Written Thoughts - MoChhug's Poetry - New Piece on PG 7

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey guys!

So I've been penning down some random pieces of poetry in the last year or so, and I thought I'd share them here :)

I'll post a new one every few days, and I'll PM those on my buddy list every time I do. Any comments of feedback would be amazing :) Trying to improve as a writer in different mediums.

So the first one should be up in a few hours.

WRITTEN THOUGHTS

"You"
(below)

"Crave"
Page 5

"Untitled"
Page 7


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Posted: 9 years ago
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You

Your cold words are drops of acid.

Your intense looks my elixir of life.

You pushed me away, like I was a bad habit.

You pulled me closer, when I chose to take flight.


I decided to push you away instead.

I decided to give it a try.

I understood why you did it, for a day.

But not for longer than that.


You didn't pull me back.

You let me push you away.

You let me feel like I left you,

When in fact I was forced to stray.

Still I waited, to be pulled back in.

For the vicious cycle to continue.

But how can you be pulled back in,

By something you finally outgrew?

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Posted: 9 years ago
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I love poetry
And I really love this
👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: KeyaHira2

I love poetry

And I really love this
👏


Thank you! 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Monicaaa...Reading something written by you after so long...And something beautiful too...That was amazing...I hope to read more of you and soon...😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: A.Hajnal

Monicaaa...Reading something written by you after so long...And something beautiful too...That was amazing...I hope to read more of you and soon...😳


Aww thank you! 😳🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow it was very beautiful and so deep
Loved it totally
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: cutie15

Wow it was very beautiful and so deep
Loved it totally


Thank you 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi Monica
just 4 d record I m not a poetry lover
but just 2 encourage u I thought 2 comnt🤗
& 1st 1 is very well written so congrats 4 that
PS- btw what's d status of ur long pending Asya fictions😳😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: jas91

Hi Monica

just 4 d record I m not a poetry lover
but just 2 encourage u I thought 2 comnt🤗
& 1st 1 is very well written so congrats 4 that
PS- btw what's d status of ur long pending Asya fictions😳😆


Haha aw thanks hun 😳

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