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Posted: 9 years ago
Maan is finding everything that he has to about Geet but the main issue is why is he not going directly to her shouldn't she be the one that will truly answer his questions , she did wrong and now she has to admit to her mistakes in front of him
lets see what Maan finds out from Raj

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: taahir004

Maan is finding everything that he has to about Geet but the main issue is why is he not going directly to her shouldn't she be the one that will truly answer his questions , she did wrong and now she has to admit to her mistakes in front of him
lets see what Maan finds out from Raj

Meeting Geet directly wouldn't unfold the story as it should be known to Maan and specially readers...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update. Maan decides to meet the students and tried to find out about Geet but couldn't get anything concrete about her actions. When he recalled how she used to text him, made him upset and thought of meeting Raj hoping to get the details. Superb. Waiting for next.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Part - 105

Here's Raj for you...

Raj is the little boy who used to polish shoes for a earning, he has no father or mother and is under the care of his uncle who feels Raj is a burden on him as Raj is of no use, he can't earn money like the other kids as he is disabled...

Yes, Raj can't walk on his legs for they are defective by birth...

He has to crawl on a wheeled wooden log to move...

Still he loves to do whatever work he could do and he polished shoes for a living near Maan's university...

Many students were fond of him as he is very talkative and he has this rare talent of drawing and arts...

He used to make arts with chalk on the pavements when he was free...

Students asked him to do their drawings and gave him money for that...they also got him food and clothes as his greedy uncle used to drain him off his earnings and never gave him a penny...

Raj went missing for a few days and the students were worried about Raj including Maan...

Then one day Maan got the news from one of his juniors that Raj is begging at some bazaar...

Maan couldn't believe for Raj is a boy with so much self-respect he would never do it even for a royal living...

Maan went to meet Raj and learnt from him that he has been made to beg forcefully by his drunkard uncle as Raj didn't earn enough for his uncle's drinks by polishing shoes but he could earn a lot by begging using sympathy which Raj hated the most, he was ashamed of begging and he cried a lot seeing Maan, he only prayed to God that no one he used to polish shoes came to the bazaar and saw him begging ...

Maan got angry and waited there hiding to see his bloody uncle, when his uncle came to collect the money in the evening Maan punched him on the face and and took him to the police for harassing a child...he was put in jail and Maan took the responsibility of Raj...

Maan admitted him in a school for disabled where he asked Raj to learn something related to his artistic interests...

Raj was given the choice of learning editing or painting...Raj always fancied computers which he saw with the students in which he could play games and opted to learn editing which would easily get him a jod in some studio...

But he has to get his own lappy to develop his skills further and so Maan got him a brand new lappy...

Raj thanked Maan for the help and even promised to pay the bills when he started to earn...

Now Maan remembered Geet saying that Raj got some job and has started earning, she was telling something about his uncle and Maan's lappy...but Maan didn't listen anything as he was totally angry with her then...

Maan went to the university and asked the students about Raj, the handicapped boy who used to polish shoes nearby...

Everyone recognized him immediately and they also told Maan that he got back to his hoem where he studied and got a job, now he is helping them in their project work...

They give Raj's address to Maan...

Maan went there and Raj is so happy to meet Maan...

Maan goes and hugs him...he congratulates Raj for achieving his goal...

Raj then takes the lappy which he is very fond if and still uses it to do his work...

It's not which Maan brought him...

Raj: bhai, I'm sorry I lost the lappy you gave me

Maan: what? but how?

Raj: you my useless uncle, he came back from jail and found that you have finished colleg and left, he came to the home as my uncle and brought me out from there, he put me back to begging and sold the lappy

Maan: what? how dare he?

Raj: but someone helped me just like you did and resued me from that rascal

Maan showed Geet's picture to raj but he couldn't recognize Geet...

Raj: no I don't know this didi, is this your girl friend, she is so beautiful, marry her soon and don't forget to invite me for your marriage bhai

Maan is again confused...but Geet knew Raj and also about his job, haina?

How is it possible?

Maan asks who helped Raj...Raj said someone named Arjun helped him and he is very grateful to him too...he only gave him the lappy he is using now...

