SWASAN SS- PHIR SE UPDATED PART-4 PG-56 - Page 28

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Superb update
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Superb update

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Thank you ritika 😃
Yup i also feel the same 😆 this story is for swasan only 😃 nibir ke liye mera magic of love story hai 😉

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Nice update
Feeling bad for swara😭
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Nice update

Feeling bad for swara😭


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amazing update dear...loved it


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Hola everyone i am back with part-3 of phir se as i say it will contains ragsan scene more as compare to swasan. So sorry for that but this was the story so i can't do it. Please don't kill me after reading this. But after this i will update an os soon to cheer up your mood so relax.
My bakwaas end here.

PHIR SE-3

Ragsan room
Sanskar goes to his room and sees ragini was sitting on the bed. So he goes to the bed and sit beside her and thinking
Sanskar(monologue)- Kaise bolu that i don't love her. How?
Ragini- Sanskar.
Sanskarr- Hmmm.
Ragini- Can i ask you something?
Sanskar- Yup you can.
Ragini- Tumne yeh shaadi kyu kiya jab tum ko yeh shaadi karne ka koi mann nahi tha.
Sanskar get shocked.
Sanskar(monologue)- Isse kaise pata chala ki mai yeh shaadi nahi karna chhata tha?
Ragini- Bolo sanskar.
Sanskar- Vo...mai.
Ragini- Please sanskar tell me truth only.
Sanskar- Vo maine yeh shaadi sirf parents ke pressure mai kiya but tumne yeh shaadi kyu kiya.
Ragini- Because i love you sanskar vo bhi bahut jyaada pyaar karti hu.Sanskar maine tumhe ek baar kissi party pe dekha tha tab hi se pyaar hogaya tha. You can say that love at first sight hai. Maine tumko har jagah stalk kiya phir pata chala ki tum mere dad ke friend ke bete ho. Tab maine apne dad ko jaakar bola that i love you tab vo maan gaye meri but mujhe laga tum ish shaadi khush hoge but i was wrong. I was fully wrong i am sorry sanskar. Please mujhe maaf kardo.
Sanskar- No ragini ismai tumhari koi fault nahi hai ismai jo bhi galti hai vo mera hi hai because mai apne mummy papa ko nahi samjha paya ki mai kisi aur se pyaar karta hu.
Ragini- Tum kisse pyaar karte ho?
Sanskar- Swara...swara gadodia mere college hi ki student thi. Infact she also loves me.
Ragini- Tab problem kya hua?
Sanskar- Tab tak meri aur tumhari shaadi fixed ho gayi thi. Vo aayi thi proposed karne but i showed her our wedding card. I think now she hates me.
Ragini kept her hand on sanskar's hand and says
Nahi sanskar aisa vo kabhi nahi karegi vo bhi tumse itna hi pyaar karti hai jitna tum karte ho usse.
Sanskar shook his head and says
I hope but ab vo pyaar kis kaam ka jab humlog hamesha ke liye alag hogaye hai.
Ragini- Sanskar i am sorry mai tumlog ke pyaar ke beecha mai aagayi.
Sanskar- No ragini ismai tumhari koi galti nahi hai. Mai tumse 2 wish maang sakta hu kya?
Ragini- Yes sanskar you can.
Sanskar- First wish tum kabhi apne aap ko fault nahi dogi ismai tumhari koi galti nahi hai.
Ragini smiles and says- Thik hai promise aisa kabhi nahi karungi. Tumhari second wish kya hai?
Sanskar- Actually mai apna second wish kaise bolu mai.
Ragini- Muh se.
Sanskar Smiles.
Ragini- Dekho sanskar tum mere se kuch bhi bol sakte ho ismai darne ki koi jaroorat nahi hai. Bolo kya wish hai tumhara.
Sanskar take a deep breath and said- Dekho ragini i known ye ek wife ka rights hai jo usse milna chhaiye but mai vo rights abhi tumhe nahi de paunga because mai abhi bhi swara se pyaar karta hu. Mai move on karne ka try kar raha hu but ho nahi pa raha hai. I need sometime so please humlog sirf society ko show karne ke liye husband-wife hai but issh room ke andar we are just friend. Please can you fulfill my wish?
Ragini- Sanskar take your time i will never force you i promised you that. Humlog abhi ke liye sirf dost hai aur kuch nahi.
Sanskar- Thank you so much ragini. Mai bhi try karunga mai move on karpau.
Ragini-I will wait for that day. Chalo ab soya jaye.
Sanskar- Hmmm. You can sleep on bed. I will sleep on couch ok.
Ragini- No sanskar you will also sleep on bed.
Sanskar- But ragini vo mai.
Ragini- Humlog apne beech mai pillow wall bana lenge ok ab mai kuch nahi sunogi ab chup chaap so.
Sanskar- Ok. Mai fresh hoke aata hu.
After sometime sanskar comes out of the washroom and sees ragini was sleeping peacefully. Sanskar smiles.
Sanskar(monologue)- Ragini tum bahut achi ho dil ki saaf ho. I hope mai tumhe vo sab rights de saku jo ek wife ko milna chhaiye.
Sanskar goes to other side of the bed and slept.
Time passes sanskar and ragini became bestest friend but sanskar has not move on from swara.

