaya aapko humare iss chotse ghar mein pravesh karne ke liye, nahi?
Vasundhara- Tum bhi naa Ramesh... woh toh bas todhisi sardi hui thi, isiliye Viraj har ke bahar kadam nahi rakhna de rahe the...Abhi Dolly se milne aa gaye hai...
Ramesh- Viraj kaha hai?
Vasundhara- bahar hi hai, (rolling her eyes) Woh aur unka office... Dolly akisi hai?
Ramesh-First class! Tum betho...
The two settled down. Ramesh was again and again looking in the direction of the terrace hoping that cousins come up with some plan. Vasundhara's observant eyes didn't fail to notice this.
Vasundhara- Kya gad-bad ki bacchon ne?
Ramesh-(out of his trance) Huh? (realziing) Kuch nahi... Woh darasal, Nisha aur Kabir ne 3rd march ko Samuhik Vivah mein shaadi kar li thi.. aur humne kuch bhi celebration nahi kiya, isiliye socha ki bacche kuch plan karenge toh accha hoga...
Vasundhara- Hum bhi yeh baat bhool gaye...
Ramehs- Umar badh rahi hai naa, Memory weak hogi hi...
She gave him a stern look. He chuckeled.
Vasundhara- Accha, par ab kya?
Ramehs- Bacchon ne decide kiya hai ki woh kuch surprise plan karenge... Ab surprise kya hoga, yeh Bhagwan hi jaane...
Vasundhara- Haan, yeh sai rahega... Mahaul bhi celebration ka hoga, dono enjoy karenge...

Viraj, who had eavesdropped went outside and dialed a number. She received the call after four rings, but Viraj had to move the cell phone away fro his ear because she scremed loudly in the phone, "BHAIYA!!!"
Viraj- (holding the cell closer to his ear) Aap bhi naa, ek din hume deaf bana ke hi chain ki saans loge...
Alisha- Hadd Hai! Aapko wais toh apni is behen ki yaad aati nahi, aur call akrte ho, toh meri excitement bhi nahi sehen kar sakte...
Viraj-(chuckling) Ok meri maa, Sorry...Lekin abhi humne aapko ek zaroori kaam se call kiya hai...
Alisha- Boliye...
Viraj- Actually 3 March ko Nisha-Kabir ne Samuhik vivah mein shaadi kar li thi... par humne unke liye koi celebration nahi rakha, isiliye Nisha ke cousins ne decide kiya hai ki woh unhe surprise karenge...
Alisha-(excited) That is awesome Bade Bhaiya...
Viraj- I know, lekin, Kabir ki siblings hone ke naate hum dono ko unki help karni chahiye...Priyanka toh Jodhpur gayi hai, unse toh network error ki wajah se rarely baat hogi, isiliye hum dono ko hi kuch karna hoga...
Alisha- Yes Boss!
Viraj- Toh soldier, abhi ke abhi, aap Cousins ke saath conference call karna, Major ko kuch kaam hai, is that clear?
Alisha-(sternly) Yes Sir!
The two laughed and Alisha hanged the call.


-Scene 3-
* Terrace of Gangwal House *


Sukku- Toh main kya socha raha tha?
Umesh- Tu toh rehne hi de...
Before anyone else could comment, they heard a ping sound from Sukku's laptop and saw that Alisha had requested for a video call. Sukku's face beamed with a smile as he received it.
Sukku- Hi Alisha!
Alisha- hey Sukku!
Kirti smirked looking at their dreamy expressions and pushed Sukku away from the screen.
Kirti- Hum bhi hai yaar!
Alisha blushed.
Dolly- how's you?
Alisha- Main bilkul thikh hoon... Aap sab kaise ho?
Bunty- Ek dum zakaas!
Alisha- toh batao, kya plan kiya Bhaiyu-Bhabhi ke liye?
All looked at each other innocently and then at the screen. Alisha sighed.
Alisha- Oof! Kuch bhi decide nahi kiya? Too bad guys!
Sukku- Mere suggestion koi accept hi nahi kar raha, toh main kya karu?
Alisha- Tumhare suggestions? Rehne do Sukku...
All burst out laughing.
Kirti- How Blah Sukku! See, even Alisha doesn't trurt you...
Alisha- Aisa nahi hai, I trust him...
Sukku looked at the screen and blushed. All cleared their throats.
Alisha- Aap sab naa, doctor ke paas jaayiye, kuch jyaada hi sardi ho gayi hai aap sab ko...
Dolly- Accha baba, sorry... Ab tum hi kuch idea do... Iss sarphire aur paagal ki Jodi ke liye kya kare?
Jwala- Main soch rahi thi ki unhe honeymoon pe bhej de...
Aman- Jwala, ghar mein function honge aur miya-beewi gayab? Log kya kahenge?
Jwala-(biting her tongue) yeh bhi hai...Sorry, bad idea...
Umesh- Yaar, normal logo ke liye surprises plan karna easy hai, Captain Jugadu aur Mr. K ke liye kuch hatake sa plan karna? Impossible...
All sighed and looked at each other when Dolly screamed.
Saurav-(concerned) Kya hua?
Dolly-(caressing her baby bump) Baby ne kick kiya...
Sukku- Dekho, baby bhi agree karta hai ki yeh dono Normal nahi hai...
All burst out laughing, keeping aside the tension. Some ne called Alisha from behind
Alisha- Abhi main jaati hoon, Kunal ke saath rehearsals hai, Bye...
She hanged the call and all looked at Sukku, who had sad expressions on his face.
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SCENE - 1
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As soon as the call ended everybody dispersed leaving a disappointed sukku alone.