Maan asks his address and Raj gives his contact number...

Maan calls that Arjun and tells him that he wants to meet him and thank him personally for helping Arjun...

But Arjun says if Maan had to thank someone he should thank Geet and not him, he did all this only for Geet...he kept praising Geet and Maan becomes jealous...

Why is that everyone loves Geet so much?

Maan says that he had to meet him immediately and he gets his address and goes and meets him in the evening...

Maan: nice meeting you Arjun

Arjun: nice meeting you too

Maan: how did you know Raj? Where did you meet him first? At the university? Are you a student of xyz university?

Arjun: no no Maan, I just did this for my lover

Maan is again shocked...he couldn't control his anger...so this guy must have loved Geet too...

Maan: so it must be Geet again

Maan bursts out in anger...

Arjun laughs...: cool Mr

Maan: Maan, Maan Singh Khurana

Arjun: cool Mr.Khurana, I think you must be closely related to Geet

Maan: it's none of your business, just tell me how you know Geet?

Arjun is scared of Maan's angry look and he decides to escape immediately...

Arjun: I don't know Geet personally, she is just my lover's friend

Maan is relieved now...: who is that now?

Arjun: I think Mr.Khurana that's none of your business either

Maan then controls his anger and asks him politely...

Maan: Mr.Arjun, I need to find Geet, this is very urgent, please you have to take me to Geet's friend

Arjun: why do you worry about Geet? how do you know Geet?

Maan: Mr.Arjun, I myself have a lot of unanswered questions which only Geet's friend could answer, if you help me get my answers you'll definetly get your answers too

Arjun: but who are you?

Maan has to use his final weapon to get to Geet...

Maan: you must be knowing Khrish?

Arjun suddenly gets excited...

Arjun: do you know Khrish? I must meet him, I've been searching him for years

Maan: why would you search him?

Arjun: b'coz Annie asked me to find him

Maan: ohh then Annie must know the whole story, she must be

Maan looks at Arjun for his confirmation...

Arjun: yes, she is my love, we are going to get married soon

Yes, Arjun is Geet's friend Annie's boy friend...

He knows a little about Geet from Annie...

Maan then asks Arjun what happened with Raj and why did he help him...

Arjun tell Maan what happened to Raj...

Once Geet found Raj begging near to her hostel, she immediately recognized him and went to ask him why he came back to begging as he doesn't like it, but when Geet neared him Raj's uncle came there...

He was threatening Raj, he snatched the money from Raj and took him with him...

That racal looked really scary and mean, he looked like a villain and Geet was too scared to talk with Raj, she thought it's better to ask someone strong to handle him...

As Maan is not here Geet sought Annie's help who suggested Arjun, though Arjun is not a super hero like Khrish, one of his friends is a police officer and using his power they rescued Raj from his uncle and made sure he never returned to trouble Raj again...

Geet also helped Raj by getting him a new lappy, she gave it to him thru Arjun itself...she always helps people indirectly for she doesn't like to see then humiliated knowing who has helped them...

That's why Raj didn't know Geet...

If Geet really wanted to impress Maan she must have identified herself before Raj so that after hearing his story Maan would automatically think high about Geet...

But she does it b'coz she knows not everyone is as fortunate as herself and she shouldn't take the credit for her family heritage...

Maan is desperate to find why Geet did all this?

Maan: I should meet Annie now

Maan almost commands Arjun...

Arjun: wait, who are you to meet Annie?

Maan: I'm khrish

Arjun is surprised...he couldn't believe it...

Arjun looks at Maan as if he has found some treasure...: so you are Khrish

He is happy and also excited...: then you must meet Annie, Annie has been waiting to see you

Arjun immediately takes Maan to Annie...

Arjun: Annie Annie

Annie is at her college hostel...

Annie finds Arjun so excited...

Annie: Arjun, what's the matter? I told you I have my seminar tomorrow and asked you not to disturb me, now what do you want?

Arjun: I have got you a gift

Annie: gift?

Arjun: yes, wait a minute

Arjun then asks Maan to come in...

Annie gets angry...

Annie: who is this? why do you waste my time?

