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Special Banner by Lakshu (-Lakshmi-) for the last update

You must be thinking that why I m completing it

I think I have shown what I wanted to show.. as I want to keep my stories crisp and up to the needed scenes..I don't want to drag it by showing the daily routine of Maaneet, because it will have either their romance or their fights or some other angel.. I have shown every possible twist in this story..

I want you to remember it as a very happy healthy and Love story of Maaneet who passed through various phases of their life but overcame all the hurdles..

Something is still left in this story which I will include in Epilogues..

Special Note

One more thing I want to tell you that Valli 30-MY OPP (Official Picture Provider) is taking a break from this work of providing pics.

She is going to get married on 24th of February..and will join me again after coming back from the break

So till then this is my last update with most suited pics..Though I will try my best to put pics but can't promise

Please wish Valli 30 for her happy and blissful married life



Part 105 (Last part)



Geet was in kitchen seeing the preparations for lunch..Maan and kids were still not back and she was little worried now.

She was thinking in her heart -What if all this leaves a negative impact on Yash..Maan too haven't call me..I m really worried what is happening between them.. I think I should call him ,it's hours they have left home..

Maan saw that Geet wasn't there . He told Suresh to bring all the things from the car and he asked him to be careful with the things.

Suresh kept all the things on the table..

Geet came out of the kitchen to call Maan and found him there with kids..

Geet came near them and looked at maan with some hope but Maan did not give her any good signal..

he was not looking happy..Sargam too was standing quite with him

Yash was standing with low head..

Geet took a deep breath-It's lunch time.. let's have lunch and she turned but felt a tug on her dupatta

Geet looked down and found yash holding it.

Geet looked at him. He too was looking at her only.

Geet-Kya hua Yash?

Yash-Are you angry on me?

Geet-Nahin..I m not angry..

Yash-Sorry

Geet took a deep breath and turned saying-You don't need sorry yash. Wash your hands and be ready for the lunch..

But he did not leave her dupatta-she stopped but did not turn

Yash-H...Happy Birthday

Geet-Yash I told na that I m not going to accept any wish on my birthday

saying this she moved but froze at her place hearing him again-Happy Birthday... and after a pause-MOM

Geet turned with a jerk towards him..She could not believe her ears..

She saw him standing with a bouquet of roses in his hands..He forwarded that towards her

She knelt down in front of him

Yash forwarded that bouquet towards her-Sorry and he held his ears..

Maan was smiling seeing Geet's reaction and Sargam started to giggle.

Whole family was surprised to see Yash calling Geet MOM for the first time

Geet removed his hands from his ears and looked deeply at his face. She wasn't sure what she heard few moments ago

So she asked him -Yash ! What did you said just now?

Yash-Sorry

Geet-No .. before that ?

Yash-Happy Birthday

Geet -Offo..Nahin wo nahin.. uske baad kya bola

Yash looked at her and staring seriously at her face he said-Mom

Geet still wasn't believing-Phir se kaho

Yash-Mom

And Geet could not stop herself from filling her eyes

Geet-One more time

Yash with a smile-Mom

Geet filled his face in her palms and kissed all over it .She hugged him tight in her arms and stayed like that for some time

After feeling peace of getting her son back at her heart she parted him away from her and said-Will you call me Mom always?

He nodded

Geet forwarded her hand towards him-promise me

Yash-Promise Mom..

Hearing this she kissed him hard on his face one more time

Saargam too came near her-Happy Birthday Mom.and gave her a beautiful card. Happy Birthday Mom was written over it . Geet took her too in her arms and kissed her-Thank U baby.

She was holding card and bouquet in her both hands and both kids were in her arms. She one more time kissed them one by one- Thank U so much. I love you

Sargam and Yash-love you too Mom

Whole family gathered around them ,,Everyone was really happy today for Geet and Yash

Geet looked at Maan and he blinked his eyes at her as if was saying that he had actually made her wish fulfilled today..

Geet smiled at him with tears and nodded her head

Sargam-Mom one more surprise for you

Geet-Surprise?

Sargam-Yess.. and she pulled her towards the table where all the things were kept

Maan had already arranged everything till then on the table

Geet holding the hand of Yash and Sargam came there and looked at the table.

