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Posted: 9 years ago
amazing story ...

cute nandini n rude manik...

loved it

cont soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Such a cute promo .. Excited .. You always surprise us.. So no guess but damn sure it's going to be super awesome update ..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Promo s so cute n super exciting...
Cant wait to read d update...
Manan talk abt nandu's diary...
I think Nandu may wrote about her feelings for manik and may be her wishlist also..
Do continue dear...
Waitin 4 update...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow it feels so good to be sucked into this fairy tale.
However I can feel myself frowning with the change in Nandu's behaviour. Did something happen that made her change her view towards manik?
I love your work so I would like it if you took this comment with a light heart and just solve a dilemma here.
Waiting for more, thank you
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awww kitna cute promo
Waiting fr update
Maybe nandus felngs of how she was felng f start to nw
Continue sooonnn
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Edited by Mawara_Ejaz - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Update is coming in an hour or so!
Before you guys read am telling you all kay this update don't contain the Precap scene..!🤣
Na Na gushha ni karna! It will happen in the next Chappie InshaAllah which I have wrote almost already BUT will post it tomorrow if and only you will give me a super duper awesome response! Will you? Promise karo pehly😭..! Winners will be announced Tomorrow only with the update and yeah! Only a single reader guessed correctly that too with a maybe although you all were right about the feelings thing but I want a single word answer! am again giving you all a little time! Think and comment! Whenever you don't have common words to express yourself what you really use? Guess guess..aray it's hell easy!

Love you all!
Mawara
Edited by Mawara_Ejaz - 9 years ago
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Chapter 6 A- Tery Naal Main Laiyaan Akhiyaan!


"Good Morning!"Nandini exclaimed loudly as she rolled the curtains of Manik's room window while Manik covered his face with the blanket trying to sleep a little more..! Nandini noticed his gesture and smiled..!


"You should be getting up Manik! It's 8 already..! You have a meeting on 9..!"She said folding her arms on her chest smiling all the time and Manik got up with a jerk..


"8???? OMG! Am late! Am hell late! I am gone..!"He shouted worriedly and jumped off the bed while Nandini was laughing loudly. Hearing her laughs Manik stopped where he was! "Aur tum..! Out of my room..!"Nandini pay gussa karna is compulsory! While she hiccuped nodding her and Manik rushed into washroom..! As soon as he entered the washroom she burst out in laughter again..!

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"Manik breakfast..!"Nandini shouted from behind as Manik was running towards his car cursing himself for being so so late.


"Am not hungry!"He roared back and she stopped his way with a breakfast tray in her hands..


"Samny say hato..!"He shouted but she was so dheet that she didn't moved an inch. He was about to yell more when she stuffed his mouth with a boil egg..! His eyes winded and she blinked cutely..! With loads of difficulty he gulped the egg and shoot daggers at her..


"Meri life ka sab say complicated chapter ho tum..!"He yelled angrily and she quietly stepped aside giving him way holding her smile back. He stormed towards his car she was staring at his back. He opened his car door and sat in it though aware of her gaze but ignoring her completely. He was about to turn his car when he unintentionally look at her..! She was smiling like an idiot..! He shook his head helplessly and drove away..

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Nandini was cleaning Manik's room herself. She opened the drawer of his bedside table and started arranging things when suddenly she saw some kind of pills..! Those were two bottles!


"What are these pills?"She thought worriedly and flipped the lid open. The bottles were telling that Manik use those pills more often. She bit her lip and placed the pills back in drawer..! She arranged other things and came to kitchen..! Only Simran was there..


"Umm..! Simran..! Manik ka koi family doctor hai?"She tried her luck and Simran turned to her..


"Why are you asking Mam? Are you sick?"She asked worriedly and Nandini shook her head..


"No..! Just wanted a regular checkup..!"She lied and Simran nodded..


"Yes Mam..! Doctor Sinha is Manik Baba's doctor!"She said softly and Nandini asked for the address quickly..

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"Mrs.Malhotra..! Welcome to my clinic!"Doctor Sinha greeted and she smiled in response..


"Tell me how may I help you?"He asked smiling at her and she nodded..


"First of all doctor! I wanted a favor and that is you won't tell Manik about our meeting? Is that clear?"She started in a serious tone and he nodded in assurance..! "Ok..! I wanted to know about those pills jo ap ny Manik ko prescribe kiya hain..!"She came to the point without hesitation...


"Pills? Hmm..! You caught him..!"Doctor chuckled...! "One of them are anxiety pills I mean antidepressants! And others are sleeping pills..!"Doctor told her and Nandini felt so unreal!


"Why?"She spoke vividly..