Arjun: don't you recognize him?

Annie looks carefully at Maan...she can't recognize him...

Annie: is this your cousin or what? he has no resemblance at all

Annie doesn't know about Maan then...only Geet knew about Maan then...

Maan is all the more confused...

If Geet told about Khrish to Annie then Annie should have recognized Maan as Khrish, but she doesn't seem to know him at all!!!!!

This is going nowhere, the more Maan tries to untie the knots the more complicated it becomes...

Now it's upto MSK to crack this case...can he do that?


Part106

Edited by ghsp2fan - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
hi thanks 4 da superb update! Well written! Maan meets Raj, Arjun n Annie! update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Fabulous updates. The story has become too twisty. Please solve this mystery soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
first, I'm very sorry for not commenting till now. I'm very lazy in that department. its easier to click "like' then type a few words. hmmm. but this doesn't give me to excuse from appreciating your work which I have been following religiously. I marvel this plot. its superb. don't stop it even if I don't comment. just know I'm one of your fans of this story.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Part - 106

Maan: are you really Geet's friend?

Aanie: who are you to ask me that?

Maan: I don't believe you know Geet or Khrish

Annie melts hearing the name Khrish...

Annie looks at Arjun puzzled...: Khrish?

Arjun looks at Maan...

Ammie turns to Maan and asks him begging...: do you know Khrish? Please tell me? Please, I want to see him

Them Maan believes that she must be Geet's bestie...she also loves Geet as much as Pinky...haina?

Arjun tells Annie that Maan is Khrish and Annie couldn't believe that Khrish is here... Arjun: stupid, this is Khrish, the Khrish, remember?

Annie jumps in joy seeing Maan...she recognizes him immediately...yes, he looks like a super Hero as Geet used to describe him...

Annie is very happy that finally Khrish has come in search of his Geet...

Annie: Khrish, you are Khrish, Geet's Khrish, I can't believe it, I knew I'll meet you one day, I knew Geet will get her love one day, but sadly no one believe Geet, not even her family, but I believed her, I knew she was not imagining anything, I knew she was telling the truth, I knew it was all real

Maan: how did you know that Khrish is real? I'm not Khrish, and I don't love your friend

Annie is disappointed and gets angry...she catches hold of Maan and shouts at him...

Annie: you cheat, you betrayed my Geet, you know she loved you madly

Maan: Ms. Annie, I'm not the cheat, your friend is the cheater, you know she is not Angel

Annie: Angel? Who is Angel?

What? Annie doesn't know about Angel?

Maan is frustrated, what's the matter with this Geet?

Did she do all this deliberately to confuse Maan if at all he found out that she is cheating?

Pretty clever, haina? But not as clever as Maan, Maan will show her who is smarter...haina?

Annie doesn't know about Geet's plans...then how would Maan know the truth...

Maan: your friend told you about Khrish and not Angel? Strange

Annie: what are you talking about?

Maan: your friend didn't tell you about her plans?

Annie: what plans?

Maan: tell me what you know? Why did Geet act as my lover?

Annie: what? do you think Geet is acting?

Maan: yes, she betrayed me acting as if she loved me

Annie: but Geet loves you so much khrish, you won't believe, there was not a single day that she didn't talk about you, she went to meet you every week end, I didn't take it seriously first, but after seeing her dedication I thought that she is in love for real

Once I followed her to the cafeteria but then you didn't come that day...

She was waiting for you till they closed the place and left from there dejected...

Then only she found out that you have gone to Mumbai for the holidays and she kept waiting for you...

She missed you so much then...

So Geet went to the cafeteria to meet Khrish every weekend?

That's where he met him too?

Annie might know where and when Geet met Maan for the first time, may be she saw him at the hospital where he admitted Angel that day...

Maybe she learnt about Angel from there...and also she saw Maan's concern fro Angel and admired him for that...then she might have wanted to know more about him and followed him to the cafeteria...

Maan wants to clear his doubts...he asks Annie...

Maan: do you know where Geet met her Khrish?