There was a beautiful cake on the table .Happy Birthday Mom was written over it too like it was written over the card

Geet felt and unknown pleasure in her heart today

She kept card and bouquet on the chair . Today her emotions were not in control..Her eyes again filled with water though this time it was due to happiness


Rahul said-Geet please yaar ab mat rona..today is the happiest day yaar..so why to cry? Tum ladkiyon ko bas rone ka bahana chhaiye

Geet-main ladki nahin hoon

Rahul's eyes widened-What you are not a girl? OMG.. Maan are you aware that you are married to a boy and he smirked looking at Geet

Maan smiled seeing them fighting

Geet-Shut up Rahul.. I mean main ladkiyon jaisi nahin hoon..I don't cry

Rahul-Achchha to ye kya hai and he took a tear from her cheek on her finger

Geet -ye to...

Sudha Rahul-chup karo..kya bachhon ki tarah behave kar rahe ho..don't irritate her now

And Rahul was shut

And the kids were giggling see them fighting and then getting scolded from the elders

Karan-Haan bua jaldi se cake kaato na.. mujhe khana hai.Bhookh lagi hai. and Geet pulled his cheeks-Aww mera baby.. chooo chweeet

Anie-Only two minutes baby.. Bua will give you the cake

Geet called all children near her. She even called Sameer too-Sameer tum bhi aa jao

Maan was standing next to Geet.

Geet was going to blow the candles.

Sargam stopped her-Offo mom... aapko kuchh nahin pata..Make a wish first..

Everyone smiled at Sargam's gesture

Geet closed her eyes and made a wish in her heart-Please God.Thaank U so much for everything . Just have one wish ..Keep everyone in my family happy.. Today you fulfilled my biggest wish.Yash called me Mom..please don't make him recall his past again and she opened her eyes..

Her eyes were wet when she opened them.. Maan looked at her and kept his arm around her waist.Geet looked at him and smiled

Geet-Yash sargam ...I want both of you to join me..you always cut your birthday cake with Dad on your birthday..now come and join me

Sargam-Yehhh.. hum phir se cake cut karenge..do do baar birthday hoga hamaara iss baar

And Yash and Sargam joined Geet in cutting cake.. everyone wished them by singing the birthday song

Geet first offered the cake to Yash as he had fulfilled her wish of hearing mom from him

Yash took the cake in his mouth. Geet kissed him-Thank u Yash for making my birthday special..and Yash smiled at her..He was actually feeling good to see his mom happy today..

and Geet fed cake to everyone..she offered the cake to Maan at the last..

Maan took a piece from that cake and both fed each other together..

Maan- Are you happy Geet?

Geet-This is the happiest day of my life Maan.. Thank u so much..

Maan you are always welcome sweet heart..

Though her eyes were little wet but Maan knew that they were happy tears..

Every one enjoyed the celebration.. as they had the double reason to celebrate the day.. Geet's happiness was actually was flowing from her face..

Her heart was full of peace at last.. She knew that yash will take time to be used to call her Mom.

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It was night

Maan and Geet asked kids to go to the bed as next day they were having their school.

Yash and sargam wished them Good night.and geet felt yash voice as a balmon er heart when he said- Good Night Mom..

It was the best birthday of Geet's life ..Finally her son called her MOM..She was looking very satisfied as if her biggest problem was solved..

Maaneet entered in their bedroom..Geet was not able to herself from smiling Maan held her and looked at her face

Happiness was clearly visible at her face

He pulled her in to him-Hmmm..Seems someone is looking very happy today and he rubbed his nose on nose..

Geet leaned on him in a relaxed position-Haan Maan.. Today I m really happy.. we got our son back to us. Now I hope nothing bad is going to happen with him..You know he has forgotten about the photos completely..So I m really hopeful for his future

And she turned in to his arms to face him-Maan I want to thank you for making it possible. You truly fulfilled my wish today..

Maan-Geet main to hamesha se hi tumhaare saath tha, hoon aur rahunga. Till we are together,we will overcome every problem of our life

Geet-Put her head on his heart-I know Maan.That's why I trust you blindly. And today too I was quite hopeful that you would help me to convince

Today she was passing through various emotions Some time she was so happy to stop the grin on her face and another moment she was emotional and her eyes were becoming wet

Maan wanted to divert her from all.

Geet -Maan I will be back after the change But He did not let her move

He caged her in his arms-Waise Geet. I m little sad

Geet-Kyun? kya hua Maan?

Maan you are too happy.. I gave you your fav gift today but did not get any gift in return

Geet looked at him-What?return gift?.Maan wo to bachchon ko dete hain

Maan-So what? Today I too want my return gift from you after all It was me who helped you to fulfill your wish and you forgot me..Not fair

Geet-Ok then say what you want?

Maan-Hmmm what do I need? Let me think first..and he pretended to think

Geet was still looking at him with confusion-What he was going to ask and why he was thinking so deeply for the gift

Geet -aisa kya gift chhaiye aapko jo itna soch rahe ho.

