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Hola people.. Here I am back with an OS on MaNa and its inspired by movie Sadma. Only the basic info I took from there the rest of the story I weaved on my own. Although Sadma never had a happy ending for the love birds but this being a MaNan story I brought them together..

Hope you all will like it. Waise I'm ready for chappals and tamatars too...
Enjoy reading the OS and you know what you have to do after reading hit the LIKE button and leave your precious comments..

MaNan - Intezaar



Present day, Chennai

It was a calm beautiful rainy night in Chennai. The rains were lashing in the city in full force after a sweltering summer bringing in the much needed relief for the denizens of the city. In fact it has been raining cats and dogs since morning. Although chennai had a very good monsoon but today's rain was unusual, never ever they have seen rain so furious as if the nature wanted to tell a story; a story of love, longing, losing and never ending intezaar.

Oblivious to the story that nature was telling a 25 year old girl was sleeping peacefully in her bedroom. She was Nandini, a budding architect. It has been an eventful Saturday for her as she along with her sister mukti had a great time enjoying the rains. They were sisters, best friends and everything in short they were mirror of each other's thoughts. Nandini's father was an army officer and was currently posted in far north east and she lost her mother when she was mere 10 years old and since then mukti has been both her mother and her sister. Mukti was more of a rebellion, she was the perfect tomboy where as Nandini was a shy soul only open to her sister and her best friend Navya. Nandini and navya both grew up as neighbours and best friends , same school, same college everything together like mirror images to each other.

Suddenly Nandini's peaceful slumber was disturbed by sudden flashes. She saw herself travelling in a bus sitting alongside navya but it was all blurry a negative filtering kind of image. She could see herself chatting and enjoying with her while soaking in the nature. She could see hills and valleys all around and suddenly there was an accident and she was falling off a cliff and everything went blank. And then there was a boy, tall like really tall; Nandini could see herself laughing, playing and jumping with that boy. they were running in the valley laughing and happy and again it all went blank. After a while she again saw herself sitting in a train as it pulled out of a small station and she saw the same boy running behind her calling "Nandini!" He was crying and begging "Nandini mujhe chod ke mat jao. It's me.. M" and her dream broke.

Nandini sat on her bed panting, she was sweating badly even though it was quite chilly. "M" what is this M? Who is this M? What was all that I saw. It was me but what happened? Who was that boy, I was happy smiling then why I left him, what was that place? There were questions all around but no answers. Nandini felt a pit in her stomach and pain in her heart; something someone was calling her. She was confused, she tried to sleep but it seemed her sleep, her peace was with that boy. Who is that boy all these years I never felt anything in fact I don't even have someone like that in my group. She kept on flipping positions fighting all the questions.

It was 7 in the morning when Mukti walked in the kitchen to make coffee when she saw Nandini standing next to coffee machine and staring at the wall blankly. "Nandu!" She called her "baby what's wrong? You didn't sleep last night. Kya hua?" She brought nandini to the dining table and placed coffee in front of her. Nandini took a deep breath and said "I saw a weird dream mukti." Mukti frowned not knowing what she was saying. Nandini explained her everything the bus, accident, the hills, the boy but how it was all blurred. "M" and before I could hear his name my sleep broke but those visions are real mukti but what is it?"

Mukti sighed and said "I guess its time." Nandini gave her a puzzled look and said "time for what?" Mukti walked to the window and said "time for you to know the truth. It happened 5 years back. You were on a college trip to Ooty but unfortunately your bus fell in a valley and you guys met with an accident. Navya died in that accident and you went missing. We searched for you everywhere but no one knew where you were gone. It was like you have vanished into thin air. One year passed and we gave IP hopes for you to be alive. Then suddenly one day you were standing at doorstep after one whole year of that dreadful accident. When we asked where were you; you couldn't remember anything and the doctors said that memories of one year are suppressed by your brain and we should not pressurise. After 4 long years its all coming back." She turned to look back at nandini who was shocked. "I don't remember one whole year of my life. I need to know mukti." Nandini said and mukti nodded in agreement and called someone.

