TS - Love Me (Chap 1/Page 1)

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Yippee!! After long time, I tried my hand in something. Actually I didn't get a proper concept to write, I had started a story but unfortunately lost my track, so stopped it after posting only one part.

But this time, I come up with a TS, though I thought to post it as OS but too lazy to do so. So, break it into two parts.

Now enjoy the TS.

TWO SHOT

LOVE ME

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~ Chapter 1 - Below ~
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Chapter 1

Today Raman felt the most happiest person in this world, today he was getting married with a girl of his dream, he always wished to have a girl like her. It was an arranged marriage but for him it was love at first sight. First he denied to marry when his mother ask for it but later when his mother showed him the girl's photo, he couldn't resist and accepted the proposal. But it was quiet strange for him that in these one month they hardly talked. Every time she managed to give excuses but he never mind as he thought she was shy to talk, so he never bothered about this issue.

Finally the day has arrived, he was sitting on the mandap, waiting for his bride, his eyes were roaming all around to see a glimpse of his bride and finally the priest ask her parents to bring their daughter. Raman was waiting for this moment since long when suddenly his eyes fixed on the stairs, she was in a red lehenga with golden works on it, Raman smiled seeing her but she kept her eyes low, Raman turned his gaze realizing the blush on his face. Soon she took her place next to him. The priest started chanting the holy, they took seven vows, then Raman put the vermilion on her partition. The priest declared them husband wife...

After being exhausted, finally they reached Bhalla house, Toshiji did her Grahpravesh and then made them involve in some rituals. After that Simmi, Rinki took her to her new room whereas Romi and Mihir started teasing Raman. After that, Raman finally went to their room, he pushed the door and slowly walked in, the entire room was decorated with the candles, the fragrance of roses where filled the air. A smile came on his lips but suddenly it vanished when he heard sobbing sound.

He walked towards the bed, but didn't find her there, he checked all around when suddenly his eyes fall on the corner of the room, where she was sitting folding her arms around her knees. Her face was buried inside her arms. He walked to her and sat next to her, he was going to put his hand on her shoulder, but hesitated, so he stopped. He called - Ishita!!

But he didn't get any response from her, he hesitantly put his hand on her arm but in next moment he felt a jerk over his body.

Ishita - How dare you to touch me?? Who the hell are you? You have no rights on me.

Raman looked at her puzzled - Ishita!!!

Ishita - I want divorce from you Mr. Raman Bhalla. I don't want to be with you. This... This marriage was forced on me. I want to be free from this relation, it was a burden on me.

Raman looked at her shock, he wanted to cry but somehow he composed himself and said - Okay. I will consult with my lawyer about this. But... But it will take time. So, if you don't mind, please don't let my family know about this. I will handle them in my way. And... And don't worry, I won't force myself on you. So, relax!!

Saying this he went to change whereas Ishita slide on the floor crying. Raman changed into his normal dress and found her still crying, he wanted to console her, he wanted to reduce her pain but all he knew that he can't. He sighed deeply to erase those impossible thoughts, he went to her and offered her water. She denied to have.

Raman - Ishita I don't know what's the reason behind your rejection but honestly if you told me before I could have done something to stop this marriage. I won't let you sacrifice your life like this. But I know!! We can't change it now. But I promise you I will free you from this unwanted relation very soon, for this I will do anything. Trust me!! Please now stop crying.

Ishita looked at him amazed, how can someone be so calm after hearing this, she wanted to trust him. She wiped her eyes.

Raman - Have some water. And then go and change into some comfortable.

Ishita took the glass with shaking hand. Then went to the washroom whereas Raman went to the window side and lit up a smoke, he used to have it when he was upset or tensed. Ishita walked out from washroom wearing a red kurti, as she walked in the room she coughed due to the smoke, Raman turned at her.

Ishita - I feel suffocated in the smoke.

Raman - Oh! I am sorry.

Saying this he went to the balcony silently, Ishita composed herself on the bed. Other side, after having the smoke, he went inside the room and saw her sleeping on the bed. He went to her side and saw her beautiful face, and then suddenly remembered her sudden declaration. He stepped back, he went to his side and took the pillow and went to sleep.

Next morning, the sun rays peeped inside through the curtain and fall on Ishita, she stirred and slowly opened her side, as soon as her vision cleared, she get up with a jerk and remembered she wasn't at her place, she turned another side of the bed and found it empty, her eyes scanned the room and spotted him on the couch, she felt she was doing injustice with him, he didn't deserve this but what she could do.. She can't love him. Ishita was deeply in her thoughts when suddenly his phone rang breaking his sleep and her thoughts. The first thing he saw was her beautiful face, seeing him getting up, she hurriedly went inside the washroom.

