SaGa OS - When the Time stood still...

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey Guys

I am Preksha, just joined gangaa family few days ago and I already feel like home. Thanku so much for such a friendly treatment . Since there was no fanfiction or a story on SaGa so, I thought to write one. This is not my first story but I still think I am a crappy writer. So I apologise to all of u in advance if u all don't like it.

And its a ONE SHOT so it does not includes more parts.

WARNING: Not proof read...So pls ignore the typos



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WHEN THE TIME STOOD STILL



Credit : khushix





Seeing her after 10 long years he felt like he was home. She was more beautiful than he thought she would be. Those long blank tresses falling at her back falling till her waist from which a few tendrils were touching her alabaster cheeks, those long slender arms, Her delicate fingers clutching the sides of the saree tightly.


Everything about her was so pure and had a soothing effect on his heart.


His Gangaa had grown up fully into a beautiful and elegant woman. How can someone look so gorgeous yet so simple and pure. She was the most beautiful girl he had ever seen.


His heart literally skipped a beat when he traced his glance over her angelic face. Her almond shaped eyes , those soft plumy pink lips and that cute little nose. How can someone look so mesmerizing without a speck of makeup.


The pale colour of her skin complementing the white saree which she was wearing was doing the perfect job of accentuating her beauty. It was clinging to her body like a second skin, hugging all her curves perfectly. And that intoxicating lemony smell of her left him dazed. She still had that innocence making her yet more beautiful, a serene smile playing on her lips showing her happiness


Unknowingly he stood there, watching her.


Releasing a breath, he went near her looking deep in those hazel orbs with his chocolate brown ones not breaking the eye contact. He was confused with his emotions, he felt a bit more connecting with her, with each passing second. Her innocent gaze had secretly unlocked his hidden feelings...Which he had so carefully managed to hide from all from himself for years...


Now, since they were out in open...they were wandering freely making him to lose his thinking ability.


His sudden proximity came as a shocker to her and she took some steps back trying to maintain some distance between them. She clutched the sides of her white saree in her fists even more tightly with her rosy lips quivering inhaling his toxic maleness smell turning her knees into jellies and her mind fuzzy.



His intense gaze had set her whole body on fire. She could feel butterflies in the pit of her stomach. He had turned into nothing but a bundle of nerves...After a long wait of 10 years her Sagar was standing infront of her looking deep into her eyes. She flushed a shade of pink and her little cute nose red.



She mentally thanked Krishanji sending someone like him in her life. He had always supported her since childhood no matter what. He was there when everyone was against her.


He was the man she always believed in.




Seeing her lost in her thoughts he placed his hand on her shoulder and called her out.

GANGAA...

A shiver ran down her body And The smile on her face grew wider..

SAGAR...

She called him out with all the strength left inside her. And he smiled back at her.



Time stood still for both and none of them wanted this moment to end...

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Thats all folks!

I hope u liked it, If not then all the tomatoes and chapals are welcomed with open arms :P

Do Like and comment and share ur views 😳


-Preksha😊

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filtered_chaos thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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This is lovely ❤️
Do write more 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: elsa_3

Ammazing Job👏plzzz continue

Thanku 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ashk_

This is lovely ❤️
Do write more 😃

Thanku .. n it really means alot😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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😃 was eagerly waiting for this... Finally a Saga Os...
It's awesome...
The way both of their feelings it was awesome...
Specially Sagar's... 😳
And you call yourself a c
Edit... Crappy writer...really...???
Girl you are very good writer and very good in explaining the plot...
Hope to read more of your OS..in future..
Do continue 😊
Edited ... Sorry don't know how this auto correct... 😳
Edited by wayback - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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im really very sorry, i dint describe te way i like it as i was going to appear in my exam and their were hardly 30 or 35 mins left thats why i just write two words but im completely mesmerized by your OS..its beautiful😳just love it👏you are a star⭐️you have expressed very well that im just in love with this and reading it again and again just the way u wrote it and you used such a figurative language😳😳i cannot express the way im loving it,,and remember, you are a very good eriter, and never ever call yourself that i cannot write well ,you are a star⭐️always think you are better than all and this will result you the best⭐️hatts off to you Preksha👏👏👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: wayback

😃 was eagerly waiting for this... Finally a Saga Os...
It's awesome...
The way both of their feelings it was awesome...
Specially Sagar's... 😳
And you call yourself a creepy writer...really...???
Girl you are very good writer and very good in explaining the plot...
Hope to read more of your OS..in future..
Do continue 😊

Thanku so much for ur time dear .. ur comments mean alot to me 😊
I m glad that u liked it :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: elsa_3

im really very sorry, i dint describe te way i like it as i was going to appear in my exam and their were hardly 30 or 35 mins left thats why i just write two words but im completely mesmerized by your OS..its beautiful😳just love it👏you are a star⭐️you have expressed very well that im just in love with this and reading it again and again just the way u wrote it and you used such a figurative language😳😳i cannot express the way im loving it,,and remember, you are a very good eriter, and never ever call yourself that i cannot write well ,you are a star⭐️always think you are better than all and this will result you the best⭐️hatts off to you Preksha👏👏👏

There is no need to apologise dear. I can understand ur situation very well . My final exams are starting form next week. Well I hope ur exam went wonderful and u score good marks .. Thanks a ton for taking out time from ur busy schedule and reading it.😳 And All The Best for ur upcoming exams 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Misnomer

There is no need to apologise dear. I can understand ur situation very well . My final exams are starting form next week. Well I hope ur exam went wonderful and u score good marks .. Thanks a ton for taking out time from ur busy schedule and reading it.😳 And All The Best for ur upcoming exams 😊

thnku so much😳and for all your wishes😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: elsa_3

thnku so much😳and for all your wishes😳

are your final i mean boards exams are coming??

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