Ishita SS - A Woman - Chapter 5 (Page 13) (August 6)

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Pasoori

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Posted: 10 years ago

#101

Absolutely, if you could infuse their happy moments into the narrative: that's my only suggestion!

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Posted: 10 years ago

#102

Originally posted by: sukanksha
Reserving... Proudly 😉 ... Bcz I m first 😛
Gonna unres soon pakka...

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I m back. ;)

First of all bravo girl... This kind of writing is the toughest to attempt even. N u r doing full justice to it.
Here u can't add clich romance. Ishita also in general every lady is so dependent on their husbands at least emotionally that can't think of their lives without them.
I loved how u described the scene where she saw him covered in blood.
Loved each and every word of Madhavi... A duty of daughter in law towards Her Home.
U think to mature of ur age. I m proud of you on that.
Why this story is getting less response????
It is totally different than others... But seriously romance k aage b life hai... Whatever
I love it
... N continue it even if on the snails speed

For you 👍🏼 🤗 👏

Proud res, nice!😆 Thank you so much, I am just writing what I have planned from an idea and I'm glad you think I'm going a decent job at it. I can add romance as flashback, but I will keep that at a minimal since this is about Ishita's story after Raman. I feel there are woman who completely rely on their husbands like this Ishita, but even independent woman slowly somewhat depend on their husbands eventually. And about this update, glad you liked that scene where she saw him injured and the scene with Madhavi. I'm happy you found her words sensible. I guess this isn't a typical storyline that will get that happily ever after and IshRa aren't together. That could be one reason for less response. And honestly there are some people like you who are reading this and liking iit , so that's enough for me too keep it going even if I am super slow. Thanks again for liking and commenting on this one!

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996541

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Posted: 10 years ago

#103

Originally posted by: sush_rddt
omg read all the parts in one go! its super emotional!
i cannot imagine raman and ishu not together!\prabh u r superb man.. have i told u that?
u have said the true words through amma!

Thank you so much Sush! I'm glad you liked this story! I know no one likes imagine Ishita and Raman separated, but this had to be done for the story. Sorry for killing Raman, but it had to happen. Thank you so much for liking the writing of it so much, it means so much! And glad you liked Amma's words. Thanks again for liking the story and commenting!

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Posted: 10 years ago

#104

Originally posted by: sukanksha

Update read karne se pehle hi uska reply de Doon.

Raat ko COL padha n slept 😆
Subbu uthi was waiting for my students to come and resed for this one.
In between three hours I think thei n I slept 😆
Mai aisi hi hoon.
Sunday ko saara weekly quota poora kar leti Hu.

3 hours?! And I thought I didn't sleep enough! That's crazy! Sunday you probably sleep through the day to catch up!😆 And what students do you have? Are you a teacher?

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Posted: 10 years ago

#105

Originally posted by: mystigue
emotional updates.
please add some happy flashback also like their first meeting, confession

Thank you so much! Will try to add flashbacks in the next few updates! Thanks for the feedback!

Originally posted by: kaa1202
Its a superb story.. Even though Raman is not there Ishita portrays both anger & pain really well. Amma rocked as she does in show always...

Thank you so much! I'm so glad you are enjoying the story even when Raman is not there. And happy you like the portrayal of Ishita's feeling as well as Amma's character. Thanks again for liking and commenting!

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Posted: 10 years ago

#106

Originally posted by: Badtameez_Dil_1
This part has to be the finest I've read!

I'm at a lack of words, honestly! I loved it ... it was definitely worth the wait Prabh... brilliant! This is a difficult genre but you're attempting it successfully with such ease! Mindblowing 👏

Thank you so much! I'm so glad you liked it and found it worth the time! Thanks for thinking this lives up to the exceptions from this genre! Really a huge thank you for getting me to write this story, it is really something I enjoy writing though I take forever to write one part and I'm really happy you are enjoying it!

Originally posted by: Badtameez_Dil_1
Absolutely, if you could infuse their happy moments into the narrative: that's my only suggestion!

I'll try to add in some happy moments in a few updates! Thanks for the feedback!

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florine_20

@florine_20

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Posted: 10 years ago

#107

read all five parts.
fabulously written parbh
the emotions, the scenario and ishita's character is amazing and well executed.
especially the way you are caried the story ahead with one of the main character ended in the beginning and completely erasing any future chances of romance. but inspite of this essence of the story is retained. I didn't find even a bit of compromise with the story because of this aspect.
loved it to the core brilliant.
will be waiting for the future updates

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sukanksha

@sukanksha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#108

Originally posted by: smilesforever98

3 hours?! And I thought I didn't sleep enough! That's crazy! Sunday you probably sleep through the day to catch up!😆And what students do you have? Are you a teacher?

Not full day... But till 9 or 10.
No I m a tutor...
I have my own centre ...
So students of different classes in different groups...
I am a serious teacher 😆
K I m serious over this (serious smiley kon Sa hai )