Sukku - (monologue) why m i feeling so disappointed as if i m losing something mine... its alisha life she can do whatever she wants... mai kyu itna pareshan ho rha hu... ur ye ajeeb si feeling kyu aati h mjhe har baar us kunal ka naam sunke... itna gussa kyu aata h uspar... mai to aajtk mila bhi nhi hu usse janna to bhot door ki baat h... offo ho kya rha h ye...

He was still in his thoughts when his laptop pinged again showing alisha name. He got a bright smile on his face and answered asap.

Sukku - alisha... kya hua...

Alisha - oh kuch nhi vo kunal ko jana pada urgently so no work... to socha tum logo se hi baat karke plan final kar lu... kha gye sab..

Sukku - vo sab to chale gye... mai hi hu yha...

Alisha - tum to ho na ur koi thodi chahie...

Sukku - matlab??

Alisha - (fumbling) matlab matlab ha tumhe idea dena tha na... to uske lie to tumhari hi jarurat h... to btao kya idea h...

Sukku - oh... are vo maine socha h ki nisha ur kabir ki anniversary dolly di k function k din hi celebrate karni h to kyu na hm sab milke unke lie ek special performance tyaar kare... like hm sab...??

Alisha - that's brilliant sukku n i know the theme of the dance too..

Sukku - why are u smiling evilly alisha... what are u thinking...

Alisha - thats for me to know and u to think tab tk for that u have to help me...

Sukku - anything for u...

Alisha - thank u sukku...

Sukku and alisha smiled at each other.

Alisha - sukku... last time u were sounding depressed.. did i did something wrong...

Sukku - alisha tumne tab bhi yhi pucha tha ur maine jo tb kha tha vo mai ab bhi kh rha hu... nhi m fine... and u didnt do anything...

Alisha - hmmm... will u promise me one thing sukku..

Sukku - anything...

Alisha - u wont hide anything from me... if i do anything good or bad u will tell me what u feel about it without any secrets btw us??? Do u promise...

Sukku - i do...

Alisha gave him a beautiful smile and they both chatted for a while before hanging up.

SCENE - 2
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Dolly was in her room caressing her baby bump and talking to it when sourav entered with a huge smile on his face. He cleared his throat and dolly looked up at him.

Dolly - hey saurav... why are u smiling so much

Saurav - hey dolly... kyuki after what looks like an eternity finally i have time to spend with u that too alone...

Dolly - alone??

Saurav - ha sab log baahar gye h except jwalu ur bunty woh apne room m h.. baki sab shopping p gye h hmari shadi ki... so i came here to take care of my lady by myself...

He bowed down in front of her making her chuckle.

Dolly - m so honoured... now i want to see a movie then...

Saurav - ok... ur wish my command...

Saurav was putting a picture on her tv when some loud voices came from downstairs.

Dolly - kaun chilla rha h niche...

Saurav - may be its just jwalu and bunty...

Dolly - shayad... now give me the remote...

Saurav shook his head at her and gave her the remote settling himself beside her while she rested her head on his shoulder. The movie was half way when sourav looked at dolly who was sleeping peacefully on his shoulder. He smiled and caressed her cheek when suddenly someone started shouting downstairs. Saurav frowned as he couldn't recognise the voice and decided to check upon the kids.