After an hour Nandini and mukti were sitting in neurosurgeon Dr Abhimanyu's cabin. Abhimanyu was mukti's fiancee and Nandini's doctor. "Ok nandini now we will do a brain exercise where I will try and extract those repressed memories of your brain. Don't be scared Mukti and I are sitting right here ok." Abhimanyu said and Nandini nodded in affirmation. "Cool now close your eyes and focus on the day of your college trip to ooty." Nandini closed her eyes and channelised all her concentration on her college picnic trip to Ooty.

Flashback, 5 years back

Nandini was hella excited for this trip, she couldn't sleep whole day and now standing near the college bus she was falling asleep. "Uff nandu what is this man?" Her off navya hit her to wake her up. "Let me sleep na please. I was so excited for this new year's in Ooty trip that I didn't sleep whole night. Two days later we will welcome new year in Ooty. Yay too much fun" Nandini screamed in excitement. Soon the announcement was made and all the students boarded the bus. It was fun and floric all the way as they left the hustle bustle of chennai and made their way towards the calm and serene hills. Nandini took the window seat as she sat enjoying nature and her off navya's company. They both were talking and having fun. Soon the day passed and it was almost nightfall when they started their journey for the valley's. The hilly terrain brought the ghats and blind curves. Nandini was scared looking at the deep valleys when navya said "chill nandu and enjoy." Nandini smiled and soon they all fell asleep. Nandini's sleep broke in the middle of the night with sudden jerk and before she knew what's happening around her she felt a sharp pain in her hand and soon her head it a window and she was thrown out and everything went blank.

Present day

Nandini woke up screaming and panting. Abhimanyu and Mukti ran to her; Abhi got her water as Mukti wiped her sweat. "We had an accident and I was thrown out of bus before I lost my conscience." She said with tears in her eyes. Mukti hugged her yo calm her down "let's go home." Mukti said but Nandini refused saying "no mukti I'm not going anywhere till I find my truth." Abhi nodded in assurance to mukti and nandini again closed her eyes.


Flashback, somewhere in the hills


Nandini slowly opened her eyes and found herself lying on a hospital bed. She tried to move but her whole body ached especially her head and her right hand. "Ahh" she hissed in pain as she again made another attempt but failed, she was about to go off balance when two strong arms held her and took her in their embrace. She didn't knew who as it but she felt safe in those arms, she felt chaste. She slowly lifted her eyes to see the face and found two deep brown eyes and a beautiful smile looking at her. "Are you ok?" He asked as na dini looked at him all puzzled. He was tall like really tall in front of her petite frame. He made her sit comfortably and continued "I guess you had an accident I found some villagers trying to attack you in your unconscious state. I saved you brought you here. Its been three days you were unconscious." He informed her.

"Who are you?" Nandini asked and he grinned sheepishly "oops I forgot to introduce my self. I'm Manik." He said "and you?" He asked looking at nandini. "Nandini" she replied. "Cool nandini give your phone number I'll call your family and inform." Manik said. Nandini closed her eyes trying to remember but failed and she felt a sharp pain in her head. 'Aahh I don't remember anything" she screamed. "Nandini relax." Manik panicked as she shouted for doctor. Soon the doctor ran in and gave some sedatives to nandini which calmed her down and put her to sleep.

Doctor gestured manik to come out. "Mr Manik I think she lost her memory as the cause of accident." The doc said but manik protested "but doc how's that possible she told me her name." The doctor smiled and said "its possible. In some cases the patient remembers their name but nothing else. Apart from this she's fine you can take her home." Manik nodded in yes and moved towards nandini's room.

It was dark when Nandini opened her eyes, she was still feeling heavy and the pain was less due to the effects of medicines. She tried to get to get and finally was successful after few attempts. She looked around and realised she's in someone's home and not in hospital. But whose house was it? She was scared for sometime until she heard few voices and one was a familiar one. "Manik!" She whispered as she stood and starred taking baby steps towards the voices.

