a new fresh story fanfic........ part 1

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the link part 1 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/dill-mill-gaye/773351/a-new-story-fanfic-part-2

part 1 continued.

so everyone was tired and exhauated. armaan kept on thinking about the time she spent with ridzy in the party. he always thought that she was a spoilt brat. but at that night she had pleasantly changed. he found he would like to enjoy her company again😳

sapna sees armaan standing in the locker room gazing somewhere

sapna : armaan, tum teek toh ho na

armaan: ha ( waking from his hallucination) teek hoon

one thing that irrated sapna that she didn't get enough time to spend with armaan. she had to do so much work. even in her own birthday party! ridimaa comes in wearing her plain clothes again. amraan thinks to himself she gets rude and plain and sometimes she is really nice and joyful. somethings wrong

armaan : hi ridimaa

ridimaa : hi smiling at him. he smiled back. sapna felt a surge of jealousy spring into her. atul comes in with a flower bouquet. he sings

' jab pyaar kiya toh darna kya jab pyaar kiya toh darna kya, pyaar kiya hai chori nahi ke chup chup aahen barna kya'😆

sapna : atul yeh sab kiskeliye

ridimaa : lovley ke liye hoge aaj pehli bar usne apne baal kole hain😆😆

atul blushes and tries to look for lovley. armaan suddenly imagines ridimaa with her beautiful silky hair open flying through the breeze.😆 how he wondered that if ridimaa can just once open her hair instead of putting it always in a plain pony-tail. armaan shook himself. what on earth was he thinking?. he decided to go to the canteen to drink just to make sure if he was feeling alright😆

anjali comes with a red churidar and gives flowers to sapna and to.... she stops and doesn't give the flowers to ridzy. ridzy felt hurt and remembered those moments when she found out she wasn't her sister. this truth was going to hurt her everyday when she saw anjali. anjali gets her pager and file and leaves with sapna.

ridz is left alone. ( just to put some impact😆)

dr. kirti is in her office thinking about what trick she should do on the doctors. she finally decides and leaves. ( now dr. shubankar is introduced)

dr. shubankar a very busy man. but never got that much hapiness in his life. his life was too boring. he sighed thinking to himself that he hopes something new would happen in his life. dr .kirti comes

dr kirti : DR. SHUBANKAR

shubankar is startled by dr.kirti voice.😆

dr. kirti : can you please check on these files i've got some important work to do

she leaves. on the way she meets sapna

sapna : ji dr.kirti aap mujhe bata sakte hain ke dr. shubakar ke kamra kahan hain.

dr :KYON ( sapna' scared again😆)

sapna : woh mere maa baap unko bohut achi tarah se janteh hain. woh mere maa baap ke dost ke bete hain. mujhe pata chala ke who yaha par kaam kare hain. toh maine socha unse tode si madat manglugi. tode asanese main yaha par kaam karungi

dr kirti : waha hain

sapna : teek hain thanks.

sapna enters subankar's room. when shubankar looks at her. he keeps on gazing. a new thing had just started in his life. he was seeing a really beautiful woman in front of him. ( i think he has fallen in love)😆 ( dill mill gaye)😆

meanwhile armaan is in the canteen drinking ( water not alcohol😆 ) saying again and again. why is he thinking about ridimaa? how can he even do that? . he realised that he started liking her.

at the first time he saw her she was a messy kind of doctor, armaan didn't even think she was a doctorat first he thought she was a patient. always tought this girl will never go on in her life. i will work harder than her she has no chance against me.

but then when that day when the flowers and petal fell on them it was like the whole world was still. only her and her beauty was ruling.😉 her eyes as deep as the ocean looked even more mesmerizing when the petal fell on one.😳 the way her eyes flickered when he blew it gently away.😳 her face so soft he thought what a beauty god had made😳😳

but wait

armaan : yeh tum kya soch rahe ho. armaan apne aap ko samahlo.

he found out he couldn't. everytime girls would run after. saying armaan we love you. trying to flirt with him but he never gave them a chance😆. he thought girls were a waste of time what matters most is my career. he found himself wrong. he had done something he had never thought he would do in his life.

he had fallen in love😳

wow can't believe i wrote that😳 well i hope you liked it. i personally think i'm getting more better at writing. after every part a will write a precap but not now. just to pyt more suspense. well the next part coming soon......................

thanks do comment😛

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Its great yaar. continue soon.
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gr8 part 👏👏. do continue soon
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hey dats simply just gr8.Continue writin.Let me know wen u r writin d 2nd part

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