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Posted: 9 years ago
NOTE

Sorry for making you all wait for long.Held up with Studies and never ending examzz🤢🤢

Next part is almost done.So you can get the update in a day or two😃


A Big Sorry!!


By the way...is anyone interested in reading this story?
Edited by Madhu.. - 9 years ago
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Ok dear waiting for update continue soon and don't for get to send PM
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hi thanks 4 da note! of cos still interested! will b waiting
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hell yeah dera plzzz come back i am missing mental love now that maan also loves her i wanna read it
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Will try to update soon...😆
Edited by Madhu.. - 9 years ago
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(Banner credits to my Basanti😉Uma)



Part 4A

At Handa Mansion

Muskaan came running from her room and sat for breakfast.

Muskaan(st):God!Today I am late.Yeh Mumma kahan chali gayi. At the same time her phone rang and she put it on speaker.

Muskaan:Mumma where are you?

Priya(on phone):Muski we are heading to Pune.

Muskaan:Kyaa??Mumma..why you left without telling me.You know how much important day is today.Today is the 1st day of my internship.You and Papa are not here to wish me today.Too bad.She was whining in the phone and eating at the same time.

Priya:We are sorry bacha.You know na that the Bhatts are our close family friends.Mrs.Bhatt passed away yesterday night.So we have to leave urgently to Pune.Sorry baby.

But Muskaan sat silently without saying anything.Priya put the phone in speaker so that Ram can talk to Muskaan and make her understand.

Ram:Good Morning Princess..

Muskaan:...

Ram:Beta we are sorry that we are not with you now.What to do it was an unavoidable situation.Try to understand Princess.

Muskaan:Umm..

Ram:Kya sirf umm..If you don't talk with us then we how can we be in peace here.We are sorry bacha.Your Mumma will be going on worrying and her heath will also affect.Hearing this Muskaan was convinced.And all the very best for ur 1st day internship. God bless you. Atleast now respond na

Muski..

Muskaan:Thank u Papa and sorry for my behaviour too.Mumma plzz don't be tensed.

Priya:Ok beta.Now stop worrying about us and All the best baby.

Muskaan:Thanks Mom.Ok now I have to rush its getting late.

Ram/Priya:Ok Muski.Bye.We love u Bacha.All the Best.

With that Muskaan cut the call and stuffed the remaining bread in her mouth and ran outside.

Geet:Muski..ruko.Geet came with a bowl of curd mixed with sugar and fed Muskaan.

Geet:All the best muski..its your 1st day of internship na..

Muskaan:Haan di..Thank u soo much and she took the spoon and fed Geet too

Geet:Arrey mere liye kyun?

Muskaan:You 1st tell why you fed me?

Geet:Today is important day in your life na.You are going to achieve your dream...so only i gave this!!

Muskaan:Then think that your wish will also be fulfilled today.Saying this Muskaan gave a tight kiss to Geet and ran out.

Geet smiled weakly thinking about her Wish!!Her wish was to have a caring and loving Family.Only the person who longs for love know the value of it.Today she heard Her parents and Muskaan's talks.Never ever her parents were there with her when she went to her School on 1st day.None was there to wish her All the best before her Exams.Was she that unfortunate that she didn't receive her Mumma Pappa's love. Wiping the lone tear from the corner of her eyes she moved inside her house.

Geet felt bored in the house so she thought to go out somewhere.She had the habit of going to Orphanage and she likes to be with the children there.She asked the details of Orphanage in nearby location from the Servant and headed towards Smile Orphanage.On the way she bought stationary things for the children there.

At Smile Orphanage

Maan arrived there,introduced himself and gave the cheque and other things he brought with him to Ms.Stella,the person who is taking care of the Orphanage.

Ms.Stella:Thank you soo much my Son.The children would be happy if you yourself give the thing to them.If you are free plzz do spend time with them.Atleast they will have the feeling that someone is caring for them.

Maan gave gave a smile and said that definitely he would spend time with the kids there.

Ms.Stella called a staff(Ms.Rosy) working there and asked him to guide Maan.

Maan along with Ms.Rosy went to meet the children.

