Kaise Mujhe...:The Perfect Mismatch-A Manan RomCom Ch21-A B(@119 122) - Page 14

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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow wat an amazing update...
Heee manan nd der nautanki harkate...
Sardar. Ji hahahahaha
Plzzz update new part soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
amazing u[date wating for next update
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Posted: 9 years ago
thanks for the pm...

update was awesome and hilarious...

but mujhe jo baat achi nahi lagti main use kehne se hesitate bhi nahi karti hoon...

although it was just for fun but u shouldn't use sardar ji...u can use simple other person like that...

u can write like that...

aise particulary kisi ko point out karna it's not good...why to make fun of sardars always??

after reading their convo it was feeling like k someone is saying that sardars are nonsence people...they don't have any sence,,,,,,

aap yaha pe simply sardar ji ki jagah pe other person bhi to likh sakte the na...

being from a sardar family i didn't like it...

update was amazing...funny tha,,,,but the way u pointed out sardar .,...i didn't like it...

everyone deserve respect,,,,,

sorry if i hurt u but mujhe jo acha nahi laga maine vo kaha...nothing personal...

i hope u understand...

i appologise again if i hurt u...

keep smiling

and keep going...


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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: reet0143

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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">update was awesome and hilarious...</font>
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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">but mujhe jo baat achi nahi lagti main use kehne se hesitate bhi nahi karti hoon...</font>
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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">although it was just for fun but u shouldn't use sardar ji...u can use simple other person like that...</font>
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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">u can write like that...</font>
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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">aise particulary kisi ko point out karna it's not good...why to make fun of sardars always??</font>
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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">after reading their convo it was feeling like k someone is saying that sardars are nonsence people...they don't have any sence,,,,,,</font>
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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">aap yaha pe simply sardar ji ki jagah pe other person bhi to likh sakte the na...</font>
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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">being from a sardar family i didn't like it...</font>
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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">update was amazing...funny tha,,,,but the way u pointed out sardar .,...i didn't like it...</font>
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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">everyone deserve respect,,,,,</font>
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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">sorry if i hurt u but mujhe jo acha nahi laga maine vo kaha...nothing personal...</font>
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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">i hope u understand...</font>
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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">i appologise again if i hurt u...</font>
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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">keep smiling</font>
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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">and keep going...</font>


I m really sorry if it hurt ur sentiments...it was not intended...I hav just copied the jokes from a website.
Thanks for pointing it out as I m new in writing...I will keep this in mind while writing the next parts.
No personal issues with anyone.
Please ignore this mistake of mine coz aage se aesha nhi hoga.
Keep Reading.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Prachi55

I m really sorry if it hurt ur sentiments...it was not intended...I hav just copied the jokes from a website.
Thanks for pointing it out as I m new in writing...I will keep this in mind while writing the next parts.
No personal issues with anyone.
Please ignore this mistake of mine coz aage se aesha nhi hoga.
Keep Reading.


hey pls don't say sorry...maine is liye nahi bola k ap sorry bolo,,,,,,,i just wanna convey my msg and u understand that it's more that enough for me...and am again sorry agar maine kuch jyada bol diya ho...and if u wanna say sorry na then pls update soon...then ur sorry will be accepted...heheh😆😆...on a serious note pls update soon...

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Posted: 9 years ago
I just read ur story. .
all parts in one go.
.ThaT was one amazing hilarious..
Oh god their nok jhok...
just mindblowing.

concept is niceee..

waiting for next update.

continue soon. .

Love Geet
keep smilling. .
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Posted: 9 years ago
Mind blowing
So funny
Waiting for next part
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Posted: 9 years ago
hilarious update🤣
finally manik didn't slapped her...
and nandini ne kya dialogue mara😆
manik brought water for her...but i thought that they broke the bed
so manan are going to manik's grandma's house...and she is strict😲
waiting for grandma's and nandini's tashan
mukti has done nandini's packing that means she has definitely something 😉
sardarji🤣adhaar card😆and logic of typing slow😆
waiting for manan's next dhamaka
precap😲continue soon dear
thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
O god that was hilarious continue soon will be waiting take care
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Posted: 9 years ago
Chapter - 6

Nandini started driving and Manik was instructing her the way. They had to drive for 2 hrs in order to reach Nani's house.

N: Manik I m hungry.

M: Wait a minute, I hav packed the RAITA...I will take it out.

N: MANIK...Please take out the raita...this time I will make u eat it.

M: Shitt u must have told me b4...driver took our luggage...but..On a serious note, I m also hungry...there is a Cutting Chai Shop (Tea Shop) nearby...we can stop there.

N: Ok.
They reached the shop and settled down. Nandini took out her phone to call Mukti inorder to inform them that they hav reached safely.

N: What the hell! In this hurry I forgot to charge my phone and hav not even kept the charger.

M: How responsible!! One can expect only this from u.

He tooks out his phone and informs Mukti that they hav reached safely.

N: Which charger u r having? I mean show me the size of the pin.

M: Dumbo I m having an IPhone and even if it fits in ur phone... I won't share my charger.

A boy comes to take the order. Manik orders Tea and Sandwich.

N: But I need to charge my phone. I hav to use fb, insta, twitter... no I want my battery.

Suddenly a teenage boy of about 14 yrs came to them. He forwarded his phone to Nandini.

Boy: Di does ur phone have the same pin.