He went to the corridor and saw jwalu and bunty shouting on some man who was standing with his back to him.

Saurav - kya hua jwalu...

Just then the man turned to him making his blood boil with anger.

Saurav - sumeet... what the hell are u doing here

Sumeet - (smugly) mai apne sasural aaya hua hu tmhe koi prblm h... mr. Saurav

Saurav - ha kyuki na to ab ye tumhara sasural h na hi yha tmhe koi dekhna chahta h...

Sumeet - oh attitude ha... meri hi biwi se shaadi kar rha h ur mjhe hi akad dikha rha h...

Saurav - dolly teri biwi nhi h samjha... u were blind enough to let go of such a gem... so your loss my gain... now get out of here...

Sumeet - mai apne hone wale bachhe ki maa se baat karne aaya hu... tjhse nhi samjha... ur ha usse baat karne se mjhe koi nhi rok sakta kyuki vo bachha jise tu apna btata h na vo mera h...


SCENE - 3

Someone - vo bachha sirf mera h...

Everybody turned to the source of the voice and found dolly standing at the stairs with anger written all over her face.

Dolly - tum samjhte kya ho khud ko sumeet.. jab mann aata h muh uthake chale aate ho yha mere bachhe p apna haq jtane... bhool gye ho kya ye bachha ab mera h ur iski custody bhi mere paas h...

Sumeet - custody k order hone se ye sach nhi badal jata dolly ki mai is bachhe ka baap hu... ur mera jab mann karega mai yha aaunga...

Dolly - ye sirf mera bachha h sumeet kitni baar btau tmhe... tum jaise chor ur murderer ka nhi...

Sumeet - zabaan sambhal ke baat karo dolly...

Saurav - (stepping btw them) ise jaise baat karni hogi waise karegi samjha...

Sumeet - oh to mr. Aashique ab tevar dikhaenge mjhe...

Dolly - tameez se baat karo sumeet.. saurav mera hone wala pati h samjhe...

Sumeet - huh... pati... tumhara sirf ek hi pati h dolly ur vo mai hu... tumhara pati bhi ur is bachhe ka baap bhi...

Dolly - bhot ho gya sumeet... shayad bhool gye ho tum to mai yaad dila du ki mera divorce ho chuka h tumse ur mera ur tmhara ab koi rishta nhi h... ur ye mera bachha h kyuki tum jaisa insaan pita keh lane k layak hi nhi jo apne bachhe ko apne fayde k lie use kare...

Sumeet - dolly (his eyes blaring with anger, advances towards dolly)

Saurav came in btw and stopped him.

Dolly - saurav... rehne de aaj mai ise saare jawab de hi deti hu...

She stepped towards sumit.

Dolly - sumit na mai tumse koi matlab rakhna chahti hu na tumhari maa se.. tumhe yha se ab kuch nhi milne wala h na tmhari biwi... kyuki vo mar chuki h... ur na tmhara bachha jispar tmhara koi haq nhi h...

Sumit - haq nhi h ya vo mera h hi nhi dolly...

He roared halting dolly in her tracks. She turned to see sumeet smirking and giving her knowing looks which travelled btw her to saurav.

Dolly - what do u mean...

Sumit - oh common... u very well know what i mean dont u... warna kaun ek divorcee vo bhi pregnant se shadi karega... mjhe to laga tha ki mai hi gira hua hu par tum to mjhse bhi aage nikali dolly...

Dolly threw him a disgusted look with a dead glare and her hand landed straight on his cheek with thrash.

Dolly - (angry beyond limits) look who's talking... the one that don't know how to treat a women... the one who cheated his own family... the one who cant even be truthful to his wife... who actually did robbery and on top of that tried to kill someone... who used his wife to hide himself... gire hue nhi ho tum sumit... tum usse bhi badtar ho... sharam aati h mjhe khud p ye soch ke ki maine kabhi tmse pyaar kia tha... apna sab kuch dia tha tmhe... (pushing sumit out) GET THE HELL OUT OF HERE...

Sumeet again tried to make a move on her but saurav pushed him back.

Saurav - dare u touch my wife... mai bhool jaunga ki mjhe kya karna chahie ur kya nhi...

Saurav grabbed his collar and threw him out of the house.

Sumit - abhi jaa raha hu dolly... par yaad rakhna tumhari shadi ur ye bachha dno ko barbaad kar dunga mai... i m warning u...


