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Posted: 10 years ago

#21

I wish real ek jashan me bhi asa hota.

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Shikhayugal

@Shikhayugal

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Posted: 10 years ago

#22

That was really beautiful
Loved khushi's little surprise for Arnav
Truly loved it
Thanks for the pm :)

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zebali

@zebali

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Posted: 10 years ago

#23

It. Was greatest dear.
Hot and romantic .
Brilliant one shot.
Tf pm.

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aquagal

@aquagal

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+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#24

Such a sweet story. Congrats on your first piece of writing kooltoad...😊
Loved the excitement and fear of becoming parents along with their Hamesha!!

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Fried Rice Ji ðŸš

@Friedriceji

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Posted: 10 years ago

#25

Edited on page 1 😉

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MIT DEY

@mit0905

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Posted: 10 years ago

#26

Superb...Just like sweet..😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊

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alwaysarshi

@alwaysarshi

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#27

A lovely OS. This shot gave us what we so desperately needed. A lovely night, a confession, a morning after 😊

Loved the baby talk

Arnav will indeed be a great father.

A whole Arshi package with them embarking on the journey of parenthood and completing their choti si duniya.

Loved it. Loved it. Loved it.

Can you please give us another part?

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Ruwiz_IPKKND

@Ruwiz_IPKKND

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Posted: 10 years ago

#28

Sari & Pari you guys have done a great job !! 👏

I loved it better than the actual one we got! 😛😛😛 If the TV industry give these writers a chance I'm sure it will rock!! 😆😆

I simply loved the report part it was so so touching! Arnav's love & tenderness towards the pregnant Khushi was so adorable!! Loved it! ⭐️⭐️

The morning after you know was so pure & romantic! 😳😳

Thank you for writing this absolutely lovely OS!! 😳😳😳

Edited by Ruwiz_IPKKND - 10 years ago