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Noureen Mohammad

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First of all.. Thank you to all ZKD readers.. If it wasn't for you all dearies, i wouldn't have made it to thread 2. So a big hug from me to you all.. 😳

PS: I will edit and PM everyone this thread once I am ready to post the next chapter.
thank you to all of you, once again. 😉

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Chaper 16, Part 2

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Chapter 16, Part 2

*Knock knock*

Hamida looked at her door as she slipped out of her flashback.

"Come in." She said.

The cook came in, asking what he can take for tomorrows menu.

"Mr Bello; you can make anything tomorrow. I am sure Mirza will be out for lunch. But don't worry about making tomorrow's dinner, I will cook for dinner tomorrow, all Mirza's favorite dishes. My son had returned after so long, and he just went to sleep without eating. You may go and take rest now. I will manage tomorrow's dinner."

"Okay. Sure ma'am." Mr Bello said and made his way out leaving Hamida alone again.

Hamida sighs and lays back on her pillow, sliding her palms through her cheeks to head; she closed her eyes as she let tear roll out of her eyes, and slipped back into the flashback.

FLASHBACK

Hamida was shocked.
"Aap? Aap yahan kaise? Woh bhi abhi? Aap toh..."

[You? How are you here? That too now? You were...]

"KHAMOSHH." Humayun shouted.

[SILENCEEE]

"Abbu, what happened to your flight...?"

Jodha shocked to hear that person is none other than Jalal's father. Now she definitely felt as if this is her last few moments. Her heart was pumping so hard, she felt as if she will die of a heart attack today.

"Flight ki chor, yeh bata ke yeh sab kya ho raha hai?" Humayun asked Jalal with his teeth gritted, tightly.

[Forget about the flight, first tell me what the hell is going on here?]

Jalal could literally see the anger in his father, Hamida really got afraid, she cursed this moment, she didn't know how to control the situation.

"Aap shaant ho jaye, Bakshi, Jodha thore der ke liye bahar le ke jao" Said Hamida.

[Please calm down, Bakshi, take Jodha out for a while.]

Jodha looked at Jalal with teary eyes, she was about to burst into tears any moment.

"Ji ammi..." Bakshi replied.

[Yes ammi]

Jalal, I think i should leave now, I'll text you later' Jodha whispered to Jalal.

No, go with Bakshi for now. I'll call Bakshi when everything is calmed down.' Jalal whispered back.

But Jalal'

No buts or ifs, go with Bakshi, I'll call when everything's calmed here.'

"Bakshi, take Jodha." He added.

Jodha walked to Bakshi and soon they both slowly got out.

"Jalal, what the hell was this? And Hamida, how dare you allow all this happening in my house, that too when you knew I was not even going to be here for a whole week."
He added saying;
"Woh toh acha hua ke aaj acchanak se meeting ki date change ho jayi. Warna aap ka beta kya kya gul khila raha hai, woh toh hummein patta hi nahin chalta."

[Thank god that my meeting date changed last minute; otherwise I would not even know about all the crap that your son has been doing.]

"Suniye, aap hummare saath uppar chaliye, aap se akele mein kuch baat kanri hai." Protest Hamida.

[Listen, come up with me, I need to talk to you alone]

"Jo baat hai, yahin kahiye aap."

[whatever you want to talk about, say it here]

Mirza shook his head. He knows how his father hates all these things.

"Abbu, take a seat, calm down and please listen." Said Jalal.

Humayun sat down on the couch, followed by everyone else.
"Now what?" Humayun said.

Hamida next to her husband, giving him a sign not to tell Jalal about whatever he told her last night. Humayun was very pissed off, he looked at his wife and agreed to her for now.

"Abbu, I'm sorry about what you just saw, I agree it shouldn't have happened; but I have told ammi about her, she is my girlfriend abbu. Actually I didn't tell anyone about her until ammi asked the other night and asked me to invite her over today for lunch.. I thought of showing her to ammi, Bakshi and Mirza first, then show her to you. But I didn't know things wouldn't go as I thought." Jalal explained.