"Why? Well he says that he want 'sakoon'..! Peace! Content! Jo usy kahen nahi milta! That's why he is suffering from depression! Usy kind of insomnia hai..! Sometimes wo raat main so nahi pata..! That's why he take those pills..!"Doctor explained and Nandini held her head in her hands..! She rubbed her temples to digest the fact..! That's why he was late for the office because he slept after taking the pill! God! What will she do?


"Doctor! Kya Manik theek nahi ho sakty?"She asked with a false hope..


"Only if wo khud theek hona chahy..!"Doctor said casually and Nandini closed her eyes..!

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"Bhabi..! Where is Manik?"Cabir entered the lounge with a file and Nandini was busy in watching something on TV..!


"He is in study..!"She said softly and he nodded..! He was about to walk away when.."What is that file in your hand?"She asked getting up from the couch and he stopped..


"These are the official papers of the orphanage which Manik had bought for the safety of little children!"He spoke and Nandini took the file from his hands..


"What orphanage?"She asked going through the file..


"Wo ummm..! Actually yesterday afternoon some lady came to Manik and told that few people wanted to snatch her orphanage property from her so she requested Manik to take some action as a result I got the papers..!"He explained everything and she was startled..! A little shocked too..


"Why Manik did this?"She asked vividly..! From how he got the heart to help the orphanage lady?


"Umm..! I asked him the same! His reply was he don't want any other child to get homeless..! Should I go now?"Cabir Manik's secret keeper! He wanted to get away Nandini's questions as soon as possible! He almost snatched the file from Nandini's hands and run towards Manik's study..! While Nandini was standing there shocked! Secret after secret! What was more to come!


Yaar Day Vairy aye tap tap galiyaan!

Labhdi pheeran main tenu mal mal akhiyaan!


She slowly walked towards the study without making any noise the door was closed but the voices were clear..


"Kaam ho gya?"She heard Manik's voice..


"Yup..! Just your signatures are needed..!"Cabir's voice came..


"Haan..! Ok..!"Manik's voice and after that a pause..! Maybe he was signing the papers..


"Nandini was asking me about these papers..!"She became alert on her name..


"Tou? What did you told her?"Manik asked softly and Cabir narrated the discussion happened between CabiNi..! "Mat btaya kar usy ya sab.! Don't confuse her mind..! Preshan ho jye ge!"Manik's voice was shaken..


"Why yaar? Why don't you show her your good side..!?"Cabir's voice was furious..


"Good side? Haahhh..! What good side? Rehny day yaar..! Usy apny sath bandh kar pehly he zindagi barbaad kar chuka hoon us ki..!"He said sadly and Nandini palmed her lips to control her sobs..


"So finally Mr.Malhotra is regretting what he did?"Cabir said triumphantly..


"Regret karny say kya hota hai..? Main us ka mujrim tha! Hoon aur zindagi bhar rahoon ga..! I am amazed the way she is trying to give our relation a second chance! I am surprised kay wo mjy bardasht bhi kesy karti hai..! Jo kiya hai myny us k liye agr wo mjy hang bhi karwa day na tab bhi main shaid kuch nahi bool paoan ga itna bada hai mera gunaah!"Manik's voice was badly shaken and Nandini couldn't heard more..! She run towards her room and fell on the bed digging her face in the pillow..! She sobbed loudly as loudly as she could!


"Manik..! Main..! Aiyappa..! Ya kya ho raha hai? Mjy q apny tears par control nahi..! What is happening? Why my hatred is calming down!I wanted to give this relation a second chance and now! Aiyapaa..!"She yelled for her aiyappa and cried more! Maybe the tears were of happiness! Tears of happiness on getting a hope! Manik's words were echoing in her mind he was regretting! That means there was a hope!

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Edited by Mawara_Ejaz - 9 years ago
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Chapter 6 B- Tery Naal Main Laiyaan Akhiyaan!


Mahi main Tenu Samjhawaan key!

Tery naal kion laiyaan akhiyaan!

Tery naal main naal laiyaan akhiyaan!


Manik was having his dinner while Nandini was tossing her food in plate with spoon all the time staring at Manik who was relishing the food made by her..! Was he really unaware of her gaze? Or was pretending? He ate to his full while Nandini still haven't eaten a single morsel..!


"Thank you for the food..!"He spoke softly wiping his lips with his napkin and got up without giving her a glance..! Nandini kept staring at the door where he had vanished..!

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Beparwa main tery Ishq vich bandhi aan!

Bus tera mukhra dekhy Baki tay main andhi aan!


She was standing in front of his study door holding a cup of coffee in her hand from almost 15 minutes staring at him without blinking her eyes. Her behavior was becoming strange..! She was herself unsure of her acts..! Manik was roaming in the study reading a file. Suddenly he saw Nandini and look at himself trying to figure out where exactly she was staring..!