After freshen up, Raman went out from the room, he was dressed for office. He joined the family in breakfast table when Toshi asked - Why are you dressed for office? Yesterday only you got married and today you are going office leaving your wife alone?

Raman - I have many pending works. I have to finish them as soon as possible and you all are here with her. So, I don't think she will need me.

Saying this Raman left the place.

Days passed like this, they hardly talked. Though they behaved to be a happy couple in front of their family but inside their room they were completely strangers. Some times he tried to start a conversation with her, but every time she managed to answer him with yes or no!! But in these days the mysterious thing was happen that he never get to know about the rejection and he never bothered to ask.


On a such day, Raman walked in tired and found her sitting idle, nowadays he was out from house most of the time, somewhere she knew the reason. She felt guilty on her act, he never deserve this negligence. So, she decided being a friend, she will move on with him. As soon as he entered in the room, Ishita got up and asked - Should I bring your coffee?

Raman was shocked for the first time, she welcome him in this way, he replied - No. It's okay. Thank you.

Ishita nodded and went to resume some works when Raman cleared his throat to say - Ishita??

She stopped her hand work and turned at him. Raman continued - Ishita!! I have talked with my lawyer. He said we can't file divorce case right now as we are married recently. So we have to wait until we complete six months of our marriage. So... We have to...

Ishita - It's okay Raman.. I understand.

Raman slightly smiled and went to fresh.

Two months passed, now Ishita was comfortable with Raman, she wasn't that old sad Ishita, she started to talk, smile with everyone, she started to taking care of Raman, they became good friend in these months. Raman shared all his problem with her and being a better half she always showed him right path. Raman was used to her. He never imagined a single moment without her. He left smoking in the room as Ishita didn't like it.

On a such day, Raman was busy in a meeting when he received a message from Romi, "Bhabhi met with an accident, please come in city hospital."

As soon as he received the message, he left the meeting room and went to the hospital, everyone were waiting outside the ICU, Raman hurriedly went to them.

Raman - Maa!! Papa!! Ishita... Where's she? How's this happen??

Mr.Bhalla - I don't know puttar. We got a call from that person, he took her here and inform us.

Raman looked at the direction and found a guy was standing there facing his back to them, he went to him and tapped on his shoulder, the guy turned at him.

Raman - Thank you so much for saving my wife. I know this thank you isn't enough..

The guy - It's okay. I was passing from there when I saw her getting hit by a car, so I immediately took her here.

Raman - Thank you. Anyway, I am Raman.. Raman Bhalla. And you?

The guy - Subbu...

Raman nodded and shook hand with him. Just then doctor came out from ICU, Raman went to him.


Raman - Doctor.. Doctor... How's my wife?

Doctor - Calm down. She is out of danger. She is unconscious at this time. Once she will gain conscious, you can meet.

Raman - Thank you doctor.

The doctor excused when Subbu said - Now I should leave Mr. Raman. Nice to meet with you.

Raman - Be here some more time, then you can meet with my wife.

Subbu - No. It's okay. I have some urgent work, so I should leave.

Just then nurse arrived and inform them about Ishita's condition, Raman was feeling relieved hearing it. Subbu said - Go Raman.. Your wife needs you.

Saying this, he left when Mr.Bhalla ask Raman to meet with her, Raman walked in the cabin, she was lying, her head was injured badly, once she found Raman standing next to him, she couldn't control herself and cried.

Raman got worried for her, he took nearby sit and asked - Ishita!! What happen? Why are you crying?

Ishita stammered - Raman... Raman.. He... He is alive..

He looked at her confused and asked - Who is alive Ishita? I don't get you.

Ishita - Subbu...

Raman was hell shocked hearing the name from her mouth, it was the same guy who took her here?? The only name was running in his mind...

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That's all. How's it?? I hope you will like it. Please drop your comments.

Edited by Aditi.KPFAN - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice update
raman is shocked with ishita's rejection
subbu is alive😲
kya usse dead hona chahiye tha😆
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Lovely ts plsss update soon now i cant wait
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice update...
interesting...
cnt soon...
thanks for pm..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice start re..
Raman is shocked with her rejection..
Subbu is her past...
Waiting to see how it unfolds..
Cont soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice start 😊😊
So now raman got to noe the reason for ishita's rejection
Waiting for his reaction
Continue soon

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome update..
Ishita wants divorce..
Raman is such a nice person..
Subbu is alive...ishiita thought him to b dead?
Waiting for next..!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice one dear 😛
Thanks for pm 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Very nice part..
Waiting for d next update

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