new ss:Ur My soul part 1 updated on page 1

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Posted: 9 years ago
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hi everyone...

as we see so many is here.. I am thinking to start a new ss (short story ) on our fav mikhail n baby .. what say.. I know its too early to start the ss but what to do I am mad of d4 so what say

prologue :page 1
part 1:page 1


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Yeah go ahead...do whatever you want to.
We guys are just waiting :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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k guys hope u like here I am giving just precap .. if u all like it I will continue..


precap:

as seen in the precap of Friday episode mikhail leaves netra's dance. n sees the baby dance i will continue from here..

but actually he nt seen her whole dance.. he just seen the last part of her dance.. ..

baby sees that mikhail is standing at the door she just stopped dancing..

mikhail comes close to her...

mikhail: aise music par hilne ko dance nahi kehethe bai. . maine kaha tha na ki kabhi dance nahi karna.. thum kisike baath nahi manogi na...
baby's eyes r moist by hearing this from the person whom she think as her idol..

mikhail sees at her his heart senses some kind of hurt inside but he ignore that n goes from there..

baby still stood there looking in the direction of mikhail..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wowww..its really nice..do continue soon waiting for it..😳 quite possible aaj ke episode mein Mikhail reacts dis way only..eagerly waiting
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ekyyy

Wowww..its really nice..do continue soon waiting for it..😳quite possible aaj ke episode mein Mikhail reacts dis way only..eagerly waiting

thank u so much... keep reading
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Though i really want mikhail to see baby's dance in serial... But wo also should have other options available for our mihar dose ..

Soo Plzzz continue😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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hi.

k girls I think I need to update the first part now.. r u ready for it..

I have few things to say..

all plz give feedbacks may be positive or negative..keep reading




part 1:


night in baby home(I mean bua ka ghar guys)

sonam:sonam forget it na...

baby:how can I sonam. he is my idol n he says I don't even know dance.. I know I m nt good dancer but I dance for myself .. he said that koi haath hilanese dancer nahi bantha.muje bhura lag raha hai ki mikhail ne dhantha...

amar: usme kounsi nayi bath hai behena.. vo tho thuje hamesha dhanthe rehetha hai..

baby:shut up amar..

sonam:ohh... tho thum isliye sad ho ki mikhail be dhantha naki is liye thumhare dance ke bareme kaha..

baby:sonam thum phir se start nahi hojavoo... I need to sleep bye..mai jarahi hu..she went from there..


sonam:mere bina tere ghar kaise basega baby.. abh dekhna mai kya karoongi...

amar:kya karnewali hai..

sonam:dekhthe rehe patha chalega..



in academy:

mikhail was sitting thinking something ..

the flashes of the baby's dance comes in front of his eyes..


mikhail to himself: is am I wrong in scolding her? she was hurt by my words how can I hurt her.. y I am nt able to see her sad face...?is what I seen is true.. vo sach me ithne ache se dance karlethi hai ya..

mikhail want r u thinking that girl can't be a good perfprmar.. she is just a cheater..

then she thinks of aneri character .. meri aneri innocent hai.par iske dance me vo innocence tha.. ye apne dance ko enjoy kar rahi thi akheleme bilkul mere aneri jaise..


ye kya soch rahi hu mai.. she can't do dance...dance ka mathlab bhi patha nahi hai use



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Posted: 9 years ago
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Short update but loved it
😊 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: nehal5913

Short update but loved it
😊 😆

thank u
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Posted: 9 years ago
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hai dear...nice story...i love it...can u pm me the next chapter pls...

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