FF: When Love Calls|Part 1|26/2

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Yagya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: barsha_dash
Hey Yagz,
First of all kaan pakad ke sorry for nt commenting anywhere till now. Life is getting hectic day by day. I will read every fic of yours dheere dheere.
The title and the prologue caught my attention. And I am looking forward to read this. I loved the concept. A fresh one for sure! And Kudos, girl! You are learning Nepali for this! *claps* *pats your back* :D

Arre Re, it is okay. Dosti Ke Usool Tho Bhool Hi Gayi Ho! Take your time.

Thank you so much, Aru. Ab Seekhna Padhta Hai, Pyaar Kiya Hai Aap Sabse Nibhaana Tho Padhega Hi!

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sweetydoll32

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Posted: 9 years ago

#62

Awesome teaser dear please update soon

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Rish_Rubles

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Posted: 9 years ago

#63

Nice peeku sneaku! Though I will have a hard time understanding the lang but okay

Love story dhamake daar lagti hai

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sana2c

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Posted: 9 years ago

#64

It's different
excited to read further..

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hiya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#65

awesome teaser...
u r really learning nepali... wow/...
hatts off to u...

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tparvaiz

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Posted: 9 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: .MereRangMein.
Sneak Peek of Part 1

" Malai Choda..Hey Bhagavana Tiniharule Malai Samatera Hunecha." The lady in black struggled to get free from his grip while Arnav was all lost in her deep, hazel eyes which had streaks of fear in them.

(Leave me. O God, They will catch me!)

Arnav jerked himself back to present as he straightened her up as slowly as possible as his heart didn't want to let go off her. There was an aura of innocence, an aura of compassion around her which tugged at the strings of his heart, of whose existence he was ignorant of.

Her eyes traveled to something or someone as they widened out into saucers before they closed completely, letting out her body weight on him, making him lose his senses again.

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I am learning Nepali for this! I need applause for this. I chose Sikkim state which borders Nepal as Khushi's native.

😲😲😲 oh.

but DI 😭 ... i don't understand 😭 but update with English too

i'm looking forfards for coming update

you're awesome writer DI🥳

plz continue

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Nazzz16

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Posted: 9 years ago

#67

Lovely teaser

Update soon !

Thnxxx for pm dear 😊

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Yagya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#68

Translation to be given in brackets.

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Delhi International Airport,

Arnav Singh Raizada landed in Delhi International Airport in a mood which was typical of him. He was fuming that Aman had not yet completed the work which he had assigned to him and no one was there to pick him up. Undeniably, that hurt the big fat ego that he possessed.

Swimming through the uncountable mails he had received post the filtering by his personal secretary, Arnav walked towards the exit after collecting his luggage as something suddenly banged against him. In a reflex action, Arnav held the softness which collided against him only to notice that it was a lady dressed up in a burqa who had streaks of terror and pain in her eyes while she was panting hard.

" Malai Choda..Hey Bhagavana Tiniharule Malai Samatera Hunecha." The lady in black struggled to get free from his grip while Arnav was all lost in her deep, hazel eyes which had streaks of fear in them.

(Leave me. O God, They will catch me!)

Arnav jerked himself back to present as he straightened her up as slowly as possible as his heart didn't want to let go off her. There was an aura of innocence, an aura of compassion around her which tugged at the strings of his heart, of whose existence he was ignorant of.

Her eyes traveled to something or someone as they widened out into saucers before they closed completely, letting out her body weight on him, making him lose his senses again.

He stood staring at her as if the time had halted for him. He could hear his heart beats for the first time in his life while a certain urge of pulling away the veil covering her face reverberated in his heartbeats. His brain had lost the control over his actions as his heart had taken the reins in its hands. His hand automatically moved towards her face with a mission of revealing the face of the enchantress.

But before he could lay his eyes on the lady in his arms, a hand had held him by his shoulder which made him jerk back to the reality much to his disappointment.

