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Res ! Res ! Res ! Res

Unres !

Finally unres ! I actually unres it last time but it some how got deleted . My iPad keeps crashing so I m sorry for that . 😳

This was a treat to read Mou . A os after os long . And I just realised that we don't have actually much Kaliyug os . 😆 Just this one and the other one I wrote for Jalte Diye .

And I guess you forgot ! This is a TS not a os . So where is the next part bhai ? 😕😆

Anyways ! A great job done here !

Loved the title . Home of love uh huh . Par apna home of love Aur love of life chod k Arjun baba kaha challa jaata hai ?

I love this type of equation where the boy is guilty and keeps apologising to the girl 😆

But poor Panchali . He keeps leaving her ! Arya 😡

She does not even eat 🥱 oh gosh ! Arjun you really have to do something ! 🤔

And the nightmare ! 🥱 That was a utter surprise . You know I first thought it was reality and I was like *look Arjun what did you do .😡* but thank god that was a nightmare

By the way loved the caring Arjun 😃

And you are going to relate this story with Dwarparyug 😕

Anyways update the next part soon . And I mean soon .

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amazing one!! 😃

loved it!!

one more part is there right...waiting for it!!

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Originally posted by: Sonatia
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thats kinky 🤗 ILY2

friendship love ain't kinky 😆 I m engaged to my best friend 😆

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Mou, i am reading your os for the first time but i must say you are an amazing writer. You captured everything so well that i could somehow feel yagyaseni's pain. It is dreadful yet realistic. I guess this is some sort of rebirth story. He left her alone just like he did in the past and the rape ,the drunkards all, that sure is the VH part.
But this is indeed superb 👏 and can't wait to read next part 😳

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