Humayun looks at Hamida shockingly.

"How come you asked to meet that girl? When you already knew.."

"Because I wanted to see my sons choice first." Hamida cut her husband in between.

Humyun stood up in anger. Hamida also stood up seeing her husbands temper.

"You already know what has happened; still you wanted to see your sons choice? HAMIDA, WHAT IS THIS?" Humayun yelled out and slapped his wife.

Jalal and Mirza also stood up, Jalal bolted towards his mother and caught her by her shoulders before she fell. "ABBU. HOW DARE YOU SLAP MY MOTHER LIKE THAT." Jalal roared.

Mirza almost ran to his mother, he got his ammi off Jalal and hugged her tightly side-ways as Hamida was crying.

"Abbu what the hell, why are you overreacting over this for. You got no rights to hurt or slap ammijaan."

"Bas, bas karo. Tumhare abbu zindagi mein kabhi mujhe tamacha nahin mara, aaj mara hai; kyunki iske peeche ek waje hai. Tum dono jao yahan se, hum mein tumhare abbu se kuch baat karni hai." Saying this, she wiped her tears away.

[Stop. Enough you all. Your Abbu has never slapped me in his entire life. Today he did, because there is a reason behind it. You two, leave us alone. I need to talk to your Abbu.]

"Reason? What reason ammijaan?" Jalal said.

"I will tell you." Humayun replied

"Nahin. Tum dono jao yahan se." Hamida repeated herself again.

[No, you two leave from here.]

"Hamida, this is about Jalal, and he has to know." Her husband stated.

Jalal got more curious about what his father is talking about.

"Make a start Abbu, what are you two talking about?" Jalal said.

"Well, two days ago..." Humayun started to tell Jalal what happened.

"And because of this, I need you to get married to his daughter, Anarkali."
Humayun finished off telling his sons about it.

Jalal and Mirza were shocked with what they just heard from their father.

"Did you really say all that Abbu?" Jalal shockingly asked.

"Yes. And Jalal, this is not just about the business, but it's about my respect too, I do not want my head down in front of media because of this. You do not have a choice son, you have to do what I said."

"Ammijaan?" Jalal looked at his mother who looked very guilty.

"Ammijaan why didn't you tell me this that night?" He asked his mother.

"Because I could see how much you love that girl, I wanted to see the girl first, and then tell your abbu about her. That's why I told you to invite her when your Abbu goes to Queensland, I knew your Abbu would not like this. But I never knew that his meeting dates would change and he would come back just when Jodha was over." Hamdia replied, trying to explain her son.

Jalal was very confused with what to do, but he was 100% sure and confirmed that he would not leave Jodha, for their business. He could ditch their business over Jodha, there was no way he was ready to let go of her at any cost.

Not too far away from the mansion, at the park; Jodha was worrying about what might be happening there. While Bakshi sat next to her, listening to her talking to her Kanha.
"Why did this happen haan? You could've stopped us from being caught na, then why, why did you decide for us to be caught?"

She stopped talking when she heard Bakshi giggling right next to her. Jodha gets annoyed and starts talking to her Kanha again.

"See, see. I don't think you're with me today. Kanha, how Jalal must be feeling right now. Why did you have to make Jalal's Abbu's entry right when me and Jalal were..."

And she again stops talking when she finally heard Bakshi burst out laughing loud.

"Jodha, what were you and bhaijaan doing?!" She laughed and asked.

Jodha pouted and sighed.

"Your Bhai wanted his daily dose from me."

Bakshi again chuckled asking what's his daily dose.

"Of course, he wanted his daily kiss from me. And that's exactly when your Abbu walked in on us."

"Oh snap Jodha. But I am wondering why Abbu got that angry. I mean, Abbu wouldn't get this angry, over that.. I mean Bhaijaan isn't his daughter, if it was me in bhaijaan's place, Abbu would've slapped me. But Jodha, it's just bhaijaan... There must be some reason why Abbu got this cut."

