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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey people!

My mind bubbles with innumerable stories on our IshRa and I'm here to share one such story. I hope you'll like it. Thanks!

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Posted: 10 years ago
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A PEEP INTO THE NARRATIVE

Ishita; abandoned by Subbu on the day of her engagement is wholeheartedly accepted by Raman. However, trouble always looms...!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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A GLIMPSE

Subbu brought Ishita into his room and blatantly told her that he wasn't willing to commit to a relationship as their union would only bring shame to his family due to her inability to conceive. She didn't have the will to retaliate thus simply walked out... away from his life

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Shagun walked into her bedroom to find Raman seated on the bed, busy with his work. She sat on the other side and told him she'd gone for a abortion! The next morning she found divorce papers lying on the side table, already signed by Raman. She'd no choice left but to sign and leave the house...

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Two broken souls found love, commitment and completeness' with each other...

Come join their journey!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Very interesting and nice start
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Prologue

Ishita sat on their beautifully decorated bed waiting for Raman to enter. He came in and locked the door so that nobody even dared to disturb them. He walked over to the bed and sat right beside her taking off the "ghungat" covering the beautiful countenance of his Ishita. He leaned over and placed a soft, gentle kiss on her forehead. He brought his attention down to her eyes and noticed a tear drop from his Madrasan's eyes. He wiped her tear with his thumb and gestured her to speak her heart out to him fully, before they ensued their love making! A content Ishita took Raman's hand in his and thanked him for accepting an infertile woman who perhaps wouldn't even be able to bear the symbol of their love. He put his finger to her lips and assured her that she was all he wanted... in this short span of time; she'd become the reason he was smiling, living and not merely dragging through each day. She was his reason to live...

Ishita smiled through her tears and engulfed Raman in a hug & they gave away to each other ...

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The next morning, Ishita woke up and snuggled close to her hubby; reminiscing the night they shared drowned in the passion of their love. She leant over on his chest and lay in his warmth. She felt at peace... a tranquillity she'd lost long back. Raman had returned her lost happiness. Busy in her thoughts, she drew patterns on his chest; tickling him causing him to get up!

He got up from bed together with Ishita and captured her in his arms not letting her move an inch as though she was even trying!

It was just then that the house help, Neelu knocked to tell them Mummyji was calling them down that they reluctantly broke apart to have a shower and change.

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IshRa came downstairs hand in hand and took blessings from their parents. The duo then sat down to have their breakfast whilst Romi asked his Bhai - Bhabhi to feed each other whilst he would capture the moment. Not shying that the family was present, Ishita brought a morsel over to Raman's mouth as he made a face not exactly loving the experience of eating a bland idli. Raman who became a bit conscious of the whole family ogling at them didn't bother to feed his newly wedding wife until she herself nudged him to feed her a bite of the paratha... he fed her but not before teasing as a mere whisper, only audible to his wifey "khale jitna khaana hai meri jaan; energy bahut lagge gi ab". Ishita turned a beetroot red whilst her Ravan Kumar grinned from ear to ear!

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During their entire time at the breakfast table, the two love birds remained immersed in each other sharing sweet nothings and sharing cute little eye locks. They could have stayed rooted in their spots had Papaji not asked them to hurry and pack for their honeymoon to Manali. As though the two were just waiting to grab hold of the opportunity, they didn't even refuse. Well who would refuse to spend quality time with their soulmate...??

IshRa left the next day and were in for a shock with what Raman saw ...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Sure! Thanks Hetvi :)
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I'm one eager person thus I'm now back with chapter one!

It was a dark, cloudy night completely representative of the storm brewing in Raman's life. A young chap willing to lay the world at his wife's service. He loathed himself for loving a self-centered, bratty woman like his ex, Shagun Arora. A cunning woman who didn't refrain from anything which benefitted her... it was unforgivable what she'd done; murdering a part of him growing inside her ...

He felt disgusted at her, her behavior and complete disregard for an innocent life she'd brutally killed off. She was unapologetic; still continuing her photo-shoots and so he threw her out of his life!

A void remained, to his misfortune ...

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Ishita sat locked in her room; sobbing bitterly as that scoundrel's words echoed in her ears. She tried to block out his words yet try as she might they overpowered her and she fainted not being able to tolerate the 'invisible' pain any longer! She was taken to the Doctor who just prescribed a few medicines and told her family to avoid giving any stress to Ishita...

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Raman lay on his bed; turning off the lights in broad daylight! His mother came into his room with a tray of food and tried to feed him. He stopped her hand halfway and put his head in her lap and cried recalling that woman's betrayal ...

His mother requested him to think about his future and forget the bad memories as they would do nothing but hurt him. She, even though it wasn't easy also commented that perhaps what happened was for the best; he was acquainted to that Shagun's true nature.

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Amma came into her Ishita's room to have a chat with her dearest Kanna whilst relishing Payasam!

Ishita broke down hugging her Amma whilst the concerned mother consoled her daughter.

"Ishu Kanna you can't be crying over spilled milk baby. That Subbu isn't worthy of your tears!"

I'm crying at my fate Amma! Why did Murugun do this with me??'

"To open your eyes! I always said he isn't a good guy!! Realised now??"
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Chotu and emotional one. Both are lost the precious one from their life... I hope they find their day of love soon.
Edited by Aditi.KPFAN - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Really nice story...
Would love to read more
Cont soon..!

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