Manik was sitting on the bar counter of his log house along with his best friend and his soul brother cabir. "Tu use ghar le aaya?" Cabir exclaimed in disbelief. "Manik you relaize what have you done. Who is she and what is she we don't know anything and you brought her home to live with you." Cabir waved his hands dramatically in air. "I don't know cabir why I brought here but when I looked into her big black eyes I saw innocence. The world is a bad place is cabir and she's too naive. I couldn't leave her alone not until she gets her memory back." Manik gave his clarification. "And if that never happens then what?" Cabir asked and before Manik could answer they heard a sound and found nandini standing in a corner teary eyed. Her tears were evidence that she heard the conversation. Manik sighed and walked to her, picked her in his arms and walked to her room.

He layed her in bed and tucking in said "I'll bring soup." Before he could leave Nandini held his hand and said "mujhe chod do manik. Kyun mere jaise ek annjane ke liye apni family se lad rahe ho?" She was choking trying hard not to cry. Manik smiled and sat near her " nandini chahe kuch ho jaye main tumhe kabhi naho chodonga. And rahi baat family ki toh I don't have a family and woh he's my best friend. You don't worry about him." He said all this cupping her face and wiping the tears that just won't stop flowing. Nandini crashed into his embrace startling him and said "promise you won't let me go." He hugged her back and said "I promise. Now wait I'll get your soup."

The next few days were spent by manik healing nandini both physically and emotionally and nandini discovered time knowing her saviour. She even formed a good bond with cabir who later came and apologised for his comments. Cabir and Nandini became best friends, brother sister and partners in crime who would love to trouble manik; and manik and nandini were struck somewhere between love, unsaid emotions, friendship, gratitude and much more.













(Manik's Log House)

Nandini found out that manik was a musician and ran a small music school in the town and the town was kunnur. She discovered that Manik was just not Manik but Manik Malhotra a leading industrialist who left everything after a terrible accident killed his whole family and his fianc. He came to kunnur for peace without even informing cabir and settled here starting a music school. Cabir was Manik's best friend who stood by him when there was no one for him. He encouraged manik to start a music school here in hope that music would heal him, he also encouraged Manik to find love again but Manik refused saying that for him love can't happen twice until nandini walked into his life again through an accident.

Nandini felt her heart pierced hearing his story, she had lost her memory but she knew somewhere someone would be waiting for her in a place called home but Manik he had no where to go home, no one to call his own. Cabir wiped her tears and said "you love him ? Don't you?" Nandini was shocked she didn't knew if it was love or what but she sure respected him a lot. "No no cabir I respect him very much and it's not love" nandini replied. Cabir smirked and said "are you sure Nandini?" "I guess." She murmured softly. "Nandini life has given you and Manik both a second chance to start afresh don't let it go and this I am saying as a friend as well as a brother." Cabir patted her shoulder as he drove off leaving Nandini in deep thoughts about her feelings for Manik.

Whatever it was Nandini decided to heal Manik. She walked into the kitchen to make dinner for him. Manik walked home around evening and nandini welcomed him with a smile but Manik sensed her sadness behind her fake smile and asked "what's the matter Nandini?" She didn't say anything but moved towards him, Manik was a little taken aback by her behaviour but then she suddenly cupped his cheeks and said "give life another chance Manik." And ran away crying; Manik stood there for sometime registering all that happened. He caressed his cheeks and said with a smile "I'm ready for life."

A lot of things changed after that day, there were some emotions which were finding name called care , concern and undying love; well they were yet to acknowledge the love part. Manik and Nandini kept on coming close to each other. She became the peace he was searching for and he became the answer to her every question. Although the love was not accepted yet but it was very much visible in their eyes. She would wake up to his music and he would love to sing for her. Intentionally or unintentionally she became his muse. She would wait wait for him to be back at home and he would sing her to sleep.

Sometimes you don't need words to tell a person what they mean for you, they say action speaks louder than words. Same was Manik and Nandini's case. Nandini had stopped thinking about her past, trying to find her identity because she found her present with Manik more beautiful and imagined a future with him. Manik's case was no different, the guy who had given up on everything in life after he lost everything found a reason to live with Nandini's arrival. There was a time when he would spend most of the time in his music academy not wanting to return but now days he would rush back home where he knew nandini would be waiting.

