Written Thoughts - MoChhug's Poetry

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Monica

@mochhug

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Posted: 9 years ago

Hey guys!

So I've been penning down some random pieces of poetry in the last year or so, and I thought I'd share them here :)

I'll post a new one every few days, and I'll PM those on my buddy list every time I do. Any comments of feedback would be amazing :) Trying to improve as a writer in different mediums.

So the first one should be up in a few hours.

WRITTEN THOUGHTS
"You" (below)
"Crave"Page 5
"Untitled"Page 7

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Monica

@mochhug

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Posted: 9 years ago

You

Your cold words are drops of acid.

Your intense looks my elixir of life.

You pushed me away, like I was a bad habit.

You pulled me closer, when I chose to take flight.

I decided to push you away instead.

I decided to give it a try.

I understood why you did it, for a day.

But not for longer than that.

You didn't pull me back.

You let me push you away.

You let me feel like I left you,

When in fact I was forced to stray.

Still I waited, to be pulled back in.

For the vicious cycle to continue.

But how can you be pulled back in,

By something you finally outgrew?

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KeyaHira2

@KeyaHira2

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Posted: 9 years ago

I love poetry

And I really love this

👏

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Monica

@mochhug

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: KeyaHira2
I love poetry
And I really love this
👏

Thank you! 😳

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A.Hajnal

@A.Hajnal

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Posted: 9 years ago

Monicaaa...Reading something written by you after so long...And something beautiful too...That was amazing...I hope to read more of you and soon...😳

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Monica

@mochhug

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: A.Hajnal
Monicaaa...Reading something written by you after so long...And something beautiful too...That was amazing...I hope to read more of you and soon...😳

Aww thank you! 😳🤗

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sj_qh_kabhi

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Posted: 9 years ago

Wow it was very beautiful and so deep
Loved it totally

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Monica

@mochhug

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: cutie15
Wow it was very beautiful and so deep
Loved it totally

Thank you 😳

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jas91

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Posted: 9 years ago

Hi Monica

just 4 d record I m not a poetry lover

but just 2 encourage u I thought 2 comnt🤗

& 1st 1 is very well written so congrats 4 that

PS- btw what's d status of ur long pending Asya fictions😳😆

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Monica

@mochhug

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: jas91
Hi Monica
just 4 d record I m not a poetry lover

but just 2 encourage u I thought 2 comnt🤗

& 1st 1 is very well written so congrats 4 that

PS- btw what's d status of ur long pending Asya fictions😳😆

Haha aw thanks hun 😳