N: (After checking) Yess...(says happily)

B: Di I leave nearby... give me ur phone I will charge nd bring it to u in an hour...till then u both finish ur meal.
M: Thanks but no need.
N: Manik u don't interfere...ya u take my phone and we will wait...bring it back fast.
B: Okay.
M: Just give us a minute.
B: Ok u both decide till then I will pay my bill nd return to u.
M: R u crazy?? U don't know him how can u give ur cell to him. He make be a thief.
N: Listen he is a small boy. I just want my phone charged...u don't worry.
M: As u wish...bt first give it to me.
Nandini hand overs her phone to him...He takes out the sim and SD card.
M: This is for safety and no more arguments.
Nandini gives her phone to the boy...and they start eating their meal.
After finishing there meal, they were waiting for that boy. It had been more that an hour but there was no sign of him.
The shopkeeper came to inform them that they were closing the shop as weather is threatening and there can be snowfall any moment.
Manik informed them that they were waiting for that boy.To which the shopkeeper replied "He will never come back. U hav been cheated."
Manik gave her a I told u look. Nandini looked down in guilt. They left.

In the Car:-

N: Sorry...I should hav listened to u.

M: Happy Realization Jaan!!
Manik's phone rang.
M: Hello.
No yaar how can I forget u? You are to my bae.
Obviously I m here for my honeymoon only because u live here...U know this na...I m missing u more...Let me reach there...I will hurry... U too take care...Love u...see u soon.(This was heard by Nandini).

She fumed in anger.
N: Who is it?
M: Wo Alya
N: Ur girlfriend??
M: Yeah
N: Manik u r having a girlfriend and u never told me...I mean I m ur wife and u ditched me.
M: Hold on Jaan...we r married yesterday and hardly ever talked before that...when was I supposed to tell u?
Again the phone rang...
M: Ya baby speak...
Nandini in anger took a
sharp turn and THUD...
They banned to tree and Manik phone fell down.
M: Are u blind?? Look u broke my IPhone.
N: No sweetheart u r blind... u were talking to ur gf infront of ur wife.
M: (Trying to assemble his phone) Damn it...I m unable to switch it ON. Now how we will interact...ur phone is stolen and my broken.
N: Thats ur mistake.
She tries to start the car but was unsuccessful. They moved out to see what was the fault. Dense smoke was coming out from the car.
N: Thank God...we both are safe.
M: What makes u think so?? Look around we r on a lonely street and snow has started falling...moreover I cannot see any human or lodge nearby.

N: Don't worry...we will take lift.

M: And who will come to give u lift?

Suddenly a jeep came and stopped near them. It had four young boys in it.

B1: Young lady do u need a lift?

M: No thanks.

N: No we need it.

B2: We means u both r together... .hopefully he is not ur boyfriend.

N: No not at all I m single...wo he is to my cousin's friend's fiance's brother.

B2: So he is ur brother...??

M: No I m his husband.

B1: Beautiful what he is saying??

N: Just a minute.

Takes Manik aside,

N: Do u think after knowing that we r couple...they will give us lift.

M: Nandini its not safe to travel with them. Lets wait for another vehicle.

N: This is ur girlfriend's road...right?? That every 5 minutes a car will come. They hav luckily come and don't worry we will be safe.
After all we both know Karate.
*************
Manik POV

They are staring her with fishy looks and they are even having hockey sticks and a bike in the jeep...It won't be safe to travel with them.
***************

Manik took one of the men aside and said...

M: Unfortunately she is my wife...( showing him his wedding pic which Mukti has placed in his wallet).
Two years ago when we were going on our honeymoon... we met a small accident... after which like this only we asked for lift...a group of 4 men like this only stopped for giving us lift...but they misbehaved with her...She received such a shock that she lost her memory... Sometimes she even call me her brother and she runs and come here everyday to look for those boys and to take her revenge... and today u all hav come...I don't know what she will do now...I m really scared...mental hospital has even given her electric shock but nothing happened.

B: Bhai don't cry...bhabhi will get well soon. You take our bike but it has only very less fuel.
M: Don't worry we will manage...but how will I return it to u? U give me ur no. and take mine.
They left after giving Manik his bike and no. as soon as possible. Nandini was standing there shocked as she didn't had any idea what was happening.
The snow has started falling very heavily. They were riding the bike so they were getting wet and as the night was proceeding the chill was increasing. Finally they spotted a cottage ( Hero heroine jb bhi jaate h to ek romantic cottage mil jata h...yeh mat puchhna kha se aaya. )

They reached inside to spent the night... the were fully drenched with snow...both were trembling... Manik looked inside the cottage to see anything that could provide them heat...after a struggle of about 15 minutes... he came with few dirty bottles.

N: What is this?

M: Wine...it will provide us heat to survive...see the weather we can die of cold if we sleep like this in these wet clothes.

N: Look I don't drink... U r a sponge not I.

M: Okay as u wish then die.

N: (Holds his hand) Wait what's the prove that this is wine... it could be something else poison or something.

M: As u said I m a sponge... I know its smell.(Manik drank the bottle). Now feeling a bit better.

Nandini was shivering with cold but was not ready to drink.

M: I have another idea to do away this cold.

N: W..hh...a.t?

M: Lets hav sex ?

N: W*F... U r asking me...do u want to die?? ( She said giving him a I will kill u look )

M: U don't worry...Cabir my frnd who visted this morning has given me protection... nothing will happen to both of us.

N: Nooo...I m a virgin...I can't.

Manik pinched her arms.

M: Same pinch...I too am a Virgin. Don't worry every one has a 1st time.

N: I m feeling cold... stop ur bullshit.

M: Haven't u seen the movie "Aa Gale Lag Jaa"...it clearly showed in this kind of weather u can save ur life by having sex as it can provide u warmth. Its a medical fact.
Part B ahead...<3<3
Edited by Prachi55 - 9 years ago

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