" Yeh Lakdi Hamka Do!" Being from Himalayas, the people who were running after the lady in black couldn't speak in perfect Hindi which made Arnav's brain work in a pace faster than that of sound's.

A lady dressed up in a burqa, whose every feature spoke of fear, someone who was so lost in running that she didn't notice him and had lost consciousness probably by seeing these people. Arnav had quickly connected the dots while his insides shouted protectiveness for the lady in his arms.

He straightened her up but didn't loosen his grip on her while his face shouted calmness before the storm. His ears had heard the mild whisper from the lady's mouth which sounded like, " Malai Bachao!"

(Save Me!)

" Aap Inke Hai Kya Lagte Hai?" Arnav decided to confirm his thoughts even after hearing her whisper by giving a benefit of doubt to the people in front of him.

" Tumka Ka? Lakdi Hamka Do!" One of the rugged guys demanded from him while moving towards him to pull away the lady with him, but Arnav had faster reflexes.

" SECURITY!!"

Arnav's one shout was enough to bring the airport security to them along with the attention of all those in the airport. Not giving a damn to it, Arnav spoke as he pointed his fingers at the people,

" These people are following this lady for some wrong intentions as this lady fainted in my arms in a fearful daze due to them. Drag them away from here."

The airport security appeared to be flustered as they were scared of the consequences for not following the orders of THE Arnav Singh Raizada but at the same time, they couldn't drag any random person away like that.

" Sir, are you sure..."

The guard was cut off in the middle as one of the managers had come over there,

" Mr.Raizada is right! This lady here was chased by these men just as she was collecting her baggage. She started running seeing them that she even left her baggage behind. I had asked the senior manager to call up all the security and warn them about this, but clearly it was Mr.Raizada who saved the day. Thank you so much, Mr.Raizada. These guys would be taken care of by us."

He glanced at the lady once before he saw the guys being dragged away into one of their rooms till the police arrives to take them away.

" Va Hamri Beri Ha!" (Woh Hamari Beti Hai!)

The security neither could understand what he meant nor had an intention to stop doing his work while the manager lady spoke again,

" Mr.Raizada, are you related to her? If not, you can leave this lady in our care. Once again thank you so much." Arnav had no intentions of letting her go after hearing what she had undergone a few minutes before. His mind screamed of possessiveness and protectiveness for her and there was no way he would let her be with these strangers.

" Umm..I am a friend. Don't thank me, please. And you were mentioning about her baggage. Would you please hand the baggage to me?"

The manager had no other option but to believe Arnav Singh Raizada who had just saved that girl. Anyone would have believed that she was someone special to him seeing the way he was holding her and the admiration gleaming in his eyes as he eyed her.

" ASR?" Aman's voice fell on Arnav's ears who glanced sideways to see a panting Aman approaching him with shock written all over his face as he saw his boss with a lady in his arms and everyone staring at them.

" ASR, all okay?" Aman questioned while Arnav calmly answered,

" Yes, Aman. Please take my baggage and the baggage in the manager's hands. Thank you so much for handing the baggage." Arnav picked up the lady in his arms and started walking while Aman clearly looked startled but chose to follow his instructions anyways as he was aware of the angry side of his usually cool boss.

Arnav made the lady sit beside him in the back seat while Aman kept the baggage in the boot and sat in the passenger seat. Relaxing and garnering enough courage, Aman questioned,

" ASR, who is she?"

For a few seconds, Arnav went blank. Blank that he was taking a random girl whose face he didn't even see to his home. Blank that he was feeling all those mushy emotions for a random girl whose identity he was unaware of.

Just as Arnav looked dazed with his thoughts, the lady's hand fell towards him due to a turn in the road as her fist opened to reveal something like a boarding pass. Thinking that it would answer his queries, Arnav picked it up and read the name of the passenger which read as,

" Khushi Gupta!"

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Edited by .MereRangMein. - 9 years ago