SCENE - 4

Dolly slide down on the floor and begin hyperventilating. Saurav who was seething with anger, ran to her and sat by her side.

Saurav - dolly tu thik h na... dekh stress mat le dolly.. tjhe pta h na vo bus bol sakta h kuch kar nhi sakta... tu shant hoja...

He started stroking her back in soothing circles as she burst out in cries while jwalu ran to bring water.

Just then cousins entered the house except nisha and kabir with worried expression.
Aman and kirti ran towards dolly while umesh and sukku went to saurav.

Saurav - aman bhabhi kirti aap dolly ko...

He trailed off but they nodded signaling they understood and helped dolly to go upstairs.

Sukku - kya bola us sumit ne saurav... bta mjhe mai uski abhi marammat karke aata hu...

Umesh - sukku... calm down... saurav bta kya hua...

Saurav then told umesh and sukku about the whole incidence and marched in the room being frustrated.

Saurav - i want to kill him damn it... how dare he said that to dolly...

Umesh - saurav... shant hoja... fikr mat kar hm iska solution nikal lenge... abhi dolly ki soch ur uske paas ja... use teri jarurat h abhi...

Saurav let out a disappointed sigh and looked up.

Saurav - sahi kh rha h tu umesh... mai dolly k paas jata hu...

Umesh and sukku nodded and followed him to dollys room.
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SCENE - 1
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Umesh sat by his sister side and patted her head.

Umesh - dolly stop crying... u will harm ur baby only..

but nothing worked on her and she kept sobbing. Saurav sat by her side once umesh stood and leaned her on his shoulder whispering sweet things to her while aman and kirti tried their best to distract her.

Sukku - umesh bhaiya... hme sab ko bta dena chahie... waise bhi sab aa hi rhe honge...

Umesh - hmmm tu thik keh rha h sukku... tu esa kar nisha ur kabir ko inform kar mai papa ko call karta hu..

Sukku nodded and went out to call nibir while umesh mustered enough strength to call viren.

Viren - ha umesh bol...

Umesh - papa aap kha h... vo kuch batana tha...

Viren - bus nikal hi rhe h yha se... vo to jaldi aa jate par maa ne kha unhe mandir jana h to sab mandir hi chale gye...

Umesh - achha papa jaldi aaeye.. vo sumit aaya tha ghar p jab koi nhi tha ur...

He told the whole incidence to viren who was fuming by then.

Viren - uski itni majal ki ghar m ghus aaya.. umesh tu dolly ka dhyaan rakh hm abhi aate h...

Umesh - ji papa...

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After some time

Everybody was gathered in the hall while jwalu saurav and bunty explained them about the incidence and dolly outburst.

Everyone was discussing when kirti came running to the hall.

Rupan - kirti kya hua...

Kirti - maa.. vo dolly di... vo...

Laxmi - bolna kirti kya hua dolly ko...

Kirti just motioned upstairs and that all was needed for saurav, sukku and umesh to ran upstairs.


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Dolly room

Aman was sitting beside dolly when all of them entered.

Vimla - aman kya hua dolly ko...

Aman - pta nhi mummy dolly di bolte bolte faint ho gyi... ur inhe fever bhi ho gya h...

Dadiji - saurav jaldi se doctor ko bula.. esi halat m bukhar hona achha nhi hota...

Laxmi - didi aap fikar mat karo mai abhi thanda paani lke aati hu... bukhar jaldi utar jaega...

Laxmi and rupan went to bring towels and cold water while saurav ran out to call doctor.

Saurav - (on call) dr. Mai saurav jain bol rha hu... dolly ka fiance.. kya aap abhi yha aa sakte h its urgent...

Soon he finished the call and went inside to be by dolly side while everybody waited for doc to come.


SCENE - 3

All were still standing when doctor arrived and asked all of them to leave since she wanted to examine dolly.

After a wait of almost an hour, the door finally opened and doctor came in the view. Saurav and viren ran to her immediately.

Viren - sab thik to h na doc... use hua kya h

Saurav - dolly kaisi h doctor...

Doctor - abhi thik h vo.. par dolly ka bp bhot high ho gya tha due to overstressing... fever bhi isi lie aa gya h n that is not a good sign... ese hi chalta rha to delivery k time bhot complications face karne pad sakte h jo dno k lie hi thik nhi h... try to keep her stress free...

Saurav - mai khayal rakhunga doc.

Doctor - saurav... she needs a good environment a happy one... without any fear or tension... i cant give her any medicine at this stage so it is up to you people to release her stress taaki uska bp normal ho... n i hope u r following the meditation technique it will help her too...