They would joke together pulling each other's legs, laugh on something that would never make sense, go for long walks, enjoy the rains together and soak in the sun together. It was one such rainy Sunday when manik and nandini were sitting in the porch and enjoying rains when nandini said "chalo na manik bheegte hain." And before he could react she dragged him in the rain. He sang while she danced when suddenly she slipped. But before she could hit the hard ground she found herself again safe in his embrace.

The rain, those unsaid emotions, the proximity, the touch and the hot breaths did its magic when Manik pulled up Nandini close to him. They were drenched in rain with water dripping when manik slowly pressed her waist and started to walk till she hit the wall. Her hands went up at the back of his neck as a reflexive action when he bent down and placed a soft kiss on her forehead. She closed her eyes to feel his touch. He kissed both her eyes, her cheek and placed feather light kisses all over her neck and all Nandini could do was surrender herself to the love he showered. Manik looked up o see her closed eyes and quivering lips. He pressed himself a little more into her and bent down to claim her lips but before he could undo the distance between them his phone rang ruining their moment. Manik moved back as Nandini opened her eyes. She was blushing and smiling unable to meet his gaze. He bit his lower lip and said "Nandini!" But before he could complete she decided to run away all blushing and manik tan behind her to catch her.

But they say love is not love if it's easy, true love is always tested and it all comes down how strong is the love and the trust to stand tall in all trouble. As Nandini was running in rain the whole area was made up of rocks and grass which became slippery. She stepped on a rock which was all wet and slippery and fell hard hitting a rock. "Nandini!" Manik screamed as he was chasing her. He froze at his place seeing her drenched in blood. Her head was hurt and blood was oozing from it. He somehow gathered strength and brought her to the hospital.

Doctors examined Nandini and said "we can't say anything till she wakes up as you know she already had an injury at the same place. Otherwise this I'd not a very deep cut." Manik smiled faintly as the doctor walked away patting his shoulder. Manik sat near her and said "nothing will happen to you. You've given me a reason to live nandini. I love you and I can't let anything happen to you." He sat there for hours when doctor walked in and asked him to complete some formalities as he was also the trustee of the hospital.

Nandini slowly opened her eyes trying to figure out her surroundings and register where she was. "Hospital. Why am I here." She sat up caressing her forehead. "What happened to my college bus? Where's Navya? Mukti and dad would be looking for me." Just as she was murmuring in herself a nurse walked in and nandini rushed outside. The nurse tried to stop her but nandini left saying "let me go my family my sister is waiting for me and ran out."

Manik was talking to a panel of doctors when the nurse rushed in and said "manik sir woh Nandini." A strange fear engulfed Manik as he said "Nandini? Is she alright?" She nodded in yes but before Manik could heave a sigh of relief her words shook the ground beneath his feet. "She went away sir saying that mukti and dad will be waiting." "She got her memory back Manik." He sttod there numb as his worst fear came true today. He always feared what I'd Nandini remembers everything one day but the fear of losing her never let him go ahead with the thought and prepare himself for the reality. Today the reality stood in front of him and he was clueless. "Nandini!" He whispered as he ran towards the station.

He was driving recklessly as the fear of loosing her engulfed his heart. He soon reached the station and ran in looking for her everywhere. He saw her boarding a train and called "Nandini!" Nandini turned around but the look in her eyes sank his heart. He knew she forgot him, them and their love. She looked at him as if he was a stranger. "Nandini don't go." Manik said with tears making their way as he held her hand to plead. Sadly the reality was dangerous nandini jeked his hand off and said "leave me who are you?" She boarded the train and it started to move.

"Nandini! Nandini" Manik ran behind the train he came to her window and looked at her "its me manik. Nandini remember me I am Manik. Nandini please." She looked at him as if he is a mad person and looked away. "Nandini muje chod kar mat jao please. I can't live without you. I'm M.." But before he could complete he banged into a pillar and fell. There was blood oozing from his forehead, he probably broke his shoulder but he still tried to get up shouting her name all the while. He was calling her in the hope she looks and remembers the love, remember him. "Nandini! Nandini" Manik's voice started getting faint as he fell a little more harder every time he tried to get up. His vision blurred as the train gathered speed. Manik passed out and Nandini left forever without looking back even once.