Jodha deeply heard Bakshi got lost in deep thoughts.

After a minute, Bakshi shook Jodha's shoulders and asked her;

" where are you lost? What are you thinking about?"

Jodha looked at Bakshi and said;

"Bakshi, I was thinking about what you just said. I think you're right. There is something wrong for sure."

Humayun was getting enough of all this drama. He wanted to give his final answer to Jalal saying;
"Jalal, for your information, I cannot accept Jodha as the daughter in law of the Mohammad family. You know what will happen if you don't marry Anarkali. If you really want Jodha to become the daughter in law of this house; I don't mind. You will have to marry Anarkali, you can give Jodha to Mirza. And.."

"ENOUGH." Jalal cut his father in between and stood up in anger.
"First of all; you arrange my marriage with someone who I don't even know. Next you say I have to marry her, then you say I have to leave Jodha, then you say I can give Jodha to Mirza? Abbu, that is disgusting of you. How can you even think that way; what if you and Ammi were in the same place as me and Jodha back then; what would you do, leave Ammi for your business?"

Humayun raised his voice a bit loud; giving Jalal a warning not to speak further about this involving his mother in it.
"JALal."He said is a stern voice.

"Why Abbu, it's not nice yeah? How can you say that, you've also loved someone. As far as me, I love Jodha. And I will not leave her, no matter what. Even if I had to leave my family for this." He replied.
The crying mother suddenly got shocked listening to her son saying he can leave his family for her. She got super angry on him.

"Jalal. How dare you say that. I agree, you love Jodha, but you can't leave your family over her."

"Ammi. My final answer is that I will not leave Jodha. That's all."
Saying this, Jalal made his way upstairs, storming inside his room, banging the door closed.

"Abbu, you didn't do right with bhaijaan; bhaijaan has done so much for you both; I am not happy with what you both have done with him." Shaking his head; Mirza also left the parents alone.

"Pick up Jodha, pick up the damn phone."
After the third ring; Jodha answered.

"Jalal?"

"Baby, where are you?"

Jodha heard Jalal, he sounded very tensed. She could hear him breathing heavily. She was wondering what had happened.

"Jalal what happened, are you okay?" She tried making sure. "Where the hell are you damnit." He yelled and hit his fist on the mirror, making hand bleed.Jodha heard something crushing into pieces. She got afraid. With tears in her eyes; she hurriedly answered him.

"I am at the park with Bakshi; it was 5mins away from your house."

"Okay. I'm coming. Don't go anywhere." He replied.

"Okay. Come soon Jalal."

Jodha being restless, keeps on walking up and down and up and down; making Bakshi dizzy.

"Jodha Jodha Jodha!!! Please sit down. You're making me dizzy." Bakshi complained.

"No Bakshi, I can't relax. I know something bad must've happened. For sure; I could tell by his voice. And not just that. I heard something crushing. Or breaking? Oh Kanha. Please; I hope Jalal is okay." She started crying thinking about Jalal.

Soon Bakshi and Jodha hears Jalal's car breaking very hardly. They both turned around and Jodha got happy seeing Jalal coming out of the car.

Jalal quickly came to Jodha and they both hugged each other tightly without wasting a second.
Jodha started sobbing in his chest where Jalal kept hugging her and caressing her head.

"Shh. Stop crying Jodha. Why are you crying for?" He asked.

"Bhaijaan, Jodha has been worried this whole time. Now only you can make her calm down."

Jodha broke the hug and looked at Jalal with tears in her eyes.

"Please tell me what happened?" She whispered to him.

Jalal didn't want his baby sister to know what their father has done. So he decided to tell Jodha in alone.

Looking in her eyes, he whispered back.
"Come with me."

Jodha nodded as Bakshi got irritated.

"Don't leave me alone here bhaijaan."

Jalal threw his keys to Bakshi.

"Go sit in the car then, I'll be back."

Bakshi caught the keys and wrinkled her nose.

As Bakshi started walking towards the car; Jalal grabbed Jodha's arm and took her behind a tree at the park.

