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bluesky10

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Posted: 9 years ago

#41

Sounds interesting

Would like to read it

Congratulations for the new story

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Yagya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#42

Sneak Peek of Part 1

" Malai Choda..Hey Bhagavana Tiniharule Malai Samatera Hunecha." The lady in black struggled to get free from his grip while Arnav was all lost in her deep, hazel eyes which had streaks of fear in them.

(Leave me. O God, They will catch me!)

Arnav jerked himself back to present as he straightened her up as slowly as possible as his heart didn't want to let go off her. There was an aura of innocence, an aura of compassion around her which tugged at the strings of his heart, of whose existence he was ignorant of.

Her eyes traveled to something or someone as they widened out into saucers before they closed completely, letting out her body weight on him, making him lose his senses again.

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I am learning Nepali for this! I need applause for this. I chose Sikkim state which borders Nepal as Khushi's native.

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adyaa

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Posted: 9 years ago

#43

i love it .. and pls pm me as well

Edited by AdyaXoxo - 9 years ago

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nandrajogdivya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#44

superb princess waiting keep it up

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nandrajogdivya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#45

superb princess waiting keep it up waiting for more my princess

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deesha1989

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Posted: 9 years ago

#46

You are indeed a dedicated writer Yagya. 👏Nice teaser. Looking forward to the update. PM please 😆

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Yagya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: deesha1989
You are indeed a dedicated writer Yagya. 👏Nice teaser. Looking forward to the update. PM please 😆

I am yet to PM. All my dedication goes off the window while PMing. I hate it. *whines* Thank you so much.

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manjunaidu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#48

I really appreciate your effort in learning a language for writing a fictional character language 👏 .Unique concept.would love to read more of this awesome story.