Many children were playing her and there. Some were sitting and listening what the Teachers are teaching.Few were drawing.It was pleasant to see them.All were having a smile on their faces.Though they don't have anyone of their own still they were happy in their small world without any worries.

What shocked Maan was their were little babies..nearly few month old babies too were in the orphanage.Special care takers were appointed to take care of them.

Maan:Ms.Rosy I thought only children were her..but those Babies..I mean these many babies are here.Were their parents dead or..

Ms.Rosy:No Mr.Khurana..not all their parents are dead.Some don't want girl babies.Few children are diagnosed with incurable diseases.Some are physically challenged.Their parents think them as a burden instead of blessing.Few babies were found at roads.Some kind hearted people bring them and here.

Maan:How they can be cruel to these small lives.

Ms.Rosy:All are not fortunate Mr.Khurana

Hearing this Maan thought of himself.He was also unfortunate as he couldn't get his parents love.But atleast he got love from Vikram and Neha.But these children..never they can get true love and care.He sighed and went to meet those little souls.

When Ms.Rosy announced that someone has come to meet them and give gifts,all the children left what they were doing and ran towards Ms.Rosy and Maan.

Ms.Rosy:Bachoon he is Mr.Khurana and he has come here to give u gifts.

All childrens' face lit up hearing the word gift.

Ms.Rosy:So 1st you all greet him.And Thank him for giving you the gifts.

All the children greeted him and thanked him for coming her in their own cute language.

Maan distributed the dress, gifts, eatables he brought to the children with the help of Ms.Rosy and other staffs.The children happy faces were worth watching.

Few children dragged Maan with them for playing.

He played with them.For the 1st time he forgot all his worries and he enjoyed with them.

The children took him with them to show their books.Some asked him to help them in studies.Maan happily did that.

Soon Geet too came to Smile Orphanage.The driver,Ramu kaka brought all the things inside.Geet too Ms.Stella and said the reason for her arrival.Ms.Stella thanked her whole heartedly for the help and took her to meet the children.The children were happy to see her too.Geet too gave what she brought for them.

The children who were sitting near Maan and learning ran as their friends called them saying that they are going to get new pencils,bags etc.All the children excitedly ran.Maan too stood up and went behind then. Maan was not able to see the person as the children hided the person.But he could hear the melodious voice for her laughter.Soon all the children moved as they got their gifts and he could see her Angelic face clearly.He was mesmerised by her 1st look.Maan was going on staring at Geet.Everything around him seemed to stop for a while.His eyes refused to blink.Her beautiful smile filled his dull life with brightness.

Maan was brought back when one of the children called him.

Child:Maan bhaiya aayiye humare saath.Humein Tables padna hai.Aayiye na!!He dragged Maan.Poor kid was finding to drag Maan.The child's voice not only brought Maan back from his admisring session but it grabbed Geet's attention too.

And their eyes Met!!😉


No precap😆 as i am struct in this point of the storyIf you have any ideas..plzz tell me😃


PS:All the pic credits and Gifs I took it from Google baba😆.The credits of those pics don't belong to me.😛



@All😃

Dear Summer season has started.Not only we are suffering from Heat but other living organisms too.Please keep a bowl of water in your terrace for the birds..About animals we can't keep water for them in terrace😆

Edited by Madhu.. - 9 years ago


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Finally Updated😆PMs later!!
Thanks for the likes and comment on previous update dears🤗


I understand!!The story is going in a snail pace...But I couldn't help much...Sorry😒
Edited by Madhu.. - 9 years ago
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hi thanks 4 da superb emotional update! well written! Feeling 4 Geet! Muskaan's 1st day! she complains 2 her parents! Geet gives Muskaan curd n sugar n she feeds Geet as well! Geet sad! she never gt her parents love! her inner feelings well portrayed! she only wants her parents love! she decides 2 go to the orphanage! Maan at the orphanage! he is sad seeing the kids n babies! at least he has Neha n Vikram! Geet arrives! Maan sees her n is bowled over! Geet sees him! they eyes meet! n u stopped😡 update soon

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