Annie: I think she met you at the inter college meet held at the XYZ university, I think there was some controversy and you had helped some girl, Geet told me something like that

Another contradictin, then Geet didn't meet Maan before that? She learnt about Angel and the incident later, maybe she was expecting Maan to celebrate his b'day and she might also wanted to wish him, when she found out that Maan doesn't celebrate his b'day then she might have been told about the incident...it's all more and more confusing for Maan...

Whatever he thinks is proven wrong in Geet's case...this is really frustrating for Maan...

Annie reminds Maan about the cultural fest where Geet met her Khrish again...

Geet went to a college meet along with her friends...

They had gone to another college and as their event had been postponed to the next day Geet and her friends decided to just go and have some fun watching other events...

They wanted to go watch the Mr.Hunk event which was very popular among the girls...

Geet never liked such things, she thought all this dolle shole was boys thing, and who can match SK and Hrithik, her favourite heroes...

After watching SK and Hrithik who cares about these minos, haina?

But she was compelled to attend that Mr.Hunk along with the others...

They were drooling over some guy and praising his abs...six seven eight packs?

They were aanouncing the winner, Geet didn't even bothered to know his name...

There was huge applause and the runner-ups were also awarded...

After that the winner came down with so much pride and the girls surrounded him to congradulate him and to take selfies with him...

Then all of a sudden someone came in search of the winning guy...

Everybody thought that he had also come to wish him ,maybe a close friend...

But that guy was furious...straightaway he went up to that winner and snatched his trophy and threw it on the floor...

Maybe he is the loser, and he can't appreciate the winner...what non sense...

The crowd tried to stop him but in vain, they all came to the support of the winner...

Though Geet didn't like the winner's proud attitude acting as if he was the next suer hero of Bollywood she felt he didn't deserve to be treated like that...afterall he had won a tough competition and if you didn't have the big heart to congradulate him atleast you shouldn't abuse him...

Geet got closer to look at the abuser...and it was none other than Khrish...

As Khrish was from some other college and that winner belonged to that same college many students came to the support of that guy...

"just a barbaric, uncivilized moron, throw him out now, who let him inside our campus"

Then the boys accompanying Khrish start arguing...

" who is uncivilized, only that b****** whom you call champion"

There was a war of words...

Khrish tries to calm his friends...mostly ladies...that too beautiful ladies...

Geet is a little jealous..."why is so many girls following hi? Does this happen always?"

"ye toh ladhkiyon ka leader hai"

Everyone teases...and they mock Khrish...

But he was least bothered...he didn't feel ashamed to be leading the ladies...

Respects women...Geet liked that...

"ye mardhon ka khel hai, tummare liye nahi, tum galat jagah pea aye ho, inko lekhe dusre hall mein jaana, wahi tummare Fashion show chal raha hai"

That winner boasts "mard hai toh samne aao, kyun ladhkiyon ke peeche chupthe ho?"

That guy himself tears off Khrish's shirt...and to the young ladies delight he uncovers a massive six pack chisel body behind that black t-shirt...

No one cared to wink and all all eyes were on his body, including Geet's...

"just flaunting your bare torso doesn't make you a man" Khrish roars as he pounces like a lion on that champion and gets hold of him...

That man looks like a little mouse infront of a huge lion...

He tries to escape but Khrish hold him tight and pulls him forward...

"you just made him your champion, but does anyone know his real face, the ugly face?"

There was completely silence...

"this rascal blackmailed his GF with a personnel video recording"

Khrish became furious and he started punching him non stop...

Khrish just knocked him out...

One of the girls picked up the trophy and ran to Khrish...

"here's our new champion, a huge round of applause for him girls"

Khrish ignored her completely,turned and started walking away...

He had gone to pick up his shirt...

He then turned to the ladies...

"when will you stop this?"

They were all surprised...

"you just a hailed him as champion a minute ago and now you cheer me?"

Even Geet was stunned by his reaction...

He just shrugged off his shoulders put on his shirt back...

"girls, why are you so much obsessed with these guys? Instead of wasting your time and energy drooling, start thinking about yourself"

His words started making sense to them, maybe he was right...They all listened to him with utmost attention...