Pushing Jodha's back against the tree; Jalal locked her between him and the tree; looking at her very intensely.

"Tell me now Jalal, I am getting worried." Jodha again said with her heavy and shaky voice and eyes filled with tears.

Jalal then slowly told Jodha what happened.

Jodha closed her mouth with her palm, being shocked. "Does that mean you will le-leave me?" She asked Jalal.

Jalal cupped her face in his palms and quickly replied her.
"God no Jodha. Even if I have to leave my family for this, I will. But I will not let you go away from me. Never."

Jodha loving looked at Jalal with her cute, shiny eyes filled with tears, she slowly bought her palms to her cheeks where Jalal's palms were. As soon as she was about to touch Jalal's hand, she noticed the blood on his hand.

"Jalal." She yelled.

Jalal looked at her, couldn't get why she yelled.
Jodha quickly took his hand in her hand and looked at the blood that was still slightly fresh.

"What is this. How did this happen, and why didn't you tell me?" She asked and directly ripped her dupatta apart.

"It's nothing Jodha. Don't worry about it too much." He responded to her.

"What do you mean it's nothing. Your hand is full of blood right now and you're saying it's nothing. How can you be so careless Jalal?" She snapped back at him and quickly tied the torn up dupatta on his wound.

Jalal looked at the way Jodha was nursing him. He felt a little guilty. He looked at her with a lot of love and told her;
"I love you so much Jodha." Jodha looked back up at him and whispered back to him.

"I love you too Jalal." She sobbed as she looked at him.

Coming closer to Jodha, Jalal bent down and kissed her. Closing their eyes, they both enjoyed that little peace they got after all the drama.
Under the tree, the wind was perfectly blowing her hair and dupatta around, the birds chirping around them, the sound of the birds and the wind was giving them extra peace. It was soothing their stress away.
They both broke the kiss and slightly opened their eyes. Looking at each other, they rested their foreheads with each other's, panting for air that they just lost in that passionate kiss they just had.

"Please don't. Leave me Jalal." Jodha whispered to him with short of breath.
Jalal shook his head.

"Never. It's my promise."

Jodha chuckled hearing his response, she threw herself in his arms and relaxed for a bit.

After 10 minutes of hugging, relaxing, without saying a word to each other; Jalal finally spoke.

"Let's go Jodha, Bakshi is waiting alone in the car."

Jodha broke the hug and looked up at Jalal.
He can tell she's cried a lot in his arms. Her eyes were red, puffy and swollen.

"Please baby. Don't cry any anymore, I don't like when your eyes are like this. I want to see my Jodha the way I always see her, nice and beautiful." He said.

"You won't leave me na." She suspiciously asked.

"No Jodha. Never. Please don't think I will leave you. I won't. I swear on our life." He replied.

Jodha smiled and nodded.

"Let's go, I'll drop you near by your house. I am just worried now; what have my parents done Jodha, I don't know how to make your parents agree for us now. Because since my father has.." Jalal stopped talking half way as he realized she was going to start crying again.

"Acha acha, chalo ab."

[ok ok, let's go now.]

Bakshi queitly sitting in the back seat, waiting for Jodha to get off the car. Jodha sitting at the front seat; notices that the car has stopped and that they're near her house.

"Give me a kiss." Jalal said.

Jodha leans forward and gives him a quick sweet peck before she leaves.

Bakshi at the back making faces, seeing her brother kissing a girl, she felt awkward sitting in the car behind them.

"Take care of yourself. Bakshi, make sure your bhaijaan eats. Take care of him." Jodha said.

"Don't worry about me Jodha, I'll be fine. You take care of yourself alright, I don't wanna see the same eyes I am seeing now. Your parents will find out if you don't be normal in front of them."

"I'll be fine." She said almost in a whisper.

They both smiled at each other. Jalal gave a quick kiss on her forehead and Jodha made her way out.

"Aa gayi maharani. Aao aao. Tera hi intezaar tha."