After 2 years

One day sanskar and ragini returns from the party they were hell tired but sanskar was thinking something which was noticed by ragini and she asked
Kya soch rahe ho sanskar?
Sanskar- Vo mai... mai vo
Ragini- Sanskar bolo kya bolna hai.
Sanskar- I want to tell that we are married since 2 years but still maine tumko vo rights nahi diya hai. Humlog husband-wife sirf society ko show karne ke liye hai bas jab humlog ish room mai enter karte hai toh we became friends. Tumhe bura nahi lagta kya jo rights milna chhaiye vo tumko abhi tak nahi mila hai. Don't you feel angry?
Ragini- Mai kyu gussa aongi sanskar
Sanskar- Nahi mera matlab tumko bura toh jaroor lagta hoga aur please tell me truth only.
Ragini(with sad smile)- Sanskar bura toh jaroor lagta hai par ismai humlog kya kar sakte hai. Mai tumpe pressure kabhi nahi dalungi ki mujhe vo haq do bas mujhe uss din ka wait rahega jab tum mujhe khud accept karoge as a wife.
Chalo sanskar ab sone ka time hogaya hai ab no more baat ok.
Sanskar- Mai dress change karke aata hu. Tum jaakar so jao. Goodnight.
Ragini- Goodnight.
After some few minutes sanskar comes out of the washroom and sees ragini sleeping peacefully.
Sanskar(monologue)- I am sorry ragini tumko sad rakhne ke but now i have to move on from swara for you only.

Next day
Office
Sanskar's cabin
Sanskar was sitting on his chair and thinking something but his peaceful time was disturbed by his best friend.
Lakshya(entering the cabin and says) Kya hua 21st century ke devdas kya soch raha hai?
Sanskar- Shut up lakshya.
Lakshya- Acha chill bata kya soch raha hai?
Sanskar- Mai ragini ke baare mai soch raha hu.
Lakshya- Ragini? Kyu usko kya hua?
Sanskar- Kuch nahi hua hai. Mai soch raha hu ki maine usse kitna dard diya hai.
Lakshya- Kaisa dard?
Sanskar- Maine usse vo haq nahi diya jo usse milna chhaiye jo uska haq hai vo sirf mere wajah se yeh dard seh rahi hai. Vo mera ka kitna care karti hai and she loves me so much.
Lakshya- But you don't love her. Tu abhi bhi sirf swara se pyaar karta hai.
Sanskar- Nahi mai apni life mai move on kar chuka hu aur mai apne past ki wajah se apna present aur future ko destroy nahi karunga.
Lakshya- Sanskar yaar tu
Sanskar- Ab kuch nahi lakshya i will give every rights to ragini jo ek wife ko milni chhaiye.
Lakshya- Sanskar tu maan na maan but tu abhi bhi swara se pyaar karta hai.
Sanskar- Ab mai move on kar raha hu aur meri life sirf swara ki jagah hai aur kisiki bhi nahi.
After saying this sanskar leaves for his house.
Lakshya(monologue)- I hope jaise tu move on kar raha hai vaise swara bhi kar paye bas.