"This coffee is for me?"He asked in a little loud tone breaking her trance and suddenly she jumped the cup fell off her hands..! And Manik shook his head dejectedly...


"Am sorry..!"She gasped and sat on her knees to pick up the broken pieces. Manik placed the file back on the table and walked closed to her..! He too sat opposite to her..! He also started collecting the pieces with and she was again lost in his face..


Mahi main Tenu Samjhawaan key!

Tery naal kion laiyaan akhiyaan!

Tery naal main naal laiyaan akhiyaan!


Manik noticed her lost again and sighed..


"What happened to you? Where are you lost? Am noticing you since a week..!"Manik spoke hastily and again the trance broke. As soon as the trance broke the piece she was holding in her hand had a sharp edge it pierced in her palm..! She hissed and Manik held her hand.."Tmhy apna khayal rakhna bilkul bhi nahi ata..! Har wakt kise na kise musibat main par jati ho! What if main na hoon tmhy dekhny k liye..! Yesterday you were about to fall from the stairs..? Agr main na ata time par phir? Tum gir jati! Aur aj ya..! What is happening to you?"He was scolding her politely as he made her stood up and made her sit on his study chair..! She was quiet her eyes were not getting off his face! Don't know what she was trying to find..


Dil main andhair hai Shikwoon ka dhair hai..

Teri Dewaani hue Tera Qasoor hai!

Chotay say dil nu Samjhawaan key?

Tery naal main laiyaan akhiyaan..


"Uff..! Kuch bolo?"Manik was annoyed with her 'gum sum' expressions but no response..! He shook his head and came with a first aid box..! He dragged a stool near her and sat on it..! He opened the antiseptic bottle and poured some on the cotton..! "It will hurt a little..!"He said worriedly looking at her and started cleaning the wound..


"It won't..!"She whispered back and he look at her with a jerk..! Eyes met and spark explode..! "You won't hurt me I know..!"She again spoke. He immediately averted his gaze as his heartbeat accelerated...! He quickly done with the bandage and stood up..! He looked away while Nandini held her tears back..! She was in LOVE! Yes she WAS! In LOVE with that 'beparwa' man! Who was not ready to give her a single glance! "Ap theek nahi kar rahy na mery sath aur na apny sath..!"She spoke sadly and she run out of his study wiping her tears..! He wanted to stop her but banged his fist helplessly on the table!


Pata Pata boota boota Janny Sara hal-e-dil Janam..

Main hoon man mooji piya Kesy Kiya mera Man Mayal..


He fell on his chair and closed his eyes in frustration..! Helplessness! Guilt! 'Baybassi' Everything came together killing him all over again!


"Ap theek nahi kar rahy na mery sath aur na apny sath..!"Her words echoed in his ear and a tear escaped his eye..


"Kesy samjhaoan main tmhy? Kesy..!"He spoke to himself...!


"Main tou tm say maafi bhi nahi maang sakta! Tum nafrat karti ho mj say jaanta hoon! Par main..! Main tou nahi.---!"He was unable to complete his words..! He didn't had the courage to accept his feelings..! Yes he didn't..!


Chotay Say dil nu Samjhawaan Key!

Tery Naal q laiyaan akhiyaan..!


"Kya main is qabil nahi kay? Main Manik kay qabil nahi?"She look at herself and noticed her swollen eyes..! Was she that bad? Why wasn't he noticing her change? Why was he behaving like he don't care? Why why why?


"Suna tha ISHQ bohat tarpaata hai! Aj jaan bhi liya..!"She said falling on the bed as tears made their way down to get soaked in pillow..! Here Manik was sitting with face buried in palms on the heights of helplessness..!


Both were doomed? Does love hurts this much? Does a person has to suffer like this in love? We all know that love hurts but still! Still we all fall in love once in life! Manik and Nandini too are repeating this mistake! What will happen?



Pms Later~!

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So tell me did you understood the lyrics of the song or need a translation for it? It's a Title track of a Pakistani Drama..! Hope you must have liked the lyrics I tou loved it that's why I have added those!

So how was it? Pta ni why I wrote all these! I felt as if I was on Nandini's place..! Sachi bohat enjoy kiya myny is update ko write karny main..! I want to know did you enjoyed? How much? MaNan will come close in next update! Then? Gaining love is that much easy? Or is there something else?? Am going to add a ritual which I haven't added yet in my any FF! Guess what? Aray easy hai bohat! I like that ritual a lot! Love you all!

Lot's of Love,

Mawara

Edited by Mawara_Ejaz - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Oh okay..update in an hour..yaayyy...no guessing for me atlesst..congratulations to d winner..waiting dear...

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