Present day

Nandini sat up with a jerk with tears flowing non stop from her eyes. "Ma..Man..Manik" she called out his name, she remembered his love, him and them. Mukti and Abhimanyu were too numb to react even they were teary as how Nandini forgot him for four long years. But they secretly thanked gods for making her remember. "Mukti I want to.." Nandini could not complete. "We are leaving for kunnur tomorrow morning first thing" Abhimanyu announced as he and mukti hugged Nandini to console her.

The night was the longest night for each one of them especially Nandini. She was bogged down with qurstion; will manik forgive her? Will he remember and what if he moved on and found love again. It sacred her but somewhere she knew she needed to meet him and if he would have moved on she would seek his forgiveness and bless him but she was certain of one thing that no one can now take Manik's place in her life.

They started for kunnur early morning and reached there by late afternoon. Nandini told the directions to Manik's music academy to Abhimanyu as she thought he would be there but it was locked. She stood there disappointed when mukti said "maybe he's home." They all rushed to his home where Cabir was sitting in the lounge sipping tea and reading newspaper. "Cabir!" She called out and he froze at his place. He slowly put down the newspaper and looked at her trying to believe that she's here for real. By now Nandini's tears were not stopping "where's Manik?" Cabir too was crying and smiling too. "Wahin hai jahan tum use char saal pehle chod kar gayi thi Nandini. Woh aaj bhi tumhara wahin har roz intezaar karta hai. Kehta hai ek din wapis aaogi" cabir smiled between his tears.

Nandini ran into the station looking everywhere for him; her Manik who was waiting for her to come back to him. She was looking desperately everywhere when she heard a similar tune of guitar and his melodious voice. He was sitting in a corner singing for some street kids. He was smiling like as usual but that smile had sadness.

She walked slowly and went and stood behind him waiting for him to finish the song. "Manik!" She called softly and Manik who was smiling stood their frozen. Four years.. Four long years he waited to hear this voice, hear her call his name. He turned back to find her standing in front of him;' she still looks the same' he thought as she stood smiling in her tears. He touched her face to make sure she was real and not again his illusion.

She knew what he was going through so she cupped is face, tip toed towards him and whispered against his lips "I love you." And sealed her lips with his and Manik knew she was real. She came back to him, to their love and this time forever. Time stood still as they kissed to wipe each other's pain and seal the love.

Cabir, mukti and abhi stood there crying in happiness for them. "Aaj ek sadi ka intezaar khatam hua" cabir said as they moved away leaving manik and nandini in their own world; the world of love.

End of story.
Cioa..
Sweta..


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi Di
Already said abt it in wattpad
Again saying here
It was awesome
D beat OS I have read
And mind blowing
Love u di
And ur writing
Thanks for d pm di
Break but up to which time msg me na up to when u will be on leave
Will.be waiting for u di
Love
Prathyusha
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Just superb.
Too good!
Touched my heart 😊
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Emotional love story of manan but finally they found eachother and it was a happy ending
Awesome OS..beautifully penned..thanku for the pm :)

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Hey emotional story but amazing
MaNan mean to be together n forever
Lovely
Keep smiling
Thanks tc
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I am crying already,
it was just mindblowing,
love it.
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It was a hell beautiful one...
Luved it to the core...
Thnx for pm...
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Ohh god...
This was soo good...
D way d whole story is described is incredibly beautiful...
Soo pure, soo lovely,soo full of emotions...
I mean m out of words...
Sachi...
D story was soo nice...
I was seriously soo involved in it n could imagine everything in front of my eyes...
Lovely it was...
Thank u for this gift..
Thank you for d pm too...
Stay happy...
Stay blessed...
Keep smiling...
Keep writing...
Continue soon...
AVNEET... (AVI...)
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Heart touching OS...
loved it...
very beautifully penned down...
keep it up

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