Gadidia house
Swara was standing near her window and thinking
Monologue- I hope Sanskar tum apni life mai happy hoge meri bas itni si wish ki tumhare zindagi mai vo sab khusi mile jo tumhe milna chhaiye.
But her chain of thoughts was broken by her father's voice.
Shekhar- Mai andar aa sakta hu.
Swara- Papa aap aise kyu puch rahe aaiye na andar.
Shekhar- Tu abhi tak office pe nahi gayi.
Swara- Bas thodi der mai ja rahi hu kyu puch rahe hai aap.
Shekhar- Kyuki jo ladki last 2 years se apna jyaada time office mai rahe vo aaj ghar mai ish time pe issliye.
Swara- Papa aap aise kyu bol rahe hai.
Shekhar-Toh mai kaise bolu shona tum mujhe baati ho hi nahi tum sad kyu ho har bar puchta hu toh baat ko ghuma deti hai ab tum bolo mai kaise puchu.
Swara- Papa vo baat nahi.
Shekhar- Dekh swara mujhe sach sach bata aakhir baat hai kya.
Swara- Papa vo.
Shekhar make her sit on the bed and he also sat beside her and says
Ab bolo kya baat hai.
Swara- Papa mai ek ladke se bahut pyaar karti hu.
Shekhar- Uss ladke ka naam kya tha.
Swara- Sanskar...sanskar maheshwari.
Shekhar- Sanskar durga prasad ka beta kya.
Swara- Ha.
Shekhar- Par uski toh shaadi hogayi hai na.
Swara- Ha papa uski shaadi hogayi hai(with sad smile).
Shekhar- Swara beta kya vo tumse pyaar karta tha.
Then swara told the story of her and sanskar.
Shekhar- Kya tumhe abhi bhi lagta hai ki tumse pyaar karta tha.
Swara- Ha papa usne vo shaadi jaroor kissi majboori(impel) mai kiya hoga.
Shekhar- Dekh beta ab vo shyad apne life mai move on kar chuka hoga tu bhi move on kar le aur ek fresh start kar.
Swara- Ha papa mai try karungi promise.
Shekhar- Mujhe bas apni old swara chhaiye.
Swara- Oh ho papa relax me sab acha hoga ab aap jao aapko bhi toh office jana hai.
Shekhar- Ha mai jaata hu bye.
Swara(monologue)- Mai pakka try karungi move on kar pau promise papa i will try my best.

Ragsan room
Ragini was arranging items in cupboard then sanskar came.
Ragini- Sanskar tum aagaye chalo mai tumhara dress nikal deti hu.
Sanskar- Uski koi zaroort nahi hai i mean mujhe tumse kuch important baat bolni hai.
Ragini- Ha bolo.
Sanskar take swara and make her sit on the bed. He bend down on his knees and says
Ragini tumko yaad hai maine tumko bola tha jab mai move on kar lunga toh tumko mai sab rights dunga yaad hai na ragini.
Ragini- Ha sanskar yaad hai par kyu puch rahe ho?
Sanskar- Because mai tumhe vo saare rights dunga jo ek wife ko milni chhaiye. Ab mai apni past ke wajah se present aur future ko destroy nahi karunga.
Ragini(with moist eyes of happiness)- Sacchi
Sanskar-Mucchi
Ragini happily hugs sanskar and says
Sanskar tum nahi jaante tumne mujhko kitni bari khusi di hai. Thank you so much sanskar.
Sanskar- Mai tumko kuch nahi de raha hu yeh toh tumhara rights hai.
Ragini- Tabhi. I love you sanskar
Sanskar kissed her forehead and ragini again hugs sanskar.
On that day there real marriage journey has started.

1 year later
Ragsan room
Sanskar was standing near his window and checking file. Then ragini came and back hugged him and says
What are you doing baby?
Sanskar- Nothing just file checking.
Ragini- Leave that stupid file i want to tell you something.
Sanskar turned and says
Bolo kya baat hai.
Ragini give him a envelope and says
Isse padho khudh hi samaj jaoge.
Sanskar-Wow abhi mai jab file padh raha tha toh tumne padhne nahi diya aur ab jab tum koi letter de rahi ho padhne ke liye toh usmai koi problem nahi hai. Kya ragini tum bhi na.
Ragini(irritatedly)-Tum bas yeh letter padho bas.
Sanskar- Ok chill mai padhta hu.
Sanskar reads the letter and was shocked
Ragini- Kuch bolo toh
Sanskar(excitedly)-Sacchi
Ragini- Nahi jhuth. Common sanskar aise baat koi jhuth bolega kya.
Sanskar happily hugged ragini and shouted mai papa bane waala hu.
Sanskar- Ragini tum nahi janti tumne mujhe kitni badi khusi diya. I can't explain you in words.
Ragini- Shaanti baby shaanti relax karo abhi baby ko aane mai 9 months baaki hai.
Sanskar- Relax kaisa relax? Ragini ab se mere liye har din ek best day hoga mere liye.
Priya hugs kabir and says
I love you baby.
Sanskar kissed her forehead and they again hugged each other.

After 9 months when aayu was born that was the bestest day for sanskar and ragini. They were happily living but after 1 year priya's accident happened. All happiness turned into sad.