[Come in, welcome Queen. We were waiting for you only.]

Jodha kept her eyes down, she didn't want her mother or father to see her eyes like this.

"Neeche kya dekh ri hai? Idhar dekh." Mainawati said.

[What are you looking at down there; look here.]

Jodha sighed and slowly looked up. What she saw; shocked her to the core. She couldn't believe her eyes.

"Aap.. Aap dono. Yahan?"

[You.. You two, here?]

"Haan. Tera qartoot batane aaye hain yahan. Tujhe sharam nahi aayi. Tujhe aase sanskaar diye the maine?"

[Yes. They've come to tell us about the crap you've been doing. Aren't you embarrassed of yourself? I did not teach you all this right?]

Jodha didn't know what to say. She was too shocked seeing Jalal's parents in front of her, at her house. Without saying a word; Jodha ran upstairs to her room crying out loud.

Mainawati shook her head in disbelief.

Up in the room Jodha dailed Jalal's number and Bakshi answered.

"Hello?"

"Bakshi. Give the phone to Jalal. Now." Jodha said.

Bakshi hurriedly gave the phone to her brother.

"Hello?"

"Jalal. Listen."

"Jodha? What happened, you seem pretty screwed up?" Jalal said.

"Jalal listen. Your parents are here at my house. They told everything to Maa Sa. I don't think Baapu Sa is home. But now Maa Sa knows everything Jalal. Do something. I don't want to be captured here like a bird in its cage. I know Maa Sa will lock me up at home 24/7 since she found out everything. Do something Jalal. Come and take me please. Take me with you." Jodha cried.

Jalal quickly took a U turn and made his way to Jodha's house on full speed.

"Jodha don't worry; I am coming. Don't say or do anything stupid. Wait for me." He replied and cut the call.

"Mrs. Singh, I know my son will not leave your daughter. There's only one way, to make this possible." Said Humayun.

"And how's that?" Replied Mainawati. She was lost, she didn't know what action to take. Her husband wasn't home, he was at his office. She needed to talk to her husband about this, then take an action.

"Knowing my son, he won't leave your daughter. If you can convince your daughter to leave my son; I will pay you what ever amount you say first."

Hamida was shocked at her husband. She didn't expect him to say this.

"Mr. Mohammad." Mainawati shouted and stood up.

Hamida and Humayun also stood up.

"What do you think I am. I myself do not want my daughter in this relationship. I would be very happy if I get my daughter back on track. I do not want any kind of money or amount from you for this." Mainawati snapped at Humayun.

"Suniye, she is right. We have to take this case slow and easily. If we rush it and take harsh steps for Jalal and Jodha; they might take stupid decisions. Please try to understand." Hamida explained her husband.

Suddenly then a voice came from behind.

"Either way if you separate me and Jodha; we will take the best decision for ourselves, not stupid decisions." Jalal said in a calm and stern voice.

"Jalal? Bakshi?" Hamida said as she could now sense something was going to be wrong here.

"Why Ammijaan, I can ask you and Abbu the same thing. What are you two doing here?" Replied Jalal.

Jodha came running downstairs. She stopped at the last step, one hand holding the staircase bar and the other on her heart. Jalal and Jodha looked at each other; Jodha has tears in her eyes. Bakshi stood quiet watching everything like everyone else.

Mainawati looked at her daughter and thought how shameless she is.

"Yahan kya hai, uppar ja besharam lardki."

[What's her? Go up you shameless girl.]

The exact time Bharmal came back from his office and looked at some unknown and some known faces. He stood quite shocked seeing Mr Humayun and Mr Jalaluddin Mohammad at his house. He was going to say something but Jalal's voice stopped him. He stopped and watched.