Saurav nodded confirming her that he understood everything.

Doc - good now i should go...

sukku lead her to the door while just then kabir nisha viraj and vasu made their entry.


Scene - 4

All the elders went to sit in verandah after checking up on dolly while cousins, kabir and viraj opted to stay with dolly for a while.

Dolly was sitting with a far away expression on his face while others were looking at each other with "ab kya kare" expression.

Sukku looked at dolly and nudged kirti who glared at him but nudged umesh who was standing by her side. Just like kirti, umesh nudge jwalu and soon it became a game. When nisha finally nudge kabir, he didnt respond. She became irritated and stomped his foot with her sandal making kabir cried out in pain.

Kabir - kya h nisha... paagal...

Nisha - mai paagal nhi hu...

Kabir - saare paagal ese hi kehte h...

Nisha - kya bola tu...

Kabir - maine kha ki saare paagal ese hi kehte h... paagal k sath behri bhi ho gyi h lagta h...

Nisha - mai behri nhi hu samjha...

Kabir - par paagal to h na...

Nisha - kabir k bachhe chup hoja warna...

Kabir - warna kya ha... jab dekho mjhe dhamki deti rehti h... lady gabbar khi ki...

Nisha - kya bola tune... mai lady gabbar hu..

Kabir - abhi to kh rhi thi tu behri nhi h fir dubara kyu puch rhi h...

Nisha - kabir chup hoja nhi to mai...

She stomped his foot again making him jump a foot in the air. He looked at nisha with big eyes and sat down on the floor acting as if crying out loud.

Kabir - (crying) he bhagwan kya bura kiya tha maine tera ki mjhe esi jalim biwi di h... mjh jaise maasom bachhe ki esi khatarnaak biwi... jab dekho mjhe maarti rehti h... mai kitta pyaar karta hu isse pr ye to mjhse ittu sa (showing a small space with his fingers) bus ittu sa pyaar karti h... ur ye to kya ye jo wanar sena h na wanar sena ye bhi mjhse pyaar nhi karti bus mjhe pareshan karti rehti h... (he looked at all the people around who were gawking at him) ur ye mere bade bhaiya ye bhi mjhse pyaar nhi karte... sab is lady gabbar ki hi side lete h...

He kept blabbering while all of sudden dolly started laughing and so as all the others except nisha who was still glaring at him. As soon as the laughter dies nisha started chasing kabir in the room.

Nisha - ruk kabir ruk... abhi btati hu... kya bola tune... mai lady gabbar hu... huh... mai pyaar nhi karti tjhse... khatarnak hu mai... abhi btati hu ki mai kitni khatarnak hu ruk tu...

Kabir squeaked as she hit him with pillows and then with her hands. He dodged her and ran out of the room with nisha behind him leaving back a laughing wanar sena and viraj. Saurav looked at dolly who was laughing and gave her an assuring smile.
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Scene 1

At GH

Nisha was chasing kabir...and kabir was running as fast as he could to save his one and only life...then suddenly he stopped in his midway when he saw viren who were marching here and there... anger was dripping in his eyes while other elders were sitting in courtyard...and were discussing something...seeing him like this...nisha too stopped...and stood beside him...

Viren (angrily)- us sumit ki himmat kaise hui yha aane ki...aur dolly ko itna bhala bura kehne ki...man to karra h...ki and before he could say further he was cut off by ramesh...

Ramesh - Bhaiya shant ho jaiye...itna gussa aapki sehat ke liye thik nhi h...he said placing his hand on viren's shoulder...

Viren- kaise shant ho jau chhote...yha meri beti itni musibat me h aur...

Dadaji - ramesh thik keh rha hai viren...tumare is tarah idhar udhar chakkar kaatne se...ya gussa hone se ye baat nhi sambhalne wali...aur rhi baat dolly ki to wo sirf tumari beti nhi h...hum sab ko uski utni hi chinta h jitni ki tumhe h...
On hearing this viren nodded...while mohan and ramesh made him sit on sofa...vimla then gave him a glass of water...which he gulped in one go...

Viren- par bauji aaj to baccho ne jaise taise baat sambhal li kal agar WO sumit fir yha muh utha ke aa gya to...???

Dadaji- tum thik keh rhe ho viren Hume jald se jald is masle ka hal nikalna padega...