"stop complaining that guys don't give you respect, first you learn to respect yourself then expect the same from the guys, and for god's sake don't blindly follow anyone in the name of love and cheat yourself, stop being a fool and start thinking with your head, then no one can cheat you, they can only do so if you let them cheat you, why give the chance and later blame the guys? So learn to be smart and beauty without brains is of no use, it's simply waste"

Geet thought it's important to make the right choices and she knows that her choice is not that bad...yes, her Khrish is very girls dream man, he has got the looks, attitude and also the brains...so there is no need for Geet to worry about her brain as Khrish said, her Khrish has got all the brains they needed...

She ignored his advice and started drooling right away...

That's when Geet got to know about Khrish more...

Initially she liked Khrish but after getting to know him more and more she fell in love with him...

From that day she started stalking Khrish...

She began to collect more information about him...

She learnt from her spying that Khrish used to spend a lot of his time hanging out with his friends at Manisha's cafeteria...actually Manisha ran a coffee shop nearby Maan's college...

Geet started visiting the coffee shop to meet her Khrish...

She deliberately avoided Annie for she thought she has to do this alone, pyaar mein friends ka koi jagah nahi hothi haina? and Geet had become more and more possessive after she saw all the girls drooling that day...why take a risk for her Khrish is drooling material, haina?

She patiently waited for Khrish every evening for the next few days but she didn't get to see him...

He was out of town and later she got the news that he had gone to Mumbai for holidays...

Then she somehow got his number from Manisha...

Yes, Maan did help that girl...

Maybe Geet was in the crowd and Maan didn't know her then, Geet knew him but didn't have the guts to meet him face to face, she was just following him without his knowledge...

But Geet didn't mention about the accident...why?

Maan: don't you know Geet met with a accident?

Maan asks Annie about that too, maybe he can find out the truth from Annie...

Annie: what? Geet met with an accident in her childhood? That's why she had this problem?

Maan: no no, she met with a accident in Delhi

Annie: no, she never met with any accident while she was here

Maan: what?

Annie: which accident you are talking about?

Annie didn't know anything about that accident or Angel, Geet didn't tell her about it, she has hid that from Annie...

Maan: your friend is a bloody liar

Annie gets angry...: you don't talk like that again, or I'll kill you

Annie gets wild and Arjun stops her from hurting Maan...

Maan: it's a pity you still believe Geet

Annie: you must be the liar, you don't deserve Geet, you are not anything like Geet's Khrish, you are a bloody liar

Maan: how could you be so blind? What's the proof that Khrish is real?

Annie: Geet even chatted with Khrish, I have seen him reply

That's the only mistake Maan did, haina?

Maan: but how do you know it's Khrish?

Annie: Geet told me, she was so happy then, I have never seen her so happy before that or even after that, I can't understand why you changed your number and stopped talking with Geet, what's your problem? How can you hate someone like Geet? tell me Khrish, how can someone hate Geet? Khrish, don't hate my Geet, you are so lucky to be Khrish, please don't hate Geet

Annie is really worried...she almost begs Maan to accept Geet's love...

Maan is frustrated...everyone believes that Geet is innocent...

Maan: for God's sake stop it, I'm not Khrish, I'm Maan Singh Khurana

Annie is shocked now...: what? you are not Khrish? Then Khrish is not real? This can't be true, Geet met you in Manali that time, I also didn't believe her initially but after you came to meet her in Manali only I believed in her stories about Khrish

Maan: what Manali? I never met her in Manali, I never went to Manali after that camp 4 years back

Annie is shocked this time...

Part107

Edited by ghsp2fan - 9 years ago
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Yaar Kya hai ..
itna kyu stretch kar rahi ho Maan ka Investigation ...
Huh ..ek hi Line kitni Baar padhu ...
Please thodi to story Forward karo ...

AAKHIR ...TRUTH HAI KYA
Main pagal ho Jaungi Soch kar ...
Update next soon ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Why is Maan still running around finding out about Geet
he should go straight to her and she is the only one that can actually
tell him everything
now there is a new story Geet met Krish in Manali so his investigation
will just turn more complicated and he will believe Geet is a liar
he is MSK so he should go to Geet and all his questions and confusions can be ironed out by her

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