Broken Promises - A Praja SS - part 3 Updt on of Pg 4 - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: Mnp279

Nice update

But JB doesn't know what happened to Ajab and Pratap?
Guess she was away and Ajab hasn't told anyone

Chakrawati rock!!
Hope they succeed


Thank you!!!!!!
The flashback starts in the next update
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Posted: 9 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: roshallovepraja

amazing concept dear

loved the updates
do continue
do update soon


Thank you ! Will update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: sujata_patil

Lots of questions... Evident that there was a misunderstanding!!! Chakrawati like true friends shall sort their differences.

Looking forward to them meeting again and the past to unfold...

Interesting concept Prerna

Lots of questions and misunderstandings. Will update soon.. Hopefully few questions will be answered


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Posted: 9 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: my_angel...

awsum...wow...chakrawati rock...waiting for praja meet and jb's entry...and also know the past of praja...oh gracious god...i'm very eager i tell u...so update soon


The past unfolds in the next update.. Currently working on it. Will update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#25
Sorry friends for the delay in updating the story. Was busy in project deadlines...had to work at home too.. so just got a breather and though of updating what i had written a while ago, It is a short udpate. But will follow up with a long one soon.
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The Past - The First Meeting

Maasa I was like any other girl.. Taking life as it came. I never considered myself beautiful... But he made me feel beautiful and loved.

I still remember the first time I met him. It had been a week since my junior college had started . My parents had sent me to an out of town hostel which was good in academics and I was always above average in my studies. This hostel was home to many royal kids. But there was no distinction as emphasis was on education.
That day being a Friday was the monthly recreation day. That day the planned activity was movie time. Sau my childhood friend was not feeling well so we both skipped it. She was fast asleep and I was tossing and turning and finally decided to go the library to read a book. The good thing @ this hostel was that the library was open 24/7 and I was a book-o-holic.
I found a book I wanted to read and had just sat on my chair when someone called me. "Excuse me, can u tell me where the boys dormitory is? And before I could turn to put a face to that voice, the lights went out.
"What was that?" Said the voice again.
"Oh don't worry, this has been happening from the last 1 week, some kind of electricity issues in the building, no worries I came prepared." Knowing this issue, I had come prepared with a candle and matchstick. As soon as Ajabde lit it, the face asking her questions became visible. Standing in front of her was a very handsome boy ..
As soon as the light shone... His eyes bore into the most mesmerizing almond shaped eyes he had ever seen. And he forgot what question he had. She waved a hand across his face making the flame flicker and both of them put their palms to protect the flame from going out.
"Ahh.. Were u looking for directions? Ajabde broke the awkward silence which had engulfed the room.
"Oh yes.. Can U please tell me the direction to the boys dormitory."
"Sure. Let me show you." And with the light from the candle, he followed her.
"So you are new here?"
"Oh yes. Just got to town and straight here. By the way my name is Pratap Singh." Saying this he extended his hand.
"Nice to meet you Mr. Pratap Singh". He noted the chuckle in her voice. "And you are?"
"I came here 2 weeks back and yes u have missed a weeks study hours and last but not the least I am Ajabde" she replied joining his hand in the hand shake.

His quizzical expression with one raised eyebrow annoyed her."Ajabde..."
"Yeah I know.. Everyone thinks it's a wierd name but for your kind information my name means the one with a unique soul.. That's me Ajabde"
"Oh sorry did I hit a raw nerve..I actually like the sound of ur name. It's different but I like it.. Now let's see if the actual person is as unique as the name?" He smiled mischievously earning a fiery look with those expressive eyes which seemed to be pulling him towards her.
"Hey no bad feelings."
"Hmm. Here you are.. U just cross this bridge and there stands ur dorm."
"Thank you. By the way "Friends"?"
"We just met?"
"So.. Is there a rule that u can't be friends at the first meeting itself? And anyways I don't know anyone here yet. My friend is supposed to join me in a day or two. So what say. Let's shake hands on it."
"Hmmm ok. Friends it is".
"C u tomm Ajab"
"It's Ajabde..."
"But I like Ajab more ..." He twinkled his eyes and proceeded towards his dorm. As she turned to go towards her dorm, the lights came on.. And she turned to see the retreating figure if she could catch a proper look at her new friend. But he was on his way so she carried on her way that instant he looked back to see her .. Ajab..the first girl whom he had felt comfortable with.. Maybe it was the darkness.. But he actually asked her to be his friend... Him.. Who did not talk too much to girls coz he felt all were after his fame and fortune... But this girl was different.. He just felt it in his heart.. And his Maasa had always told him to follow his heart...
Till tomm when we meet again...

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Posted: 9 years ago
#26
I m ur firstie. It was short nd sweet. Praja first meeting was so sweet update soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#27
Loved the update!!
Sweet one!!
But next time I want long updates pls!!

only if you r free

Lots of Love
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Posted: 9 years ago
#28
Interesting first meeting... Praja is always so! They run away from the whole world but when they come to each other stranger is not even a dictionary word to them!!!
Loving the story. Looking forward to the update
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Posted: 9 years ago
#29
Wow! Short n sweet😳
Lost in Loveland again... That's the PrAja magic😳

Loved the convos n expressional details... Great job!
N continue soon😃

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