Manan ff : Yeh tune kya kiya contuing on wattpad check pg-17

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Sun rays distured the sleep of a girl who was sleeping on her bed...
She wake up n see the time n shouted"oh..Shit..!!! I'm late for colz..."
She in jst a minute took her bathn wore kurti n leggings n went to another rum..."Hey,sry aaj tym ni h I'll talk n tell how's my dy in detail after colz...key bye...n i know u luv me a lot...luv u too ..bye.."
She ran outside n checked her purse bt a only 10 rupee note ...n says"hmm..nt bad aaj toh lunch canteen se khalungi..."
By saying dis she ran the two hrs journey of her colz...
On the side in front of dat girl 1bhk apartment lives a boy...who is sleeping peacefully with a smile on his face dreaming about luv of his lyf...He wokeup by a call..
On fone...
Boy-hey baby...coming...jst in 2...luv u...He goes to his lavish bathroom n get fresh n up...came back to his hall sized rum goes to thedressing rum attached to it...n chose a black shirt n black pant from is rum full of clothes...he wore it den went to closet of where his watches r kept n pick a fasttrack watch wich complients with his outfit n goes to dining table wish his parents n hve breakfast with lots of jokes n happy moments...
After breakfast he went to colz in a lavish car...He enters colz n meet his all 4 frenz n his luv n fab 5 n his luv went inside the colz with attitude...
Manik-Guyz luk who is here our very own Nandini Murty...Hii,nandu kaisi ho...??
Nandini luks down n smiles a little...
Soha-Manik baby...kya tm v u forgot iske face dekhte hi ur day goes bad...Yaar her deeds n her face everything is jst so shit ki she should die somewhere...
Cabir-Actually soha..u r ri8...bt u know na she is amazingly a source of entertainment...so manik say na wat's ur plan for today for her...
Before manik could say dhruv says-wat about some fun in canteen with her...
Alya-Yeah baby..!! u r ri8...let's towards canteen...
Mukti-yeah amazing n manik ki face dekh kr lg rha h he is planning something awesome...
Ma-Actually guys...U r ri8...toh nandu darling let's follow us towards canteen...Soha-Baby how can u use sweet words lyk darling to dis bi***...I won't talk to u ...Ma-Baby...y u r getting annoyed...U know na u r my lyf... n about her toh u know she is a shit for whole world...n plz forgive me n don't spoil ur mood n come let's hve fun...
Soha agreed after manik kissed her...n all dis while nandani was jst standing sliently in front of fab 5 n soha sliently luking down with a smile...


hey ...i know no one knows me... i 'm a newbie... read so many ff,os n ss so thought of writing... here was the prologue.. so if i get gud response of atleast one pge toh will update nxt part...


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice start
Looking forward to read more
Update next part soon...
Please pm me
Keep smiling always
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey very interesting...but a little confusing also...continue
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey:::::::interesting concept...but ...a %%%%%%%%%little confusing also...continue...take care god bless you
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Heya dear..awsum update... i read ur story on watpad.. luved it.. plzz update soon there... can't wait.. n if u r writing here toh plzz pm me too...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Character sktech...
Manik-As u all get to know from prologue ki he is rich,handsome,arrogent to others hve a happy family...hve loving parents,hve fab 5 n yeah hve gf for him luv of his lyf soha. ..
Fab 5 r same bt all hve happy family n cabir is nt a gay...cavya,mukbhi n dhrulya r in happy relationship...all r rich..
Nandani-about her toh i wanna say is she is daughter of a billinore n her father n manik's father r best frend bt bt bt her own father don'tbother whether c is alive or dead...to show the world he gave her 1small bhk .her mother died wen c was 15...c always smiles becoz her mom said dat from smile u can win the world...hve no frend...manik hates her lyk hell...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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PROLOGUE:-pg-1
Character sktech n chap-1 :- pg-2
chap-2 :-pg-3
chap-3 :-pg-5
chap 4 :-pg-9
chap 5 :-pg-12
Edited by Sanaya_Manan - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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fab 5 n soha went to canteen n meet abhi n navya..after exchangings hugs n kisses dey all face towards their entertainment ... Ma-So guys...jayda suspense n rakhte hue i'll show the fun now... He call the waiter n waiter brings a bowl... Nav-manik wat's dis...? Man-yeah navya yeh h special drink for our very own nandini murthy... Al-bt manik h kya yeh...before manik answer cabir says him... Ca-Don't tell me manik tune meri special recipe chura li... saale...dhokebazz... i thought tu mera sacha dost h bt tu toh chor nikala...(n wipes his fake tears) nadini smiles watching deir bond... manik rolls his eyes n says-cabir yaar...nt now...avi it's tym for real entertainment man...(n moves towards nandu)...to nandu aaj tmhe jayda kuch ni krna h u jst hve drink three bowls of dis special drink...nandu nodded... man-puchogi ni kya h...? nandu stands their with a little smile... man- tm toh kuch bologi ni hmsa ki tarah... chalo mein hi bata deta hu..it's ur fav red chilli water...c ab-yaar manik isse green chilli v dede sath me kya pata tb yeh kuch bole...(actually guys nandu never spoke infront of fab5 n their frenz...wenever dey say something to her she jst nods)... man-yaa ri8 cab...waiter...one plate of green chilli plz...n yaa it should be spicy...becoz nandu luves to add spice to others lyf n make dem cry... waiter brings n fab5 told her to drink n eat...c eat it n drink it...c strats sweating while eating her eyes become blood red, her face become red n nose starts falling...c even coughed after hving dis bt all dis nt even a single tear falls from her eyes may becoz c knows dat her tears doesn't matter... after eating n drinking c starts running lyk maniac in canteen for water bt nobody gives her...becoz noone wanna mess with fab5...after nt finding water in canteen c runs out of canteen to corridor finding for water bt she doesn't get water at last c runs towards washrum n drinks water from their...(guyz wen u need something u don't see the place...) all dis was watching by every1 n every1 was laughing n manik was standing n watching her with a smirk...Nav-Guys kuch jayda ni ho gya.. Cab-Madhubala ...tm v ni na ... man-c deserve dis nav...wat c did na dis is nothing infront of it...n cab puts his hand on manik shoulders... after drinking water for almost a hr in washrum nandu straight goes to fab5...c is toally red now...even is having mild fever... muk-Gud girl nandu ...khud hi aa gyi...Soha-arey mukti u know na c never do anything unless it's of her benefit.. Al-exactly soha..c knows agar yaha ni aaygi toh c will be expelled from colz... Abhi-toh manik ab kya socha h... man-guys i'm tired now...n after watching dis drama i jst wanna jam..so guys let's jam n u ( to nandu) tm mujhe ab colz k kis corner me ni dikhi chiye... nandu nods n goes out of colz n wlks for half n hr n sits on roadside becoz c can't walk due to fever n sun rays...n c faints overthere only... so guys dis was chap 1... thanx for ur response in previous part hope u will lyk dis also...n hope u all got ur answer dat isnt a love story...don't worry it will become a luv story for dat it needs tym... so y manik hates nandu so much ...? wat c did...? y c never fi8 back...? y c has no frendz..? wat happened after c fainted..? hmm...lots of questions..u'll get all ur answers bt for dat wait for nxt update...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#9
Superb
Poor Nandu
Lot of confusion
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Continue soon...
Nice update
Lot of mysteries...

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