Ishita SS - A Woman - Chapter 5 (Page 13) (August 6)

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Posted: 10 years ago

Hey everyone! I'm here again to annoy you all with another SS!😆

This SS is completely dedicated to Umeirah. She suggested this story's plot to me and has also given me it's title. So this SS is here due to her, so thank you for this idea.

And I know I already have 2 FFs, one which I hardly update and the other which I try to update daily. So this SS's updates will be based on everyone's response. If you all like this one enough, I will try and update it more often and if you all aren't really liking this whole idea, I will update once in a while when I get time. So now this story's fate is in your hands.

I will post the prologue below and I hope you all like and leave your honest feedback!

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Index

Prologue - Below

Part 1 - Page 4 Part 2 - Page 7 Part 3 - Page 9 Part 4 - Page 12
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Prologue

She looked over at the clock for the umpteenth time. It was 12 am and she couldn't help but instinctively look at the door hoping he would walk in tired from his hard day yet still with a tired smile on his face and she would take him into her embrace wanting to relieve him of his fatigue. She would go on to feed him with her own hands and he would fall asleep snuggling next to her. But he didn't. He didn't walk into the room neither did she get the chance to pull him into a tight hug and complete her day.

It had been three days. Three days she had been waiting for him to come back, waiting that he would prove everyone wrong, show everyone their love was strong enough to bring him back to her. Three days everyone had been telling her to snap out of this illusion that he would come back to her. They all told her he would never come back, not for his family, not for his child, nor for her. But she didn't believe them. He would be back, he had to come back for her. How could he leave breaking all those promises he made, shattering all the dreams they had woven, giving her the responsibilities he had, and how could he move himself away from her.

He simply told her to live on her own, take care of his child alone, watch over his siblings and handle his parents. He simply left her not caring about how she would be able to do everything he had told her to, not once thought how difficult it would all be without him. He didn't think about anything, he just left her all alone...

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Posted: 10 years ago

Updated! Please leave your likes and comments!

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Pasoori

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Posted: 10 years ago

First of all... Thank you so much Prabh! I realise it must be a trouble for you to pen this yet you took time out only for me! I really am so thankful to you!

I feel overwhelmed that you mentioned me! May the Almighty bless you!

Coming on to the update... all I'd say is we all know how beautifully you weave a world. I'd love to be a part of it! 😳

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Aarohi Talegoankar

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Posted: 10 years ago

hwy its feeling good to see you with new story. I am so excited for this new story for 2 reasons, first as its your story and other it is suggested by umeirah di. but I hope it will be not concentrated on ishita life without Raman. actually every story is incomplete without partner at least or me. let c what is stored for us. update soon

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-Atii-

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Amazinggg! I love it already. Please continue and do so fast!! :) I love the way you write, it's very articulated and wonderful!

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Pasoori

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: aarohi26
hwy its feeling good to see you with new story. I am so excited for this new story for 2 reasons, first as its your story and other it is suggested by umeirah di. but I hope it will be not concentrated on ishita life without Raman. actually every story is incomplete without partner at least or me. let c what is stored for us. update soon

I know where you come from Aarohi magar it's important to salute the power of being a woman!

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Mehak Ashraf

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Posted: 10 years ago

Nice start. I liked the prologue. Why did Raman leave Ishu? The story is on Ishu struggling without Raman as a independent women? Right? Anyways, continue soon.