Present
Sanskar reached hospital and he directly goes to icu and asked
Doctor meri wife ragini vo kaisi hai abhi.
Doctor- Mr. Maheshwari please relax abhi aapki wife ka health critical hai abhi humlog kuch nahi bol sakte hai.
Sanskar(angrily)- Aise kaise nahi bol sakte hai aap doctor kisliye hai sabki life bachna aapka duty hai.
Doctor- Mr. Maheshwari please baat ko samjhiye abhi humlog kuch nahi bol sakte balki aapko unko thanks bolna chhaiye jo inhe time pe le aaye.
Sanskar- Kaun laaya tha
MAINE...
Then there a voice came and sanskar turned to see whose voice is this and sees swara after long 4 yrs.
They were having a eyelock which was broken by doctor's voice.
yes mr. Maheshwari inhone nai hi aapki wife ko laai thi. I think i should leave because abhi operation karna so be strong.
Sanskar and swara were meeting after long 4 yrs so there was awkwardness which was broken by swara and says
Hi Sanskar
Sanskar- Hi swara ... long time 4 years ke baad mil rahe hai.
Swara- Hmm. Long time we were in the same city but kabhi mile nahi.
Sanskar and swara were having eye lock again and this time it was broken by nurse and says
Aap patient ke husband hai na.
Sanskar shook his head
Nurse- Aap yeh sab medicine jaldi lekar aajaiye abhi ke abhi iski bahut zaroorat hai.
Sanskar-Ok nurse mai abhi lekar aata hu.
Just then lakshya came and says
Tu mat ja mai lekar aa jata hu tujhe abhi yahi rehna chhaiye.
Then he sees swara and he was shocked to see her
Swara tum yaha kya kar rahi ho?
Swara-Vo mai
She was cut off by sanskar and says
Ragini ko yahi hospital lekar aayi hai aur ab tu please medicine jaldi lekar aa bas.
Lakshya- Mai bas 5 minute mai aaya.
Then lakshya leaves and after few minutes he came and give medicines to nurse while sanskar was marching outside the operation theater from one side to another so lakshya goes to him
He kept his one hand on sanskar's shoulder and says
Sanskar relax kar kuch nahi hoga ragini ko sab acha hoga.
Sanskar- Kaise relax karu lakshya waha meri wife ke jaan danger mai hai aur mai relax karu kaise.
Lakshya- Sanskar vo tere tension lene se achi nahi hojayegi relax kar.
Sanskar- Mujhe apne se bhi jyaada aayu ke liye tension because vo ragini ke saath hamesha rehta aur jab rota hai toh usko sirf ragini shaant kar sakti hai aur koi nahi.
Lakshya- Sab acha hoga Sanskar. Trust me.
Just then kaka(Sanskar's servent) enters with aayu who was crying badly.
Sanskar- Kaka aap yaha kya kar rahe hai vo bhi pratik ke saath aur yeh utna ro kyu raha hai?
Kaka- Beta aayu baba hamesha mum mum bol rahe the toh hume kuch samaj mai nahi aaya toh hum yaha lekar aagaye par tabhi yeh shaant nahi ho raha hai.
Sanskar- Aap mujhe dijiye mai ek baar try karta hu. Isse shaant karne ka.
Sanskar takes aayu in his arm and trying soothing him but it is going in vain because aayu was crying nonstop but this was noticed by swara so she goes to them and says
Sanskar mujhe baby do mai sambhal lungi.
Sanskar- Nahi swara mai karlunga tujhse nahi hoga.
Swara- Sanskar maine kaha na mai sambhal lungi mujhe pata hai baby sabko kaise handle karna hota hai ab toh do.
Sanskar sighted and gave aayu to swara and she take in her arms and starts trying soothing in which she gets success and on the other side Sanskar and lakshya were shocked.
Sanskar(monologue)- Aayu kaise shaant hogaya isko toh sirf ragini hi shaant kar sakti hai toh swara nai kaise karliya.
His trance was broken by doctor.
Sanskar- Doctor meri wife kaisi hai ab.
Doctor- I am sorry mr. Maheshwari but hum aapki wife ki jaan nahi bacha sake she is now no more.
I am really sorry.
Sanskar break down with tears on his knees and starts shouting
NO AISA NAHI HO SAKTA HAI vo mujhe aise chor ke kaise ja sakti hai please doctor try again please doctor.
He was begging to doctor but doctor says
I am sorry mr. Maheshwari
Doctor left.
Swara gave aayu to lakshya and she sat on his knees and starts cupping sanskar's face and says
Sanskar please sambhalo apne aap ko aayu ke liye please.
She has also tears in her eyes and sanskar shook his head and hugs swara tightly which make swara shocked but she doesn't protest because she knows he is going through the bad time. So she also hugs him back which make sanskar shocked because he doesn't accept from her that she will also hugged him.

PRECAP- SWASAN ASKED TO DO MARRIAGE BUT SANSKAR DISAGREED.
END OF PART-3
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Edited by sujoyricky - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing update...Feel so bad for Sanskaar... just when he was moving on he got this tragedy...
Hopefully everything would go well and can see a lot of swasan from the next part...
Great story line... can't wait to read the upcoming partss...
Edited by Chexa123 - 9 years ago
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Awesome update...
Thnks 4 d pm...

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