"Aunty, Aunty; please calm down." Jalal quickly came near Mainawati. Putting his arms on Mainawati's shoulders; he made her sit on the couch.
Mainawati looked away seeing his warmth. She was somewhat a little touched by his action. The way he made her sit with so much respect, she didn't know what to do, what to say and where to look. But she was sure that she can't look in his eyes. She sat down quietly, looking at floor; trying to ignore Jalal's face.
Jalal on his feet; bobs down and places his hands on Mainawati's knees. Looking at Mainawati with a lot of hope in his eyes and said;
"Aunty. I know Jodha is your daughter. And of course I know how a mother and father would feel when they find out that their daughter has a boyfriend. I am sorry for this Aunty, but me and Jodha really love each other."

Mainawati looked in Jalal's eyes to see if what Jalal is saying is right or wrong. She saw so much love in his eyes for her daughter. She again looked down as Jalal continued.
"I can tell you Aunty, loving Jodha so much, she is still pure. I have not touched her in the wrong way, how I shouldn't be before marriage. I shouldn't be telling you all this, but I need you all to know how much I love her. If you all say no to me and Jodha, I will promise you all that if I can't marry Jodha, I will not marry anyone else, ever in my life. But if you or your husband forces Jodha to get married to someone else and Jodha is against it; I will not tolerate that. I might come and take Jodha away with me.

Hamida, Bakshi and Humayun all looked at Jalal. They all know whatever Jalal says, he surly does it.
"Jalal." Humayun called.

Jalal raised his arm up to his father; indicating him that he is not yet finished.
"My final words Aunty, if you say no to me and Jodha, that's fine. But never force Jodha to get married to anyone else against her will. Otherwise, she will be mine then."

Mainawati looked at Jalal in anger.
"She's my daughter, I can get her married to who ever I like."

"Of course you can. But if Jodha is against it; then I won't tolerate that. Is that clear?" Jalal snapped back at her.

"Jalal." Jodha called him before her mother snapped back at him.

Everyone looks at Jodha.

"Can you come upstairs with me, I need to talk to you."

Jalal looks at Mainawati, trying to get her consent.
Mainawati gave a nod to him and looked away.

Without wasting a second, Jodha and Jalal then walked up to Jodha's room leaving the parents downstairs..

*PRESENT*
Jalal opens the door and sees Jodha's doctor at the door.

"Oh hello. Please come in." Jalal welcomed her.

"Thank you Mr Mohammad. I don't understand why you suddenly called me here."

"Actually doctor.."

"Jalal?" Jodha came.

Jodha watches her doctor in front of her.

"Oh hello. You suddenly here?" Jodha asked.

"Jodha, go inside the room, were coming in a minute." Jalal said.

Jodha felt weird for a moment. But without saying anything, she went inside.

When Jalal was sure that Jodha is gone inside, Jalal told the doctor everything and asked to do a check up on Jodha.

The doctor and Jalal came in, seeing Jodha sitting on the bed thinking something.

"Baby" Jalal called her.

"Yes, come in. Jalal you didn't tell me what doctor is doing here now at this time?" Jodha asked.

"Oh yeah. Remember we missed am appointment and you were too tired to go, so I just called the doctor do a check up on you."

"Jalal I'm totally fine, you disturbed the doctor for nothing at this time.."

"No no, I am fine Mrs Mohammad. Come I'll do a check up on you. Please lay down." the doctor instructed.

Jodha signed and lied down in bed and the doctor started checking her up.
After a few minutes of silence, the doctor looked up at Jodha then she looked up at Jalal.

Jodha was worried thinking maybe something is wrong since she was bleeding and Jalal was worried thinking maybe something happened to their child since he wasn't allowed to intimate with Jodha.

"Is everything ok?" Jalal asked.

"Mr Mohammad and Mrs Mohammad..."

Jodha and Jalal looked on when the doctor stopped talking after taking their name.

Tears welled up in Jodha's eyes thinking she lost her child.

"What happened.. Doctor? Why are you staring at us like that for?" Jalal asked.

"Actually..."

PRECAP: Flashback to be continued.

I promise the flashback wont go for long. Hehe. Thank you so much for the patience guys! Please don't forget to LIKE and COMMENT as it motivates me to write further!
Love you all ❤️

Edited by mohammadnoureen - 9 years ago