Maan-Ummm ..First promise me that you won't say no for that

Now Geet was super confused-Aisa kya maangna hai aapko..No I won't promise. First you tell me what you want..

Maan-Seee..How quickly you changed..Now I understood you just say that you trust me but you don't trust me? You are not ready to promise me..

Geet looked at him with horrified eyes-Maan wha are you saying? When did I say that I don't trust you

Maan-Then promise me

Geet with some doubt-Ok Promise..Now tell me what you want?

Maan- I..I want..

Maan was increasing the heartbeats of Geet by stretching his words..

Geet-Maan jaldi boliye

Maan-Geet I want you to kiss me

And Geet's eyes got wider-Whattt? And next moment her cheeks were red with blush-No way Maan.. I can't

Maan-Why can't you kiss me? How many times you have wildly done it..bhool gayi kya? And he winked at her

Geet got embarrassed geeting the meaning of his words"Maan.. that is the other thing.. but right now I can't..main besharam nahin hoon

Maan-What do you mean by main besharam nahin hoon..You mean to say ki I m besharam and he stood with his hands on his waist as if he was angry

Geet-No I did not mean that.. I mean mujhe sharam aati hai..main ladki hoon na ..

Maan-Geet we are parents of two kids.and you are still saying like a newly married.

and he smirked and teased her-Hayee Geet kya baat hai..

and he held her from the back tumhaare inhi nakhron ki wajah se to tum aur khoobsurat lagti ho aur mujhe apne pallu se baandh le rakhti ho..

Geet-What do you mean by pallu se baandh ke rakhti hoon? Kyun aapka bi mann karta hai kya dusri ladkiyon ke saath nain matakka karne ka..to jaaiye na roka kisne hain.

She twisted her lips and with a huuuh she turned to other side..

Maan muffled her laughter seeing her like that.. He loved that angry Geet, he tried to turn Geet towards her but she jerked his hand.. He peeped in from behind to look if she was actually angry or was pretending

.. but she was standing with straight face..

Maan-ok Baba ab gussa mat ho.. waise maine kab kahaa ki mujhe dusri ladkiyon ke saath nain matakka karna hai..Mujhe to apni pyaari biwi ki naino se bahar aane ka hi time nahin to dusron ko kya dekhna..mujhe to bas apna return gift lena tha..ab tumhen nahin dena to chhodo..main uske bina hi kaam chala loonge and saying this he left her and turned to go but geet held his hand.

She came near him and put her arms around her neck. And started to lean towards him..Maan was looking at her with deep eyes

and next moment he felt geet's soft lips capturing his own lips.. He could feel the softness in that kiss. He tightly held her and pulled her more in to him.. soon that soft kiss turned in to a passionate one

..Geet;s grip on his neck was also tight.. few moments later both were standing breathless with their heads resting on each other..

Maan with unsteady breathes-I love you Geet

Geet-I love you too Maan..and Maan took her in to his embrace..

Geet-Maan.I m ready to face anything when you are with me..Just keep me holding like this only

Maan- Where will I go Geet? Tumhaare bina jeene ki adat hi nahin hai mujhe.. meri har subah tum se shuru aur har sham tum par hi khatam hoti hai Geet..

Geet-I love you Maan... and Maan kissed her forehead and again engulfed her in his arms...


The End

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Edited by Rashmi... - 9 years ago


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Main itne dinon ke baad first aayi hoon pehle thoda naachthi hoon.. lakshu ko last update mein peeche chod diya😉

dekh lakshu teek se dekh kaise naach rahi hoon😆😆😆



patha nahi pv ki journey mein main kitne comments miss kiya aur kitne comments diye.. par jitne bhi diye hatkar hi di hogi 😆comments dene se kaise escape kare mujhse seekh sakthe hai😆


sach mein this story attracted so many readers with wonderful story line and the way u protrayed the characters and the up and downs in their life... extraordinary.. usually no one likes others pairing with maan and geet .. but in this all accepted yash with geet and arpita with maan.. because of the title 😆😆😆they have that hope that maan and geet are going to be one later...😳 beech beech mein taiyji ko laakar sab ko tension mein daali... bechare readers kitne pareshaan hogaye thay... kbm ke banner dekhne ke baad sab ko tassali mili😆mujhe tab laga agar wo banner update mein hi daalthi tho aur mazaa aathi.. instead of posting in the before update itself😆😆.. chalo finally everything has to come to an end.. aur yeh bhi end hogayi hai..with happy family...


ab jaldi se next story shuru karo indu ki idea ko dhyaan mein rakthe huye😉
Edited by priya111111 - 9 years ago

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