Dadiji- pata nhi mhari dolly ke nasib me kai h...kab mhari dolly ki jindagi me khushi avegi...she said depressingly

Ramesh - ma aap chinta mat karo...dekhna bahut jald hamari dolly ki zindagi khushiyo se bhar jayegi...aur saurav h na WO hamari dolly ka khayaal bilkul ek rajkumari ki tarah rakhega...he said kneeling down before saroj(dadiji)...

*Aur sudha ji bhi to h * laxmi added further...

While dadiji nodded...
Then all the ladies went to meet dolly while all the elders were still sitting in courtyard...

Scene 2

At Dolly's Room

Dadiji vasu vimla rupan and laxmi entered Dolly's room seeing the elders all the cousins and saurav left from there...by taking one last glance of dolly...

Vimla then sat beside dolly and made dolly to lie on her lap and she started caressing her hair while dadiji laxmi and rupan also sat beside them...

Dadiji- ab kaisi h mhari dolly she said placing her hand on her cheek...

Hearing this dolly said *mai thik hu* through her eyes...while sadness and tension were still reflecting on her face...seeing her sad face dadi again continued...

Dadiji- dolly dekh beta Jo beet gya so beet gya beeta hua kal koi na badal pave par jo thara aane wala kal h na wo ghani sora h...saurav ...thara aane wala baccha...

Laxmi - maaji bilkul thik keh rhi h dolly...ab tujhe sirf aur sirf saurav aur apne bacche ki fikar karni chahiye...she said caressing her face...

Vasu - ha aur hamari dolly bahut strong h...haina dolly she said looking towards dolly while dolly said nothing...

Rupan - aur us sumit ko to hum sab sambhal lenge...as soon as she said dis dad I eyed at rupan to not to speak about saurav in front of dolly...

Vimla - ha dolly tu ghabra mat hum sab h na tere sath...she said still caressing her hair...then soon dolly went into deep sleep...seeing her in deep sleep vimla kissed her forehead...and the tears which she held in her eyes made its way on her cheeks while laxmi rupan and dadi placed their hand on her...to console her...and to assure her that soon this problem will be solved and vanished in thin air...

Scene 3
At Courtyard

Mohan - Hume ab us sumit se hi Millar usse baat karni hogi ki aakhir WO chahta kya h

Ramesh - Bhaiya WO sirf aur sirf hamari dolly ko pareshan dekhna chahta hai aur kuch nhi...

Viren - leela ji ne bhi hamari beti ko pareshan karne me kya koi kam kasar chhodi h dono maa bete ek hi thali ke chatte batte h...

Dadaji- Jo bhi ho viren lekin is baar Hume leelaji se milke in sari pareshaniyo ko jad se hi khatam karna h...bahut ho gya ye roz roz ka naatak...after saying this he dialled Leela's no.

Dadiji(on call) - hello leela ji aap kitni jaldi ho sake yha aa jaiye Hume aapse zaruri baat karna hai he said in his usual singham wali tone...

After somewhat 20 minutes leela arrived there...seeing her dadaji viren ramesh and mohan stranded and looked at her angrily...while she was caressing her hair in her usual melodramatic style...

Dadaji - aaiye leela ji...

Viren was about to say something but dadaji stopped him by showing his eye..

Dadaji- aap janti h...aaj aapka beta aaya tha...yha...aur usne dolly se kya kya kaha...

Leela - aaya hoga mera beta...use itni chinta Jo rehti h dolly ki aur uski bacche ki...

Viren - uska baccha??? WO sirf aur sirf meri beti ka baccha h aapke chor bete ka nhi...

Leelaji - aapki him at kaise hui mere bete ke bare me aise bolne ki...aur rhi baat dolly ki to kya pata...shayad aap sach keh the honge ki WO sumit ka baccha nhi h kahin wo saurav...as soon as she said this she was cut off by dadaji...

Dadaji - bas lijiye leelaji bahut bakwaas sunli humne aapki humne aapko yha isliye bulaya tha...kyuki aap badi h apne bete ko sahi rash dikha sake par lagta h aap to apne bete se nhi jyada bhatki hui h...aur rhi baat dolly aur uske bacche ki to unki chinta karne k liye abhi hum sab zinda h...aur apne bete ko samjha dijiyega ki dolly aur is parivaar se dur rhe agar is *Nemi Chand Gangwal* ne apna aapa kho diya to aapke bete ko koi nhi bacha payega...*Jai Jinendra* he said folding his hand and showing her the direction of exit...
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